Date: Jun 10, 2018 09:15 pm Title: Episode 17 part f ELIMINATIONS
Once again another great update but I was hoping Sasha was on her way out 😒.... but it’s ok because she got exposed so I’m happy lol. It still bothers me how Michael keeps her crazy ass around. That elimination was messy. Ava was crying then Sasha and Rocky got into and Mari was dragged into it. Girl I was sitting at the end of my damn seat. Although it sucks Ava’s feelings are hurt, I’m glad that the secret of Michael’s and Eve’s past is finally out there. I know it’s gonna be hard for her to get over it but hopefully she can. And when Eve called Michael a hoe I couldn’t help but laugh. I gotta be honest tho...he kinda is a hoe. Also I’m so proud of Michelle, she actually cook a decent meal 😂. I won’t lie and say I wasn’t praying for Michael’s health after eating her food. Next episode should be interesting and I’m excited for it. Hopefully in the next episode Ava can get herself together and have the strength to stay, Michelle can gain her weight back, Sasha can stop lying, and Mari can catch up cause everyone left in the house has told Michael that they love him. Thanks for the update!!!!
Author's Response:
I'm sooooo happy you enjoyed the update!! Michelle had it right in the last episode when she said Sasha is like a cat with nine lives. Mama has cooked up so much mess and is STILL here in the top 4. I can't.
You're right, this was quite possibly one of the most dramatic eliminations. As we get closer to the end, they're only going to get more dramatic *shudders*.
Yes, it's best MJ&Eve's little tryst is out there. It wouldn't be fair to ask the girls to be upfront and honest and him not do the same. In this next episode, she battles with herself on whether she can get over it or not. She loves Michael, but that is some heavy stuff.
Yassss, girl, Michelle finally threw it down in the kitchen for her man. Now let's see if she can do it without ha Granda's help, lol!
Thank you for leaving your thoughts! You just don't know how much insight they provide me with. <3
[Report This]Date: Jun 08, 2018 09:47 pm Title: Episode 17 part e
Wow, I forgot how much I missed this book!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I've certainly missed writing it. For the past few weeks, I've been jotting down ideas as they come and can't wait to show them. Thank you for your unwavering support, you're the best :D.
[Report This]Date: Jun 06, 2018 07:40 pm Title: Episode 17 part e
FIRST OF ALL ....
i love the new banner 😂â¤ï¸ And my heart beat fast when I say the title. But I am upset that you stopped here and now I have to imagine what’s about to go down with Ava and Michael and her sister. F*ck! 😩 Soooo mike is love with both Ava and Michelle. Or is he still in love with Michelle, hmm. This is some drama!! Sasha is freaking nuts and a stalker already. I know who I choose to go home.. SASHA!!! She getting on my nerves anyway lol. Back to this subject, I hope Ava don’t leave cause of this 😩😩 she’s starting to be my fave. And the way she and Rocky fought over his damn penis lmao 😂😂 I can NOT.
Anyways, amazing chapter of course â¤ï¸ Please update sooooon. ASAP. More like now rather than later. Like next week. Maybe tomorrow? I know that impossible so I’ll hush 😩
Author's Response:
THANK YOU! I was worried about the new banner... according to the website's rules that are now being enforced, my images (when combines) were too big, so I decided to just make a new banner. So glad to see you love it, it means a lot really.
In this next update, we get more resolution with Ava, Michael, and Eve. Honestly, that storyline was/is so exhausting to write.
Sasha is definitely crazy in love. That is one bold chick!!
In the next update, Ava is definitely contemplating leaving. She's stuck between a rock and a hard place because sis KNOWS it was before Michael even knew she existed, but on the other hand, he slept with her sister. That, combined with growing up in her sister's shadow... Ava's having a hard time right now.
Thank you so much for your feedback. I just updated. I wasn't planning on updating till later next week, but yours and the others comments made me want to update quicker, so thank you for that, because I needed the boost. Never hush <3.
[Report This]Date: Jun 06, 2018 03:09 pm Title: Episode 17 part e
Still don’t like Sasha. Her behavior is neither funny or cute. She either needs to be on meds or in somebodies hospital! Lol, come on! Trying to buy your way into a party that you are clearly not invited to! Your family had their Day with Michael! Let these other girls get a chance! And her episode while talking to Michelle..... I have no words! Like, what’s up with that? When this thing comes to an end and Michael possibly doesn’t pick her, he and his new beau will have a potential stalker or something.
Also, I happen to find Rocky super boring! I know she is t meant to be, but she’s not memorable to me. Like when I read in the other girls POV (Mari, Sasha*ugh*, Ava, and Michelle) I can remember times where they made me happy, sad, mad, amused, etc. , but with Rocky I can’t. Maybe I’m reading to much into it (or not paying her enough attention lol)!
Wow, Michaels past with Eve was not what I was expecting. He basically used her. It’s good that she got out of that before she fell any deeper! I’m glad they cleared the air, even if it hurt to hear. But awwww shit! Now they HAVE to tell Ava. She’s seen too much!! Lol
I really think Ava deserves this... if she can get over her sister and Michaels’ past.....
