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Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2013 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 160 - Hold on, there are skeletons in the closet....

*sigh*

This was an amazing, amazing, amazing, excellent update! So much happened in it, but of course, the end got me -_-

His and her life is just a mess right now. I feel so bad for Michael because he's already doubting his marriage to Ari, and thinking he disappoints her all the time, and now the criminal charges. I can't even :(

And there was so much fun in this chapter, beforehand :/

I LOVED Family Day, it was very cute! Joseph running after Michael tripped me the hell out! And Michael was super adorable on his birthday! I loved the tribute to Renee! I love Rita singing "Hear No Evil, See No Evil", and we don't even have to go there about her flawlessness in Gilda.

I loved Toni and Michael together; Toni's the best. She's like our Toni; considerate and sweet and hilarous af. I was DEAD about her hyena laugh and calling her Mufasa.

I know Arianna's devastated with the bad news on top of bad news, but I really hope she doesn't do anything she regrets or anything irrational or impulsive.

And lol, oh Jimmy. Damn, James! I think is best for him to move on from Feven, and especially Shontelle. It's unhealthy the way he was carrying on. It'll take him some time to resolve his feelings, but it's good for him to stay alone. He needs to care for himself and sort himself out before anyone else. And as for the woman coming up claiming to be his mother......

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Excellent, LONG, and well-written chapter as always! Miss you Boogie Down! Love ya! xoxoxoxo

 



Author's Response:

hey Laview bewww!! I know...it's a hard place where they are right now but I have a feeling they will be alright. Arianna just needs her space. Can you blame her? Michael is always well intentioned but sometimes he does think that far ahead and the consequences bite him in the ass and bounce off of her.

lol Michael is such a child sometimes. I could just picture Joseph chasing Mike like that. Rita is my classic movie queen. She's so sweet in that scene and yeah don't get me started on Gilda. She was amazing!!

lol Toni is like our Toni which is why Toni then wants to kill me for all the embarrasing stuff I make her go thru but she knows its all for love and lol yeah Mike is a trip. He was not right on the Mufasa joke.

Jimmy needs to find himself. He is still young. He will be fine. Same goes for Feven and Shontelle and tell me why, when I read Jimmy, I thought of James Dean. lol Where is my head!

His so called mother thoooo.....hmm, we'll see.

Thanks for reviewing, Lavie. Miss you more. Love ya!!

Drea

Reviewer: rahelicious Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 02, 2013 06:59 am Title: Chapter 1 - The Intro...

please keep writing=)

Author's Response:

I will. More to come soon. Thank you. <333

Reviewer: AMALuvzMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2013 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 160 - Hold on, there are skeletons in the closet....

Familyyyyyy Dayyyyyyyyyy was so cuteeeee Omfgg *__* I HOLLERED at Mike throwing the water ballon and it hitting Joe CTFU!! PAUSE! Toni did not just get sick while grilling the hamberger patties LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOO I was Deaddd at the gifs Toni is to much, and did I mention how much I love the lil Toni-Arianna-chats! Toni will be a wonderful mother I know she's scared because things seem to be moving fast but once the baby is born all her worries will fade away :)) *smirks* I caught the whole July wedding part lmfaooo Inside joke ;) ;)

Michaelllllllllllll and his childrennnn!!! my heart :-)) lol he's a wonderful father no doubt about that, I love to see this side of him ^__^

I love that you included the James Brown moment in your story! Michael loved and admired this man so much and I always squeal with excitement just seeing the look on Mike's face gives me all 29 years of my LIFE!!!! loooool LaToya and that outfit Lawddddd ole girl was doin to much extra that night smh -___-

Well damn! Go ahead Ari bew and give yo man a sexy web cam peep show lmfaoooo that was sexy AF ;) Mike knows damn well he got blue balls from that CTFU lemme stop!

JAMES JACKSON WTF!! I knew this would eventually happen, but damn I didn't expect it to go down like this :(( I feel so bad for Feven and Shontelle :/ They're both sweet girls and Jimmy shouldn't have played Feven like that, he knows damn well he still had feelings for Shonny and unfortunatally it all ended in a big mess. WAIT! STOP! who the hell is this random woman claiming to be Jimmy's real mother? *gasp* this is so crazy! :/

*wipes tears* The Renee Tribute was beautiful :)) It just reminds me of what a wonderful person she was and how much I miss her in this story :(((

YAY for Michael's birthday!!! I love these moments so much *__* the cake fight with the Carters, and the fan event *squeals* good times. DYINGGGGGGGGGGG at Toni shouting "He's married, bitches. I'm gonna tell Ari" LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I can't with her. I was shocked that Arianna invited Shana to the party at Neverland O___o but whatever that was the past. Even though all the festivites were wonderful it still felt awkward that my Ari and MJ weren't on goood terms :(( But I don't blame Ari for being upset with Michael over the whole catalog situation *sigh* but at least they're not getting divorced, separtation I can deal with (I guess) lmaooo

ONE MORE CHANCE is my songgggg omg MJ looked so good in that short film ;) But I hate what comes after :((( and I hate the Arvizos!!! Mike was doing a good thing and these assholes had to go and turn things around and make him look like a bad guy :/ all of these moments break my heart all over again :'( I can't imagine how Ari must of felt when Toni told her what was going on. NOT AGAIN this can't be happening :((( I'm not looking forward to whats coming next I hate that Mike had to go through all this bullshit *punches wall*

The end of this chapter had me crying not just a few tears, girl my entire face was stained in tears :'(((( I'm all in my feels right now.

