[Report This]Date: Aug 24, 2013 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 36
Oh wow things couldn't go any worse! A car accident? Now I'm eager to see what's gonna happen next. Liberian I hope you update the next chapter soon because I'm craving more!
[Report This]Date: Aug 24, 2013 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 36
Madison, girl...
I think she went too far with Michael to dismiss him whenever he is trying to talk about their future. She obviously won't be able to marry her fiance and I think it's time for her to cancel the wedding. The more time she spend here, the more feelings Michael develop for her. Maybe she should go to that island and figure out what she really want. It's selfish of her to act like this because she hurts everybody in the process.
"Went to a meeting. Be back before you can miss me too much. I miss you already. I want you here in bed when I get back. And we'll pretend for a while longer. Be good. — MJJ"
"Went to a meeting. Be back before you can miss me too much. I miss you already. I want you here in bed when I get back. And we'll pretend for a while longer. Be good. — MJJ"
And now Jared was involved in a accident. I hope he is ok... I know this is bad but now all I think of is; how is she going to break up with hom now? lol. Sorry, I'm heartless.
And of course she didn't have time to tell Michael!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And he will be upset and hate her more than before!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2013 12:01 am Title: Chapter 35
OMG. They need to have a healthy relationship. Madison has to break up with her fiancee!
Date: Aug 22, 2013 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 35
These two are wearing me out.. Lol. I'm still not sure if I believe him about Jolie but I glad Madison is being real about it. She is owning up to her feelings. But as I said before, somethin has to give. They've created this fantasy and I think shit is about to become real for them very soon.
[Report This]Date: Aug 22, 2013 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 35
The Madison/Michael sex scenes are always so...
Don't get me started on that!
They are so cute! and in love! It feels like everybody knows it but them! And Michael cancelled his meetings to spend time with her. If he didn't care, if he considered her like a fuck buddy, he would't have! He cares for her and it's time for Madison to be less oblivious about it.
Haha! I know when Madison heard Jolie's name she was like
Aww, isn't it cute? Madison is jealous! She cares. Hellelujah! I thought she would have never admitted it! That's a big step in their relationship! And I can't wait to see what will be the next :D
Author's Response:
LMAOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! You are too much! omg lol
Date: Aug 22, 2013 02:46 am Title: Chapter 34
soooooooo good, girl, love this story since the first chapter!
Please continue! I just them together for good!!!!
Author's Response:
Yay! Glad you're still enjoying it! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Aug 21, 2013 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 34
Goodness gracious one of the best stories I've read on here for soo long. Great job!
Author's Response:
Wow, thanks so much! Glad you like!
[Report This]Date: Aug 21, 2013 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 34
New chapterrrrrrrrrrr
I want to get in the story and whisper in Michael's ear "You're in love. Tell her" lol. I can't, this is soooo frustrating! I hope Madison will help him figure it out soon. But she won't because deep down she doesn't want Michael to tell her he is in love. BUT SHE NEEDS TO HEAR IT lol. She will never break up with Jared if she thinks Michael only wants sex from her
And it's even moooooore frustrating she didn't tell him she wanted to be with him.
Poor Michael, poor Madison, poor them. They are in love but the timing is off!
I can't help but feel bad for Jared. Madison needs to tell him this marriage won't happen. Madison doesn't want to hurt him but does she want to end up in a loveless marrige? The more she tries to protect Jared, the both they suffer!
Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Author's Response:
OMG I MISSED YOUR GIFS!!!! They're always so spot on lol.
[Report This]Date: Aug 21, 2013 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 34
I don't get why they don't just be together already? They obviously love each other and the back and forth is starting to piss me off. I feel like Michael kind of poured his heart out here and Madison copped out. Just tell the man you love him already.
Author's Response:
Love or is it infatuation? Wanting something you can't have???
Date: Aug 21, 2013 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 34
I feel badly for both of them. They're clearly in love and yet afraid to make it real. She can't keep cheating herself and he can't either. Somethin has to give.
Author's Response:
I agree. Something will HAVE to give...can't keep running around doing wrong and not face any consequences, you know?
Date: Aug 19, 2013 03:00 am Title: Chapter 33
thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
No problem! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Aug 18, 2013 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 31
I remember being disappointed when I read this chapter .... Michael is using, manipulating her ... Michael needs to learn a lesson NOW!
Thank you!
Author's Response:
No problem! Thank YOU for reading!
Date: Aug 18, 2013 12:56 am Title: Chapter 31
I hope Madison ends up caught in her web of lies. I hope she gets some karma bitch coming her way. This is absolutely wrong.
Author's Response:
TOTALLY wrong. No lies there. What's done in the dark eventually comes to light though.
Date: Aug 18, 2013 12:30 am Title: Chapter 26
Hhhhmmmm it doesn't sit well thinking about poor Jared. Madison needs to choose her boat and sail in it...
Date: Aug 18, 2013 12:15 am Title: Chapter 30
They are both in deep. When will this game they're playing end? Craziness. And her fiancée is mighty dense to not suspect something.