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Reviewer: ILovemj4life Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2018 02:06 pm Title: Episode 19c ELIMINATIONS

Aww I’m sad Mari went home but somebody had to go. This is the first elimination I was not looking forward to. Every other elimination was just entertainment to me but I was sad this time. If I had to choose between Ava and Michelle winning in the end, imma have to go with Ava. I think that Michael and Michelle have a wildly strong connection and that’s great and all but I think if they actually get together it could easily turn a bit toxic. That’s just how I feel. I’m not saying it’s gonna smooth sailing with Ava but I think she is more of what he needs as a partner.  



Author's Response:

Lol "but somebody had to go." SAVAGE!! *hugs* I'll miss her too, doll.

I agree, this elimination ceremony was the TOUGHEST. 

Wow, what a great analysis you did there. That's basically what Manish told them (MJ&Michelle) too. That if they get together, they'd bring each other great pain and their love would endure.

Yes, Ava would definitely keep MJ grounded and rooted in reality. They're opposites yet share so much in common.

Thank you for your review!! <3 :D 

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2018 11:25 am Title: Episode 19c ELIMINATIONS

As i predicted my girl Mari was going home. I should strangle you for that 😭😭😭😭😂😂😂😂. I hope you pull a flavor of love 3 move when Flav brought Thing 1 or was it 2? Whoever but when he brought her back cause he felt he made the wrong decision 👀😂 make my day. But at least Michelle And Ava are bottom two and no one else. 

I wonder where this new location is gonna be at and yess who doesnt lnow Brooke Valentine Girl Fight🙌🏾 Was the shit back in our day. Theses chillen dont know nothing anout that. I ccant wait for the last episode then reunion. Oh gawd 👀



Author's Response:

I'm sorrrrrrry, I know she was your fav!!!! *hugs*

Flav and those nicknames, chile, lol. 

Yasssss I LOVE Girl Fight. Still play it to this day. I feel so old saying this, but they don't make it like that anymore!! 

So much drama ahead... buckle your seats cuz we got a BUMPY ride ahead. 

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Reviewer: EliseMarie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2018 11:58 pm Title: Episode 19c ELIMINATIONS

WE BOUT TO THROW THEM BLOOOOOOOOWS!!! If that ain’t my motherfucking song lol. Shit is about to get real serious. No more games. 

Loved the updates. Man Mari was my girl (but I loved all three of them at the same time too) I’m like actually really sad. She stayed having me laugh but her connection just wasn’t as strong as the other two and it’s as simple as that. I know Lionel’s happy now. Probably started break dancing when he heard Mari didn’t win. He gave Michael his “blessing” but nigga please. Ain’t nobody giving their best friend their blessing to date their ex. You ain’t fooling nobody. 

I really can’t predict who is gonna win. My mind keeps changing. Either way I’m gonna be happy and sad at the same time. 



Author's Response:

Yassssssssss that's my song too!! Good ol days.

YES, SIS!! Things bout to pop off in this next update. 

*hugs* Aww, yes, Mari will be missed. Her elimination was definitely the hardest :(. 

We'll get an update on Lionel at the reunion :).

None of our faves are safe. I honestly contemplated flipping a coin for bout a good 5 seconds. This decision is hard!! 

I'm so glad you enjoyed this latest update. You're the best!! :D

Reviewer: fantasiesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2018 10:26 pm Title: Episode 19b

I’m so glad you’re back. I could’ve flipped three time 😩

 

First, I cant believe it’s the final three. This is so nerve recking!!

 

Latoya is a damn bitch to Michelle but at the end thought she was better for Michael. She fake as hell too. I just knew I wasn’t gonna like her. I can’t believe Michael was acting like that towards her thinking she was the reason Ava left 😒 She definitely deserves an apology.

 

i love my girl Ava. I hope she don’t go 😩 but if she do, I still have Michelle. But hell I like Mari too! Ugh! 

 

Im so nervous about the elimination but I have a feeling who he’s gonna choose unfortunately 😔

 

Glad your back, hope you update sooner than later ❤️ 



Author's Response:

I'm so sorry for taking so long, sis!! *hugs*

Girl, yes, final 3 and after this, the series finale. 

Yes, the good sis, Toya, was rough on our girl, Michelle. Michael&Chelle have a [heated] discussion about his accusation in this next update.