Anyways Hunnie I loved this chapter as always and even though its sad I still can't wait to see what happens next! Love ya Bewwwwww *__* xoxoxo Toni

Author's Response:

lmaoooo everyone seem to like MJ hitting Joe with a water balloon. I could picture that actually happening lol and yes, girl Toni got sick grilling the hamburgers. That girl is dealing thru a lot. Pregnancy is making him more crazy lol but you know Ari has her back *wink* and oohhh you caught the July wedding thing huh? lol I knew you would. Had to do it.

Michael is amazing father. :')

I had to include the BET Awards, the way Michael fangirled over James Brown = Priceless but Toya tsk tsk.

I loved his bday. He was so cute and so embarrased when the fan shouted her advance towards him and lol yeah, Toni was about to fight the fans. She ain't gonna let no one mess up with Arianna's husband. She is too much.

One more chance is such a good song. I hate what happen to him and I hate that I had to include it. I guess I didn't have to but it was necessary. Michael is strong though. They put him thru a lot and he walked with his head up high. Love him for that.

Thanks, Toni. Love ya bewww

Drea

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2013 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 160 - Hold on, there are skeletons in the closet....

My god. So much stuff. Poor Michael. :/ Things had finally settled a bit and now they're right back to chaotic. Such is the life of Michael Jackson. Sigh. I really don't like to Arvizos. I never really did. I always hated how people always took advantage of him, especially when Michael did nothing to deserve it. All he did was give. :/ To be honest I was kind of dreading getting to this bit. :/ But I knew it was unavoidable.

I'm glad Toni talked to Arianna too. I'd have been sad if Michael and her would have gotten divorced. I can handle some time apart because at least they'll find their way back to one another. I'm glad she's there for Michael now, he needs her more than anything right now. I can only imagine being Arianna when Michael was taken away. That's just so painful. :/ I'll be glad when this part is done. :/

As for Jimmy, I'm so sad Feven is gone. I mean, I knew it had to be done but I liked her. She was very sweet and they were cute together. Although, I'm glad he admitted his feelings to Shontelle although I wish he'd give her a chance and stop being afraid. :/ I also can't believe his birth mother is back. Did not see that one coming at all. I already wish she didn't come back. Jimmy does not need her and she will never be his mother. Like he said, he only has one mom and one dad and that's Michael and Arianna.

Hope Toni will be okay too. Especially with how freaked she is with how fast things are moving between her and JC. Poor girl. :/ I did love the cuter moments of this chapter. With Arianna modelling for Michael on the webcam earlier and family day. Glad Michael finally has a handle on that internet thing. :P

Anyway, wonderful work as always girl. :) Love your story so much, your countdown makes me sad. :P I also love the length of these chapters, you never disappoint in them. :) Can't wait for more. :)



Author's Response:

hi hun, did you start school already? It feels like school is starting so much earlier and earlier these days :/ but yeah, Arianna and Michael's life is not easy. "Such is the life of Michael Jackson." <--- You got that right! :( I hate to include but it was part of his life though I'll make it as easy as possible to read. I honestly can't wait to pass this part.

Toni is great. She really does have Ari's and Mike's best intentions at heart and everyone assumed that Arianna and Michael will go back to their old patterns but they have been thru so much to throw everything away plus I couldn't that to you guys though I'm not saying their marriage will be easy.

Jimmy is still young. He needs time for himself. He needs to grow up. He will be alright along with Feven and Shontelle. Feven was never meant to be a bad girl but Jimmy was not ready for her nor Shontelle...not yet anyway... but don't count them out yet, they are not gone forever and watch out for Shonny...watch what she does in the future. *wink* ......Jimmy's biological mother (if that really is her) tsk tsk, more to come on that.

Toni is just going thru a roller coaster of emotions. Everything is speeding around her  in full speed and she is trying to catch up but she has a good man and good people around her. She will be alright.

I love that gif of Ari changing clothes and lol yes, Michael is getting the hang of the internet. How clever is he, huh? Talking about MJ and the internet....something happens soon, that is all haha

I could never thank you enough for your sweet reviews and for taking the time to read my story. I'm glad you are enjoying it so far.

I know, it makes me sad that it's almost over but Arianna and Michael will live on.

xoxo, Much love. Drea

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 27, 2013 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 160 - Hold on, there are skeletons in the closet....

First off I have to say this chapter was filled with laughs but also disappointments. *packing my bags to come for you*

I loveeeed the beginning with Michael and Ari being big kids! lol That's the type of playfulness I love to see in them with all that they've been through.

But oh my god when Michael threw the balloon at Joseph and everything that happened in that scene I seriously could NOT!! I laughed too hard at that just trying to imagine Joseph chasing after Mike looool.

I was even more done with Toni and her crazy self stealing Ari's cousin's champagne and then not even drinking it lol. Her preganancy has her going crazy!

Mike playing with Prince and Paris was just too adorable. I was just watching that video the other day so when I saw that you included in the chapter, I fangirled so haaard.

Jimmy...ohhh Jimmy...

I can't even feel sorry for him. I understand that he's confused but at the same time he didn't have to hurt little Feven's feelings like that when he knew that he still loved Shontelle. He just created a mess and then it ended in an even bigger mess. Poor Shonny and Feven.

