




Date: Mar 24, 2014 09:42 am Title: CHAPTER 38 | Phonecall
I can understand why Michael is upset but he over-reacted. I would be a bit miffed in his situation, and he has every right to ask her for an explanation. She should have told him sooner. But he should have remained calm and let her explain! He is acting like a spoiled brat, he is a bit high maintenance in this story he likes to throw a diva fit whenever he even thinks about another man getting near Harper. He just threw a jr. version of the tantrum he had when he found out she was dating Will. The thought of another man near her seems to drive him into a rage which is kind of cute but what isn't cute is taking it out on her. Harper is a beautiful woman of course men are going to be interested in her. Obviously she's dated men before him. And he was busy wasting his time with Lisa at the time Harper was seeing Ethan so he has no room to be mad. Except maybe at himself lmao.
Michael had better call her right back and apologize. That's no way to treat your girlfriend!
Author's Response:
Hello Camille :) I would be upset too but he is overreacting. He was married, she had the right to be with someone else. But she still should have told him when they decided to be in a relationship. Ethan is her bodyguard, I don't think if she was in his shoes, she would like someone Michael used to have sex with around! You're right, Michael is the one who needs to apologize for the way he acted!! Thank you for the review, the new chapter is online :D





Date: Mar 24, 2014 08:52 am Title: CHAPTER 38 | Phonecall
I agree with iam_music! That was a douche move. Who the fuck does he think he is? He shouldn't even CARE because that shit happened before he 'fell in love' with Harper! He doesn't even have a right to! Why the fuck is his ass calling her out when Ethan should be the one out right now! He said nothing to Ethan, but he's blaming her for this? He was the one in love with Lisa, WHILE he was supposed to maintain the 'fake' relationship with Harper! Wow. Smooth move, Michael. I expected better!
Author's Response:
Hey girlll! Michael is wrong and someone needs to tell him the truth. SOMEONE CALL MY GIRL JANET!
Date: Mar 24, 2014 07:27 am Title: CHAPTER 38 | Phonecall
Ok I'm gonna slap the living fuck outta Michael! How dare he blow up on her like that over some shit that happened before they were ever even a couple? Did he forget he was dating and about to marry that big chinned Elvis Marie? He has NO right at all to blow up on Harper about her past. She owes him nothing in that regard because they weren't together. Michael has a lot of fuckin nerve. Then he didn't even let her explain and he hung up on her too? Unacceptable. Harper needs to dry her tears now and call Michael back to read his narrow ass for complete BLOOD! Then tell him to kiss her ass and hang up. There is no reason why Ethan should even be a factor right now. If Michael is that pressed, why the fuck is he still even letting him be her bodyguard? He should've had him fired or transferred as soon as he found out. Michael needs to get the fuck outta here. Talking about secrets. It was never a secret per say, because she didn't tell him. And for what? It's not like it's his business on who and what she was doing while his sorry ass was MARRIED! That's what's pissing me off. Michael needs a swift, roundhouse kick up the ass.
Author's Response:
Michael has the right to be upset but he is overreacting! The least he could have done is give Harper some time to explain why she didn't tell him. Andonce again, HE WAS MARRIED WHEN SHE SLEPT WITH ETHAN!! He needs to remember that!
Date: Mar 23, 2014 02:29 pm Title: CHAPTER 37 | Drama
I'm glad you updated on this story!!!!!! I don't understand why Harper is keeping this secret from Michael. It ain't gonna benefit nobody; she is just digging a deeper hole with Michael. She needs to tell him about Ethan. I would be jealous too, if I found out my boyfriend was around a girl he used to fuck with; that's just HUMAN NATURE :)
Ethan is a mess, He's only after Harper because he's pussy-whipped, the sex was great; If Harper didn't have MJ or someone else, Ethan wouldn't be chasing after her.
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Hey Neece! sorry for the late answer! Harper should have told Michael before but I think she honestly thought it didn't matter. But I guess she was wrong!
You're right! Ethan only wants what he can't have!!!