Yeaaaa that's what sucks about this final three. I love em all and can picture either one with MJ. The feels!!

JUST updated for you. Thank you so much for leaving feedback and I really hope you enjoy, sweets!! :D

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2018 03:00 pm Title: Episode 19b

Dammmnnn Toya wasnt playing no games with Chelle huh? And i see what you had did there when shit got heated. That gif had me fall backwards into an backflip on the bed lmaooooo 😂😂😂😭😭😭 like i remember that episode but i feel like Mari gonna go home. I hope not. She had more fun with everyone else and she so laid back and sweet. I feel she is meant for Mike. 



Author's Response:

Nope the good sis did not come to play with these hoes. 

 

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Lmboooo, I'm so glad you caught it! 

And yes, our girl, Mari, was definitely the life of the party. With her strawberries&champagne loving self. 

Thank you for reading and leaving me your thoughts on the update, love!! :D 

Reviewer: TWYMMF Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2018 09:53 am Title: Episode 19b

Seeing how the whole situation at dinner played out, I hate to say it but I think Latoya has a point. I thought Latoya was gonna be loonery than a motherfucker at this dinner but she was actually making some sense. Ava is a sweet girl and all but tough is not a word I would use to describe her, although she has other positive things about her. But like Latoya said if you’re not tough in their world you will crack. Michael was very sweet giving her that Cartier bracelet. 

Im sad :( I know everything has to come to an end but damn I’m not ready. I like all three of the girls and I’m gonna be upset no matter what happens. I was playing all types of scenarios in my head about what Michael would do in the end but I was sad about every one of them. Eliminations are next and I don’t want anybody to leave but there’s only gonna be one at the end of the day. 



Author's Response:

" I thought Latoya was gonna be loonery than a motherfucker at this dinner"

Lmboooo, aw I love me some Toya, but I think it's clear sis a few chocolate chips short of a chocolate chip cookie. She was spitting truth to Michael though. Now that LaToya has planted this seed in Michael's mind, Ava has to fight to overcome that and prove that she has everything Michael needs in a woman.

Aww don't be sad, sis. I've been toying with the idea of a sequel, but not 100% set on it just yet. We'll see :). This next elimination ceremony is the toughest yet. Battle Royale. 

Thank you so much for reading and leaving me your thoughts, doll :D. Muah!! 

Reviewer: ILovemj4life Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2018 02:20 pm Title: Episode #1 Part a

Congrats on the new job! Get that money sis lol! Don’t rush yourself and take as much time as you need. Your readers are understanding. 



Author's Response:

Aw thank you, sis! *hugs through the screen* Just added an update, and prayerfully, the next one will be here soon! XOXO

Reviewer: ILovemj4life Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2018 07:36 pm Title: Episode 19a

Hey MjjRose you good? It’s been a minute. 



Author's Response:

Yes I'm here, love!! I'm typing the next update now. I started my new job a few weeks ago and life's been hectic since. Thank you for being patient with me :). Hope everything is well with you!

Reviewer: soltashkina Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2018 11:01 am Title: Episode 19a

I really liked your story) it is great

Reviewer: mjsbadbabygirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2018 08:09 am Title: Episode 19a

Yess My girl won! I'm so happy she did! Brandi is so cute and yes Jermaine and his messiness man.

Reviewer: TWYMMF Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2018 08:43 pm Title: Episode 19a

I really feel bad for Sasha. Michael broke her heart into pieces and she was tossed out the house in such an aggressive way. It was like throwing salt on an open wound. It was terrible she had to go out like that and my heart goes out to her. She was hurt so bad and I was brought to tears...of laughter. Bye bitch. Good riddance. Adios. No one is gonna miss her bitch ass. Behind Valeria’s elimination when Michael went in on her ass, this is by far the best elimination. 

I’m sure the situation at the bbq is going to be between Ava and someone else because Michelle and Mari are good friends despite being in a competition together. If I had to pick between Michelle and Mari getting into with Ava I would say Michelle. And I think it’s probably gonna be started by Ava because Michelle never starts stuff and minds her business until someone provokes her. Ava has a little sneaky side and has successfully pushed Michelle buttons before. 

Reviewer: EliseMarie Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2018 04:56 pm Title: Episode 19a

Sasha sneaking into the Jackson Family BBQ like

Reviewer: fantasiesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2018 10:50 am Title: Episode 19a

Heyyy Rose girl!