Random but that clip of Rita singing reminded me of Mary Poppins for some reason lol.

Michael fanboying for James Brown!!!! That was the most iconic moment in music/television history. The world will never forget that. Sometimes I choke up just watching how touched Michael was towards his idol and the influence that James had impacted on Michael's life. I know that James had to be proud to say that he was a major contribution to Michael's dancing legacy. It's like a musical father to son moment. (I'm over here in my feels right now lol)

But lawwwwd don't get me started on what LaToya had on. I can't even judge her because I constantly have to remind myself that she was a former Playboy model so *shrug* It is what it is. All I know is if I was Mike I would have been embarrassed looool.

Arianna is so beautiful. I was feeling like Mike reading from his point of view while watching her lol. He's a blessed man and she's his prize. He needs her in his life.

As for Mike and his situation with the catalog, I would have freaked out too if I were him. I was too done at he and Toni's "The Lion King" jokes. Those two are a mess and a half! It's good that he had an extention on the court date though to get things straightened out...even though with his situation now, it may be hard to figure that out.

And I completely understand why Ari reacted the way that she did with the news. I mean, that catalog was basically her life so losing that was like losing her mother all over again.

Its a good thing that Mike understood and even admitted to his mistakes about losing the catalog though. And him being willing to even let Ari leave if she had thought about separating from him showed that he really did grow up for being willing to accept and deal with his mistakes. 

YOU INCLUDED THE "PUT THE BLAME ON MAME" SCENE!!!! Before I even saw the reference of that I just KNEW that you included that when you mentioned Gilda! And the whole time that I was reading that part I laughed too hard thinking of how you were picking at me and my rewording of the song. *cough* I still sing it my way loooool It sounds better to me. It's the Shy remix tsk tsk.

Anyway, this random jack-in-the-box woman popping up talking about being Jimmy's real mother...hmmmm. Why in the world would someone even lie about being dead and stuff like that anyway? She better be telling the truth and she better not just be trying to come back in Jimmy's life just because he's starting to build his career now. I hope Jimmy tells his parents about that soon especially since this woman might try to pull a little stunt like everyone else seems to have been doing to that family throughtout the years.

Michael's birthday was just too adorable. I absolutely LOVE that part when the fan had shouted out and made Mike blush lol. He was just too adorable. But then Toni's ratchet self had to add in her input and I was cutting up!!! She is a something else!

And I REALLY love when Mike was licking the icing off of his finger lol. And when he called Aaron and Nick to the stage. I remember the first time I saw that video, I replayed that one part of Mike calling them onstage so many times. It's the way that he just like growled their names that made me

lol and I still can't believe Ari invited Shana to the party! lol Was that not awkward? I guess they didn't have much one on one time so it didin't matter to them.

Anyway everything at the party was so happy and soothing even if Mike and Ari weren't really talkling like that. Which brings me to my final thoughts, when I saw the images for Mike shooting "One More Chance" my whole mood just dropped because I already knew what was coming up next. *sigh* I just...I'm not prepared for what's to come. I'm just glad that Ari is pushing their marital problems aside for the moment to be there for Mike. He needs her more than ever. 

 

P.S. Grace...

we are not here for you boo so keep it moving! She is so...eh. While I was reading the scenes with her, all I could think of was Paris's deposition when she said Mike sent Grace to India loooool.

Oh and another thing, Paris and that daggone Bella doll!! *strangles her* lol Nah, I'm kidding but little Bella would have had to go if I was in Ari's shoes. I would have taken that doll so fast that Paris wouldn't have had a choice but to hop out of that tub. smh Paris is a little stubborn one just like her daddy.

This was one LONG review but then again it was so much compacted into this LONGGGGG chapter! lol Either way I enjoyed it! I love youuuu <3 



Author's Response:

I know you are not packing my bags to find me. I am mad at you for SGI so you don't want to mess with me right now -__- lol

lol I had to include some positive things in the chapter and I guess everyone loved the part of Joe chasing Mike. I could really picture that lol. Yes, Ari and Mike are big kids.

Toni lol she's a mess. Her pregnancy does have her out of wack but it's just so new to her. She'll be ok.

I love Rita in that little clip of hear no evil She's so cute in it. I could see why she reminded you of Mary Poppins. :)

MJ's kids are adorbale and Jimmy, tsk tsk. He's still young. He needs to find himself, he'll be alright, the same for Shontelle and Feven though you haven't seen the last of them. Watch out for Shontelle. She's about to do something craaazzzyyyy.

I love the clip of MJ in the BET awards. The way he fanboyed for James Brown was so priceless but Toya, I don't know what she was thinking tsk tsk

Arianna is beautiful. I love her ! :') and she loves Michael but she really needs her time by herself to clear her head. Mike is well intentioned but doesn't think of the consequences and she does hurt later cause of them.

Gilda is my ultimate Rita movie. She was so good in it. I had to include though the whole time I was writing about the put the blame on mame scene I kept thinking of your silly rendition of the song lol. tsk tsk Shy blaming Rita. That is what she was singing not to do lol You are her husband in the movie. "Shy remix" smh lmao you are too silly

and *le sigh* this woman claiming to be Jimmy's mom....more to come soon about that.

Michael's bday. He was so adorable in it. I had to include it. The way he bluhes at the fan's words, so adorable!! lmao Toni is a mess screaming at the fans and don't get me started on Mike licking the icing off his finger, it's a major mikegasm.