Date: Mar 23, 2014 09:00 am Title: CHAPTER 37 | Drama
Harper Harper Harper. Smdh. You are setting up so much drama and for what? To protect Ethan? Girl, Goodbye. You know damn well Ethan is a player and you were just a conquest, don't let that come between you and a good man aka Michael by hiding the truth. So you fucked Ethan, who cares? Michael has no right to feel any kind of way about it when he was busy roleplaying Jailhouse Rock with Elvis reincarnate. But what he does have reason to be upset about is you hiding things from him especially about someone who is around you alone all the time when Michael is traveling. Harper had better tell him everything enough is enough. And there is no way in hell Michael is going to let Ethan keep being Harpers bodyguard when he leaves for his world tour.
As for Ethan, he knew exactly what he was doing dropping that info to Michael. He is trying to cause conflict in the hopes he can wedge himself back into Harpers panties.
I also don't trust Ethan around Harlow I wouldn't be surprised if he tried to fuck her too.
Author's Response:
Hey Camille :D I am sorry for the late answer >.<!
"Michael has no right to feel any kind of way about it when he was busy roleplaying Jailhouse Rock with Elvis reincarnate" OMGG
But I agree when you say she should tell him because Michael trust Ethan and leave her with him when he is abroad. If he knew, you can be sure he would have asked someone else to look after Harper
LMAO! I think he might try something with Harlow too lol
Date: Mar 23, 2014 12:55 am Title: CHAPTER 37 | Drama
Wait a minute.. Michael doesn't know Harper and Ethan used to fuck around?? How the hell did he miss that? Oh here go hell come. Lmao. Michael is about to turn into a possessive beast!!!! And Ethan has no business answering her damn phone, let alone at 2-3 am. Chile.. Smh! Harper and Mike need to talk. ASAP.
Author's Response:
Hey Kat! sorry for the late answer but yes, they need to talk about it!
Date: Mar 22, 2014 08:06 pm Title: CHAPTER 37 | Drama
DAMN YOU ETHAN!!! update soon please
Author's Response:
The new chapter is online :D





Date: Feb 09, 2014 01:17 pm Title: CHAPTER 36 | Confidence
Wow Ethan, maybe you should learn basic female anatomy before being so sure of yourself. Does he even realize what hole he's putting it in or where the clitoris is? Cause he sure as hell isn't going to be enticing anyone with his inability to give an orgasm. Harper would be better off using a cucumber on herself.
In all seriousness though Harper had better tell Michael about Ethan and tell him soon. She doesn't need Ethan creeping around after her and there is no way he will still be working there once the truth is out so problem solved. Instead of a pink slip Michael can draw a diagram of the female reproductive tract and label the g spot.
Author's Response:
"Wow Ethan, maybe you should learn basic female anatomy before being so sure of yourself. Does he even realize what hole he's putting it in or where the clitoris is? Cause he sure as hell isn't going to be enticing anyone with his inability to give an orgasm. Harper would be better off using a cucumber on herself."
Harper needs to tell Michael but she also doesn't want Ethan to lose his job because of her...
"Instead of a pink slip Michael can draw a diagram of the female reproductive tract and label the g spot. "
Date: Feb 08, 2014 10:15 am Title: CHAPTER 36 | Confidence
Ethan bye. Your non orgasm giving ass is giving yourself wayyyy too much credit, and the second Michael finds out, he's gonna have his ass on the unemployment line. This has went on far too long. She needs to tell Michael. Idk what Ethan's problem is but apparently Harper has the same crack pipe vagina that Kalliope has because Michael is in love with her and already thinking about when he's gonna ask for her hand in marriage, and Ethan has lost his damn mind. I'm glad Harper is going to the VS fitting, I love their fashion shows! And it's always cute to see Mike get jealous, so I know when he finds out that Ethan wants his woman's goodies again, he's gonna get extra territorial. He's gonna probably have sex with Harper just to make her be loud so Ethan can hear it. Lol. Seriously, he needs to go away.
Author's Response:
Hey girl! "Your non orgasm giving ass is giving yourself wayyyy too much credit" LMAOOO. Harper needs to tell Michael because it get worse! Harper will be perfect for VS!!
"so I know when he finds out that Ethan wants his woman's goodies again, he's gonna get extra territorial. He's gonna probably have sex with Harper just to make her be loud so Ethan can hear it."





