Date: May 12, 2014 06:19 pm Title: Episode 14c ELIMINATIONS
Hey r we getting an update tonight?
Author's Response:
Sorry for not updating sooner. This episode was really important, so I needed to take a few steps back and analyze each girl before going forth with this next update. Just updated though!!!
Date: May 09, 2014 08:08 pm Title: Episode 14c ELIMINATIONS
Please update again really soon. The next episode preview has me literally jumping out of my seat.
Author's Response:
Just updated Nina! Muah!!! :D :D
Date: May 09, 2014 08:01 pm Title: Episode 14c ELIMINATIONS
About time Michael brought the exes in. Without even trying he sort of already done that just by hosting a party with his friends. This should be interesting and I know there is gonna be so many mixed emotions. Can't wait, update. :)
Author's Response:
There will be a plethora of emotions in the next episode, yes you are definitely right about that. Michael is intent on digging up these girl's skeletons, and I can't say I blame him. In this next episode, we get more insight into who these girls are and how they are in relationships.
THANK YOU LILLIAN!!! :D
Date: May 09, 2014 06:12 pm Title: Episode 14c ELIMINATIONS
I am really not surprised Christina went home. When she started drinking I was like here it goes. The girl does have a lot of issues and I agree with Michael's decision she really is not ready for a relationship. As for Valeria, your gonna get what's coming for you. Hopefully in the next episode and I ain't gonna feel not one bit bad for you. Oh the fuck well. But anyway when Michael was talking about how he can't control himself with Michelle I could not help but think that he is possessed. He was talking about her like she was something that like captured his soul and I was like dayum. Michael is more than sprung that boy is addicted. Update ASAP.
Author's Response:
Yes, Christina's weakness is definitely alcohol.
Valeria may be #1 right now, but she better watch her back.
Yes, Michael feels like he becomes possessed around Michelle, and it scares the fuck (excuse my language) out of him. We all know that Michael was a control freak when it came to his art and business, so I wouldn't be surprised if that transalted into his personal life as well. He doesn't like not being able to control his feelings, he doesn't like for his feelings to drive him to do things he can't control. We've heard him say countless times that when he's on stage, he lets loose and does what he feels. Off stage, however, he's not like that, so now that Michelle is able to bring that out of him, he's unsure of a few things. In other words... Michelle got that boy's nose wide open hehe.
THANK YOU MARINA!!!
Date: May 09, 2014 06:00 pm Title: Episode 14c ELIMINATIONS
1. SHIT. I knew this was going to happen at some point in the competition and I must say I am so anxious. My predictions are that Valeria gets bashed by her exe, I know that Michelle had a fiancé so that should be a mess, there wil be more trouble for Mari and all of the Lionel drama, I don't think Ava is the type of girl who has scorned exes neither does rocky, and Sasha I don't know who would date your crazy ass and I don't even think nobody is even going to show up.
2. I think since the girls are bringing out their exes Michael might bring his ex Lisa back. HELL I am just guessing I got no damn idea.
3. I think it is going to be lyric if y'all remember her cause I think she was the girl trying to get famous by being in the competition.
4. He was looking at Sasha when she was skipping around the house so I think he already thinks she is hiding something.
5. Well maybe it might be Brooke or something cause I know those two had some fun together in the past. :)
Author's Response:
Girrrl I don't want to give too much away and ruin the story for you, but you were exactly on point with a lot of these!!! Especially #1. You know these girls WELL!!! I just updated for ya!
THANK YOU! I LOVE READING WHAT Y'ALL THINK IS GONNA HAPPEN!!! :D
Date: May 09, 2014 05:33 pm Title: Episode 14c ELIMINATIONS
:O Michael is bringing out the exes. I know he won't be playing no games in this next episode cause it's about to get real serious in that house. That is all I got to say.
Author's Response:
Michael is playing NO games. He has a lot of things up his sleeve this next episode, so the girls better buckle their seats because this is going to be a bumpy ride indeed.
THANKS HUN!!!
Date: May 09, 2014 05:23 pm Title: Episode 14c ELIMINATIONS
THE EXES ARE COMING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
THEY'RE HERRRRRRRRRRE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Just updated!
Date: May 09, 2014 05:17 pm Title: Episode 14c ELIMINATIONS
I am actually really excited and anxious for the exes interrogation. I know these girls got baggage and the shit about to hit the fan and I can't wait. But one thing I know is that if Lionel has to do an interrogation that is going to be one of the most awkwardness moments in this whole competition. It is making me so uncomfortable thinking about it. And if Lionel does the interrogation I know damn well he is going to make things waaaaaaaaaaaaaaay worse for Michael and Mari. I am excited to see who these girls have dated. This is going to be so interesting. PLEASE update like...now. You make this story so good I can't even wait anymore.