Lol Arianna was not giving two fucks when she invited Shana. Shana is a good girl. Arianna didn't feel threaten.

lmaooo at the gif for Grace....you will see in the next chapter, that is all.

lmaoooo I'm sure Arianna wants to get rif of Bella.

Thanks for reviewing, Shy. Love yaaa!!!!

Drea

 

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2013 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 160 - Hold on, there are skeletons in the closet....

I swear the more I read this the more I wish he really could have had someone like Adri and Shuy in his life.In speaking of Grace have you seen Paris deposition about her when she testified in court? Also I remember you saying that you wasn't going to add Michael's death in the story is that true?



Author's Response:

Hi hun. I wish he did too. I think he would have been happier. I did see it, I always knew Grace was suspicious and when Paris said what she said I was like "Eureka!! I knew it!" lol and yes it's true, though WAITING FOR YOU revolves around Michael's real life events, Michael's death will not be included. The whole point of the story is that I feel like you said if Michael had someone like Adcuy and Ari, he will still be here. Arianna will not let him die. Big surprise though at the end. Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2013 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 159 - Love Thy Will Be Done....

Yasss for Martika! *sways* Yasss for my Purple Fox too! *swoons*

SO UNAMUSED BY LENNY, JULIE, AND LISA LIKE...

 

Look at Lenny, Julie, and LMP acting like some triumverate lol smh. Lenny is just messy as hell and needs to fall tf back. He's so annoying omfg. I'm a big fan of his, but in this story he really makes me mad lmfaaoo. As for Michael - daaaaamnn! I really hope he cleans up all this legal mess, whether he tells Arianna or not :/

Smh Lenny...Planning all that mess to break them up, I'm just sitting here reading looking at the computer like...

 

Lol I loved Adriana on Ugly Betty! She's such a person lol ^.^

That was so thoughtful of Jimmy to get Arianna the necklace! He certainly is growing up! And lmfaoo Sontelle and Jimmy need to fix IT. Idk why she so mad now. Lmfaoo of course they still have feelings for each other and there's things they still need to say to each other, but if they moved on..... *Prince voice* letitgoooooo...for now anyway lol

Lmfaaooo and Toni!!! Awwwwh omfgggg! Toni's pregnant and she and JC love each other!!! Eeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!! :'D OMFG oagh9aeur9vauibuiaeVnaeirlfaogvnaae

Great update! I can't wait to read the upcoming chapters. So much craziness going on, I hope everyone keeps their heads up and works things out. Especially Mike..

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My fave parts!:

1) "Damn, N Sync...there were supposed to be an innocent boy band, not a male seeking to impregnate women band"

"It looks like he got you naked by the end of his song" Kristina said mentioning Justin Timberlake's song 'Rock Your Body'.

Oop!  

 

2) “Michael was born with a funny shaped head and look at him now...” I tried to relax her. It actually made her smile. <---- Lmfaaooo! Such shade!

3) He gave me a blank stare, shocked to hear what I was saying. "You know what? You weren't my first choice either, it was Brooke Shields" he said and then walked away. <------ OOOOOP!!

4) I glared at him and he immediately corrected himself. "I'm not calling you fat" "

So what are you saying, Michael?" I asked as I put the glass of wine down on the table beside the couch.

"That you have gotten some nice curves since then" he said with a smirk.

"Oh yeah? So you are calling me fat?"

"I'm noooottttt" he laughed. "What I'm saying is.....For instance, your boobs are bigger. You were really skinny then. You look like a woman now"

"Shockingly, this is not making me feel better. You know, I've had 3 kids and your body is not the same either, Mr. Playgirl Mate of the Month" I responded with sarcasm.

I looveeeeeed the inclusion of Mike going to Indiana! *cues Goin' Back to Indiana* :'D I love watching his trip back! 

Ooooooh and Mike and Arianna getting all intimate chileeeeeee *fans self*

 

 

Lmfaaaaoooo, I'm not a gif-master like Shy! I've only got Dick Van Dyke gifs and Namie gifs! But for real! This chapter had me having all types of reactions! But hey, that's what good writing does! :D Finally caught up, and me and the Baby Sibs loved every minute of it regardless of how dramatic or angering!

XOXOXOXOXO



Author's Response:

Ms. DELAVIERRE IS IN THE HOUSE!!!!!!!

Miss you bewww

DEADDDDDD at these gifs!! lmaoooooo

YESSS Love thy will be done is my song. Martika and Prince did their thing there.

Lenny = nobody. LMP = does not know how to go away. Julie = No words

I love Adriana in Ugly Betty. She's so excited!! lol

Jimmy will grow up.

Toni is Toni. She will never change lmaooo but she will be a great mom, I'm sure.

The NSync part lmaooo Toni was mad at JC and she did not care about it. Kristina needs to learn her nsycn and who is jc and justin trivia lol

Arianna and Michael are such kids lmaooo but they love each other.

Thanks for reviewing. Love you Lavie!!! xoxo

 

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2013 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 158 - Without You I'd Be Incomplete....

Excellent update girl! :)

It's distressing to read about Mike and Ari having slight crumbles in their marriage, but love works that way. It's not always easy especially when famous. Michael does need to take responsibility for his actions and not get mad at Ari. He needs to take heed in what she says; he knows she loves him and just wants what's best for everyone. He really should listen to her more, then he'd know why she feels the way she feels.

