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Reviewer: MeaganG Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2014 07:34 pm Title: Episode 14a

Gosh this episode is already starting out like a hot mess. First the failed Christina and Michael hookup and the challenge. I know that the rest of this episode is gonna be filled with drama. Bring on the hot mess. Update soon. 



Author's Response:

Heyyyy Ms. Meagan!!! I'm still reeling from failed hook up attempt. And the girls in the challenge=ridiculous. More hot messiness coming up for you soon.

THANK YOU SWEETS!!! :D :D 

Reviewer: mimi404 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2014 04:36 am Title: Episode 14a

First of all, why was Michael fucking Christina. That clearly was just lust because out of all the girls I think they have the least deepest connection beyond physical. But that shit that happened in that bed was just fucking gross. In the words of Michelle she need to get her life. I loved the challenge. It was funny as hell especially because they all thought they were meeting the family. HELL NO. I think that some more girls need to go before they are introduced to the family because some girls are a mess. Seriously a mess. Can't wait for the next update. I haven't said it yet but I am so glad you are back. 



Author's Response:

Christina hasn't been here as long as the other girls so she knows she needs to step her game up.

I felt soooo bad and utterly disgusted for Michael when he discovered that shit. LMAO@ "she need to get her life."

Glad you loved the challenge. This one was inspired by Real Chance of Love. Remember that show? 

THANK YOU MIMI!!! MUAH!!!

Reviewer: Chanel21 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2014 12:45 am Title: Episode 14a

These girls need help. I don't know what the fuck some of them were doing. If I were Michael I would be scared to leave them alone at neverland. These girls need supervision at all times because they just messing everything up. 



Author's Response:

LOL@ "If I were Michael I would be scared to leave them alone at neverland." I cosign that statement!!! These girls were a HOTTT MESS!!! 

THANK YOU CHANEL!!!

Reviewer: TWYMMF Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2014 06:40 pm Title: Episode 14a

As Michael said, the winners of the challenge are the two girls he feels understands his lifestyle and what it means to hold down Neverland while he is away........ So how the hell did Valeria make it in the top four. That don't make no damn sense. That girl in reality could not hold down shit.  All she did was brush some stank teeth. Bitch please anybody could have done that. If she wins the date I swear I am going to go nuts. We all know that bitch is twisted in the head so she will probably be the one to throw someone under the bus if anything. Out of the four girls she is the only one I would think would intentionally ruin a whole date to better herself. She is selfish and disgusting and that is exactly something she would do. What shit is there to be thrown out there anyway. I am trying to think but everything or most things that are relevant to this moment in the competition have been exposed but then again if Valeria wins the date her dumb ass would probably start making shit up. Let's all just hope she does not win or if she does win she is the one who is thrown under the bus. Crossing my fingers. Update soon. :) 



Author's Response:

Valeria is a very diablolical person if indeed, if she's the one that wins this challenge, the other girl better look out! As far as the date, no bombs or secrets will be dropped, but negative/unattractive characteristics of another girl will be pointed out to Michael. 

From reading everyone's reviews, I think it's safe to say that Valeria is officially the most hated girl in the house!!! Even more so then Sasha. Will Micahel see Valeria's flaws like you guys clearly do, or will it be too late? Hmm... 

THANK YOU BEAUTIFUL!!!

Reviewer: mjlover07 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2014 06:04 am Title: Episode 14a

I can't wait until the next episode..... ٩(๑d75;▽d75;๑)۶ 



Author's Response:

Will be hre tomorrow on TUESDAY!!! ;) 

Reviewer: IJustCantStopLovingMJ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2014 02:25 am Title: Episode 14a

I also want Valeria to go on that date because her ass needs to be expose and she needs to be thrown under the bus. I can't think of anyone else who could be thrown under the bus by anybody else so I am hoping it is Val. I really want Michael to see through her all bullshit because if he doesn't she is just going to keep trying to ruin things for others girls and ultimately ruin Michael chance of finding real love because her schemes could send the wrong people home. I am really hoping she never gets good alone time with Michael because all she is going to do is try to seduce him to keep her and we all know though we  hate to admit it that Michael is a sucker for Valeria. 



Author's Response:

I feel it's safe enough to say that you will definitely be seeing A LOT of Valeria in this next update. She's about to put her brains to good use. 

And yes, Michael is definitely a sucker for Valeria!!! She had him hypnotized from the first episode when she stepped up to him and took him outside to talk. Even now after she royally fucked up and put him and Michelle on blast, he still feels drawn to her, despite all the red flags. They definitely have one of the strongest connections in the house and Michael isn't ready to give that up yet. 

THANK YOU HUN!!!