Author's Response:
The shit is definitely about to hit the fan. Michael has a lot of shit up his sleeve in the next episode, so the girls should be really nervous. Especially those with the bitter exes. Having Lionel there would definitely be awkward. Michael and Marisela's relationship is already in a weird place, having Lionel there would definitely put those two on edge. Michael feels loyalty to Lionel because that's one of his bestfriends; Marisela doesn't want to come in between two friends.
I just updated for you Babydoll.
THANK YOU HUN!!!
Date: May 09, 2014 05:10 pm Title: Episode 14c ELIMINATIONS
Valeria needs to calm her shit. You are not a boss bitch. Okay so don't go thinking your running shit because if you get caught up in that and you keep doing that your ass will face the consequences of something that is called karma. And from what I see happening in the next episode some of karma is on its way. with the interrogation of the exes there is nothing that you can do about it and we all know that she probably has some bitter exes. UPDATE ASAP, the next episode sounds like it is going to be the shit.
Author's Response:
Hey Mimi!!! You're right about karma. Something tells me Valeria's about to get a dose of it real soon...
Just updated!
MUCHAS GRACIAS MIMI!!!





Date: May 09, 2014 04:19 pm Title: Episode 14c ELIMINATIONS
It is me or does Valeria look like some type of frog or something. I don't know but the bitch look crusty and gross. Who does this bitch think she is. She keeps talking about who is her next target. She needs to focus on herself because in this next episode the exes are coming and there is one thing I know for sure. Her exes are going to let all the skeletons out of the closet. I NEED the next update. Seriously the next chapter sounds sooooooo fucking good. I am too excited and can't wait
Author's Response:
Yoooo, I totally see what you're talking about with the frog thing!!! I didn't at first until I went back and looked. I think it's her eyes. They remind me of lily pads. And then the arch of her eyebrows remind me of the frog's hind legs. Ugh I'm being too analytical. Anywaysss lol Valeria definitely needs to focus because we all know that this girl has some serious baggage and her ex coming is bound to be bad news. Michael called her first this episode, but will she remain at the top? I don't know.
Just updated for you hun. Sorry for the wait! MUAH!!! THANK YOU!!!
Date: May 09, 2014 04:10 pm Title: Episode 14c ELIMINATIONS
Can't wait for the next episode!!!!
Author's Response:
Just updated for you!
Date: May 09, 2014 12:41 am Title: Episode 14c ELIMINATIONS
1.oooooooooooh!!! It is about to go down. I know several girl if not all are about to be in some deep shit. I wonder if Lionel's cheating ass is gonna be there. That would be weird as hell.
2. I wonder who this could be, but I pray to god that it is anybody but Lisa. Maybe it could be Janet since she did the lie detector test. I seriously have no idea.
3. I have a feeling he is going to see Marie. But don't get confused the bitch did not land a role on no damn tv show. She is going to appear on the news for prostitution and for probably killing someone cause she is a wild ass bitch.
4. This is going to be Sasha because in the last episode he was suspicious and she acts like she has no baggage when we all know that she does. You ain't no queen bitch.
5. I don't know who the guest will be, but I know that Valeria will be jealous fo sho.
Author's Response:
Good guesses girl! You were so on point with a lot of these, I thought you were inside my head!
THANK YOU JULIE!!!
Date: May 08, 2014 07:33 pm Title: Episode 14b
This is a tough one. I got no idea who will be sent home. Everyone has their issues and right now the competition is really winding down. In the beginning when there was a problem there was time to resolve it. Now is not the time for crap as Michael is getting closer and closer to his final decision. Need the next update ASAP. Can't get enough if this story.
Author's Response:
I couldn't have set it better myself. We started out with 25 women and now there's only 7. Now is most definitely not the time for any fuck ups. He has a romantic connection with ALL of them so there's no room for any mess ups. The time is NOW.
THANK YOU HANNAH!!! :D
Date: May 07, 2014 05:33 pm Title: Episode 14b
I have no idea who is going home. I have been thinking about it all day and I can't figure it out. I don't think he would get rid of Michelle because I feel that he really does love her even though he is acting kind of cold and he rejected her. I don't think he will get rid of Valeria because I don't think he really sees how she really is. I don't think he will get rid of Ava because even though she terrorized his animals I think that he likes her too much. I don't think he will get rid of Sasha, but from the looks he was giving her I know he has been thinking. I don't think he will get rid of Rocky because clearly he likes her a lot even though she don't do shit. I don't think he will get rid of Mari even though I also think he didn't pick her for the date on purpose. They have unfinished business. Which leaves me with Christina. I do feel that they are getting closer but is it close enough. Please can you update to night I can't stop thinking about who is going home.
Author's Response:
Heyyyy gorgeous!!!
You are so on point with analysis girl! I was like dang, get out of my head!
THANK YOU HUN!!! :D :D :D
Date: May 07, 2014 09:59 am Title: Episode 14b
Eliminations!! Woot Woot who he going to send home?
Author's Response:
Just added the update for you! MUAH!!!