Reviewer: ILovemj4life Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2018 07:05 pm Title: Episode 19a

Now I don’t condone men hitting woman at all...but if I were Michael I would have tossed Sasha ass in the pool. I’m hollering right now at the fact that security dragged her ass out. Finally she’s gone and we can all finally breathe now...until the reunion. 

Michael is really getting his cake and eating it too. The night before he was almost fucking Mari and then the next day he fucks Ava. He is just living his best life right now. 

That was a cute challenge. Michael was smart ass hell for having his nieces and nephews. Now about the BBQ, I think that the altercation is gonna be between Ava and Michelle. I feel like there is so much tension between those two and they both wanna cut each others heads off.

Thank you for updating for us. You are the best! 

Reviewer: Klovesmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2018 10:16 am Title: Episode 19a

I was so happy seeing that you updated. I think Ava and Michelle are gonna get into it in the next chapter. If not oh well, I’ll still have my popcorn ready.

Reviewer: EliseMarie Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 05, 2018 11:27 pm Title: Episode 18d ELIMINATIONS

How the fuck did I miss the part at the end that said the girls are gonna meet Michael’s family? Well damn I’m blind. Here comes more drama. I love the Jacksons but the amount of drama in they family makes everybody else’s family drama look like nothing.  I think that the girls will have a pleasant time with the women of the family (except for maybe LaToya). When Janet met the girls earlier in the competition she was very chill and down to earth and I think Rebbie is the similar. I think Katherine will be very sweet. Latoya on the other hand...not so much. I think the men of the family are gonna be some trouble. We all know Joe (Rest In Peace) doesn’t play games with anybody. When Joe walks in Michelle, Mari, Ava...and Michael better be on they best behavior. Like Michael has said time and time again, his brothers are messy. When Randy met the girls he was only there for a little while but managed to be extremely messy. He instigated an argument and even tried to pull the robbery on Mari and run off to Jamaica. Jermaine is some trouble too. Now that I think about it Randy and Jermaine are the definition of messy. I was watching the Wendy Williams Show one day and she was talking about how Jermaine’s previous wife and mother of a few of his kids is also the mother of one of Randy’s kids *sips tea*  So they real life be pulling robberies 😂😂😂.  But anyway, I think Michael is about to be juggling a lot in this episode. 

Reviewer: SophieG97 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2018 09:39 pm Title: Episode 18d ELIMINATIONS

Now we all know Michael is nasty but Mari shocked the hell outta me. She was a trip but that’s my girl lol. She was ass up face down when Michael walked back into the room. And then popped that ass for him. Sis was trying to get smashed to smithereens. I can’t even judge her tho cause if I were in her shoes I woulda been bent ova and ready for Michael right when he answered the door for me to spend the night. I swear Michael got the strength of a damn superhero for stopping himself from actually doing it. But Mari should be thankful Michael didn’t tear that ass up because now she has all her strength to dodge Sasha’s wildebeest looking ass who I have a feeling is about to attack her. It would be hard to dodge if she was in a wheelchair so she should be happy Michael stopped.

Reviewer: TWYMMF Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2018 11:47 am Title: Episode 18d ELIMINATIONS

I guess that chakra cleanse done wore off cause Sasha is about ready to kill someone. At first I really thought it worked cause she was being all nice and understanding. But when she sat her ass down in the limo to go home, she returned back to the Sasha we all know and hate. I ain’t gonna lie, my ass is scared. This bitch is crazy and downed a bottle of tequila. Oh fuck no! She bout to slice somebody up. I just hope it’s not Michael.  ðŸ˜‚😂😂. 

Mari, I love that girl 😂. She rolled up to Michael’s room prepared and she put it on him. Mari had Michael speaking different languages 😂😂😂 That nigga said “askjd…” I fell out laughing. She had Michael speaking Chinese or something 😂😂😂 I cant stop laughing. Make it make sense Jesus. Y’all he really said “askjd”. Huh Michael? Please translate for us. But Michael recovered and turned her out. Another comment said he ate her out like a bucket of kfc. IM DEEEEAAAD. I’m deceased. I cannot with y’all. The comments always have me rolling.  