Reviewer: BAD Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2014 02:16 am Title: Episode 14a

Loved this challenge. It was so funny cause some of the girls did not know what the fuck they were doing at all. And Michaels reactions were so funny especially his reactions to Ava when she was singing. Michael and I had the same reaction like why is girl singing, those animals don't give a damn. And Michelle acting all crazy trying to get those pigs. I just wanted to walked up to her and be like honey stop that ain't working for you at all. And Marisela...mm mm girl, you and that ass. I don't  blame Michael for watching her and grabbing his manhood which brings me to christina. What the fuck was that. If I were michael I would have eliminated her ass right there. 



Author's Response:

I don't know WHAT Ava thought she was gonna accomplish by singing to the animals. You're right, they could care less, lol. I don't know why her and Michelle thought those animals could understand them. 

Marisela had Michael HOOKED!!!

Lol@ "I would have eliminated her ass right there". I don't know how Michael had such a calm reaction. I'm grossed out when I get my own blood on my fingers. Ewwwwww!

THANK YOU BAD!!! :D :D

Reviewer: uRmyLovelyone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2014 01:50 am Title: Episode 14a

Another great episode. To be honest I don't know how you do it. There is always something new and always more drama and more things to talk about in EACH update. Not many authors have that ability to keep readers interested in very update. I seriously applaud you and I am so happy that you are back and here to stay. Missed you so much you don't even know. Welcome back. 



Author's Response:

Wow you just paid me the biggest compliment--"there is always something new and always more drama and more things to talk about in EACH update." That means A LOT to me!!! You just don't know... Basically, I like to look forward to what I'm about to write, I never want to feel obligated to write an update, so to keep myself from getting bored, I get myself excited to write by coming up with ideas that gets me so excited I ca't sit still. So thank you for your words. I'm so happy that you are satisfied with each update because I NEVER want for any of you to get bored with an update. I'll have another one here for you tomorrow on Tuesday! Muah!!! 

THANK YOU LOVELY ONE!!! :D :D :D

Reviewer: thatgirlcrazy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2014 01:46 am Title: Episode 14a

This challenge was a hot mess but very entertaining. I thought that Michelle was going to be the worst but them other girls proved me wrong. What the fuck was going on. Here is my suggestion to Michael if you make Ava, Michelle, or Sasha your queen please don't let them near the damn barn. I WANT Valeria to go in the damn date because I want her to be the one who gets thrown under the bus because that bitch needs to go and I will continue to say this until her ass is gone. Moving on, I would like to say that Christina is a sloppy ass bitch and Michael needs to take a shower for a whole damn day. Michael was chill and shit and I was like. Oh HELLLLLLLLLL NAW, Michael you acting a bit too chill. I know he is understanding and all but that shit was just so gross. Christina check yo self .... Literally. 



Author's Response:

I couldn't have described the challenge better. It was a HOT MESS!!! I agree with you on your suggestion. Ava over here creeping the aimals out, Michelle's yelling at 'em like some bad ass kids, and Sasha can't tell the difference between a llama and a sheep. 

And Valeria, Valeria, Valeria... that girl is a real character. Whether she wins or not, I feel safe saying you'll be seeing a lot of her in this next update. She's always up to something these days ;).

As for Christina... smh. I know our periods can sneak up on us, but dayum. You didn't feel ANYTHING going on down there? Sheesh... 

THANK YOU HONEY!!! :D :D

An update will be here tomorrow on Tuesday!



Author's Response:

I couldn't have described the challenge better. It was a HOT MESS!!! I agree with you on your suggestion. Ava over here creeping the aimals out, Michelle's yelling at 'em like some bad ass kids, and Sasha can't tell the difference between a llama and a sheep. 

And Valeria, Valeria, Valeria... that girl is a real character. Whether she wins or not, I feel safe saying you'll be seeing a lot of her in this next update. She's always up to something these days ;).

As for Christina... smh. I know our periods can sneak up on us, but dayum. You didn't feel ANYTHING going on down there? Sheesh... 

THANK YOU HONEY!!! :D :D

An update will be here tomorrow on Tuesday!



Author's Response:

I couldn't have described the challenge better. It was a HOT MESS!!! I agree with you on your suggestion. Ava over here creeping the aimals out, Michelle's yelling at 'em like some bad ass kids, and Sasha can't tell the difference between a llama and a sheep. 

And Valeria, Valeria, Valeria... that girl is a real character. Whether she wins or not, I feel safe saying you'll be seeing a lot of her in this next update. She's always up to something these days ;).

As for Christina... smh. I know our periods can sneak up on us, but dayum. You didn't feel ANYTHING going on down there? Sheesh... 

THANK YOU HONEY!!! :D :D

An update will be here tomorrow on Tuesday!

Reviewer: Diamond23 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2014 01:33 am Title: Episode 14a

O MY GOODNESS!!! WTF!!! Christina that was nasty as hell. She got her nasty ass infected period on Michael's hands. That shit is just downright NASTY!!! At first I'm like, Christina do ya thing gurl and I was like bout time Michael got some real ass compared to them sack of bone bitches he been fucking. But then she just messed it all up. I can't with that girl, she always messes up something. Like that time when she fell in the water,the time when she threw up at the challenge, the time when she got drunk at the party and now this. Girl stop being so damn clumsy it ain't cute.

i was laughing my ass off when the girls got ready to meet the family and then they rolled up to the barn. If I were them I would have known that Michael was not going to let them meet anyone who is close to him after all that shit that happened at the party. They must be crazy. 

