Date: Apr 29, 2014 04:54 pm Title: Episode 13f ELIMINATIONS
Awwww that was so sad. Michelle and Marisela didn't even know what to do with themselves. I thought that was real and I was thinking "what the FUCK is going on, Michael can't do that!" It is a good thing it was not real because I would have been so pissed and I would have started flipping shit. I think that Michelle and Mari are going to go far in the competition. I am not sure just how far but they are most definitely going to go far. Glad your health has improved and glad that your are back. Thank you for being such an amazing person and author.
Author's Response:
HEY JULIE!!! *hugs* I knew better than to get rid of doubly eliminate Michelle and Marisela.Y'all would've killed me if I got rid of Michelle and Marisela at the same damn time lol. I would've had to hide for cover!!! Michael is feeling very conflicted right now. We're getting deeper into the competition, all the girls have forged a connection with Michael, and some STRONG feelings have been developed on both ends, so it's not going to be easy to say goodbye from here on it out even when one does something to disappoint/hurt/anger the other. Before, it was not as hard to send girls home when they messed up, but now that Michael can see each of these girls in his life, he wants to make sure that he doesn't make the wrong decision, and send what could be his future queen home.
THANK YOU for your feedback Julie!!! Your words mean soooo much to me!!! Love ya!!!
Date: Apr 29, 2014 04:46 pm Title: Episode 13f ELIMINATIONS
Well this was a surprise... and a great surprise. Thank you for coming back and I hope that all will continue to be well with your health. th. Update was great as usual, full of drama which we all love. keep it up. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for your well wishes hun! I am a VERY strong believer in prayer so please keep my family and I in yours and you will of course be in mine! I'll have another update for you no later than tomorrow! MUAH!!!
Date: Apr 29, 2014 04:34 pm Title: Episode 13f ELIMINATIONS
My gurl is back!!! I missed u sooooooooooooooooooooooooo fucking much. As I was rolling down past stories I probably won't read because they are not that interesting and they are all the same, I came past this story and I had to do a double take. Guuurl you don't know how much this changed my mood. But most importantly I am just so happy to know that you are back.
Author's Response:
YASSSSSSS HONEY IM BACK!!!! And I missed you soooooooooooooo sooooooooooooooo soooooooooo much more!!! *catches breath*
Happy my little ol' messy store was able to flip your mood because I love it when your turnt up!!!
LOVE YOU DIAMOND!!!
Date: Apr 29, 2014 04:12 pm Title: Episode 13f ELIMINATIONS
OMG WELCOME BACK. I HAVE BEEN THINKING ABOUT THiS STORY THiS WHOLE TIME AND TO KNOW THAT YOU ARE BACK SERIOUSLY MAKES ME SO GLAD BECAUSE THERE iS NO OTHER STORY ON THIS WEBSITE THAT CAN MATCH WHAT YOU DO!!! PLEASE DONT LEAVE EVER AGAIN, WE NEED YOU HERE!!!
THiS UPDATE WAS WELL WORTH THE WAIT. YOU REALLY DID COME BACK WITH A BANG AND I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. UPDATE AGAIN AS SOON AS YOU CAN!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
THANK YOU LILLIAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I am backkkkk and have absolutely no plans to go anywhere anytime soon! Ii love how you take the time out to leave me with your thoughts and feedback. It is MUCH appreciated! I will have an update here no later than Thursday!!!
THANK YOU DOLL!!!
Date: Apr 29, 2014 03:25 pm Title: Episode 13f ELIMINATIONS
Author's Response:
Lol love this pic!!! I'm sure a lot of the girls were making that exact same face!!!





Date: Apr 29, 2014 06:40 am Title: Episode 13f ELIMINATIONS
I hate Michael!!! Lol
That's all I have to say.
I'm glad you are back!
Valeria and Sasha can go kick rocks.
Author's Response:
Hey Dajah!!! :)
Michael definitely had everyone fooled. Valeria's pissed and decides to get to the bottom of it.
THANKS FOR READING HUN!!!
Date: Apr 29, 2014 06:35 am Title: Episode 13f ELIMINATIONS
Thank God u r back now. I honestly can't even express to you how bad I wanted you to return. Seeing this update made my day.
That date was so awkward. Michael really knows exactly how to give a cold shoulder. I don't know how I feel about them still. I really like them together A LOT but things are going to be different. I still don't think the problem is resolved because Lionel's cheating ass still wants her. And from my experience with relationships I know damn well that once you see your ex has moved on it automatically makes you want them back by all cost. Lionel was acting all stretchy at the party when he was telling Mari that Michael is a heartbreaker. So I don't know how this will go.
Fuck you Valeria. Didn't you learn your damn lesson. What the fuck are you talking to Michelle for. Do you want your ass beat AGAIN. Sit down bitch. And what the fuck are Chris and Val becoming friends for. You know what happens when you become friends with Valeria...you end up like Shante.
