Date: Nov 30, 2013 05:09 pm Title: CHAPTER 33 | Peace
HarloT was fooling herself to think Michael would not only cheat on Harper, but cheat with her ass!!! Over a goddess like Harper? HarloT is alright looking but Harper is grown woman sensual. Stunning, sexy, the whole nine. I don't care for her at all but I'm glad she and Harper made up. Michael better had learned from this mistake!!!!! Imagine when he gets into it with jermaine or one of his brothers, and she slips one of them a note like that. Chile!!!!!! The fuckery that would ensue. Not to mention I know they're gonna flirt with her anyway. Anyway, they're about to do it!!! Harper is about to spring him with the Brazilian kitty. Sprung honey!
Author's Response:
LMAOOOO!! Well a girl can dream lol! But the most important is that everybodyis getting along and it's time for Michael and Harpe to get their freak ooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnn
[Report This]Date: Nov 25, 2013 02:56 pm Title: CHAPTER 32 | Truth
Great now Harlot is gonna pull the old "show up in a trenchcoat with nothing underneath' when she goes to the hotel. There's no way she won't misinterpret that note as anything but an opportunity to get back at Harper by stealing her man. Michael is seriously dumb for that maneuver. I just hope Harper believes him when she inevitably catches her naked sister trying to molest him.
Author's Response:
"Great now Harlot is gonna pull the old "show up in a trenchcoat with nothing underneath' when she goes to the hotel"
I don't know lol! You'll see if you read the next chapter :D
Date: Nov 24, 2013 09:39 pm Title: CHAPTER 32 | Truth
Harlow is a petty ass bitch. I'm glad Harper told her off and just left it alone, and honestly Michael should too. I understand he loves Harper and wants to help but this is something that Harper needs to handle in her own way. Hopefully HarloT doesn't get the wrong idea when she sees his note. Harper will be there anyway but still. He should've left it alone. And Michael thinks it will take less than a year for him to propose to Harper huh? He's probably right. Once he and Harper finally have sex, he's gonna be sprung as hell so I could see that happening. Lmao the Brazilian kitty is gonna drive him crazy and make him totally obsessed and more in love.
Author's Response:
Harper did the right thing. Harlow needs some time alone to think about the way she acted! Michael is cute, he wants everybody to get along but maybe there is nothing he can ado about it :/ Like you said, let's hope Harlow doesn't try something funny!! You know Michael is eager! LMAOO! Yes, Harper's brazilian kitty will make him propose!
[Report This]Date: Nov 11, 2013 09:12 am Title: CHAPTER 31 | Make a change
Harlow, drop the w and add a t to the end of your name cause you're acting like a thirsty slut. Harper is being too lenient she needs to check that little bitch and tell her to get over herself and get her paws off her man. Maybe they should set her up with Jermaine? A match made in heaven!
I forgot that Ethan is still working for Michael. Lord what a mess. Harper needs to tell Michael the truth before he finds out himself. And I doubt that Ethan will be working there much longer after that so she won't have to run into him anymore. This Michael is cousins with Daddy Michael after all......
Author's Response:
"Harlow, drop the w and add a t to the end of your name cause you're acting like a thirsty slut." ashgneginrfl; I agree, Harper is too soft because she feels guilty for "stealing" Harlow's career but enough is enough. Harlow needs to get over it already.
Harlow and Jermaine?!
Nooo!!
Harper has a lot to do! She broke up with Will, she wants to have a great relationship with her sister again, tell Michael she loves him and tell him about Ethan! I think the Ethan situation will have to wait!
"This Michael is cousins with Daddy Michael after all......"
LMAOO
Date: Nov 08, 2013 10:54 pm Title: CHAPTER 31 | Make a change
Harlow needs to grow up. She can still be a fan of Michael's but respect the fact he loves her sister and that's who he wants to be with. I feel like she's being petty. Harper cares for her and is trying to mend their broken relationship but her ass is trying it. She needs to go right with them on the tour. Sister or not, you can and WILL get read for filth if you are outta line. And poor Will. He took that a lot better than I thought he would though. Harper and Michael need some alone time. I feel like they need to talk.
