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Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2013 11:51 am Title: CHAPTER 24 | DAY 1 - part 2

Lol how cute! Michael is possessive as hell already and he ain't even got the panties yet. Hell, he doesn't even have Harper yet! This fool talkin bout he don't want guys to think she is single. Well for one, she isn't single. She hasn't boyfriend and his name is NOT Michael Jackson. His name is Will Smith. Speaking of Will, I wonder what he's up to.. Hmm. And I wonder will their club fun make the news at all. Somebody might've snuck some pics and if Will sees them, that will nail the coffin in his and Harper's relationship. I just know when Harper and Michael finally do hook up and I mean allll the way, I hope she gets his ass so sprung, he won't want her to leave his sight. I want her to have him completely and utterly p***y whipped! Just like Mama Kalli in the other story. Lol 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat :)

Haha! Michael wants her! And if he can have her, no one will ;) But first, she has to do something about Will... Oh don't worry, I bet Michael is already whipped lol! Thank you for the review :D

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2013 09:05 am Title: CHAPTER 23 | DAY 1 - part 1

I completely agree with iam_music.



Author's Response:

LOL, I feel you :)

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2013 09:05 am Title: CHAPTER 23 | DAY 1 - part 1

I completely agree with iam_music.



Author's Response:

LOL, I feel you :)

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 31, 2013 06:07 am Title: CHAPTER 23 | DAY 1 - part 1

Excellent!



Author's Response:

Thank you :$

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2013 09:21 pm Title: CHAPTER 23 | DAY 1 - part 1

Lmao Michael is such a troll. A horny troll, but a troll nonetheless. I'm glad Harper didn't do him yet. When it happens, it needs to be beautiful. And not when Janet is in the same room. They should be alone. That way they can make as much noise as they'd like. Lmao and Michael needs to make it special. Show her how much he wants her. And of course Harper needs to be single when it happens. Her and Will clearly aren't gonna make it. 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat! I'm still not over you saying Michael will break into tears and sing like James Brown when he have sex with Harper lmao! Michael waited or almost a year, he can wait for her to figure out if she wants to stay with Will or not! Harper deffo needs to feel special on that special night! :)

Reviewer: Wassup Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2013 08:22 pm Title: CHAPTER 23 | DAY 1 - part 1

Wow its going to be an interesting week for harper , poor harper, michael's torturing her ! lol



Author's Response:

Indeed, let's see if Harper surrender or not :)

Reviewer: rahelicious Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2013 10:04 am Title: CHAPTER 22 | Together Again

please continue!!!!

Author's Response:

New chapter up :)

Reviewer: Wassup Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 29, 2013 02:56 pm Title: CHAPTER 22 | Together Again

Awww so cute ! I wonder whats haper going to do ! 



Author's Response:

Let's see if she give into Mike :)

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 29, 2013 02:50 pm Title: CHAPTER 22 | Together Again

WOOOOW those two are NOT going to be able to hold out all week. No effing way. Cue the porno soundtrack in 3, 2, 1........

Author's Response:

LMAOOOOO!! Love you girl :)

Thank you for the rate and the review

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 29, 2013 01:12 pm Title: CHAPTER 22 | Together Again

great uptade!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! can't wait to see them together!



Author's Response:

Next chapter up :)

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 29, 2013 12:58 pm Title: CHAPTER 22 | Together Again

Lmao there he goes again



Author's Response:

LOL, Michael never give up

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 29, 2013 10:51 am Title: CHAPTER 22 | Together Again

That picture of Harper is fierce! I'm surprised Michael isn't thinking of how beautiful their children would be. Lmao. And yasssss I agree with Janet. Their chemistry is really something else, the second they finally have sex Michael is probably gonna break out into tears and sing like James Brown. Lmao. The week is turning out interesting already and it just began. 



Author's Response:

Harper is gorgeous and oh my god, their kids are about to be so damn beautiful! Maybe Michael wants Harper just for him until he thinks of sharing her with someone else lol :)

"the second they finally have sex Michael is probably gonna break out into tears and sing like James Brown. Lmao"

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OMG I HATE YOU LMAOOOOOO

 

Reviewer: SunniVan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 29, 2013 06:36 am Title: CHAPTER 18 | Too little too late

I love Harper's resolve... Yes babygirl, stand your ground.  If you let ppl think they can walk all over you, they'll label you the doormat, and get to steppin'!! LMAO!

 

yeah Michael...

earn someone's effection for ONCE in your life... Mr. "Women always say yes to the King of Pop"

*smdh*

 



Author's Response:

LOL, he needs to work for once! I'm glad you're reading this story girl :)! Hope you will like the rest of the story :D

Reviewer: SunniVan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2013 10:27 am Title: CHAPTER 17 | Reality is catching up with me

Oh I am SOOOO glad Harper went off like that!

GET IT GIRL!!!! LOL!!

Cause the way Mike was actin' made me wanna go...

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LMAO! I think I'm gonna stop here for the day.

But that was good.

Great story Love!

Be back lata!

 



Author's Response:

YYYAAAASSS, if Lisa thought Harper would just shut up and take it, she was dead wrong!

Reviewer: SunniVan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2013 10:14 am Title: CHAPTER 16 | Showtime!

Meet you in your dressing room after the show?

Say what?

LMAO.

Mike is a mess.

If I was Harper, I wouldn't go.

I would have a straight ATTITUDE.

Funk you Mike!!!

(Yes, I said Funk on purpose.) 

:-D



Author's Response:

LOL, Michael doesn't know what he wants. He ignores her, then apologize and now wants to see her in his dressing room?! a mess lol

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