Date: Sep 03, 2014 07:36 pm Title: Episode 17 part c
Michelle's grandmother is extactly like my mother. And that is no exaggeration at all. You had me laughing when Michelle's mom called Michael's painting demonic. Damn her mom don't play, calling Michael out when she first met him. Byseeing Michelle's mom I see where Michelle gets her hard to please attitude from.
OMFG, Michael you dawg. He has messed around with sisters. Damn does Michael get around. That is the ulimate thing not to do in the book of dating, don't fuck with the sisters...literally. I don't know what that little 4th of July spark shit thing is going on in her eye for but I hope she won't be pulling no shit because all be damned if she does.
Author's Response:
If Michelle's grandmother is exactly like your mother, then our mothers are exactly alike :). I based Michelle's grandmother off of my mother and grandmother. That's definitely where Michelle got her snooty attitude from.
You see why Michael didn't wanna tell Ava how many girls he'd been with? lmao Michael's been around. I can't say for sure how MJ's romantic/sex life was but I've heard some stories. Whether they were true, I'm not sure, but that's the Michael portrayed in this story. When you hear the same story from unrelated sources, you start to consider the plausibility of it. The tables have turned around on Michael. He's now in Marisela's position! His situations worse, however, because they're sisters.
Thank you, love!!! :D
Date: Sep 03, 2014 07:12 pm Title: Episode 17 part c
OK, so before I said Michael was in some deeeeeeeeeeeeeep shit. After this update now I have to say Michael is in some...
deeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeePER
shit.
Good Luck Michael, you are gonna need it for damn sure.
Author's Response:
LMAO your review had me cracking up. He needs all the luck he can get. Keep him in your prayers, girl, cuz he needs it.
Thank you for reviewing!!! :D
Date: Sep 02, 2014 08:21 pm Title: Episode 17 part b
Oh shit the families are here, this should be interesting cause instead of the girls, I think Michael is going to be put on blast for once by some of the family members, this can't be good. I know what it is like to have an over protective family member and they don't play. I think that some parents might take it the wrong way the fact that Michael is looking for love on a dating show and their daughters have to fight for his affection on national television. Some might question the reality of this whole competition, so I don't know what some of the over protective parents are going to think.
Author's Response:
The families are herrrrrrre! You hit it right on the nail! Some of these girls have overprotective family members who don't care about Michael's riches and fame. They're concerned about their grandaughter/daughter/sister getting their heart broken and/or being taken advantage of, especially on a television show. Thank you for your review, love!!! :D
Date: Sep 02, 2014 08:18 pm Title: Episode 17 part b
I ain't gonna break it all the way down cause I want to wait a bit, but I have a few things to say. First Rocky is bull shitting to the max right now. We all know her and her ex got something going on and Michael knows it too. But what she did was made the attention not on her and is acting like nothing happened between her an her ex. She told about that whole Ava thing not just to hopefully get some else sent home but to also cover up her own ass and that is fucked up. She says she is trying to step it up but how can you do that if you got baggage holding you down. Instead of scheming you need to talk about it so you can let that baggage go in order to step up. Making out and giving massages ain't gonna do shit. Now as for Ava, she needs to shut up. She told Michelle that her and Michael made "music" and shit, although Michelle isn't one to be messy, you never know what could happen. In Michael's world you can't say shit to nobody no matter who they are. And if this gets around in any way shit gonna hit the fan. So it was best for her to shut up even though it was Michelle she was talking to. And as for Michelle, she clearly got some issues going on in her head, I know it might be hard to know Michael took Ava's virginity which might mean he might love her, but she needs to calm down cause she is making herself sick. Now to Sasha, Michael said that she stresses him out. I absolutely understand cause she stresses me out. She is always negative about everything and she just brings everything down, she kills the mood in every occasion. She has got to go. I wish Mari would have slapped her.
Author's Response:
NATALIE!!!!!!!!!!!
I luh it when you break it down, Mami.
Rocky and Ava were the wallflowers in the house and now they've both stepped it up. They stepped it up so much that Michael couldn't send anyone home last time. Rocky and Michael have chemistry, but it falls short when you compare it to his relationship with the other girls and she knows that so she's doing everything in her power to stay in the house without digging herself into a hole.
Michelle knows Michael and Ava had sex and Ava knows it, so she's taken it upon herself to enlighten Michelle by telling her that they were not "fucking", that it was "making love." She has an idea of how Michael and Michelle feel about one another, so she felt the need to have this conversation with Michelle. In all honesty, if you ask ME, she saw Michelle's reaction to finding her naked in Michael's bed, and she decided to rub it in her face. Basically, she was telling Michelle her pussy pops while Michelle's doesn't. And as you saw, it worked, because it literally made Michelle sick. As a christian, however, Ava should know that God sees EVERYTHING and there's a thing called karma.
Michelle loves Michael so much; she's got that can't-eat,can't-sleep, reach-for-the-stars, over-the-fence, World Series kind of thing lol. Both her and Michael do, however, Michelle's in a worse position then Michael because she has to see him with other women. I agree, she needs to sit back and calm down because she's stressing herself out to the point that it's making her sick.
LMAO@ "I absolutely understand cause she stresses me out." I busted out laughing at that!
