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Reviewer: SGHMJ_YsaBear Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2013 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 3

Dude, idk...if she stabs him, the police will chase her and the world will hate her...if she left, she would not complete her mission and Michael would look for her........hmmm, I think she needs to leave ASAP!!

p.s Great job with the story, I love it :)

Author's Response:

Aha yes quite the dilemma, but yeah everyone's said she should leave

And thank you!! xox

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2013 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 3

LEAVEEEEEEEEEE!XDXD This chapter was so dang sexy and hotttt I loved it oooooh!XDXD But she should leave him with the intentions of coming back. Great chapter!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hahaha thanks! And thanks for reading, and your reviews! ;) xox

Reviewer: TatianaJackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2013 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 2

I DON'T WANT MICHAEL TO DIE!

I think he should call the police 

Yet again,we need drama lol

Reviewer: AppleheadJax Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2013 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 2

Spend the night!!! WOO SPEND THE NIGHT!!!!

Reviewer: moonwalkertanzee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2013 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

Dare!!! This is exciting :D Update this soon I can't wait for chapter 2!! :)

Reviewer: AppleheadJax Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2013 10:28 am Title: Chapter 1

DARE!!! I WANT DARE!! Lmfao I LOVE THIS!!!!!! Amazing!

Btw I was wondering if theres a way to contact you? Like, email or twitter? My email is dairymilklover@live.com and twitter @illseeuthruthis :3 



Author's Response:

Haha yeah I thought it would be fun, glad you're so excited :P

And yeah, I don't have twitter but I'll send you an email so you can contact me :)

Reviewer: TatianaJackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2013 10:23 am Title: Chapter 1

Dare She already chosen truth 

What era is this in?Bad?

My favorite era



Author's Response:

Hmm I guess whatever era you want, I was kind of imagining him in Bad era though, it's my favorite also :) xox

Reviewer: SGHMJ_YsaBear Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2013 10:21 am Title: Chapter 1

I like the style of the story, so I will choose dare...it will definetely make things more interesting

Author's Response:

Haha yeah, I think everyone wants dare so far :P xox

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2013 09:02 am Title: Chapter 1

OMG LOVE the whole choose how the plot goes idea. So unique!!! Anywho great chapter and I say she should pick......dare! XD



Author's Response:

Thanks!! I'm glad you think it's unique, I was unsure if anyone's ever done it on here before, I just sort of randomly thought of it and thought it would be good to do it here since it's so interactive with the reviews and everything! Thanks for being the first reviewer, too ;)

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