Date: Jul 22, 2014 10:55 pm Title: Episode 16 part c
Right when I thought all the drama was slowly fading this happens. I can't believe it, they were caught red handed and now Rocky knows for sure that Ava gave him her virginity which is a big slap in her face and everybody else's face in the competition. Seriously how can you compete against someone who has given that up. I don't know what Rocky is going to do with the information, but I just pray to god she don't blab it out like Valeria.
Author's Response:
Exactly. Giving someone your virginity is a big deal, especially for Ava's who's basically the good girl in the house. Rocky and Michelle knows this is a big deal and are feelng the exact way you described. Like, "how do I compete against that?"
THANK YOU BAD!!! :D
Date: Jul 22, 2014 05:49 pm Title: Episode 16 part b
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT. Michelle what the hell are you doing. Them cookies look like the traveled from hell and back. When I read the part when her cookies were served, I seriously jumped back from my computer and out of my chair, I could not believe it, what the fuck.
Author's Response:
OOH SHIT is right, hunti! Michelle needs to stay far far far far FAR away from the kitchen.
Sorry I'm just now responding. I missed this review somehow. Love you, MiMi!!! :D
Date: Jul 22, 2014 05:47 pm Title: Episode 16 part b
*new reader*
Wow this story is great, I have just read this whole thing in like one day non stop and I can't get enough this it is so fucking amazing. I read that it was your one year anniversary so congratulations about that. What impressed me so much was your ability to develop each character , because with so many people in one story it is hard to portray and define everyone's character but you did that very well. I do write myself, not mjfiction but I do write and I am vey impressed with your ability to do that so well. Thanks for this fantastic story.
Author's Response:
I love new readers! WELCOME, BEAUTY QUEEN!!!
Sorry I'm just now responding. I missed your review along with a few others. I have no clue how that happened!
Thank you so much for giving my ratchet little story a chance and leaving me with your thoughts. I love hearing what you guys think, who your favorite girls are and what you like/don't like in the story. It's impacted this story SO MUCH!
Thank you Passion!!! :D :D
Date: Jul 22, 2014 05:38 pm Title: Episode 16 part b
Everything is back to normal. First Mari and Michael dealt with their issues and now Michelle has dealt with her issues with Michael. So nice to have the drama simmer down. When reading this update I was really happy with the way things were looking in the house until Michelle made them cookies. I was sick to my stomach thinking about them. Michelle don’t ever cook again.
Author's Response:
Yes, this episode is more of a resolution episode. Valeria has left and took a lot of the drama with her! This episode, you'll see a lot of making up between Michael and the girls.
And yes, chile, Michelle needs to stay as far away from the kitchen as possible.
Sorry so late, love. This was one of the reviews I missed :-/. I don't know why I'm just now seeing it. Know that I appreciate you, baby doll! Muah!!! :D
Date: Jul 22, 2014 05:37 pm Title: Episode 16 part b
Hopefully Rocky wins cause if she doesn’t she is most definitely either going home or getting the last crown because the girl has been faded. Plus she needs to clear up that whole thing with her ex cause something aint right about seeing an ex 2 weeks before she came into the house.
Author's Response:
Ohh I missed this review. I'm sorr, love. I don't know how I missed this. Thank you for leaving your feedback, Janelle! It means the world to me!
Date: Jul 22, 2014 05:36 pm Title: Episode 16 part b
Michelle what the fuck? Are you trying to kill Michael? If you really loved Michael you would not have served him that shit, I am starting to question if she really loves him…JK, but still if I were her before my dish were presented I just would have been straight up I been like “Michael I love and I truly care for your health, so don’t lift the top of the dish.” And then when Michael starting biting into that shit I was cringing and holding my stomach. Well, I know Michelle damn sure aint winning.
Author's Response:
Michelle... Michelle... Michelle... lawd, Idk what we're gonna do with her. Poor Michael was trying to find the good in it somehow lol... and Laurent wasn't trying to taste it at all. Blunt but honest.
Thank you TWYMMF! :D
Date: Jul 22, 2014 05:33 pm Title: Episode 16 part b
I need for Michelle to never cook anything ever again. I like her but she fucked up. Some please toss them shits out. Hell she might as well just served some shit on a plate, her cookies are not much better.
Author's Response:
Heyyy Julie!
Yes, Ms. Michelle cannot cook AT ALL. I don't know why she thought cookies were the easy choice. Lol at her cookies not being better then shit. Ouch lmao.
Thank you, Julie :D
Date: Jul 22, 2014 05:32 pm Title: Episode 16 part b
When those vile disgusting pieces of garbage Michelle calls cookies were revealed, I was talking like Sasha I was like “GUARDS…GUARDS, TAKE IT AWAY.” I thought something was gonna jump out and bite Michael, I mean god damn when I was reading this feared for my own life and I wasn’t even there. She should have sat out of this one because she had no chance from the start.
Author's Response:
Michelle needs to take several seats in this episode. LMAO@ the Sasha reference!!! I busted out laughing when reading that.
Thank you Gigi! :D
Date: Jul 22, 2014 04:48 pm Title: Episode 16 part b
lawd Ms Michelle is a mess. I do think that the final two are Rocky and Ava. Rocky has this in the bag especially after Laurent's reaction to Michael's. 😂 love love love the update and I can't wait for another.
Author's Response:
Helloooo Diamond! :)
Lmao... Messy Michelle. Rocky is Laurent's favorite girl in the house and her creme brulee was off the chains so there is a good chance she might win. Michael loves him some fried chicken though.
So glad you loved the update! I'll have another one for you soon!