Author's Response:
Oh my gosh, I love this.
Chh... Sasha has no self-awareness. She is a mess and a half. I hate to think of her reaction if/when she's eliminated *shudders*.
I can see why you think Rocky is boring. She hasn't really been pulling her weight in this competition. Meanwhile, the other girls have been putting themselves out there, cooking this man meals, watching their competition like hawks etc.
Yea, one thing about Eve. She doesn't stay anywhere she's not wanted. I just wish more people in life could adopt this attitude! There really are more fish in the sea!
Thanks for your review, Dajah. It put a lot into perspective for me :D.
Date: Jun 05, 2018 03:33 pm Title: Episode 17 part e
Loved the update, so much happened. Girl you had dying on that part when Ava and Rocky were fighting over Michael. I don’t think I have laughed so hard in a while. But between Michelle and Ava this next update is about to be something. I’m so excited that this story is back. Thank you for coming back!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you enjoyed the update! I was worried it was too long. Ava&Rocky fighting each other got added in last minute. Now I'm glad I added it :). Thank you for reading!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2018 03:18 pm Title: Episode 17 part e
Whoa shit! I completely forgot that Ava lost her virginity to Michael! I gotta re read this story again so I can remember all the things that went down. Great update girl! Loooooove the drama!!!! Lmao
Author's Response:
Yes girl, she lost her virginity to him in Episode 15c PART TWO. I know it's been awhoe, so this comment encourages me to keep adding reminders at the beginning of each future update. Thank you, my love!!
Date: May 23, 2018 09:29 am Title: Should I finish this story?
So I decided to go back and re-read the story and I just cannot figure out for the life of me why Sasha is still in the competition. I just don’t get it.
Author's Response:
Sounds like a good question for Michael during the Reunion episodes *takes notes*. Update coming this week. Have a great weekend! :)
[Report This]Date: May 19, 2018 11:12 am Title: Should I finish this story?
Should I continue?.....Um...
DUH!! Don’t excite us like this please. Continue this! Only if you’re really up for it â¤ï¸
Author's Response:
Lol, OK!! Thank you for your blessing, love, I'll be updating in two weeks, after my schedule comes up. Until then, I'm going to continue to reread, fix spelling/grammar errors (there's so many, omg), and fix the broken images. The more I reread, the more inspired I get. I'm already planning for the Reunion. I'm thinking two parts, perhaps? Lol, we'll see. Thank you!!
[Report This]Date: May 19, 2018 07:14 am Title: Should I finish this story?
Yeeess complete I need to see my fave Michelle again
Author's Response:
Yessss, I miss writing Michelle and the other's POV. They're so much fun!! The inspiration has been flowing you this past week and I can tell you, Michelle will definitely be a central character in the next update. She's receives a major surprise! My schedule clears up in the next two weeks, so that's when I'll begin with regular updates. Thank you, Bae bae!!
[Report This]Date: May 15, 2018 02:29 pm Title: Should I finish this story?
Yeeees!!!! please continue!!! I love this story!!!
Author's Response:
Yayyy, I'm so glad you love this story, because there's still so much DRAMA to unfold! I've spent the past week rereading the story, trying to get my groove back (I'm so freaking dusty), and I'm going to begin regularly updating in around two weeks, give or take a few days. Thank you, Alexandrita!!
Date: May 14, 2018 10:37 pm Title: Should I finish this story?
If you are up to it: YESSSSSS!!!!
But I am enjoying a sane mind right now lmao
Date: May 14, 2018 10:37 pm Title: Should I finish this story?
If you are up to it: YESSSSSS!!!!
But I am enjoying a sane mind right now lmao
Author's Response:
Hello, my Dajah!! Doll, these girls are bout to make you lose whatever sanity you have left, because I've been rereading the story and the inspiration is FLOWING right now, lol! I'm going to start doing regular updates in around two weeks, when my schedule finally clears up. Thank you for reading, supporting, and leaving feedback!!
[Report This]Date: May 14, 2018 02:53 pm Title: Episode #2
Hi doll!, I'm glad I found your story. Many different backgrounds. Love the Challenge of the phone conversation. Genious!
Author's Response:
Hi, Yuli!! So glad you found this story. My apologies for the ratchetness!! I hope you continue to enjoy it, I'm going to begin regular updates again in June, that's two weeks from now when my schedule clears up. Thank you for reading, supporting, and leaving your feedback. You all's feedback is a MAJOR part of my inspiration, so I am very grateful. Have a great day!!
Date: May 13, 2018 06:13 pm Title: Should I finish this story?
I’d definantly allow it! Finish this story sis
Author's Response:
Thank you for giving me the chance to finish what I started. I'm going to start updating regularly in June, about two weeks from now, when my schedule clears up. I've been rereading the story all week and gah, how did you guys let me get away with so many grammar mistakes?! Lollll, proofreading will definitely be a MUST this time around. Thank you and see you soon!!
Date: May 13, 2018 03:17 pm Title: Episode #1 Part a
Yes, please continue!