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Reviewer: prettygirlbounce Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2014 03:47 pm Title: Episode 16 part a

Gosh I missed it, sorry for not leaving a message on the one year anniversary but I’m here now and I just want to say congratulations, you deserve every amount of success. Unlike many authors on this site you really show a great amount of passion to write and a great amount of dedication and loyalty to your readers. And for that I do try to show the same amount of dedication and loyalty in return. God clearly has given you the gift of writing and don’t ever let that go to waste. HAPPY 1 YEAR ANNIVERSARY!!!! :D




Author's Response:

Girl you didn't miss anything! I'm celebrating our one year anniversary the entire week! lol. Thank you soooo much for your words, I teared up reading your review! As long as you guys love my ratchet little story, I'll continue updating! Thank you! :D 

Reviewer: Mexicanaspice Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2014 06:57 pm Title: Episode 16 part a

I want to give you virtual hug right now. I am so proud of you and it is really an inspiration. You deal with your sickness but you never let go of this story and with determination you continue to work hard on this story. I honestly can't believe it has been a year. What the hell? I felt like this was just started. I can remember the exact moment I first read the story. I didn't know what to expect, and I don't know how but you kept me at that state of mind this entire time. I am even anxious about this next update. 



Author's Response:

I'm giving you a virtual hug back! Time goes by so fast, girl. A year already? What?! So glad you're still here mamacita; your reviews give me life! Thank you :D 

Reviewer: CherylMAXX Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2014 06:54 pm Title: Episode 16 part a

It hasn't really felt like a year since this story started. Damn time flies by so fast. But to me the fact that we are still here a year later shows your dedication to this story. There are not that many stories that I can say I have continuously read through a whole year and that is because they are not dedicated. You really are the best author there is and I am not just saying that. I fucking mean it. 



Author's Response:

Hey my Cheryl! 

Time goes bys sooo fast! I feel like I just began this yesterday! I am so glad that you've stuck with me throughout the year. As long as you dolls are here, I will finish this story! 

Thank you, honey! Your words mean so much to me! :D

Reviewer: Linda Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2014 03:14 pm Title: Episode 16 part a

Congrats on the one year anniversary of this story. When I initially started this story I enjoyed and loved it, but I will be honest I had little faith it would make it this far. I have been a reader on this site for a while and time after time I have seen stories like this start out so strong but end up weak or never reach completeness. But after sticking with this story for a whole year my faith in this story and my faith in you as a writer and author have changed. Time and time again you always come back stronger and stronger with each update and I have never seen a weak point in this story. There has never been an update where I wasn't interest. I have always been interested and fascinated every update. I commend you for being so dedicated to this story and to us. It has been a enjoyable year reading this story and even though we are nearing the end of the competition I know you will continue to excel in any other thing you put your mind to. 



Author's Response:

HEY BEAUTY QUEEN LINDA!!!

I absolutely HATE it when I get into a story and it gets discontinued. I hate that! And I didn't want to do that to you guys, so that's why I made a promise to you and myself to finish this story no matter what or how many hiatuses I had to go on. Now we're here in the top 5 and we're almost done, and *tears up* the show will be coming to an end soon, but I really don't want to say goodbye yet. Coming on to the website is my highlight of the day. I check this thing more then I check instagram lol. Thank you for sticking with me throughout this entire year and I promise not to fail you or any of the other other dolls. :D

Reviewer: diamondtho Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2014 02:42 pm Title: An update is coming

happy one year anniversary. b25;

Reviewer: Lillian Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2014 10:26 am Title: Episode 16 part a

"Girl this is great, I am already addicted from just reading two chapters. I see this story is going to be hot!!!!!"

Gosh this was my first review of this story and I already knew this was going to be an amazing story just from two chapters. But back then I didn't even really comprehend all the drama that was going to go down and unfold and now today I can say that I am even more addicted then I was back then. I love this story and I love you as an author even more. You always respond to our reviews and you always work to give us the best story possible. Thank you so much. Happy one year anniversary. 