Arianna showing the private footage, and the interview is a lighter side of the situation though. She loves Mike and she'd do anything to clear his name. Michael better start thinking before acting! He's running ole girl ragged lol

Lol James, James, James. He's been so grown up these days. Ctfu he cannot catch a break when it comes to these females. Lol not "tempts" X__X Oop! Shontelle looks like she moved on! *cues Mya Movin' On*

Lmfaaaaaooo and Toni! Toni is a grand mess! She's a trip and a half, great depiction of our Toni ctfu!

Great update Boogie Down XOXOXOXO

 

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2013 11:04 am Title: Chapter 157 - You ain't nothing but a LIAR....

Daaaaaamn Jamessss tsk tsk. He fucked all the way up and down smh. I don't even blame Shontelle for how she feels *sigh*

WHO ORDERED LENNY?! Lmfaaaoooo see now that's that shit I can't stand! WHO asked him to tell Arianna that he loved her?! Ain't nobody checking for him so he can move! Just sing at the wedding and get a move on! He trying to play Ari and MJ for real. Lmfao I'm not here for it. Nope.

I give Ari and Kristina credit for going to the wedding! Sure, they didn't enjoy themselves, but I guess the wedding was closure. They'd lost a childhood friend and the adult thing to do was go to the wedding.

And OMFG! That picture of Mike and Arianna slaaaaaaaays! :D Awww so CUTE! *.*

Omfg! JC Chasez! Lmfaaoo ayeeeee you know I love me some NSYNC chileeeee! Ctfu me and Toni both :D And omfgggg I LOVE LOVE LOVE the video you made of Ari and Toni! I was dead af every time Toni was on screen ole girl was eating! Bottomless pit! X_______________X

Ughhhhhhhhh I'm not liking this Bashir stuff at all! NOT AT ALL! -____-

Great writing as always! XOXOXO And yes for Toni's birthday and the poster! Lots of love!

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2013 10:37 am Title: Chapter 156 - I have Tunnel Vision for you because I'm in LOVE....

I'M BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACCCCCCKKKKKKK! :D

I'm so hurt. Lmfaaaooo I was doing so well being the first review on EVERY update! And then I fell behind and now I gotta catch up lmfaoo :((

Anyway, great update!

Yesssssssssss for including Noémieeeee! :D Awwwh, on Shy's birthday :) Lol, I feel Michael though. She's beyond gorgeoussssssss. Lol Mike's such a man's man. I was dead af at him reading the measurements and talking about which girls looked manly or had fake breasts lmfaaooo smh 

But yessssssss for Mike and Arianna getting it in! Like about fucking time lmfaaoo. Mike was too ready and Ari knows she was tooo hehehe ;)

I wonder how the Bashir situation will turn out. Arianna already smells a rat, and we all know it ends ugly, but still...hmm..

Aww, I'm glad she decided to go to the wedding, though. It might not be as bad as she thinks..

Jimmy's created a nasty triangle though! Omfg Feven and then hurting Shontelle like that. Daaaaaamn! While he's correct in the fact that they aren't together, he can't just be kissing her and running off and kissing someone else! Heartbreaker just like his father tsk tsk..

Lmfaaooo and then there's Toni. Lmfao she stays embarrassed, I can't even deal!

 

XOXOXOXO :D

 

 

Reviewer: AMALuvzMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2013 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 159 - Love Thy Will Be Done....

Okay I'm finally here to leave my review ^__^ lol Omfggg Andrea you and your struggle with technology :/ awwww poor bb its always a battle lmaooo but thankfully the entire chapter didnt get erased but FYI the chapter turned out AMAZING!!! ^__^ (and your customized WFY cover is so cuteeeeee *__* I saw the pic I loveeeeeee it)

shit I'm over here rambling along with you and your Author's notes lmfaoooo lemme just NOT and start writing my real review CTFU

(get ready for another longggggg review from yours truly) LMFAO

"TONI'S REVIEW"

WHATTTTTTT THEEEE FUCKKKKK this whole conversation between Lenny, Julie, and Lisa was just...... *SCREAMS* ahhhhhhh!!!!! I cannot deal with Lenny and his sneaky plan to try and use any information he can just to make Michael look like the bad guy so Ari will go running to Lenny for support smfh he AIN'T SHIT for that -_______- Michael better tell Arianna about her Mother's catalog first or else things will get ugly if she finds out from someone else :/ *sigh* I'm scared :((( lmaooo

DEADDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD AF Andrea why must you always do this to Toni (me) ? LMFAOOOO But I must admit this was funny as hell tho! Ari needs a bit of Toni-craziness in her life lol she always seems to cheer her up whenever Ari has a lot on her mind :) I'm glad to see the closeness between them Awwww ^___^ they're like BFF's lmao

HOW MANY LICKS? Really! you had to go there CTFU *whispers* "Taste The Rainbow" Lmfaooo

AJFAJFHAJHFJAHFJAHJHJFHFF your husband Went made a cameo in this chapter YASSSS!!! and I see U Ari & Toni checking out Went's ass Mmmmhhh *went's voice* "Bad Girls" lmaooo I DIED at that part looool

Jimmy is so cuteeee omg I love the fact that he's such a momma's boy lmfao I think its precious that he spent his money on his mom awwwwww :-) He's such a sweetheart :) I hope he finds himself a GREAT woman and stop bein a lil player lol I like Feven she's a nice girl but I hope him and Shontelle get back together, but the way things are going I don't see that happening anytime soon :((