Author's Response:
Hey Kat! Yes, Harlow needs to grow up and be happy for her sister! And Will... I'm sad for him too! He likes Harper very much but hey, her feelings for Michael are stronger :/
The new chapter is onlineee ! :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2013 10:24 pm Title: CHAPTER 31 | Make a change
HAHAHAHAHA ! I actually thought they were having sex and just finish, lmao that was a good one and what's up with Harlow? its not harper's fault she got her dream job, its sad really because their family, sisters for crying out loud. Ethan get lost, you had your fun with Harper now its time to move on .... continue ^.^
Author's Response:
HAHA! Got you ;))) You'e right, it's family, that's the most important! Thank you for the review and the rate :)
Date: Nov 05, 2013 01:45 pm Title: CHAPTER 30 | New start
Harper and her sister are gorgeous!!!! And I'm glad Michael stopped being a damn crybaby! They're so cute. And I'm glad she's calling Will, they may as well break up. Michael is meeting the fam, and it's only gonna elevate from here. Michael is in love.
Author's Response:
Harlow is a beauty too! And like you said, it was time for Michael to stop acting like a drama queen and time for Harper to finally break up with Will. Now they can be together and be in love :) Thank you for the review Kat :D
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2013 01:25 pm Title: CHAPTER 29 | Day after
Wow Michael, paranoid much? Do you really think she'd be that insensitive to your feelings to just say 'can't do that' and walk off? If you're doubting you need to tell her your feelings TO HER FACE so you can get a clear answer. Stop being such a drama queen.
And Ethan, you're hot but bye bye. The train has pulled out of the station and you aren't on it. Better luck with the next girl.
Author's Response:
LMAO! He is! Ethan will make another come back. Like Joni Mitchell said "you don't know what you've got till it's gone" :) Thank you for the review and the rate
Date: Oct 26, 2013 02:12 pm Title: CHAPTER 29 | Day after
I'm soooooooooo glad you're back!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hope to read more of this great story!
Can't wait for the next part.
Love their shy intimacy for the moment, they shared a bed!
Author's Response:
Thank you Nellan! I'll try to update more often :D IKR, they so cute!!!! Thank you for the review ;)
Date: Oct 26, 2013 02:05 pm Title: CHAPTER 29 | Day after
Ethan you snooze you lose! You wanted a fuck buddy and that's what you got. Be happy you got the draws and move the hell on. And for Michael, he needs to take a chill pill!! Harper wasn't saying she can't love him, that's not what she was saying can't do that for. She meant she can't spend all day with him because she needs to see her mother! Huuuhh. I'm worn out from all this overreacting and drama. Michael needs to relax. That is NOT what she meant at all. Ethan needs to get a damn life. And Harper needs to tell Michael she heard what he said and how she feels about it. All this miscommunication is really annoying now.
Author's Response:
Hey Kat :) LMAO, Ethan is pathetic. I think he will be even moe annoying once he discovers what really happened between Harper and Michael at the beginning of their "relationship" New chapter online ;)
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2013 01:08 pm Title: CHAPTER 28 | One night
You, dear, must continue!
Author's Response:
Hello Uno. That's funny because when I received your review, I updated a new chapter lol :) Thank you for the review and the rate :D
[Report This]Date: Oct 11, 2013 12:04 pm Title: CHAPTER 28 | One night
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. So sweet.
Word of advice to Michael: next time you tell her you love her, look her in the eyes.
And Annie are you still planning to have Lisa find out about the contract at some point? She needs to know that she was the back-up plan and she needs to find out in a memorable way LOL. Lets not forget that Harper was off banging Ethan at the time. If she'd shown interest in Michael at the outset Lisa wouldn't have had a snowball's chance in hell.
Author's Response:
And thank you for the rate and the review :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 11, 2013 12:03 pm Title: CHAPTER 28 | One night
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. So sweet.
Word of advice to Michael: next time you tell her you love her, look her in the eyes.
And Annie are you still planning to have Lisa find out about the contract at some point? She needs to know that she was the back-up plan and she needs to find out in a memorable way LOL. Lets not forget that Harper was off banging Ethan at the time. If she'd shown interest in Michael at the outset Lisa wouldn't have had a snowball's chance in hell.
Author's Response:
Hey Camille :D I think Michael should make it memorable too :) Make it a nice story to tell her friends!
I am definitely planning of letting Lisa know for the contract, Ethan is also making a come back. I have many ideas for this story :D
Date: Oct 08, 2013 11:02 am Title: CHAPTER 28 | One night
Finally he tells her that he loves her!!!!!!! They are definitely ready to become a couple but I still want them to take their time. Michael still needs to show and prove that he is worthy of a woman like Harper. And we all know the sex will be explosive. Lol
Author's Response:
YAS! Michael is telling her how he feels! Well, almost lol! :)
Date: Oct 06, 2013 11:05 am Title: CHAPTER 28 | One night
Good chapter! Cant wait for next chapters! Michael is such a sweetie pie being nice to harper after what happened with haper's mom. :D ♥b25;♥¤♥b25;♥
Author's Response:
Yes, Michael is so cute :)