These girls were doing things all kinds of wrong in that barn. I swear I thought some animals were about to be killed. And Ava, Gurrl you were all kinds of fucked up and I could not help but laugh at Michael reaction. Out of all the girls you were the worst. Then Michelle. Lawd if you did not stop talking to them animals I swear I was about to call the people to come and take you to the place where the hold psychopaths. And Sasha was dumb as hell as usual. 

Out of the top 4 I think that Mari should win and I am going to regret this because I hate her ass sooooooooooooooooo much but I have to give it to her Val did a good job.... I still hate the bitch. 

Thanks for the update but I must say the more you give us the more we want. Update soon your great. 



Author's Response:

Girrrl Idk how Michael was so calm with her menstrual blood on his fingers. Nasty as fuckkkk. I was thinking the exact same thing about Michael getting some "real ass." I seriously didn't mean for it to take this long, but with his and Mari's relationship in limbo, Christina's our only hope for right now. I loved when you pointed out that she tends to mess up something. I was like "dayum, she right!" 

I don't know why the girls thought MJ would introduce them to his family after that party in the last episode! They're lucky he let them meet his animals!!! They should've known better.

Ava had the goose scared for their lives lol. Michael thought she was trying to exorcise them. And Michelle was... Michelle smh lol. Yelling at those animals like they were some bad ass kids, as if they could understand her. 

Whaaat? Val's getting props?? That's very big of you to separate your dislike for her from how she performed in the challenge :D. 

Another update will be here tomorrow on TUESDAY, love. I didn't want to go this long but I had a verrry hectic weekend. Now that things are simmering down a bit, I'm ready to bust out more updates. THANKS DIAMOND!!!

Reviewer: MeaganG Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2014 06:46 pm Title: Episode 13f ELIMINATIONS

WELCOME BACK 600 REVIEWS. YEAH GO GIRL!!!!



Author's Response:

THANK YOU FOR BEING MY 600TH REVIEWER!!! 

Reviewer: MeaganG Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2014 06:44 pm Title: Episode 13f ELIMINATIONS

So overjoyed to know that you are back now. There is nothing that can compare to this story and just know I could wait forever for this story because it is so good and it is worth it. Also thank God that your health is better I know that you were going through somethings so it is a relief to know that you are okay. This update was amazing and entertaining but what I really want I do right now is slap Michael right across the face. Why the fuck would he do that. Made almost have a heart attack. Damn You Michael!!!



Author's Response:

HEY MEAGAN!!! I'm glad to be back. I'm missed you all sooo much! Thank you for your well wishes, they are very much appreciated! I'm happy you loved the update. And I think Mari and Michelle are feeling the exact same way you are. Playing with our emotions and whatnot. Ain't nobody got time for that!

 

THANK YOU MEAGAN!!! :D

Reviewer: gigiboutthatlife Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2014 06:35 pm Title: Episode 13f ELIMINATIONS

i saw that you had updated and then all of a sudden I started dancing so hard you would have thought I was going down a soul train line. Shit, I'm so happy right now 



Author's Response:

HEY GIGI!!! Lolol I'm so glad to be back! THANK YOU HUN!!!

Reviewer: prettygirlbounce Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2014 04:05 pm Title: Episode 13f ELIMINATIONS

If Valeria don't stop popping off at the mouth I swear karma is going to comeback and bite her in the ass so hard she won't know what the hell happened. Can't wait for it to happen. But anyway so happy you making a comeback.

Author's Response:

I have a feeling karma will be showing up very soon for Valeria. Hope she shows up before it's too late though. THANK YOU!!! Smooches muah!!! 

Reviewer: BAD Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2014 03:56 pm Title: Episode 13f ELIMINATIONS

I didn't know your back, sorry I am late to realize but welcome back. This episode was so good and there are so many things that I can foreshadow happening in the future. One of the main things is that Valeria clearly has not learned her lesson. If she does one more thing it is going to be her third strike and if she is not out then Michael is insane. I don't get why she wants to target Michelle in the house because the competition Valeria needs to focus on is within her own self because she is the one ruining her chances. But I don't like the bitch so I want her to get herself eliminated. Update! 



Author's Response:

Hey hun!!! Better late then never!!! I definitely agree with you about Valeria. She's like a bad ass kid who you keep telling no, but she tempts you anyways. I find that with women like Valeria, it is best to leave them alone to their own devices because they will eventually be the death of themselves.

THANK YOU BAD!!! LOVVVVED YOUR FEEDBACK ABOUT VALERIA!!!

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