Welp I should've saw this coming lol Toni just had to open her mouth talkin bout her best sex ever was with her vibrator last year LMFAOOOOOO Ma'am! But at least JC was a good sport about it and didn't let it bother him lol lord and here goes Mike teasing Toni again lol he's like an annoying older brother that never shuts up lmaooooo

OMFFFFGGGGGGG!!!! Toni is Pregnant? This I did NOT expect holy shit you weren't kidding when you said "something unexpeted with Toni is going to happen" WOW that shocked the hell outta me lol but I'm really Happy for her and JC and awwww they love each other :')

YASSSS JIMMY YOU BETTA SLAY!!! lol his performance was AMAZING this kid has talent his dad taught him well lol

*excited squeal* I love the trip to Gary Indiana Mike's hometown he looked so good and sexy and thick and ohhh ;) lemme stop lmfaooo I lost it for it sec.... anayways back to my review lmfao

Okay I am over here cracking up at how childish Ari and Mike are being right now lmfaoooo like omfg they're seriously not bickering and playing that "tell your cousin I said" game smh they're too much, and Ari knows she aint right for saying that Jackie was her favorite Jackson :/ girl Bye! lmao and then Mike just had to get her back and say Brooke Shields was his first choice -____- LMFAO they're both doin the MOST smh smh but at least the sex was the shitttttt lol damn Mike did his thing or should I say his mouth did *wink wink* woooooo that was HOTT lmfaooo and oh damn I have a feeling the happiness is about to fade :((( Now with Lenny back in the picture shit is about to get CRAZY *takes deep breaths* I'm not ready for the drama but I guess ready or not here it comes.

and that's the end of my super long review lol I enjoyed this chapter as always :-) Love ya Drea

Author's Response:

technology has created its own race to destroy me -___- but I won't let them *__*/

Lenny is irrelevant. LMP, she's not done in this story. Julie, no words (.__.)

"DEADDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD AF Andrea why must you always do this to Toni (me) ? " <---- *innocent face* What did I do? lmaoooo I knew you would understand the inside joke when how many licks came on what the reference would be. We have crazy talks, I swear!! CTFU!!! "Taste the rainbow" I actually whispered it.

Yes, Went made a cameo. My gay ex husband lmaooooo damn him!! like whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!

*le sigh* Jimmy will learn from his mistakes. I think he needs this time alone to grow up but he will always be a momma's boy lmaooo but can you blame him? Ari is a great mom to him.

Your childhood bewww JC and Toni (You) are having a baby!!! And I think the baby was conceived backstage after his manager let her in *wink wink*

Michael did look goooddd when he was thick like damn boy lemme have a bite of that thigh lmaoooo

Ari and Mike were acting like kids but after so many years together, they learned not to take so many things so seriously. They love each other even though they like to tease the hell out of each other. I was too cutting up while writing it especially the part when she refused to talk to him and was relying messages thru his cousin lol

thanks for the review. Love ya Toni!!!

 

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 20, 2013 10:26 am Title: Chapter 159 - Love Thy Will Be Done....

Okay... you're scaring me! With some of the things you're saying and your little hints in this chapter. I'm extremely curious. Lol

Anyways, so I feel like Michael really needs to tell Arianna about what's going on. I know he's afraid of losing her but if she finds out through Lenny, she'll be even more pissed at Michael. I pray they make it through all of this. :/

As for Jimmy. That boy is making me shake my head. He needs to stop his love games!! Even Michael is unhappy with him and he really should be. Someone needs to talk to that boy and smack some sense into him. Maybe Toni can. :D

OMG! Toni's pregnant and JC and her admitted they love each other!! I'm so excited! Part of me wants Michael and Arianna to have another kid who can be the exact same age as Toni's kid. :D They'd be the best of friends and maybe they'd end up married in the future! Stranger things have happened. Lol

I found some of this chapter quite humourous though. I really loved the silly arguments between Michael and Arianna. That girl just loves to drive him crazy! Lol I died so much at that whole exchange about who her favorite Jackson was. :P Michael is such a concieted ass sometimes, it's hilarious! Love these two so much. :)

Great work girl! :) This story makes me smile so much. I always look forward to your updates. :) Still sad it's ending soon but you're right. :) All good things must come to an end at some point. :) I can't believe you actually had to rewrite a good chunk of this! I'm glad it all worked out for you though. 36 pages, I can't even imagine writing that! Lol

I know things get worse from here on out but, hopefully everything will turn out okay. I'm petrified to hit the trial and 2009. :/ No idea what to expect. I'll just have to wait and see. Heh.

Much love girl! Thank you for this amazing story! xoxo



Author's Response:

lol no need to be scared. It will all come to light soon.

Michael will tell Ari soon which I'm sure you have come to find out by now. Jimmy, tsk tsk he's still young. He'll learn from his mistakes. Toni to talk some sense into Jimmy? Now, there's an idea.

lol Ari and MJ having another baby hmm...well, you never know or Toni might have a girl and Blanket could marry her. They won't be that far apart in age lol. We have found Blanket's bride. Yay!!!

lol Arianna likes to tease Michael. After long years of being together, I think it's about time for them not to take things too serious.

Yeah :( It was a pain to have to re-write it but it had to be done. I was exhausted from writing but I knew I would have not been happy if I didn't include the last few things in the chapter. I could have scrapped it but it didn't feel right. I guess I'm a perfectionist.

