Date: Sep 06, 2013 02:24 am Title: Chapter 41
can't wait for this strictly professional encounter....:)
Author's Response:
LOL "strictly professional" right
[Report This]Date: Sep 05, 2013 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 41
I feel Madison needs to "let go...let flow." I think that she needs to be real with herself and stop stringing poor Jared along. If he does nothing for you then let him loose! She's just making this situation so hard for all parties involved. If she had broken it off when she had met back up with Michael she wouldn't have any reason to feel so guilty. Michael has no strings, but you do. Get it together.
[Report This]Date: Sep 05, 2013 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 41
Who does Michael think he's trying to fool? I'm sure we all know or can guess what's going to happen in the next chapter.
Step 1: Madison comes to his house where he puts all his focus in trying to maintain "strictly business" professionalism.
Step2: They'll have this unspoken silence lingering in the air.
Step3: Old feelings they thought were lost will become new again.
Step4: They began to feel the need and want for one another.
Step5: Then Michael gives her "the look" that we all know she can never say no to.
Last: And just like that their all over each other like two junkies awaiting their next "hit."
I just can't wait please update soon! I love this story sooo much!
Author's Response:
Hmmm, well let's see how close your predictions are - next chapter is posted! =)
[Report This]Date: Sep 05, 2013 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 41
"I don't know how I feel about sending that much money through the mail, you know? I think - I think you should come here and get it."
GOD IS REAL!
Who is Michael trying to fool? Even Madison knows it won't be only "strictly business"!
I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER
Author's Response:
OMG lmaoooooooooooooooo at that gif (BEST ONE YET LOL). Next chapter posted! =)
[Report This]Date: Sep 05, 2013 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 41
Please update. This is a great story. I wish they would just date! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you like!
[Report This]Date: Sep 05, 2013 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 40
This has got to be the saddest, most depressing story I've read in some time. They are both just so lost without each other and refuse to admit it. Then, every time I think they're going to come together again they get pulled apart. Please tell me this won't wind up being some type of Romeo and Juliet level tragedy. At this point I've lost hope for them completely.
Excellent writing though!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Let's just say that good or bad, nothing lasts forever =)
[Report This]Date: Sep 04, 2013 05:28 am Title: Chapter 40
"getting the wedding together"
GIRL. A waste of time and money. I wonder how Jared would feel if Madison tells him about her cheating on him! ... But he is so in love, he might forgive her :/ I may be wrong but I can imagine he doesn't have a clue of what is happening. I think she should do something about it. She rather says stop now than one hour before the wedding and embarass them both.
It's sad because Madison just doesn't want to be alone. Michael doesn't want to be alone too and this is why he sleeps with random girl.
I am sad
But like you said, I'll keep reading :)
Author's Response:
;)
Date: Sep 03, 2013 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 39
Soooooooooooooooo sad..............:( Please, keep going..
They have to be together.. just my thoughts...
Author's Response:
Ugh, I know. Stay tuned! =)
[Report This]Date: Sep 03, 2013 05:30 am Title: Chapter 39
You would think Michael understood that sex isn't the solution to his problem, but no.
(the gifs are back lol)
I wonder if Madison got married yet. If she didn't... And I wonder when they will meet again! I love this story, can't wait for more :)
Author's Response:
LOL yay! All I can say is keep reading =))))
[Report This]Date: Sep 02, 2013 02:41 am Title: Chapter 38
I am glad Jason is not dead but I think Madison wants to go back with him because it's easier with Jason. He is madly in love with her, she has feelings for him, she just have to marry him and be happy, right? She is trying to turn her feelings for Michael to "cold feet", but I think she is in love with Michael but doesn't want to try harder. Michael doesn't want to try harder too. Michael is through with her running away, everything is telling them to give up, she has a fiance, Bill reminds Michael she has a fiance... It would be easier for them if Michael goes back to his life and Madison to hers.
But what happen next? SHE CHEATED. Even if Jason never find out (and I'm SURE he knows it but act like he doesn't because he loves Madison too much and probably blame it on the cold feet too), Madison will always feel guilty. And we all know it doesn't take much for Madison to fall for Michael again. He just have to show up, look at her with his eyes, she will feel the butterflies and cheat on Jason again. She says she will "try her best to love Jared like he loved her because this was real, no pretending" but that's NOT the way love goes. You don't choose who you fall in love with and Madison's heart chose Michael. She didn't try to love him.
One of them needs to grow some balls. Madison needs to admit she cheated and cancel this wedding. Michael needs to tell Madison how he feels and stop telling her they just have to "pretend" because this is real. And Jason needs to be less damn clueless already lol!
(Sorry, no gifs because I'm upset lol)
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response:
Aw man, no gifs lol. I always look forward to them lol. I hear you though - these two are starting to feel the consequences of their wrongdoing. Like yeah, you're hot for him, he's hot for you, but you're both adults - there are consquences for your actions. Not saying that Jared getting into an accident directly happened because she was cheating, but it does serve as kind of a wake up call. Like, while you're all laid up with some other guy in la la land, real life is stil going on, you know?
But anyway, the shit is starting to hit the fan to say the least lol.
[Report This]Date: Aug 31, 2013 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 37
I am so sad for Michael. Especially when it says he wasn't surprised at all. He is falling for her and I am sure telling her how he felt for her would have helped. They need to have a real conversation about their feelings. Michael cannot let her go on with her engagement like this. She needs to know because I am sure it'll a wake up call for her. My poor Mike :/ My poor Madi :/. I wish she would have left a note. I wish he would call her and see what's up. That is depressing
Author's Response:
=(
lol
Date: Aug 31, 2013 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 37
Please, girl come back and tell the girl to CALL HIM.....NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and explain herself about why she left!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please, don't want them apart, again!
Author's Response:
=/
[Report This]Date: Aug 27, 2013 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 36
Dear god.
When you are so busy fucking your boss that you don't pick up calls about your fiance's possibly fatal accident, then you don't deserve to "go on with your life."
YOu deserve to be dragged through the mud in all ways possible.
I've almost been caught up in the sexiness of their encounters that I nearly forgot about how fucking WRONG it is.
This kind of woke me up. Just like it woke up this nasty-ass little girl.
Thank you, LiberianGirl, for waking us up.
Author's Response:
Well...it is true that what's done in the dark eventually comes to the light. And karma is no joke. But, like an addict, do you really want/care about the consequences in the moment? You know they'll come but the hit always feels like it's worth it.
Date: Aug 25, 2013 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 36
why!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!! she have to go but explain herself to michael!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! she loves him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please, continue! you're killing me!
Date: Aug 24, 2013 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 36
She should've left a note! Or at least call him!!!!! No Madison NO. I just can't. I really can't. She is handling this all fucked up.