[Report This]Date: Jun 13, 2018 05:03 pm Title: Episode 18a
Lmao the last update had me dying!!!! I love this story I wish it never ends lol. But every story has an ending. Keep doing your thing girl! This story is great! ðŸ˜
Author's Response:
Awwww, you're so sweet!! Yes, after this episode, just two more (not including the reunion) and then Michael will have his queen! I'm thinking about maybe a short little wedding special for Michael&Queen set off years after the show, but we'll see.
Thank you so much for reading and leaving your feedback!! <3
Date: Jun 13, 2018 12:44 pm Title: Episode 18a
I feel bad for sasha but I’m laughing my behind off right now. I think mari won the challenge and I’m ready for it. Her and Mike’s date is about to be epic.
Author's Response:
Lol, bless Sasha's black little heart. Thank you for commenting and reading. I LOVE hearing what makes you guys laugh, your likes, your dislikes; it all gives me so much insight and helps direct me, so thank you, doll!! :D
Date: Jun 13, 2018 12:33 am Title: Episode 18a
My reaction while reading this update. Them girls was getting nasty!
Michelle and her finger sucking, Sasha popping out her boobs, and Mari stripping. Lawd Jesus. Ava was the only one who keep things relatively clean but we all know she ain’t no angel no more cause she been spreading it wide in the sheets. These girls are a trip but I love it.
Author's Response:
Lolllllll, they were turning up the HEAT during the challenge! After this episode, two more episodes to go, and Michael will have his queen so they're definitely feeling the pressure.
I'm SO glad you're enjoying the story. Thank you for commenting, babe!! :D
Date: Jun 13, 2018 12:09 am Title: Episode 18a
Lol I was just trolling with my last comment. I wanted Sasha’s ass gone since the beginning of the competition. I loved this update. This has got to be the funniest challenge. Sasha was just a damn mess during this challenge and for each test they did Sasha just become funnier and funnier to me. First, MJ said Sasha smelt like mushrooms. Then the bitch can sing, which I thought was hilarious. Then she pulled out her titty and let Michael suck on it. This had me on the ground laughing. Bitch if you don’t put your nasty titty away! Then she let him feel on her nasty titty and at the point I was like damn is your titties the only thing you have to offer Michael. Then the icing on top of the cake was when that bitch fell down and everyone was laughing at her! She was just a damn mess during the challenge. Between Sasha’s attempts to win and Michael’s comments I just found this challenge to be my favorite challenge. Loved the update like usual, you never disappoint!
Author's Response:
Aww, I love that this was your favorite challenge! You're right, Sasha is a HOTT ass mess. She doesn't have much to work with in the back, so she figured she might as well use her chest, poor thing, lmbo. Karma is definitely making her rounds!
And I am DEAD at you trolling with that Sasha being your fave comment. I literally paused and thought it was a historical moment - the first time someone listed Sasha as their favorie. I can't!
Thank you, love, for your feedback. It means everything to me!!
Date: Jun 12, 2018 11:40 pm Title: Episode 18a
I’m rooting for Sasha to win this show. She’s my fave!!!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 12, 2018 10:39 pm Title: Episode 18a
I was about to go to bed ; lol thanks a lot!!
The queen this; the queen that... girl shut the hell up!
Yo this challenge was three much! I laughed so hard! Each girl is way different and has her own way of getting the job done! I guess you gotta fight hella dirty now! From the boobies , strip dancing and tongue flickering I’m surprised the boy didn’t fall out!
I appreciate Sasha’s dedication(can’t believe I just said that XD), but girllllll she just annoys the hell out of me! She was kinda knocked off her high horse this go round; but hey, why goes up must come down!
Like Mari makes it known that she so badly wants a date without being super obnoxious or annoying about it; I like that! That girl got damn near naked ! Okay Mari , go in with your bad self!
Michelle showing out with the touch test! Go head girl! He could’ve atleast gave her some points for rapping though! No other girl did that. Hater.
Of course Ava managed to keep it sweet and classy; a true class act and beauty. If you can’t tell already, she’s my number one :)
Author's Response:
Good, I wanted you guys to have a nightcap! :-p
On the reunion, we’re going to have to ask Sasha what exactly she’s the queen of :-/.
Lol yes, the girls are all so different from one another so they each approach every situation differently. It’s the top four so they’re REALLY feeling the pressure.
Sasha is definitely getting a dose of karma this episode.
Mari did not come to play, Mama came to slay.
Yess, Michael did not appreciate Michelle’s creative efforts!
I absolutely love when you all tell me your favorites. Ava’s definitely more low key compared the the rest of the girls.
Thanknyoi for reading, Dajah. I always enjoy your input!