I'm scared of the trial too but we'll be ok and awww that's sweet much love to you too. Thank YOU for being a loyal reader/reviewer.

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2013 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 159 - Love Thy Will Be Done....

This whole thing with Lenny, Julie and Lisa



not here for it. Lenny better not start no mess I swear. Lisa...get over it. Julie...stay in your lane boo. I don't even want to think about them anymore so I'm moving on from that.


Adriana was too cute in the Ugly Betty scene lol. 


"That bracelet is $950.00. Maybe you will be interested in something in the cubic zirconia section. No little girlfriend at your age could be that much worth it"


"Well, no one asked for your opinion. Can you go back and go fix your make up or something? Your lipstick is running down your chin" Maxen came to my defense making the snotty woman glare at him.


Ayyyee lol! SHUTDOWN #1!



But seriously that was sweet of Jimmy to buy something for his mommy. I was done at Toni and the vibrator comment and then on the video when they said "plug it in, plug it in"


I was 'ohing' at Shontelle getting an attitude with Jimmy lol like...



She and Jimmy need to get it togther. I hope he doesn't play little Feven...bless her heart.


"I can't do this" Toni broke down and Kristina and I stepped back and looked at her amazed. We never thought she would react like this to a news like this. "Damn, N Sync...there were supposed to be an innocent boy band, not a male seeking to impregnate women band"


"It looks like he got you naked by the end of his song" Kristina said mentioning Justin Timberlake's song 'Rock Your Body'.


I shook my head at her. "She's dating JC, not Justin" I corrected her. <--lool! get out!


“What if my baby comes out with a funny head?” Toni suddenly asked in thought making Kristina and I look at each other in question.


“I'm sure the baby will be fine” Kristina told her.


“But what if it does?” Toni insisted.


“Michael was born with a funny shaped head and look at him now...” I tried to relax her. It actually made her smile. <--the shadeeeee! lol


It was but just for that conceited comment, I said instead. "Actually, it was your brother Jackie. He was fineeeee"


"What? Jackie?" Michael asked in disbelief.


"Yep" I replied as I put the album back in the shelf.


"Jackie? But he's so much older than you!" Michael exclaimed.


"So? I obviously like older guys....I mean I'm married to you, right?" I continued to play with him.


"But he's my brother!" he said disgusted.


I shrugged. "That part was just unlucky. I didn't know I was going to marry you then"


"So you are saying if you would have met him first, you would have married him"


"Most likely" I nodded.


He gave me a blank stare, shocked to hear what I was saying. "You know what? You weren't my first choice either, it was Brooke Shields" he said and then walked away.



^^ SHUTDOWN #2! lol


He wrapped his arms around my waist and pulled me close. "I'll tell you a secret, before I met you....I thought about asking Brooke to marry me..."


"I swear Michael, you have ways to kill the mood..." I tried to get away from him but his grip became tighter on me.


He laughed and then explained himself. "I didn't because I was obsessed in finding you. When I met you, I realized that I had been waiting for you. You are the only woman I want to be with" <--nice comeback Mike.


His sly self came back on fire too lol umhm...they was getting it in tsk tsk. Those two love birds...they're so cute. I'm so not looking forward to what's about to come. I wonder how he's gonna spill the news to her about the jeopardy of her mom's property. This is going to be crazy. 


Either way, you know I'll still enjoy it even though I'll hate you for it too lol! I love ya Drea! <3



Author's Response:

Shy!! lmaoooo the gifs tho!!

I love Adriana in that episode. She really needs to do more acting *__* and I know she wants to.

Jimmy is a sweetheart and lmaooo good thing Jimmy had Maxen there to back him up from the snotty sales lady.

Toni and her vibrator is classic!! lmaooo that video was a damn mess

awww the love triangle, Jimmy, Shontelle and Feven. Jimmy needs to let them go. Poor kids.

lmaooo the Toni/Kristina/Arianna conversation. Those three are something else. lol you caught the shade huh? and Toni tsk tsk this girl was all over the place lmaooo

lmaooooo Arianna was playing with fire. She should have known that to play with Michael about Jackie was only going to blow up in her face.

Michael is a smooth MF. He knew how to make Arianna melt. ;)

Thanks, Shy for the review. Love you!!!

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2013 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 158 - Without You I'd Be Incomplete....

HEY YOU! :D

So I fell so behind on your chapters because of school stuff. I checked back after a bit and had THREE chapters waiting. O.o Gosh. Lot of stuff to take in. Here we go:

I've said this before but I absolutely love how this follows Michael's life to a T! It's amazing how realistic this story seems when I'm reading. There's a lot of stuff I hate reliving and reading over about but at the same time it brings this story to life.

As for this chapter. I must say... wow. Poor Arianna. :/ This is so much for her to handle. I hope Michael and her don't follow that same pattern as before. Break-up then make up. It would just freaking crush me. Especially considering, with what's coming up, Michael's gonna need all the support he can get.

She seems to have his back though. Especially considering the extent she was willing to go to make sure the truth would prevail after Bashit's lame excuse for a documentary. I love Arianna so much and Michael is definitely lucky he scored her. :)

I hope all goes well with them as well as the events afterwards.

