Reviewer: MJFan232 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2013 10:59 am Title: Chapter 1

Awesome! I can see why you were inspired by the 'Dreams' Pepsi commercial to write this, too.

And I myself like how Michael looked in that commercial as well - the white shirt with the matching coat, the black pants, the white socks and the black penny loafers. Very inspiring, as well as very cool, especially for a writer like me. :) ;)