[Report This]Date: Jun 12, 2018 10:20 pm Title: Episode 18a
You are coming through with these updates girl!! I’m so freaking happy 😩
i liked this challege a lot, it was funny as hell 😂
The girls really out did themselves, even Sasha. Except for when she always fell through the screen, now THAT was funny lmao. Hm, I want Marisela to win so I can see some one on one time with them. Maybe some seducing in the process ðŸ˜
Thank you so much for updating regularly like this. I’m so grateful and I’m sure there are others who agree with me.
Keep doing your thing sis â¤ï¸
Author's Response:
You dolls deserve it! You really don't understand how motivational your reviews are! I'm glad you loved the challenge, it was fun to write. In this next update, one of the girls lights fire under Mari's ass and she's motivated to give her all to Michael ;). Thank YOU for reading and reviewing!!!!!!!!
Date: Jun 12, 2018 09:44 pm Title: Episode 18a
Well damn...I just finished catching up and writing a review for the last update and here you are updating more. I love it girl your on a roll. This whole challenge had me laughing. Michael was just hilarious and his reactions to everyone had me on the floor dead it was so funny. But the highlight of this update for me was when Sasha busted her ass while tryna be sexy. Bout time she got a taste of her own medicine.
Author's Response:
Thank you, sis, I'm so glad you loved the challenge! I had a lot of fun writing it so I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Girl, yes, Sasha definitely gets a taste of her own medicing in this next update. Karma :).
Date: Jun 12, 2018 08:49 pm Title: Episode 17 part f ELIMINATIONS
My favorite author is back!!! When you were gone I was looking for stories to keep me entertained but never found anything quite like this story. In my opinion (and I think a lot of other people would agree) your writing is the best thing on this site. Thank you for coming back!
I can’t believe it’s finally down to four girls. It’s seems like it was just yesterday when Michael had all of the crazies ( Marie, Valeria, etc) running around the house. Although he still has one more crazy left *cough cough Sasha, I think he has good girls left. It’s gonna be interesting to see how this ends up because Michael has deep connections with all the girls left but he can only choose one in the end so there gonna be a lot of tears.
This Ava situation is a bit messy but I really don’t think she should be mad at Michael. Yes Michael been out here hoeing like a motherfucker lol but how he was supposed to know. He was blind sided when Eve walked in the house just like Ava when she was told what happened. The person at fault here in my opinion is Eve for knowing about Ava going onto a show for Michael and not saying anything.
I’m gonna have to give Michelle a round of applause for cooking well. Last time she cooked she was burning the hell outta some cookies lol. But her father had me laughing my ass off. When he arrived I was thinking here comes more drama but I actually ended up liking the fact he showed up, he was funny.
Sasha’s old lying ass!!! How tf you gonna lie about your age. I have to give her props though cause she was walking around lying saying she is 27 but whole time she walking around looking damn near 40. She gotta be a good liar to pull that off. She probably lied about a whole bunch of shit and I hope it gets exposed since she feels the need to expose everybody else. Then her stupid ass tried to buy her way into the other peoples family time. If she don’t take her stupid ass somewhere else with that bullshit. When she gets eliminated I’m gonna celebrate the same way I celebrated when Valeria when home lol. Lying ass bitches
I like all the girls left (except that old ass lying bitch Sasha) but Mari is my favorite. I just like her personality more than the other girls...and she got the biggest ass lol. But I gotta be honest. After that whole Lionel situation she been taking the back seat. She better step her shit up cause all the other girls have expressed their love to Michael when is a bit of a disadvantage at this stage.
As for Rocky’s elimination, I did like her. I thought she was a cool girl but she didn’t have enough fight in her and was just there for fun. Sad to see her go before Sasha, but I believe karma is gonna bit Sasha in the ass for the ways she has treated people this whole show.
I can’t wait for the next update. Once again thank you for coming back!
Author's Response:
AWWW THANK YOU!! That means soooo incredibly much to me. Honestly!! *hugs*
Yes we're down to our Fantastic Four. Michael has feelings for each lady left, so the eliminations from here on out are only going to grow more and more emotional. On one hand, I'm not looking forward to it, on the second hand, it's great, because each elimination gets us one step closer to the winner.
You're right on the dot with Ava. She knows she can't be upset with Michael because it happened before her, but is having struble resolving her feelings on the whole situation. She still struggles in the next episode. I cackled at this: "Yes Michael been out here hoeing like a motherfucker lol "
Dead to the bed!!
Yassss, our girl Michelle finally whipped up a meal worth writing home about. Her family couldn't have came at a better time. So glad that you loved Robbie Michaels III, he was so fun to write. His character is inspired by Samuel L. Jackson of course, Rick James, and all the middle-aged men who gave me advice on love, lol.
Sasha is a whole ass mess, child. Done lied about her age, threw the only girl she was on friendly terms with under the bus, just a mess. Sasha's desperation leads to impatience in the next episode...