Author's Response:

Wowwww that was my Lillian's FIRST review! Look at how far we've came, girl! I remember when I was updating every single day back in those days; definitely need to get back to that level. I am so glad you're "addicted" because I LOVE having you as a reader and I have no problem feeding that addiction! You've been here from the very beginning and have continuously come back to show your love and support and that means more to me then you'll ever know. Seriously!

Thank YOU for consistently being here, Lillian! :D 

Reviewer: mjlover1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2014 10:06 am Title: Episode 16 part a

1 year anniversary...I can't believe it. I feel like it was just yesterday when I started this story. On this day last year you had zero reads, zero reviews, and zero favorites. And now a year later you have more than 13 thousand reads, over 700 reviews, and you are one of the top 10 most favorited authors on this site just from one story (all the others have various stories that allowed them to make the list). These accomplishments say a lot and most of all they say that your are a brilliant author with a true talent and it is something you should cherish and continue to do forever. This is your gift ad I TRUELY mean that, don't ever let this gift go.



Author's Response:

Yesss, girl, we've made it one year!!! We here!!! Thank youuu so much; you made me feel so good reading those stats. And I did not know that all the author top 10 favorited authors were from more then one story. That's good to know! I wouldn't have gotten this far if it wasn't for you dolls. Seriously. There's been times where I wasn't in the mood to write and then I came here and you gave me the fire I needed. I'll come online to read your reviews and I'll get turnt up lol. 

Thank you again lover! I will never let this gift go! :D

Reviewer: NotUrAvgLadi Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2014 09:50 pm Title: Episode 16 part a

Haha I just realized you had Iggy in your story before she went mainstream



Author's Response:

Yay, I was wondering when someone would notice! I lovvve Iggy Azalea, I've been listening to her for years and I'm so glad she's finally finding success.  

THANKS FOR READING AND COMMENTING!!! :D

Reviewer: IamthePYT Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2014 08:19 am Title: Episode 16 part a

So glad Michael and Mari are back on cause I thought that the situation was going to ruin them. I thought Lionel was gonna come back and make things worse but no he did the opposite. 

When Michael started the water balloon fight I was like finally. They were at Neverland all this time and no one got wet...well some people did (Ava). It has been so long since we have seen this side of Michael in the competition. He has been so focused dealing with people's bullshit  and I forgot Michael had a fun side. 

Damn, Sasha is hating so hard in this episode and I was like bitch calm down don't forget what happened last time you let your jealousy get the best of you. All I know I that with the two Michelle haters in the house (Sasha and Ava) there is gonna be some serious shit talking on the way home with all the girls when Michelle ain't there. 



Author's Response:

Yes, Lionel gave us all a surprise. He knows that Marisela deserves happiness and though he's not jumping over the moon that she's dating his best friend, he'd rather her be happy and with his bestie than sad and alone.

Yes, girl, all this time at Neverland and no water balloon fight. Can you believe it? Michael desrves some drama-free fun right now and I'm glade he finally got it.

Sasha is a verrry observant person. Sometimes she watches a little too hard and it lands her into trouble (like in the last episode when she thought Beatriz was flirting with Michael). Yes, Sasha and Ava both feel threatened by Michelle, and are not happy that Michael chose to ride home with her. 

THANK YOU PYT!!! :D

Reviewer: diamondtho Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2014 07:35 pm Title: Episode 16 part a

Hi, my name is Diamond & I just joined this site as a member but I've been reading your story for months and I am honestly blown away. It's so realistic & I always look foward to seeing you update. this is the best story I've read on here & I love how you show your appreciation! I have to say Michelle and Rocky are my favorite. I like Sasha (a little) but I wish her jealous ways could stop. I  can't wait for them [ Michael & Michelle ] to talk & for Laurent to come back! I am SO glad Valeria is gone. she was not to be trusted. you are not supposed to put your man's business out there and now she's FINALLY got the boot for it. God bless doll.



Author's Response:

Oh wow I have another Diamond! Lol I have another reader named Diamond too! WELCOME HONEY!!! I love new readers and I want to thank you for taking the time out to read my [sometimes] ratchet little story. I LOVE hearing who your favorite girls are in the house! It gives me lots of direction. In the beginning, when I had so many characters, I never knew who's POV to write from (I would literally have to toss a coin) so hearing your favorites lets me know who I need to feature more. 

