Date: Jul 05, 2014 08:05 am Title: Episode 15d Part 2 ELIMINATIONS
Ava was going in on Michael, I was like damn. I was so surprised that Michael said all that he said. At some points I was like TMI cause he was was taking about how she wanted to suck him. Michael was really running his mouth. I almost wanted to shut him up at times especially that part when he was reminiscing on and describing her body I was like do you realize you just took her virginity and you are fantasizing about another woman's body. Then Michelle and her emotional ass showed up. Then during the elimination she was reluctant to get her crown. I was like bitch you can't be that mad. Stop acting like you don't want the crown because you was just crying over Michael's ass a minute ago. And then UH OH! Sasha saw what Michael mouted and I was like I know this bitch is going to address thy later because she told Michael she loved him ad he did not say it back so to see him say it to someone else has got to hurt hella bad. I was surprised Lionel gave Mari his "blessing" cause if I were him I would have been like "fuck friends, Michael ain't gettin my ass!" But I am glad to see that he wants her to be happy. Valeria's elimination is honestly the greatest thing that has happened since the creation of the internet and that is pretty damn great. All I have to say now is good riddance. So happy Michael used the head on his shoulders and nt the one in his pants because if that were the case she would have still been in the house. Now all he needs to do is get rid of Sasha and all the bitches in the house will be gone. Well except it seems as though Ava is starting to act like a bitch, hopefully she doesn't begin to think she has it in the bag.
Author's Response:
From what I've heard about Michael (and from listening to the Glenda tapes), Michael seemed like he talked a lot. Likkkkke... he was the type of person who you would politely ask how they're day was going and he'd give you his whole life story. Likkkkke... that girlfriend/guy friend that get on the phone and give you all the details of their relationship (even ones you don't care about). Likkkkke... that type of person you invite to your home but leaves like two days later lol. Just some observations. Though Michael was an extremely private person (ESPECIALLY to the public), he could be real candid with things he didn't mind talking about. But tight lipped about things he didn't want you to know about (like how many girl's virginities he'd taken). I wanted to show that in this chapter, because sometimes, Michael can share too much. Sometimes I think he shares certain information just to gauge the other person's reaction.
Yes, Michelle, knew damn well she wanted that crown. Michelle's the type of person that puts a wall up when she feels vulnerable. She's not used to being the one who has to make first move so when she came to Michael (for the second time), told him that she wanted to spend time with him (for the second time), expressed that she was loving and missing him, and got rejected (for the second time), it threw her for a loop. They're in love with one another, but they're not exclusive, so her position in the house is more messy--for lack of better words. It's hard to see the guy you like flirting/interacting with other girls, so you can only imagine what it's like catching the man you love the morning after he's sexed up another woman when he won't give her the time of day. And what's worse is she can't "officially" be mad, because her and Michael are not in a committed relationship. So she becomes emotional because she's hurt but she knows she's not "supposed" to feel that way and it frustrates her. That's why she keeps saying "I'm fine" when she so clearly isn't--because she's hurt, but there's nothing she can do about it because she knows she's in a competition with other women for this man. I'm not defending her, but merely trying to give perception on her emotional reaction, because a lot of people seem confused by that.
Yep. Can't get nothing pass Sasha! Something tells me she's going to be keeping a VERY close eye on those two.
Lionel didn't tehnically give his blessing; on one hand, he does feel some type of way about his ex girl and his bestfriend being together, but on the other hand, he doesn't want to stand in the way of Marisela's happiness. If Michael and Marisela decide not to be with one another, he doesn't want to be the reason why.
LMAO@ "Valeria's elimination is honestly the greatest thing that has happened since the creation of the internet and that is pretty damn great." Yes, she's FINALLY gone! It's been a long time coming; Michael finally saw Val for what she was.
And yes, Ava might have some sneaky tendencies. I'm excited to see her competitive side come out!
THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH DOLL! I lovvvvvvvved your feedback! Gave me lots to think about! :D
Date: Jul 04, 2014 05:08 pm Title: Episode 15c PART TWO
I know Ava is not the one to be jealous but damn, what is she gonna do when she sees or hears about Michael being all up on other girls despite he has taken her V card. I know she ain't a jealous one but you gotta have some strong feelings about that. When my boyfriend who I gave my v card to moved on I was jealous as a motherfucker, and I ain't the jealous type. Everyone is human and you have got to feel some type of way about that.
