Reviewer: MjFicPerv Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2018 01:06 pm Title: Episode 18c

You gave us over 14,000 words so I got a lot to say...

GOODBYE SASHA! I know eliminations are next but I think it’s safe to say she’s going home. I’m not gonna miss her mushroom smelling ass AT ALL! Also just because she doesn’t want Michael’s money doesn’t mean she doesn’t want Michael’s fame. There’s a lot of power that comes along with fame. She the made it clear that she cares about power and having a man like Michael on her arm can give her that. I don’t even think Sasha loves Michael. I think she loves the idea of Michael and is confusing that as a genuine love. There is no way she can genuinely love Michael. They’ve barely spent time together and they are not compatible. There is just no way. And I always laugh to myself how everytime she tells Michael she loves him he always dances around saying it back to her. I need Michael to just be straight up with her and tell her that he doesn’t love her.

I hate to admit it but Ava is kind of a bitch. I feel bad for saying that because I know Michael loves her but she is. She is just sneaky about it. And the bitchiness starting jumping out after she got some dick. I never left a comment about it and I can’t believe I forgot to, I guess I was distracted by all the Eve drama. But at the beginning of the last episode, when she got into a argument with Michelle in the kitchen her bitchiness really jumped out. She was talking bout some “we made music” gurrrrrrrl. I was like damn she saying some shit Sasha would say and then had the nerve to turn around and go to Michael and act like she was concerned about Michelle’s health. I like Ava but she is one sneaky bitch and I got my eye on her. 

Whew child! That wedding was A LOT! The moment it was revealed that’s Laurent was the groom I knew some shit was gonna go down. Michael and Michelle were cute. I’m glad she let loose and wasn’t acting tense like she has been lately. She was losing herself for a bit and even lost her appetite. But I think she is back on track now and I’m happy about that. Ava really fucked her mind up. Ava’s good at her mind games...real good. I would argue she’s better than Sasha at it because she’s actually effective. 

Then Manish came and did his thing. At first I was like oh shit I hope he not bout to call on no dead spirits and bring them in the house. We already got Sasha’s spooky ass walking around the house checking doors at night, we don’t need any more scary shit in the house. But I really appreciate what he came and did. I thought he was on point and it was so funny how Sasha was responding to him. She can’t handle the truth. I can’t wait to see more of what Michael has to say about Manish saying that him and Sasha were not compatible. 

I’m so proud of Michael. He wasn’t acting like a hoe in this update. Somebody get this man a cookie (let me stop pretending like I don’t enjoy Michael’s hoeish side). But if I use my Manish mind powers correctly, I’m seeing some hoeish activity in the near by future. I know Michael is a freak and he been wanting to fuck Mari since when he first saw her so if they decide to take it that far I don’t think he’s about to be playing nice in the bedroom (if you know what I mean)...somebody get Mari some ice.

i am ready for this next update. I gonna have my wine ready to celebrate Sasha elimination. 

Author's Response:

Can I just say your username cracks me up? Lmboo, please never change it!!

 

Yes, when Sasha envisions her and Michael together, it's definitely as a power couple. She wants to be his trophy wife to show off to the world and possibly reap the benefits from it. The wealthy are just as mesmerized by fame as the rest of the world. Hmm... interesting point you made about her more so being in love with the idea of Michael and confusing it with genuine love. 

Lol, it's so awkward when she tells him she loves him! 

Oh the good sis, Ava, is DEFINITELY sneaky. I completely agree. Nothing close to Valeria's or Sasha's level, but definitely sneaky in a much better concealed way. She's extremely smart and diabolical; she doesn't act off of her emotions like Sasha does and moves like a ninja in the night. Overall, she's a sweetheart, but the competition brings out the bitchiness in these girls. Noone's fave is safe, lol.

The wedding was so over the top. The chemistry between Michael and Michelle is thick and we're seeing her let her guard down and be silly around him, which is pretty much requirement to be the girlfriend of MJ's goofy self. Lol, Ava did mindfuck her a little bit. I think what made Michelle most sick is seeing the man she's in love with fall in love with another woman. Like Valeria, she allowed Ava to make her feel insecure about her position with MJ, but now we're seeing her come into her own and focusing just on her and Michael because that's all she can do. 

