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Reviewer: Crazyme55 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2015 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 87

Terrific series. Your passion for the story is fantastic. I so love this.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! The new story War of the Hearts, is online and I've already updated four chapters :D

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2015 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 87

Omg Noooooo! Poor Michael. This chapter breaks my heart. 

I hope Kay isn't too hard on him. Yes he lied but he was trying to be strong for her. Typical stupid male reaction.

Glad he is going to rehab. And I can't wait for the sequel. These two are my all time favorite couple. 



Author's Response:

Sorry for the late response :/ But thank you for the review and the rate :D

I updated the first flashback of WOTH, enjoy :D

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2015 08:20 am Title: Chapter 87

LOVE YOU TOO GIRL!! I know it was hard for you writing it because it was hard for me to read it! you can count me in on your next story!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you <33

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2015 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 87

Omg... 1993 is always the year I wish could be erased because it changed everything for Michael. Sigh. All I can say is I hope Kay will be right at his side as he weathers these storms. I am ready for War of Hearts, but in the meantime I'm hoping we get some Little White Lies! Lawd knows Tegan works my damn nerves! Lol 



Author's Response:

Hey girl! Same here, I wish this year didn't happen. But at the same time, I'm happy that Michael had the chance to express through music and recorded HIStory. It must have helped to deal with all of that.

That's great that you're ready for War of the Hearts because the story is already online and you're four chapter behind, yes: 4 chapters lol ;)

Enjoy WOTH and I promise I will update LWL more often :D

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2015 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 87

For you, Annie, I will pretend typos don't exist  <3 Unless they are funny, in which case I will tease you mercilessly :D

What.an.ending. I am super excited to see what you have planned in War. You crammed a lot into this ending...everything came out. Now, how are they going to put things back together? Can she trust him again? How are the kids going to handle his disappearance? The sudden upending of their lives? 

<3 girl



Author's Response:

LMAOOO! I swear I will try to re-read before updating my stories. But I'm so eager to have it online and read your reviews, that I forget :/

 

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2015 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 87

I LITERALLY LOVE THIS STORY MORE EVERYTIME I READ A WORD. I can wait to read the next part. You are such an amazing writer.



Author's Response:

The next part is online, enjoy :)

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2015 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 87

My heart hurts for Michael! I swear it doesn't matter how many times I hear about the 1993 accusations I always get the feels and feel terribly bad for what Michael had to endure. No one should've went through that. You captured every single emotion to have me thinking about this chapter for the next two weeks and feeling my heart drop to the pit of my stomach. Damn! 

I'm ready for the sequel of the story! I love Kay and Michael. One of my favorite couples on this site and thanks for the shout out. I'm going to be a more consistent reviewer now. Can't wait for War of the Hearts! 



Author's Response:

Hey Brandy. I wish I could erase the year 1993 too. But yeah, it's part of history and part of why Michael came up with the masterpiece that HIStory is.

Thank you for your sweet review and rate! The new story is online :D I've just updated a new chapter :D

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2015 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 86

“Whatever, give me my baby!” she exclaims

I foresee a future of:

lol



Author's Response:

LMAO! That might happen. But knowing how much Michael loves his Peanut, I bet he would gladly sleep on the floor ;))

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 23, 2015 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 86

Omgggggggg Blanket it 13?!!!! And here I am thinking he's still 10. For my own good because now I feel old😩😩😩😩

awwwwww they about to do the nasty!!! Kalli's clinginess to Egypt is adorable!!! She does need to stop with the guilt all that matters is she's there now, being the best mommy she can be. Michael is something else "I AINT TO PROUD TO BEG! NO!" <<Shoutout to my girls TLC😂😂d84;a039;



Author's Response:

IKR! He grows up so fast. I swear I thought he was still 10 yo too :/

Thank you so much for this review and the other reviews you left Nene. Thank you for the suuport and enjoy the last chapter :D

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 23, 2015 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 81

AH!” I scream and open my eyes “You see me suffering and you want to talk about Eddie Murphy?” I shout “You really thought about it and told yourself that you’re very pregnant wife would like to hear about Eddie Murphy, huh?” I yell “Fuck Eddie Murphy, fuck his crush on you, fuck this ridiculous song you recorded with him, fuck this music video you’re going to shoot with him, fuck him”


^^^^flashback on the Eddie Murphy rant. Forever a classic😩😩😩😩

Author's Response:

LMAOOOO! What a strange idea to bring up Eddie Murphy when your wife if giving birth LMAO!

Thank you for your review Nene :D

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2015 11:45 am Title: Chapter 85

Michael keeps digging himself into a deeper hole. Kalli is going to kill him when she finds out. And she WILL find out.

Daddy Michael needs a spanking. 



Author's Response:

Hello Camille :)!

You're right. He should know by now that he can't hide anything from Kay. She will find it out and she will be PISSED!

A spanking?

http://25.media.tumblr.com/b4013343b5045e81171df19d2f159f55/tumblr_mje2ag6jgj1rs75leo8_r1_250.gif

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2015 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 85

😩😩😩😩 michael always talks about being distracted when Kalli is around but she was in a whole different universe when he was changing. She didn't even hear what he asked. Buuuuut all of us would have been gazing at sexy ass michael lmaooo

Gotta love Slash lol he was  like "shit that's my godson". And his flirting with Michael's smoochy. And her fangirling. I love it! 

I missed you girl<333 and yes...the drama is brewing 

momma Kat does need a break. She is right about that. 



Author's Response:

LMAOOO! You're right, homegirl was high on Michael's sexiness!

I love Slash too, I love writing chapters with him in it and I think that's adorable that he already loves his Godson <3 Kay's fangirling is so cute and I love when Slash flirts with her too :)

I missed you too and your review girl! I will try to update more often, I will do my best!

Thank you so much! Love you <3

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2015 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 85

How did she not awaken at the word "demerol"?! She's a surgeon - that should scream louder than a police siren!

Now, when is he going to tell her about the Chandlers? :/

Great chapter <3



Author's Response:

She was so hypnotized by Michael's beauty that she didn't focus on what he was saying. Hopefully, she will come to her sense soon and do something before it gets too bad! Oh you know that if he doesn't tell her, she is going to discover it anyways! He can't hide anything to his Smoochy.

Thank you so much Redone. Once again, I would like to thank you for your support and putting up with my typos. Love you <33

Reviewer: camille Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2015 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

beautiful so far, i'm lovin it so much girl xx



Author's Response:

Hello Camille :) Thank you for the nice review. I hope you read the prequel 'The Sweetest gift' and 'Your Love is King' ;-)

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2015 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 84

Slash here we come lmaooooo awwww Kalliope is so stressed out about being alone with a newborn baby alone. Michael lied to kalliope again...Evan know he drugged his damn son I can't with the Chandlers they make me sick!!!!! Shana? *sigh* and baby jade is so adorable being jealous. all of the babies are toooo cute



Author's Response:

I feel her. She spent the past year with Michael. They were supposed to spend a week apart bt Michael couldn't live without her and showed up after only four days. It's going to be hard for the both of them :/ The Chandler are evil!!!

Yes, Shana! She is going to have a bigger role on the following chapters.... But I won't say more! Thank you for your review Nene, they always make me smile; Thank youu <3

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