I honestly thought that Michael was smoking something because if he sent Mari and Michelle home he would honestly be wasting him time in the house. Thank God he was joking. I should have known that but I was as gullible as Mari and Michelle.
Author's Response:
Yes babes I'm back!!! I'm glad this update made your date because your feedback made mines <3.
Lol that date was very awkward right? Michael's feeling a lot like you. He doesn't know how to approach his relationship with Mari. On one hand, he doesn't want to lose his best friend, on the other hand, he doesn't want to miss his shot at love. The way he was talking, Mari could be the one. Lionel did a job getting into both their ears and having them second guess the possibility of a relationship with one another smh. Michael seems to have some strong feelings for Mari though so we'll have to see whether those feelings will overpower his close friendship with Lionel. Lionel isn't exactly innocent in all this so why should he be able to have his cake and eat it too? We'll have to see how this one plays out.
Im starting to think Valeria really is crazy. She got her ass beat [BAD] and she's still popping off at the mouth trying to get Michelle out the house. Lawd... And we'll explore Xtina and Val's "friendship" more closely in the upcoming episode ;).
With everything that happened, Michael definitely could've sent them home with good reason but those two girls have obviously made spaces for themselves in his heart because he doesn't seem able to let them go. Not at the present time anyways...
THANK YOU LYDIA!!!Love you hun!!!
Date: Apr 29, 2014 02:15 am Title: Episode 13f ELIMINATIONS
Yes!!! You are back. I missed you sooo much. So glad to know things are better for you. You had me soo worried. I woke up in the middle of the night and just randomly went to this website cause I could not go back to sleep and then I saw this. I AM SO EXCITED. And I read this chapter and I was like damn. When Michelle and Marisela were about to leave I actually started crying. I was like REALLY you are gonna keep Valeria's crusty ass in the house and send them home. I didn't realize but my dumb ass was talking to the computer like I was actually there. Thank god that didn't really happen. That was a close one. But away... YOUR BACK!!! ... And by the way that was a really good comeback.
Author's Response:
Yassss I'm back! I missed you MORE love! It was definitely meant to be when you woke up and came straight here you and I'm soooo glad you did!!!
Yes, Michael kept V around smh. You know that she's PISSED he kept Michelle around. I wonder what's next in this crazy girls plan?
Don't feel dumb. I was getting choked up with Mari and Michelle when they were saying goodbye lol. Yes these two lovelies survived another day but they are skating on thin ice. They better go hard in this next episode if they don't want Michael to regret his decision.
THANK YOU HONEY!!! Your feedback means so much to me!!!
Date: Apr 28, 2014 08:45 pm Title: Still here!
I'm glad you are okay....health always goes first
Author's Response:
Thank you doll :)
Date: Apr 26, 2014 05:01 pm Title: Episode 13e
I hope that whatever you are going through will be resolved but in the mean time I just want to let you know that I think about this story almost everyday and it is very disappointing to know that there hasn't been much progress since the time you returned to us after a long period of time. If you are not going to update anytime soon but you do read this I just ask that you keep this story in you thoughts and keep the ideas going. When you return I know it is going to be great. Please come back.
Author's Response:
Hi Nat, I completely understand your frustration and I would never want you guys to think I take any of you for granted because I don't. Leaving without a warning isn't fair to any of you and it's just plain rude. I apologize for that and can only promise to make it up to you all from here on out. Love you much, I really do. Muah!!!
Date: Apr 06, 2014 09:08 am Title: Episode 13e
WHERE R U AND WHEN ARE U COMING BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It has been so long, it feels like you just returned to us and then just left without saying anything. I know you have a life outside of Mjfiction but you are letting me and everyone else down. We were all so excited when you said you were coming back but then a few weeks later your gone AGAIN. When you said you were returning, people went back and reread the story and left more comments but then you just leave and don't say anything. The least you could do is say you are not going to update for a while. You literally just disappeared on us. How would you feel if we all just disappeared on you and deleted all of our comments and never said anything else. if you have devoted readers YOU have to be a devoted writer. I am VERY upset and disappointed. Hopefully you do something soon.
Date: Feb 01, 2014 06:41 pm Title: Episode 13e
ARE U OK? It has been 2 weeks. I need u back. :(
Author's Response:
I'm back hun, I'm so sorry for the hiatus :(. Last time when I "came back", I wasn't in the best health. Now, things for me are completely different and I have an insane need to see this story on through.
Date: Jan 27, 2014 03:29 pm Title: Episode 13e
Please update this week is you can. :)
Date: Jan 25, 2014 10:29 pm Title: Episode 13e
It has been almost a week, you alright?
Author's Response:
Hi love, I'm finally back. Don't hate me *hides behind hands* lol, but I do apologize for my abrupt departure. I sincerely do. I wrote a note to everyone giving more details, if you want to reason, but I want you to know that you all and this story are VERY important to me. I made a promise to myself and to you all to see this story on out, and that's exactly what I plan to do.
Date: Jan 24, 2014 08:15 pm Title: Episode 13e
Update tonight?