 

At the elimination Michael made me slightly mad. He said to Sasha “I’ll never have to worry about someone stabbing me in the back, because you’re watching it.” What is his definition of someone watching his back because she ain’t been doing that. She was never watching his back. She was watching her own back. You can’t tell me that manipulating other girls is watching Michael’s back. She does those things out of self interest. The drama she brought in the competition only made it harder for Michael to make decisions. If anything she sabotaged Michael and his purpose for this whole thing. Even though Sasha has been eliminated, I’m mad Michael was not able to see that. I’m sorry but Michael can be stupid sometimes.  And because he was so stupid, he gonna have Sasha peeping through his windows for the rest of his life 😂😂😂. She lives is Beverly Hills, I’m sure she’s gonna pop up on Michael from time to time. 

Author's Response:

Oh, girl, that chakra cleanse Malesh gave her probably worked for a few hours. But as usual, when it comes to Michael, Sasha became unhinged. 

 

Mari really did have that boy speaking different languages!! Had him lookin like...

 

 

Lmbooo, I died at that KFC comment as well. 

 

Yea after Sasha came back, I think Michael had to recant this statement. i can't wait till we get to the freaking reunion!!

With Sasha, I think she somehoe convinced herself that by being this master manipulator, she was making Michael's decision easier, when really she was just looking out for herself. You're right, she's very self-serving. 

Yep, Beverly Hills ain't that far from Malibu! Michael better up that security haha!

 

Thank you SO MUCH, and I am so sorry it took me so long to respond to this (I'm finally getting into pace at my new job), but please know I appreciate it and it had me cracking me up haha. :D

Reviewer: EliseMarie Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2018 12:40 am Title: Episode 18d ELIMINATIONS

Who is this Mari? Who does she think she is? Where the hell did all that come from? Well excuse the fuck outta me but Mari has me SHOOK. She DID that shit. Although I’m jealous, I gotta give props where props are due. She once again did not come to play. Michael had me SHOOK too. He said that the beast in him clawed to come out.... so was what he was doing not the beast...so you mean to tell me there are more levels to this shit...Michael...lord Jesus. You know what nevermind because I’m getting myself worked again and I don’t need that right now. That whole scene had me SHOOK. Michael said he wanted kids within the next 5 years but he almost made some kids tonight when they he was about to go in raw dog. 

Although Michael got his feelings hurt and he caught a slight attitude, I’m glad Mari pressed him about Sasha because that’s what I have been dying to do. Mari kept it real although she did it at a cost. Michael felt like he was being called fake but I can’t even get mad at Mari because I’m not gonna lie, I thought Michael was on some bullshit when it came to Sasha too...and I still do but it’s whatever since he eliminated her.

Sasha was way to calm when she got eliminated at first. I knew something was off. When I tell you my jaw was on the floor the moment she got out of the limo, I’m so serious. I think she is gunning for Mari since she’s been fighting with Mari for a while now and she was losing her mind when she overheard Mari and Michael. But her coming back and to do some wild shit after being eliminated only proves the point Mari was trying to make to Michael before. All jokes aside the girl is insane and for Micheal to even have liked her is weird. 

Author's Response:

Mari got you SHOOK, sis? Yes, girl, there are levels to Michael's sexual beast. Boy's a freak. Can't tell me different.

 

 

Ol' nasty ass.

 

Lol, I'm glad you caught Michael's lil attitude, cause he did have one, but it kind of needed to be said. With Mari, Ava, and Michelle, the feels are OBVIOUS between them and Michael whereas with him&Sasha... not so much. But like you said, Michael took it as her calling him fake and he got offended because he felt like he'd been opening himself up to her.

 

Yes we knew Sasha was not going to leave without a bang!