First off, that picture of Michael is so freaking cute. Secondly Rebbie looks gorgeous and I CAN NOT deal with this gif of Latoya 😂 that’s how she’s gonna act when successfully intimidate these girls (hopefully they don’t let her or any other messy siblings get to them) 

 

NOW, on to the review.. I couldn’t stop laughing at Sasha as she was doing all the wailing like a Whale. Girl get over it, he doesn’t want your ass anymore. You were a good rating that’s true and you may have even loved him, but your time was up. You’re too damn controlling and basically want to be the MAN in the relationship. That wasn’t happening by a long shot Ms. Mushroom. And you even dared to ALMOST put your hands on Michael!? Ikyfl!! Rose, I wanted to jump in this story so bad and punch the smell off her. I’m so happy she’s gone. Good riddance.

 

My second favorite, Michelle *claps proudly* she was about to defend our man at all costs. That’s what he needs. Not to let no body touch her man or talk shit about him. I applaud her for that. She was gone beat her ass and I was HERE FOR IT!! Why Michael stop her 😒 I’m happy she won the challenge with the children ❤️ She was so sweet and kind to Brandi. She’ll make a great mom. I honestly think all of them will make great mommies. Michelle needs this time with Michael so they can see what’s up with each other. 

 

Currently cheering Ava on for that little “quick” scene 😏 But also she needs to hold out on him a bit because it’s the final three. It’s a possibility she could be sent home unfortunately. Just because Michael took something most sacred to her doesn’t mean she’s safe from elimination. I know if she does go or doesn’t win, it’s gonna break her heart. Hell its gonna break mine because she’s my favorite. 

 

I laugh at Mari dancing and Michael’s nephew talking about he likes the way she dances lol 😂😂 Michael better watch out. 

 

I hope his siblings doesnt give give them a hard time but more than likely they might. *braces myself for the drama* His brothers bet not flirt with them. And I wonder who Michael gonna be annoyed at. Quite an embarrassment for whoever  the girl is 😩 Comes down to elimination, Michael is gonna have it TUFF (I spelled that intentionally wrong) I’m not ready for it!!😩  nooo can he keep all three 😂 Anyways, Dress to impress girls. No dressing slutty 😏 

 

Overall great chapter as always sis ❤️ 

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2018 09:46 pm Title: Episode 19a

Girl sasha took me out but good riddens. ✌🏾✌🏾✌🏾 I couldn’t deal with her at akl and i see Michelle was finna beat dat ass real quick too. Mike why you had to push her behind you. 😩

in to this challenge, i had a feeling Michael was gonna use his nieces and nephews for this one. And the way Brandi and Michelle bobded was the highlight of this chapter. Im so glad she won she deserved it tho but Mari still #1 for me. 

I cant wait for the next chapter. The sneek peak got me wondering who is ginna get into it but why do i feel it may be Mari and Ava instead Of Chelle and Ava? 🤦🏾‍♀️🤦🏾‍♀️🤦🏾‍♀️ I hope it isnt and she doesnt get sent home. Mari out ya game face on and focus on yo man to be girl. Dont get side tracted. 

 

Reviewer: MjFicPerv Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2018 09:40 pm Title: Episode 19a

LMFAO!!!! My username cracks me the fuck up too. I’m literally smirking everytime I login. And the reaction you have to reading our messy comments is literally the same reaction I have when I see you update 😂

Where’s Ben and Dulce when we need them? She needs to get her ass whooped. But the bitch got thrown out like garbage so I’m content for now. When that bitch said “Sasha is still in the motherfucking house! Just not Michael’s house” I cracked up. I hope she gets the help she needs before the reunion because if she shows up with that same energy to the reunion somebody is gonna pop her in her motherfucking mouth. 

If only Ava knew where Michael’s dick was the night before....let me mind my motherfucking business. That’s all I’m gonna say about that. 

Michelle and Mari had me cracking up too. From the “Daddy” comments and then Mari singing like Benjamin Franklin. I’m sure Michael would not mind being called “daddy” in the bedroom. 

I see that this next update is about to be something interesting. Whoever it is that gets into it in front of Michael’s family better be careful cause that’s definitely not a good look, for them and Michael. 

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