Thank you, Natalie! Can't wait till you break it all the way down! Love ya! :D
Date: Sep 02, 2014 08:16 pm Title: Episode 17 part b
Sorry I haven't written a review, I have been reading updates but I just haven't had a chance to just sit down and write review cause moving into college has been a pain in the ass fo real. But anyway, Ava is acting like a real bitch messing with Michelle like that and then had the nerve to be all worried about her in front of Michael. Bitch you know you cause her to act that way so stop playing. But anyway, Michael is in some deeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep shit right now because the families are here and I am sure there are going to be some members who don't want there daughters dating the King of Pop and don't want their daughters face on every mother fucking magazine out there.
Author's Response:
I hope you have a wonderful semester, darling! I remember you telling me you were settling back into the college style a year ago. We've come so far!
Ava's sneaky side is definitely coming out. Before she was a wallflower, but being with Michael has allowed for her confidence to blossom. She has an idea of how Michael and Michelle feel for one another, so she's taken it upon herself to let Michelle know that she's not Michael's top girl anymore. She truly believes that she is the one for Michael now, whereas before she was just going with the flow.
You're exactly right. Some family members aren't phased by him being the King of Pop. He still has to prove himself and show why he's good enough to date their daughter/sister.
Thank you, girl! Again, good luck and God bless with your studies :D
Date: Sep 02, 2014 08:14 pm Title: Episode 17 part b
What? Sasha weren't you packing your shit, why did you decide to stay. I really can't understand why she can't get it through her thick head of hers that Michael does not want her. If he wanted her he would not have reacted the way he did when she told him she loved him. She needs to recognize that she is no where near close to then top right now.
Author's Response:
Hey, Julie, my Julie. Sasha knew good and well she wasn't going anywhere! She was just being a drama queen. She wanted to test Michael to see if he would stop her, but as Marisela said, MJ was not here for her bullshit. Michael likes her, but he's not here for the dramatics and the further she acts like a drama queen, the further he pulls away. Thank you, Julie!!! :D
Date: Sep 02, 2014 04:12 pm Title: Episode 17 part b
Really? Did Ava just really confirm to Michelle what has been going on in the bedroom. I know that Michelle sort of already has a sense of what was going on but damn, seriously. Whether people know or not, you should still keep your mouth closed, that is just a common rule a person should follow if you are in Michael's life. Hopefully nothing else happens to make people suspicious because Mike and Ava are really are skating on thin ice.
Author's Response:
Yes, girl, Ava confirmed it. Michael confirmed it for Michelle as well when they had their talk during the last episode, so she knew. I don't know what Ava hoped to achieve by bringing that up other than rubbing it in Michelle's face that her pussy was poppin' and Michelle's wasn't lol. Thank you for your review, Cheryl!!! :D I love having you as a reader.
Date: Sep 02, 2014 04:09 pm Title: Episode 17 part b
Bringing a bunch of families together is supposed to be a positive thing, but it never turns out that way. I hope Michael knows what he is putting himself into
Author's Response:
I foresee a lot of family drama ahead :). Thank you babydoll!!! :D
Date: Sep 01, 2014 08:58 am Title: Episode 17 part b
Dang at Ava lying
Author's Response:
That's exactly what I did when I saw this review! Was this inspired by the Miss Jay gif? Lol I remember watching that episode live and being like ooooooh! lol Thanks for the review, gorgeous!
Date: Aug 30, 2014 10:05 pm Title: Episode 17 part b
can't wait for all the families to put all their thoughts in. just wanted to say I love this story more & more! you're amazing at what you do! love ya. :D
Author's Response:
Thanks, love!!! I'm so glad you love this story; another update will be here no later than tomorrow! And I love you more, Diamond! :D
Date: Aug 30, 2014 07:32 am Title: Episode 17 part b
Seriously Sasha, you think your confident. Girl please. Jeaously is a form of insecurity and bitch you are always jealous of everybody. All that confident queen shit that you said was a straight up lie. Michael send that bitch home. He was completely right when he said that she would stress him out. Please Michael don't let her bull shit talk confuse you, send her over dramatic ass home.
Author's Response:
Very good point! If she's as confident as she says she is, why is she so jealous? THANK YOU GIGI FOR REVIEWING!!! :D
Date: Aug 28, 2014 03:22 pm Title: Episode 17
I really really hope michelle wins overall shes the realest out of all the girls and the best overall for michael <3
Author's Response:
I'd have to agree with you on your character assessment on her being the realest :D. I thought of Iggy Azalea when you said that lol.
Thank you for reading, sweetie!!! :D
Date: Aug 27, 2014 06:12 pm Title: Episode 17
Great chapter! Ava getting sneaky and it seems like Marisela is falling off. I wanna see what the parents and siblings have to say lol
Author's Response:
Ava's the worst kind of "sneaky." She's soft spoken and sweet, so when she stings you, you never see it coming. Michelle is very perceptive, however, so we'll have to see what happens. The parents and siblings are coming in the next update!
Date: Aug 20, 2014 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 71
YESSSS!!! You're back, all this time I have been thinking of a million ways this competition could end and damn I must say I am driving myself crazy. I mean damn I even came up with a scenario of how Sasha could win...now I know I'm trippin. Glad ya back.
Author's Response:
I'm bacccccck! Lol just updated for ya. Another one will be here tomorrow! Love ya, babe!
Date: Aug 18, 2014 07:14 pm Title: Episode 16 part c
Please come back this week!
Author's Response:
I'm back, babe!!! lol :D