Author's Response:
Even the most non-jealous (did I just make up a word?) person would be bothered when seeing the person they have feelings for cuddling with another person. Especially someone in Ava's position who just gave up her v card. I completely agree with you :).
THANK YOU FOR READING DOLL!!! :D
Date: Jul 04, 2014 03:45 pm Title: Episode 15c PART TWO
Does Michael even know Lionel is in his house? He just showed up out of no where. Lionel was obviously feeling some type of way so this should be an interesting conversation to say the least. At the party it was clear that Lionel was possessive of Mari, and if he thinks he can just come up in the house and convince her to leave or something he is mistaken. He has a family at home and that is where he needs to be his exe's endeavors should not matter to him. Move on.
Author's Response:
Michael does not know Lionel is there. Lionel briefly explains in the next update.
You're right. Lionel is protective over Mari. He was in love with her at one point and she is the mother of his unborn child; they went through A LOT together, so he wants her to be happy, and he feels it is his duty to help with that in any way he can.
THANKS FOR READING HUN!!! :D
Date: Jul 04, 2014 03:42 pm Title: Episode 15c PART TWO
Just read all of the latest updates and I must say I and extremely sick of Valeria's bull. To think that she could have won this whole thing if that Vegas trip did not happen sickens to me. If she stays, there is no time to change what their relationship already is. All they have is physical and nothing else, they use to have more but that was all based on lies. Michael is clearly blinded by the physical aspect of the relationship so I don't know what he is going to do. Hopefully he will make the right decision because it is coming down to the top 5 and there should only be girls in the house that actually want to be with him for him in the house left even though the others girls may have some bull in their lives.
Author's Response:
HEY LINDA!!!
Yes, before the Vegas trip, Valeria was definitely in the forefront. She began to lose herself and go through the most desperate [and idiotic] lengths. Before Vegas, Michael had developed some deeeeep feelings for Valeria which is why kept giving her the first crown at eliminations. Michael keeps thinking back to the "happy" times, thinking they can eventually go back. After all, nobody's perfect, right? We all have flaws. But what Michael is slowly realizing is that Valeria's flaws overpowers the character traits that attracted him to her and that her true colors are revealing themselves.
THANK YOU FOR READING LINDA!!!
Date: Jul 03, 2014 07:42 pm Title: Episode 15c PART TWO
Hey girl are u updating tonight. I gotta see what Lionel has to say.
Author's Response:
Not tonight, babe. Tomorrow!
Date: Jul 02, 2014 06:10 pm Title: Episode 15c PART TWO
Michael really knows how to work a virgin. I wonder how many times he has done that in his life. So already on the list of girls he deflowered are Brooke Shields, Ava... and there are probably much more because he was too good at how he treated Ava. Not too hard and not too soft, he was just right and that takes some experience. I know he has popped a few cherries. He really is delicious, almost too delicious. And every time you have these sex scenes you always leave me with my perverted thoughts and then I have to take a cold shower. Damn. Since when did Michael have unprotected sex and just pull out. I never thought of him to be one to just pull out and cum, cause in his life he got so many bitches acting like Billie Jean. I guess that means he really trust her if he is willing to go in without protection or he likes to feel it every once in a while or something. Anytime he has sex with another there was always a condom. He would be jumping out of a jacuzzi and stretching his arm far into the nightstand, I mean he really put in work to get a condoms. What happen this time, I guess he rain out or something. He must have wasted the last one on Christina when she had her ass up about to give it up but then messed it up. But who am I to complain about whether he uses a condom or not. As long as he don't shoot nothing up there we good. But there is something I do have to complain about tho. Why the hell are you wasting your "liquid pleasure" on the damn sheets. Boy you better shower her with your gifts. Let me stop taking cause my horny ass is getting all work up. Keep it up girl loving this story as well as the other one you just started.
Author's Response:
Heyyy Diamond!!!
Michael's a master in the bedroom. He's a perfectionist in everything he does, so I figured that'd include his bedroom skills. When it comes to the people in his life, I believe he's a pleaser, and so he wanted Ava to have a good "first time experience." For most girls, losing their virginity is filled with pain and anxiousness; Michael knows that and wanted to make the experience as pleasurable as he could ;).
I was wondering if yall were gonna catch that! Yep, Michael went raw dog with Ava. We find out why in the next episode. Lol@ "why are you wasting your 'liquid pleasure' on the damn sheets."