Yes you're exactly right, Mari&MJ cooled a little bit once he found out about Lionel. NOW that he knows what it's like, he can relate to her and see it from her point of view, and so we see more MJ&Mari moments in this next episode :).
Yes, Rocky was super chill and that's what Michael digged about her, but Mama was a little bit TOO chill.
Just updated and about to start working on the next one. Thanks for reading and leaving your input. It helps me soooooooo much, seriously! <3
Date: Jun 12, 2018 11:10 am Title: Episode 17 part f ELIMINATIONS
I feel like Sasha is the type to act crazy when she gets desperate so I think she is about to do some crazy shit. She is head over heels for Michael and her time is finally winding down so she is gonna try and pull out all the stops. Hopefully everyone left in the house stays far away from her cause clearly she ain’t afraid to throw people under the bus in front of everyone like she did Rocky.
Author's Response:
And you would be right, sis. We saw Sasha have an episode in the update before last. Now that she knows Michael is onto her, who knows what home girl is going to do. I can say she really is in love with Michael though. Mama came on this show for one man and one man only, giving the middle finger to all the girls. In the next update, she's desperate to win the challenge so she can get more alone time with Michael.
Thank you so much for reading!! :D
Date: Jun 12, 2018 10:59 am Title: Episode 17 part f ELIMINATIONS
OMG YOU’RE BACK!!!! I’m so happy right now I can’t even explain. I came on here and saw this title and new picture and I just sat at my computer for like 2 mins just staring cause I swore my mind was playing tricks on me. I been waiting so long for you to come back and I’m so glad your getting back to writing. I missed you and this story so much.
Author's Response:
LOL at you staring at the computer screen. I'M SO GLAD YOU'RE STILL HERE!! I was so worried the lot of you had moved on from these messy ass women and their drama. I'm glad to be back to finish what we all started. Hard to believe only three episodes left (not including the reunion). I've been so inspired lately I've been jotting down ideas for a wedding special between Michael&the winner. Lol, thank you for reading, love!! :)
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2018 06:53 am Title: Episode 17 part f ELIMINATIONS
Damn I wanted Sasha to go home. She’s not gonna last at all because Michael thinks she has more to hide. Besides, she lied about her age, she could be lying about plenty more. I just feel something else about her gonna be revealed. She’s messy as hell. I get that you’re in competition but damn, you threw Rocky under the bus and in the concrete just so you wouldn’t go home. Even though Michael was gonna choose you anyway, I felt that was some HE should’ve figured out on his own. (I’m sure he did though cause she was eliminated duh). These girls better be careful with her. I’m so glad she didn’t find out about him and Eve. DEFINITELY NOT THE ONE FOR MICHAEL.
Ava talkin bout being stuck between a rock and a hard, so am I. Out of the four, her and Michelle are my favorite, although Michelle a bit boujie. They both seem so in love with him and vice versa for Michael. Buuuut I do think he’s more in love with Michelle 😬 I think they’re gonna be the final two and I just know he’s gonna have the hardest time choosing which one has his heart the most. Poor girls. I know I’m gonna cry when one of them leaves.
As for Marisela, I like her too. She seems very cool but I’m gonna need her to step her game up. Michael is in love with two women and Sasha confessed her love which puts them automatically at the top. BUT anything could happen. I want her to stay with Ava and Michelle.
*chants* SASHA GO HOME!! lol 😂
my favs in order: Ava, Michelle (hardest decision ever), Marisela and the LEAST Sasha obviously. I just don’t like that girl 😒
I cant wait to see what challenge is up next for them. I’m anxious!!!!!
BTW, I’m so grateful and happy you updated quicker than usual. I’m glad we motivated you enough to update now rather than later. Let me tell you, when I seen your store at the top I thought I was in another part on the website but I seen RECENT and was like oh my god yes (literally my words) 😂 Hopefully we can motivate to update more regularly. (Unless you’re busy with real life of course).
AMAZING CHAPTER â¤ï¸
Author's Response:
HEY, SIS!! Lol, I love how not one person can and Sasha's ass. Michael DEFINITELY is side-eyeing Sasha right now and she has to play it carefully. They're in the top four now and Michael has a strong connection with all of them, so trying to knock one of the other three girls off the pedestal Michael has them on will not be easy.
And oh, I completely agree on Sasha being messy. She's a messy bitch that lives for drama. The original scammer.
I can't with her, but she's so fun to write!! Her day of reckoning will come eventually...
Yes, Ava is in quite the dillemma. Both her and Michelle are in DEEP with Michael and it's reciprocated. He does has a soul connection with one of the girls... In some part in the next episode, the girls and Michael will meet with a psychic and we'll find out why that connection is so deep *wiggles eyebrows up and down*.