I'm SO GLAD you liked the Manish segment! I remember reading how Michael was into the law of attraction and would meditate for hours, so I thought'd it be neat to include that in the story. 

Oh we have a lot of hoeish activity to uncover ;).

 

THANK YOU soooo much for your amazing review MjFicPerv!! Hope you're having a great weekend!! :D

Reviewer: SophieG97 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2018 08:50 pm Title: Episode 18b

Loved the dinner Michael had with all the girls. But Ava better watch herself. She needs to chill. That petty shit she did at dinner and then the whole note situation ain’t a good look. Even though it was the note situation was against Sasha, sabotaging other girls to get to Michael is not a good look. Dont be like a Valeria and start acting bold cause Michael gave you some good dick. Keep it chill. Michael doesn’t like all that sneaky stuff and karma will sneak up on that ass. But once again Sasha is back at it. What was her purpose with that arguement? She wasn’t making any sense and she didn’t ruin Mari’s date. Her date actually went very well. She just wasted her own time. And Mari is exactly right. Production gotta be keeping her here. And if that’s not the case then Michael gotta be smoking some of the worlds finest crack to keep her this long.

Reviewer: ILovemj4life Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2018 10:55 am Title: Episode 18c

OVER 14,000 WORDS! Sis you went off on this update! You did not come to play with any of us lol. I appreciate you, you never disappoint. 

My man Manish was preaching. When he hit Sasha with the “You’re not compatible” I broke out in praise dance and started shouting. Sasha was taking all types of hard blows in this update. From being put in the box, to the worst date ever, and then Manish, she really was taking some hits. However it was all deserved. For Michael to have kept her in the competition this whole time really irks me. Every time Michael talks about his ”connection” with her I wanna choke him. Even on the few good parts of their date when they were bonding it still wasn’t special. When I think of all the girls who have been in the competition I have trouble trying to figure out why she is still here. There were girls who left early in the competition who had better connections with Michael than her. I think maybe Michael just likes to hear her talk about how she loves him all the time because that’s really the only thing positive about her. 

Also RIP to Joeseph Jackson. Although he had his problematic ways without him there would be no Michael, Janet, Jackson 5, etc. He created a legendary family and he will always be respected for that. But this had me thinking, I know the girls met Randy and Janey but it would be interesting to see the girls meet the whole Jackson klan. 

Author's Response:

Thank you soooo much!!

Did you start praise dancing like this, sis?

 

 

Or was it more like this?

 

 

Yes, karma has finally arrived to bite Sasha in the ass. "Queen" got a wake up call this episode. The thing with Sasha is she doesn't really know how to read Michael all that well. She either completely misinterprets what he says/does or twists it around to fit her idealogy. 

Certain girls, when I write scenes between them and Ava, the chemistry just flows naturally (i.e. Michelle or Ava). Other girls, I kind of have to dig deep (*coughs* Sasha).

 

Yes, RIP to Papa Joe. I understand why people are divided when it comes to him, but he still deserves his flowers and even Michael talked about forgiving him (his speech at Oxford).

And get out of my head! Now who's the medium? Lol, I'd been going back and forth with myself on whether I wanted the other Jacksons to make their debut on the show (that's a whole nother level of fuckery, child), but decided why not? We love drama, so they'll definitely be in this next episode to interrogate the girls. Only the best for their brother/uncle.

THANK YOU ILovemj4life!

Reviewer: Klovesmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2018 08:11 am Title: Episode 18c

I checked this website everyday waiting for you, I’m so glad you updated. The whole little segment with Manish was very interesting and I’m soooooo happy that eliminations are next because I feel like sasha is going home!

