Date: Oct 01, 2013 04:02 pm Title: Authors Note
Take your time
Date: Oct 01, 2013 06:57 am Title: Chapter 9
hhmmm... i wonder if he cheat on her
Date: Sep 30, 2013 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 9
*gasps* :(
Date: Sep 29, 2013 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 7
wow, that was quick haha
Author's Response:
Yeah lol I'm writing a new chapter now and it'll be much longer :)
Date: Sep 27, 2013 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 4
I think I know that soothing voice. Carrie's a... nasty something
Date: Sep 27, 2013 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 3
haha aww
Date: Sep 27, 2013 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 6
I notice that in the first two chapters the main character is introduced as Jeniffer Ann and then in chapter 3 after meeting Vanessa everyone starts calling her Jessica. So you might want to go back and fix those first two chapters.
Nice story so far. Michael should make it clear to Carrie that their not dating.
Author's Response:
Thank you for pointing that out to me.
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2013 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 6
They finally kissed! Carried just had to ruin the moment...bitch!!
Author's Response:
Lol thank you for reading and reviewing! :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2013 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 5
I'm liking this so far. Update soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I will update as soon as I can :)