 

On another note.... JIMMY WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING!? One girl to the next. He got with Jazmin again, broke up with her, dated someone else, dumped her, and is now with Feven? Ugh. He's killing me. Michael's right. Pick one already. I like Feven, she seems nice but he really needs to be with Shontelle. They both love each other so much.

Although, I am proud of the girl. Dating another guy and trying to move on from Jimmy. She's strong but I still want her with Jimmy. They're going to be like Michael and Arianna all over again. O.O

On a lighter note. Have I ever told you how much I love Toni? Lolz about the comments about Justin and her asking Arianna about her sex life. :) Although, I am glad to see that her and JC hit it off. Now I just hope all goes well. JC better treat her right! Toni's been through hell and back. So...

Anyways. Great chapter and I must say I am extremely saddened by the news of there only being 22 chapters left until the end. I have been following this story forever and I always look forward to your updates. It's a nice escape from reality sometimes. I love reading about Michael and Arianna and their crazy relationship. It's been a pleasure, it really has. You're a very talented writer. :) Keep up the amazing work! I look forward to the next updates. :)



Author's Response:

Hi honey!!! Missed you!! But I'm glad to see you are still with me. Aww, at least the summer is right around the corner and you can get some rest from school.

Yes, I agree. There are somethings in his life, I hate even writing them. I be like: Can I jus skip this? And trust me, some things I do but I made a commitment to write a story like this and I'll stick to it.

They are both trying hard not to fall back into old patters, they are older and wiser but is hard when all these things keep happening. A person could only take so much! But Arianna loves him and she does and wil have his back even if they do separate (not saying that's gonna happen haha).

LOL Jimmy!! He's going thru a teenage rebellion, he'll grow up. Feven is nice. She truly does Jimmy and that's what hurts the most when the love is not returned :( And yes, Shontelle was not going to sit around and wait for him to make up his mind. He needs to make the move and stop being scared and yes, it does remind you of Ari and MJ, huh? :/

LOL awww Toni is great. Funny 'cause everyone thought she was going to be a threat but nah! she's cool. JC is pretty cool though I was not much of NSync fan growing up but she was lol ahhh the things you do for friendship XD

I know, it kills me to end this story. It had a long good run but every thing must come to an end. I don't ever want the people to get tired of this story. I want them to continue to enjoy it :) Thank you so much for all the support you have given me, it means a lot :) xoxo

Reviewer: AMALuvzMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2013 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 158 - Without You I'd Be Incomplete....

Jesus Christmas woman there is so much going on this chapter where do I even begin?

Welp lemme just start with the Bashir bullshit :/ ughhhh see if Michael would've listened to Arianna in the first place none of this mess would've happened smdh Ari knew damn well that man was a dirty scum bag rat -____-

Toni is a hot mess as usual lol when she was talkin bout her date with JC I was DONE!! *SCREAMS* and was I the only one that caught the part about "Tornado Tongue?" LMFAOOOO ma'am we shall not even go there right now *CRIES* (never forget the tongue emoji CTFU inside joke)

Okay now on to a more serious topic, Omg my MJ and Ari better get it together ASAP!!! They're definitely going through a rough patch but I think as long as they stick together and communicate with each other they'll be okay :) *fingers crossed*

Well, well, well looks like Jimmy and Feven are officially a couple yes? But wait Shontelle made an appearance via MTV's making the video and omggggg she has a boyfriend JESUS O.O I know Jimmy must've felt some type of way finding all this out :/ I have a feeling things between Jimmy and Shonny are not over hmmmm!!

*sigh* well with the statement and Michael's personal footage being released to the fans and public I hope this will help. I'm glad all the family is pulling together and showing not just the media but everyone that the JACKSONS can't be fucked with lmaoooo

LAWDD HAVE MERCY only 22 chapters left :(( Well let me enjoy them all and take everything in cause I'm going to miss Waiting For You so much *silently weeps* lol

Great chapter hunnie love ya :-) xoxoxo Toni

PS YASS at Shonny tweeting you, ya'll have become twitter buddies ^__^ that's so freakin awesome! and Ooh I didn't know she spoke spanish too? Werkkk Bew ;)

axxdakhjahfhkfcfdaff Girl when Eva retweeted me I almost didn't believe it, I stared at my iPod for like a few seconds but in my mind it felt like minutes it seemed like it was happening in slow motion lmfaoooo I fangirled my ass off I can't even begin to explain how excited I was about that :-) I had my moment *flails*

Author's Response:

Ugh! Bashir. Can we just take an eraser and make him dissapear from Michael's life? I wish!!

lmaooo you are a mental case but we love you. That story of the garlic thing was actually true, it happened to a friend of mine but she didn't end up with him but yet I pictured that happening to you. You be telling me the funniest stories sometimes, lol and lmaoooooooooooooooo I knew you would catch the tornado tongue thing *wink* *Went's voice* "Bad Girl"....watch out, I might speak about the "temparature" nah I wouldn't do that to you lol

Ari and MJ, no marriage is perfect especially when MJ is getting in to all these things. Is hard for a wife to deal with that but Ari loves him.

Yes, Feven and Jimmy are a couple and Shontelle has a boyrfriend but you know there is still something going on between Jimmy and Shontelle. Y'all shall see what happens next.

Yes, 22 chapters left. Waiting for you had a long run, the flame needs to be put out. I'm glad everyone has stood with me for this long :)

Yesss, I loved my new bff Shonny. haha And I know you went bananas for Eva. Girl, we are taking over LOL

love you xoxo

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