Reviewer: fantasiesMJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2018 02:23 am Title: Episode 18c

There’s sooo much I wanna say but I’m in a hurry 😩

 

first off Michelle is getting the feel of being Michael’s girlfriend was great. I’m glad she could handle all the stares she was getting. I know for sure she can handle it. (Kinda wish he took Ava but Michelle is my second fave so it’s okay lol)

 

if I’m not mistaken, Laurent is the guy who checked Sasha? Hopefully I’m correct. But anyway, I thought Michael knew he was gay! I actually thought he was getting married to another gay guy, turns out it was a woman. Imagine the shock on my face. He had no reason to be ashamed. I love Laurent. I’m glad Michael didn’t run away from that and was a good friend and not judge mental.(see what I love about this handsome devil. 😂)

 

Sasha is a fucking maniac! I have no idea why she’s around still!!! Like she’s showing him all the reasons why she needs to go but he’s not letting her go cause of this “chemistry” between them. She really thinks she can control Michael? She was talking all that non sense like it was normal. I laughed when Michael said she’s scaring him. Hell she was scaring me too sounding like a fool. And THEN had the nerve to ask Michael who he was sleeping with and said she had the right to know *raises eyebrow* Come on Michael I need to stop thinking about the views and put this chick out!!! NEOWWW!! (I said that word in my way btw 😂) 

 

overall this chapter was amazing ❤️

There’s way more I want to say but I have a lot to do today so I need my rest. 

 

PS: I was waiting forevaaaaa for this chapter lol. Thank you for updating and hope you update again soon.

Author's Response:

Yes, Michelle lovvvved being on MJ's arms. The good sis is so petty she just stares back. 

Yes Laurent is the guy who checked Sasha for "assuming" he was gay. Girl, you weren't only one surprised he was marrying a woman. Michelle had the same look. Michael suspected he was gay, but never outright came and asked him. He was waiting for Laurent to tell him as a friend, which he finally did here. Michael seems like he was very understanding in real life, so I wanted to that carry over into the story. I'm touched you liked that scene :D. 

I suspect Sasha may have some form of OCD when it comes to Mike. It's just not natural, no gah. The audacity of her to think she could control MJ.

I'm so glad you loved this chapter, sis!! Sorry it took me so long, it was my stupid lap top! Fortunately, by the grace of God, it's working normally again!! I love reading your feedback, Fantasies!! <3

Reviewer: TWYMMF Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2018 01:41 am Title: Episode 18c

Michael has really been trying to shake things up with all the twist in this episode. At first I was so glad Sasha got put in the box but then I was so pissed she got a date. But after seeing how the date went  I couldn’t be happier she got it because the date was just tragic and it did more damage than good. But when Sasha gave her whole speech about why she shouldn’t be in the box and then finished off with “thank you for listening” I had to laugh. She wasted her breath. Also my skin started crawling when she was talking to Michael about him sleeping with Ava  and talking about how she went around looking for him and checked Ava’s door. She is just a creepy ass bitch and thinking about her scary ass walking around and checking doors at night just creeps me out. I pray Sasha doesn’t appear in my nightmares. I’m also glad that the medium came in and said what everybody been thinking. MICHAEL AND SASHA ARE NOT FUCKING COMPATIBLE!!!! I think that the medium should have just finished off his analysis of Sasha by saying “girl you don’t stand a chance and you can take your ass home now.” I honestly could go on and on about Sasha and her bullshit so let me just get off her before I keep on going. Michelle had me cracking up. She really thought she was about to be getting some in the basement and came down in that bitch and saw everybody else 😂😂😂. That part had me dead because she was really in the mirror trying to make her nipples hard to turn Michael on 😂😂😂 she was trying not to do the most but lowkey still was. But in other news, I hope Ava’s bedroom is far from Michael’s room cause if not she might be hearing some familiar sounds .... cause I have a feeling somebody gonna be laying the pipe down hard.

Author's Response:

Yes, a bunch of twists and turns this episode!! As if he hasn't stressed these poor girls out enough!!

Girl, yes, Sasha's possessiveness reached a whole new level this episode, but as always, karma always has the last laugh.

Lol, poor Manish. He was trying to tell the silly girl to move on and find someone that's more her type, but sis was not having it. 

Aww poor Michelle. She's got this self-imposed sex restriction, but wanted to let loose and have some fun. Mama got her mouth ready for a plate full of MJ only to come back empty. She took it like a champ though. 

Oh Michael&Mari do get overheard and the other person dang near has a nervous breakdown.

Thank you for reading!! I love reading your reviews, learning about the parts you liked and made you laugh. It really does guide me so thank you!! <3

Reviewer: DajahMykal Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 29, 2018 06:09 pm Title: Episode 18c

Why they gotta ‘hear each other out’? Fuck that!