I don't envy Michael. This decision is going to be tough. I don't want to reveal too much, but what I will say is tears will be shed and not just from the girls.
You're right about Marisela. Ever since Lionel and the scandal of it all, dahling, MJ and Marisela's relationship has kind of cooled. Sad because she was once his favorite girl. BUT, now Michael knows what it's like to be in her position and it has completely changed his view. We have a lot of Mari&MJ moments in the next episode. I love writing from her POV as well. She's so charismatic!!
I'M grateful for your feedback, love. It means SO MUCH to me and not only provides me with inspiration but the willpower to go and write more I can get it uploaded for you. Again, THANK YOU!! <3
[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2018 10:30 pm Title: Episode 17 part f ELIMINATIONS
Why is that the golden question?! How many times did you eff so and so? Lol, why make it worse than it already is? My heart is breaking for Ava already. Totally glad that the air was cleared, but babayyyyyy Ava went awf! And Michael is a whole fool! ‘I feel like I’m being slut- shamed’ !!!!
Robbie Michaels III is funny as hell (and a real G)! Michelle definite has the advantage over all the other girls, but she needs to pull herself together. She also needs to play it safe! Mr. Peter Pan (lmao) can’t exactly give Michelle the kind of relationship she wants from him cause he’s not exactly hers yet (and it would be counterproductive to foster that kind of relationship and she’s not chosen in the end, IMO)There’s too much at stake if she doesn’t put SOMETHING out , especially with all these other girls here. Ball is definitely in her court though.
Of course Sasha lied about her age 😂
My stance on Rocky stands. She’s boring and definitely not here for Michael as I’ve read. And her interaction with Zane before elimination? She’ll be a-okay if she isn’t chosen! And she think she know everything!! Get out girl! All them bitches do!!
Michelle was literally sick cause Michael was with these other women. If she really knew the reason behind Ava’s breakdown, she’d understand. She can’t talk.
Great episode!! I totally agree with Michaels elimination. I still want Sasha gone though!!! The way she threw Rocky under the bus was not cool (but this is an eliminated after all)and the other girls need to watch out! She’s only gonna play dirtier as the competition dies down! Let us hope that more of Sasha’s skeletons come out to play! Lying about something as trivial as age (and be super convincing at that) is a huge red flag; who knows what else she is hiding.
Author's Response:
Yes, Ava definitely went TF awf and I'm glad she did!! Letting it out is SO much better than holding it in.
Chilllld, MJ ha the nerve to feel indignant about being slut-shamed. Outchea laying it low and spreading it wide!!
I'm so glad you liked Robbie! It was fun writing him in. He's definitely an OG. The one that taught these young ones a thing or two. Michelle's family couldn't have came at a better time. Being around them and having those deep conversations with them really helped her to dig deep so that she can put her best foot forward the rest of the competition. You're right, the ball is in her court as far as her&MJ are concerned. He wants that girl BAD. Remember, when he had sex with Dulce he started picturing Michelle at one point. Mess, lol.
Yes, Sasha definitely lied. When I was rereading this story and looking at the girl's pics, I said "ain't no way Sasha is twenty-damn-seven." That needed to be addressed ASAP.
Your last comment definitely provided a lot of insight into Rocky. Like Michael said, she's one of the few girls that hasn't given him a headache, BUT she hasn't exactly made a big impression either. Yes he liked her, but in comparison to the other girls, it wasn't enough. Arguments, drama, and whatnot can be good for a relationship, because it helps it grow and can bring two people closer together. Rocky struggled with being putting her whole heart out there and what she was willing to give just simply wasn't enough.
Yea, all the girls were confused as to why Ava wouldn't accept their crowns. In their minds, they're thinking "girl you just called 1rst. Why aren't you going?" But if they knew, especially Michelle, they'd be much more sympathetic!
Thank you for reading, Dajah. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Just added another update. Have a good one! :D
Date: Jun 10, 2018 10:18 pm Title: Episode 17 part f ELIMINATIONS
Also gotta shout out Rocky for her investigative skills during this episode. The bitch was on point connecting all the dots. 😂😂😂
Author's Response:
YES, little Ms. Rocky was paying extra close attention. Before she left, she planted some seeds in the other girl's minds ;-).
Date: Jun 10, 2018 09:32 pm Title: Episode 17 part f ELIMINATIONS
Ohhhhhh, sasha needs to go!! But now all my fave girls (besides sasha) are all really competing now. I don’t know who to root for anymore.
Author's Response:
Lmbooooo, Sasha is definitely not a fan favorite. I'm going to have to add this into the reunion somehow... I just have to. As far as the upcoming eliminations, you're right. Michael has some great women left and this mess is going to be hard trying to decide who to send home. Thanks for reading, hun!! :)