As usual, your review had me rollin. THANK YOU DIAMOND!!! :D
Date: Jul 02, 2014 05:15 pm Title: Episode 15c PART TWO
Congratulations Ava you have finally got some dick, and a good one at that. ;) Good for you girl. But now that that was accomplished, I really want to know what is gonna go down between Lionel and Mari. He is going to be talking to Mari but when is he gonna talk to Michael and what is he gonna say. And Valeria has no choice but to pack her bags. There is no way out of this. They only way she can be save herself is if something really drastic happens sending one of the other girls home. But something happening that is more drastic than Valeria's situation is highly unlikely. Sasha messed up but I don't think that was enough to get her kicked out. And Rocky had that really bad interrogation but that still is not enough to eliminate her before Valeria. Mari has her situation with Lionel but it is not her time to go since she herself hasn't actually done something wrong intentionally and there is a chance Michael and her can work it out. So as of now the best bet to go home is Val.
Author's Response:
Lionel showing up at Neverland was a complete surprise for Marisela, but she is interested in what he has to say because his warning about Michael has been haunting her. When Lionel and Mari spoke at the party, Lionel had just found out that the woman he was in love with, the mother of his unborn child was dating his bestfriend. When we saw him talking to Michael and Marisela, he was in a state of shock and was obviously feeling some kind of way about the two of them together. Now that he's had time to process the information, he's coming to Mari with a clear head, so the conversation should be interesting.
THANK YOU DOLL!!! :D
Date: Jul 02, 2014 05:12 pm Title: Episode 15c PART TWO
That whole scene made my heart flutter. She was all nervous and Michael was slow, patient, and understanding. But my question is how can he get real intimate with other girls when he just took her virginity which is so sacred. If he has other girls in and out of his bedroom which is what he has had happening lately that will look really bad and make her feel that her time really was not the special since he is clearly banging other chicks around the same time he took her virginity. I don't know about what anyone else thinks but this looks like some mess is on the way.
Author's Response:
Aw, I'm glad it made your heart flutter, girl. I was worried about it coming off as too sappy *shudders*. Giving/taking virginity is very sacred indeed, I completely agree. As far as there being "mess" on the way regarding Ava losing her virginity, you would be very right. Ava and Michael having sex/making love (you choose) is a pivotal point.
THANK YOU JANELLE!!! :D
Date: Jul 02, 2014 05:07 pm Title: Episode 15c PART TWO
Why Michael, why!! Why would you do that. Even though she said yes and both of you were in the heat of the moment he still should not have gone through with it. They are going to regret it because although they may have a good relationship they still were not in the position to take that step.
Author's Response:
Yes, knowing how Michael is, I was surprised Michael didn't put up more of an effort to put things on pause to make sure that was really what Ava wanted to do. In the next episode, we get to explore where Michael's head was at.
THANK YOU!!! :D
Date: Jul 02, 2014 03:03 pm Title: Episode 15c PART TWO
When Michael was doing his thang, I was dancing and I was like "GET IT GET IT GET IT." Michael seriously knows how to treat a woman.
I seriously was dancing just like this.
Author's Response:
Lmao. You're review had me cracking up!
Yesss, Michael knows how to make a woman feel like she's a queen!
THANK YOU FOR MAKING ME LAUGH!!! :D
Date: Jul 02, 2014 02:43 pm Title: Episode 15c PART TWO
I really want to know what Lionel is going to say because it is clear that he did love her and still has some feelings. But he needs to realize that it isn't about him. It is about Mari's and Michael's feelings for each other. But then again I don't think that Lionel gives a damn about other people's feelings because one he cheated in his wife and two he tried to stir some shit up at the party when he told Mari that Michael is trouble. Lionel already let his feelings know so I think that this conversation is not going to go very well. Update ASAP, I'm loving this too much.
Author's Response:
I agree, Lionel did love Marisela and in this next update, we delve inside of Lionel and Marisela's relationship and get to see how everything unfolded.