 

THANK YOU DIAMOND!!!

 

 

Reviewer: Diamond23 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2014 07:46 pm Title: Episode 16 part a

I don't know if anyone else realized this but the 19th is gonna be the 1 year anniversary of the story....WOW...look how far this story has come. I remember last summer I came to this website as a brand new reader not knowing what I would find. I remember reading some things and thinking to myself that some stories were dumb ass shit and basic as hell. And I remember thinking I was wasting my precious time. But then I came across this story and I remember thinking it was something different. And then as I kept reading this story I became addicted and here I am almost a year later still feeling that same feeling when I first began to read this story. You amaze me. 

This update was too good. It is nice to see Michael's playful side again after such a long period of seeing Michael constantly stressed with the girls bull. But what the fuck, are Ava and Sasha getting along a little bit..what the fuck. Update ASAP. 



Author's Response:

MY DIAMOND!!!!

Your review made me tear up, girl. Literally, the first time I read it, I had to get a tissue. Well... a couple of tissues hehe. I want to thank you so much for sticking with me throughout everything. This has been a CRAZY year and you've been here for every step, encouraging, motivating, and making me LAUGH MY ASS off every step of the way! I love you Diamond, I truly do. 

Yes, I missed seeing Michael's playful side. It's been dorment due to the girls and their damn drama but now it's back in full effect. Yes, Ava and Sasha actually shared a joke at Michelle's expense. You know what they say... "the enemy of my enemy is my friend."

THANK YOU DIAMOND!!! :D

Reviewer: Mexicanaspice Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2014 07:32 pm Title: Episode 16 part a

YESSSSSS!!!! My boy Laurent is coming back. I was wondering when he was coming back. These girls better watch out cause Laurent as always is gonna keep it real, and now more than ever since they are his top 5. This update was like a breath of fresh air. No more Valeria, Mari and Michael's drama has simmered down, and a old classic Neverland water balloon fight. Couldn't have gotten better. I can't wait for the next update. Also you truely deserve every review you get, 800 here we come!!!



Author's Response:

YASSSSS, girl, I love Laurent and I'm so glad you do too! With all the drama in the last episode, Laurent needs to come back and show his ass. 

Yes, Mj couldn't let the girls leave without getting them wet ;) in a classic water balloon fight. 

Haha, that "800 here we come" just gave me SO much LIFE!!!

THANK YOU SPICY!!! :D

Reviewer: mjlover1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2014 06:47 pm Title: Episode 16 part a

It is good to see that Mari and Michael are finally moving on and getting over that whole Lionel situation cause the longer they were holding on to it the worse it was getting. And it is so refreshing seeing everyone getting along...for the most part, and having fun. All there has been in the house was drama and it is about time everybody let loose . This seriously was like the perfect way to move on after Valeria's elimination. She seriously was a drag on the whole atmosphere in the house. Well damn, I actually dont blame Sasha for being mad when Michael asked Michelle to go with him. I would have been pissed off too, but I know that it is her best interest to back the fuck out cause her ass was almost eliminated for her jealous behavior. 



Author's Response:

Girl, yes, Michael and the girls needed a break from the drama. Even writing the scenes became a bit draining, just because it was beginning to feel like a soap opera. Now I love my Young and the Restless just like anyone else, but that's not what I envisioned for this story, chile. People like to call Flavor of Love, I Love New York and shows like it "ratchet television" (and it is) but it was also a reprieve from life and that's what I want this story to be--somewhere you can come to and laugh and forget your worries.

Valeria has taken her negative aura with her, and Michael and his girls can let lose and have fun without her insecurities getting in the way.

THANK YOU BABE!!! :D 

Reviewer: hannah4mj Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2014 08:33 pm Title: Episode 15d Part 2 ELIMINATIONS

Are you updating anything 2night? 

Reviewer: hannah4mj Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2014 08:32 pm Title: Episode 15d Part 2 ELIMINATIONS

Are you updating anything 2night? 

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