Date: Jan 13, 2014 08:02 am Title: CHAPTER 35 | A new chapter
OMG that ending was perfect! That's what Lisa deserves after that divorce stunt she pulled. Stupid cow. She really should have thought through her idea that any man in his right mind would dump a woman like Harper for her idiotic ass. Cause if she had she would have realized how preposterous it was. Unless Michael has a fetish for hearing deep Elvis moans during sex that we don't know about. Maybe he made her wear a sparkly white cape and fake burns while they were getting it on? It would explain a lot.....
Author's Response:
Hey Camille :D! I know you would love it LMAO! LMP didn't deserve to think Michael chose her over Harper!
" Maybe he made her wear a sparkly white cape and fake burns while they were getting it on?"
Date: Jan 04, 2014 08:01 pm Title: CHAPTER 35 | A new chapter
It woulda been super nice to see Harper slap the living fuck outta Lisa but reading her with the truth is great too. I'm glad she told her. That bitch is living in lala land if she believes Michael would actually choose her over Harper. Ha! Not to mention, who is Michael happily in love with now? The jokes on her ugly ass. Harper is beautiful, young, and successful all on her own. Elvis face is none of those things. Harper would and could never be a jump off since michael has always wanted her anyway. Furthermore Michael wanted to hurry and sign those papers! He'd never let Harper get away that easily because she's worth the fight. Finally the trash is gone, and Michael has treasure now! I can't wait til he marries Harper. I hope Elvis face is the first person to hear about it. Anyway, it's good to see these two happy together.
Author's Response:
Hey Kay! LMAO! Harper slapped her with the truth and it was as violent as a smack in the face :D I can't wait til they get married tooo! Michael and Harper and so adorable and they deserve to be happy.





Date: Dec 17, 2013 01:47 pm Title: CHAPTER 34 | Heaven
FINALLY! YAY!
I love that Michael just about blew his load as soon as he slipped in.....I knew Harper would lay it on him like he's never had before.
Lmao @ the fact that Harper didn't know she was having an orgasm. Ethan should be ashamed of himself.
Author's Response:
Hello Camille ;) LOOOL! It was about time :) LMAO! I hope Ethan hear them some time LOOL
Date: Dec 14, 2013 06:20 pm Title: CHAPTER 34 | Heaven
About time!!!!! I love the playfulness they have together. Michael is about to be officially sprung. They had some good lovin AND she's told him that she loves him. He's about to combust into glitter and rainbows chile. Lmao
Author's Response:
Hey Kat ;) YEAAAHHH! They finally did it lol! Now Michael is about to be even more in love lol!!





Date: Dec 02, 2013 01:57 pm Title: CHAPTER 33 | Peace
Glad that Harlow has enough loyalty to her sister not to go after her man. I'll remove the t from the end of her name for now. I thought for sure the trenchcoat would come out. Or maybe even an oversized fur jacket.
Can't wait for Harper to give Michael a taste of the crackpipe vagina. He's going to be completely strung out for the rest of the story.
Author's Response:
Hey Camille :D! Yes, Harlow isn't that dumb after all Let's drop the "T" from now on lol!
" I thought for sure the trenchcoat would come out. Or maybe even an oversized fur jacket." lmaoo!! that would have been funny! Now time for Harper and Michael to get it on!
Date: Dec 01, 2013 10:17 pm Title: CHAPTER 33 | Peace
Author's Response:
LOOOOOOOLL @ the gif!!