When you point your finger, Sasha , just remember that three are pointing right back atcha! Look at the pot calling the kettle black! And she’s so dumb! Of course, the more time you spend with each other , the closer you get! We get that! We just can’t stand you!

Michael is slick with it though! I’ll give him that! Let’s see how this date goes! I’m low key tight lmao.

And her true colors start to show... extremely jealous, possessive over someone she doesn’t even have yet, crazy! All warning signs Michael, tread lightly; or just don’t tread at all and kick that crazy chick to the curb! That behavior is just gonna transfer over to your (possible) relationship and once it does, it’s a wrap for you buddy!! Sasha reminds me of those crazy ladies you see on Snapped or something! Things don’t go her way and next thing you know, the KOP has gone missing. She’s too anxious and a control freak.

Definitely think she has an agenda. She’s getting older and thinks her time is running out so she gonna try to trap him with a baby, so she can have her fathers and Michaels money, hahahahaha

And she’s managed to disgust him. Damn shame! Go Sasha!

No Michael is a mans man and he will call most of the shots! He doesn’t need you to make decisions for him! She’s certified crazy!

Lol Michael and Michelle sound like they been together forever! Calling her bougie and shit! Lmao, and they are acting so cute!! All these sexual innuendos and flirtiness going on! And what a surprise! Laurent’s wedding and he has a fine ass brother AND Bill Bray is their dad! Lots of surprises ! I think Michelle was the perfect choice for his date!

Juicy as hell. All of it! Laurent and Chelsea are too much for me! And the tables turn! Adrian and Chelsea.😂 this is too much for my heart to handle.

I love what he had set up for them! I’ve always wanted to go to a medium and healer; it’s on my bucket list!!

Seems to me that Sasha really needs to go now. Hopefully Manish speaks her absence into reality . She’s so uncouth lol


LOVED THIS CHAPTER!! You’re so incredibly talented and I appreciate you!!!

Author's Response:

First let me say, I love how you comment as you read. 

Girl, yes. Sasha is extremely neurotic, jealous, and possessive and all of that came out on the date. Poor MJ was so uncomfortable! She views her and Michael as a power couple, so I wouldn't be surprised if she was desperate to secure the bag. Can you imagine a mini-Sasha? 

YES!! Michael is an alpha. Like Manish said, what Sasha really desires is a submissive beta, but she's set on MJ. 

I lovvvve writing Michael&Michelle. When writing their scenes, everything seems to flow a lot more easily. I almost understand when MJ would say that he didn't write his songs, God would use him as an instrument, that the inspiration would just flow through him. Not comparing myself to MJ (lmboooo heck no), but that's how I feel when I write for Michael&Michelle. In comparison, writing out a date for Michael and another girl (Sasha for example) is a lot more challenging. Michael's scenes with Ava and Mari seem to flow easily too. And you're gonna hate this, but Valeria too. Don't drag me. 

That wedding was a dramatic mess!! I picture Adrian looking like Charles Michael Davis's tasty self. If there's a wedding special for Michael&whoever he chooses, we'll definitely be seeing them again!! Especially Laurent, such a fun character.

You should definitely go to a medium/healer!! I've been to one before, but they're retired :(.

 

THANK YOU, DAJAH!! You're amazing and I absolutely adore your reviews!!

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 29, 2018 12:39 am Title: Episode 17 part f ELIMINATIONS

Im really gunning for Ava and but more of Mari to win i love Michelle but Mari is more grounded to me and can really hold MJ down AT ALL COSTS. Ava is sweet and i feel she’ll be a good woman to Mike as fir Michelle she would be too but just because mike may love her doesnt mean she got it nor Ava. I feel he’s gonna eventually fall in love with Mari and vice versa very soon.

Author's Response:

Aww, I love when you all tell me who your favorites are. You're right, just because Michael's in love with Ava&Michelle doesn't necessarily mean they have it in the bag. Mari and Michael have had a strong connection since day one, and honestly, if her past relationship with Lionel never came out, I think her and Mike would be a lot further along in their relationship. But it's ok, because they're making up for lost time now ;). Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, love.  I love reading your reactions, who you're gunning for, and which parts moved you the most. They help direct me and provide motivation. And you're amazing for leaving comments on chapters as you read them!! <3