 

Thank you so much for reviewing Elise! Your insight is always spot on! Sorry it took me forever to type up a response, got a new job and they are WORKING your girl! :D 

Reviewer: ILovemj4life Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2018 11:10 pm Title: Episode 18d ELIMINATIONS

Biiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiihhhhhh!!!!! I KNEW SOME SHIT WAS ABOUT TO GO DOWN WHEN YOU HAD THAT GIF WITH THE THUNDER! What I wanna know is who does she think she is about to be swinging on? Ava? Michelle? Mari? Hell maybe Michael? Why did you have to end the episode like that. Now all gonna be doing is thinking about this all week 😂😂😂

Well damn...Mari and Michael are some damn freaks. I had to stop and catch my breath as many times as Michael did and I wasn’t even doing shit 😂😂😂.

I usually have more words in my reviews but I’m speechless. The drama in this episode, lawd. But the Jacksons are coming and I know that more drama is coming. That gif with LaToya blowing herself up TOOK ME OUT!!  I laughed so fucking hard. 

Thank you for this episode it was great. Update soon. 

Author's Response:

LOL, I'm sorry, love!! I was legit going to include the next part in with this update, but I'ma be honest with you... my ass got tired and decided to end it there. I just put in the next update, so don't hate me too much.

I'm glad the drama left you speechless, lol, writing for Michael&Mari is always fun. I hollered at  "I had to stop and catch my breath as many times as Michael did and I wasn’t even doing shit 😂😂😂." I get insecure when it comes to writing sex scenes so this meant a lot.

Quiet as it's kept, I lovvvve LaToya and can't wait to have her in the story. Undisputed Queen of Pop!

 

 

Lol, I'm trolling, but I really do like Toya.

 

THANK YOU, ILovemj4life!! Please know I appreciate you taking the time to read and review!! Have a great weekend :D. 

Reviewer: fantasiesMJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2018 10:39 pm Title: Episode 18d ELIMINATIONS

Well looky looky, Mari stepped up and got her groove on..ALMOST! I’m actually glad Michael controlled his horny self and didn’t sleep with her. He’s already a hoe so no need to put her in the mix of it (even tho he did actually. He ate her like a bucket of kfc)

 

That has to be hard for Michelle to watch her friend dress like that to go see the guy she’s in love with. But I’m glad she controlled herself. At the end of the day it’s every woman for herself and they’re competing against each other.

 

SASHA IS FREAKING GONE!! Finally!! I’ve been craving (Yes craving) for this day to come. But shit she’s coming back to give Michael a piece of her mind. Well there’s gonna be security and possibly the police because she bout to go loco.

 

i was actually upset that Ava was in the bottom two. For a moment I thought she was going home 😩 my girl need to step her game up!!

 

It’s the final three and boy this is gonna be a VERY hard decision for Michael. I feel bad for him because all three ladies are awesome, beautiful and has a special place in his heart. I love all of them so I’m gonna be sad when one of them goes home 😔

 

 

Great Chapter ❤️ I swear we don’t deserve these consistent updates!!! You’re an amazing writer and I hope you write another story in the future after this one is over(which I’m gonna be crying when it finally ends)

Author's Response:

Hey, Fantasies!!

Yes, our Michael is growing up and learning how to control his inner hoe. I SCREAMED at "he ate her like a bucket of KFC"!!

And yes, our Michelle is growing up too. Her&Mari are friends, but that's also her competition.

Sasha finally loses it in the next update. One could say it's the tequila, others could say it's her emotions, and the rest could say it's a chemical imbalance. Knowing her, it's a mixture of all three. 

Aww, don't be upset, sis. There's only so few girls left, I wouldn't think of it as the bottom two anymore. Michael is still very much feeling little Ms. Ava.

 

Whew... I'm not looing forward to the next round of eliminations. This will be Michael's hardest decision yet. Noone's fave is safe :(. 

 

THANK YOU for your review fantasiesMJ!! You dolls DEFINITELY deserve consistent updates for consistently supporting this story by reading and leaving your thoughtful reviews!! I LOVE looking at the story through your perspective because it gives me insight and lets me know what I need to do as a writer, so thank you sooooooooooo incredibly much!! *hugs* As far as another story, I'm considering a wedding special for Michael and his chosen one (maybe 5 episodes long), but I'm NOT for sure yet; right now I'm just playing around with ideas and trying to come up with a storyline because the one I have in my head right now is dramatic AF. A little bit too dramatic even for me, lol. Again, thank you!!!! <3