Thank you! :D
Date: Jul 22, 2014 06:53 am Title: Episode 16 part b
O.M.G. When Michael announced the challenge I knew it was a disaster waiting to happen. Yikes, Michelle. That was just too horrible. It seems to me like the top 2 are gonna be Ava and Rocky. And hopefully Rocky gets her time because let's all be honest, the bicth be acting like a ghost creeping in the background. Step your shit up.
Author's Response:
I was suprised Michael even tried the cookies. If I was him, I would've automatically disqualified, lol.
Yes, Rocky's starting to realize that she's not going to get by on her looks alone. There's other pretty girls in the house, not just her, and she knows this so I have a feeling Rocky's about to step her game up in a whole new way ;).
Thank you, Cheryl!
Date: Jul 21, 2014 10:38 pm Title: Episode 16 part b
God damn...I just fucked my computer all up and I mean ALL UP. I was sitting there chill as a motherfucker sipping on my capri sun juice pouch (yeah I'm grown and I still drink dat don't judge) and then Michelle had to make them nasty ass cookies. And then when her dish was presented..... GURLLLLL, you shoulda seen me. I done had juice coming out my nose and I spit a bunch right on my computer. I can't even acturately explain to you my reaction because time stopped and at one point I was gagging for air. Michelle I got nothing else to say to you, but don't ever cook any other fucking thing again in you life.
Author's Response:
Girrrrrl I sip on those capri suns too! But I drink a lot, so I tend to go through two at a time, lol!
Chile, she had the nerve to put those crumbles on a silver platter to be served to Michael.
Your review had me cracking up, girl! Thank you for the laughs! :D
Date: Jul 21, 2014 10:24 pm Title: Episode 16 part b
What the fuck, Michelle? Are you trying to kill Michael. That shit was too funny. I knew she was going to be really bad, but when her dish was presented and it was just a bunch of crumbs. I died laughing. Like you don't even know. I'm still laughing now, this episode could not get any better.
Author's Response:
Michelle can't cook to save her life. Poor Michael was trying to find the good in it somewhere lol. I'm glad you are loving this episode! I was iffy about it at first but seeing your reactions lets me know I went in the right direction. Yay! Lol. Thanks, girl! :D
Date: Jul 21, 2014 10:18 pm Title: Episode 16 part b
Michelle's Cookies.....
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Girrrrl, Michelle was wrong for trying to serve those cookies!
Date: Jul 21, 2014 04:03 pm Title: Episode 16 part a
Congrats, you have been doing this for 1 year and I must say it was a wonderful year at that. Thank you so much for this story. It always brings a smile and so much joy every time I read it and I cannot imagine what the hell I would be doing on this website if it wasn’t for this story, so thank you. Sasha needs another Ben/Sasha beat down I swear. This bitch is irking me to no end with her constant bitching. Shut the fuck up for once, Michael doesn’t love you. Stop acting like you’re the shit because you are far from it I really just want somebody to get in her face and let her know that because she is way too confident and it is annoying the hell out of everybody. Sit down bitch like you did at that table when Michael left and went off with Ava on the date you had. But anyway happy one year anniversary. Oh and by the way no worries about deleting my review it's all good, just one of the many reviews I did and will continuously do for this story, no prob.
Author's Response:
HEY CHANEL!!!
I'm glad this story has been able to put a smile on your face, because y'alls reviews have put a smile on mine! Reading your reviews are the highlight of my day and I find myself coming on here more than I do instagram hehe.
Sasha... chile, her head is so far up her own ass, she doesn't even realize that she's not #1 like she thinks she is. She reminds me of the Mean Girls from the movie who thought they were so beautiful and loved by all when in fact their personalities turned other people off and everyone hated them. She needs a "come to Jesus" moment where she sits and thinks about all the stuff she's done if she wants to be with a man like Michael.
And I'm so upset with myself for deleting that review! I noticed a spelling error and went in to change it and ended up deleting. At first, a box kept popping up asking me "are you sure you want to delete this?" but my sleepy ass thought it said "are you sure you want to EDIT this?" (I didn't read the whole thing) so I clicked yes and next thing I knew the review disappeared. That's when I was like, "Ok. That's it. I'm taking my clumsy ass to bed cuz clearly I'm just gonna fuck some shit up." lmao
Thank you Chanel :D <3
Date: Jul 21, 2014 03:55 pm Title: Episode 16 part a
Sasha is hating on everybody, girl worry about your damn self don’t nobody got time for insecure bitches. Did everything Michael said at the last elimination go in one ear and out the other? He told you he doesn’t want a manipulative jealous bitch. I can’t wait for Laurent to get up in this bitch because he need to put her in her place like last time. Thank God Michael and Mari reconciled because I was starting to doubt they would be able to get passed it. And from what it looks like, it seems like Michelle and Michael are going to be getting back on since he want her to “ride” with him. It honestly feels like a huge weight has been lifted after Valeria has been sent home. But I know not to get used to this feeling because shit always goes down in this house.
Author's Response:
Sasha... Sasha *shaking my head*. She really needs to curve that jealous streak of hers or she'll be out the house before she knows it. Michael doesn't need any unnecessary drama in his life; a lot of girls are going to be throwing themselves at Michael right in front of her face (if she wins) and Michael's not going to want a woman who goes off every single time. It's too much.
Yes, Michael and Mari finally had a much needed talk. Michelle and Michael talk in the next update. Now that Valeria's gone, she's taken her negative aura with her and things can get back to "normal." It was starting to become like a soap opera with all that drama *shudders*.
Yes shit always goes down. Though we're in the top 5 and nearing the end, there's still PLENTY of DRAMA to be unleashed!!!
Thank you, hunty! :D