THANK YOU FOR READING!!! :D
Date: Jul 02, 2014 02:33 pm Title: Episode 15c PART TWO
Lionel is not going to let Mari be with Michael. He knows exactly how Michael is in relationships and he doesn't want that for a woman he still had feelings for. He clearly has seen Michael's cold side and like Lionel said before if you fall out of Michael's idea of a perfect woman he will ice you out. Mari has already done that from when she got in that fight and it is happening now. He doesn't want that for Mari. If he took the time after the party to think it through and realized he is going to let Michael and Mari then he would not have come back, but since he is back I think it is clear he wants her again. He gonna try to get her back and I think that is why it has taken him so long to say something because that is what he was thinking about. This is just my theory cause I have been just siting here thinking about what Lionel is going to say. I have also been thinking about what Val is going to say and I just got no damn idea, she should probably just leave in the night or something, it is over she fucked up all her chances.
Author's Response:
Ever since Lionel warned her how Michael can be at the party, she's kept his words in the back of her head and now she's nervous because she doesn't know if her and Michael will ever be able to return to what they were before he found out that she had an affair with his married best friend.
And Val--smh. That's all I have to say about her.
THANK YOU GORGEOUS!!! :D
Date: Jul 02, 2014 09:34 am Title: Episode 15c PART TWO
Michael is getting it in, in all kinds of places first Valeria, then Dulce, and now Ava. But if you look at it the first two hookups, they were mistakes and I think this one might be one mistake as well. He took her virginity and he is not even sure if she is going to be the one. There are six people left and there is so much uncertainty so this really was not a smart decision. If it was meant to be then it will be, don't just give up your virginity thinking everything will turn out in your favor.
Author's Response:
Michael taking Ava's virginity is definitely a big deal. This is something this girl has been saving for years; she didn't even let Damon, her boyfriend of 4 years, have that honor so her giving Michael this gift kind of signifies the way she's feeling about Michael. Are they in love with each other? I'm not sure... but their feelings definitely run deep. I just hope that isn't using her virginity to gain an edge in the house. I don't expect that type of thing from a sweetie pie like Ava, but as we've seen before, the competition has a tendency to change these girls and make them use despearate measures. Stay tuned :).
THANK YOU GIGI SOOO MUCH!!! :D
Date: Jul 02, 2014 05:41 am Title: Episode 15c PART TWO
Michael gave Ava the works and he wasn't even giving his all cause he did not want to hurt her. Damn he is good. But one thing I noticed is that he didn't reach and grab a condom like he usually does. I was like hold up there, you can't just go in there raw. But then he pulled out and I was like thank goodness but I must say he is really going down a slippery slope with the no condom usage and pulling out. Know you boundaries Michael she ain't your girl. Wrap it up! I almost died when Mari saw Lionel. I was like Oh shit and then I literally had to like calm myself down. I wonder what he is going to say because last time for the short amount of time they had to talk at the party Lionel was trying to tell her that Michael wasn't any good and that she needed to be careful. And knowing that he still has feelings for her he is not gonna let his friend just take her away so I think he is gonna put it all the negative things about Michael out there and try to mess things up and fuck up Mari's viewpoint of Michael as the one for her. As for Valeria, your shit ain't gonna work. Sorry not sorry.
Author's Response:
Hey doll!
I was wondering if you guys were gonna catch that they didn't use a condom! I should've known better :D. No, Mike went raw dog, which is very unlike him.
Lionel showing up is sooo random but very much needed at this point. Michael and Mari's relationship is hanging on by a very thin thread, so what he says at this point can definitely have an impact on Mari's position in the house.
Lol@ "sorry not sorry".
THANK YOU!!! :D
Date: Jul 01, 2014 07:59 pm Title: Episode 15c PART TWO
Woah wait a minute...did Michael really just take her v card. I can't believe it. As hot as I thought that was I think they are going to regret it. Michael still has other girls in the house he is feeling and this just wasn't the right time. She just gave her virginity up after all these years for a man that youre not even sure you are going to end up being with. She said she wanted to save it for marriage but damn you gave it to Michael and he hasn't even utter the words "I love you" to her. To make it worse he has already told someone else that. Ugh they are going to regret this I know it because things are going to get really awkward if Michael sexes up some other girl still knowing that he took Ava virginity not too long ago. Oh shit it is about to go the fuck down with Lionel and Mari. And what case does Val have because I have really been thinking hard for the answer. You have got to update soon, you got me too anxious right now to wait.
Author's Response:
Yes girl, Ava gave up the goods. Even though their situation isn't ideal as Michael said, she felt it was the right time. However, I think everyone telling her that she needs to "step up her game" MIGHT have had something to do with it. I'm still not sure about that though so we'll see where they go from her.
Lionel showing up is definitely a game changer.
THANK YOU FOR READING MIMI!!! :D