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Reviewer: cabagepatch1023 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2013 06:49 am Title: CHAPTER 5 | Between Me and You and You

Oooooooohhh Michael better watcchhh ouuut!  He did all this nice stuff for harper , and she didnt even notice. Smhhhhh... pooor Michael! Ethan and harper are getting reaaal close. O.o cant wait for next part! :) 



Author's Response:

The worst is that Harper doesn't know :S

Reviewer: lovetoread Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2013 06:42 am Title: CHAPTER 5 | Between Me and You and You

"This man with a bunch of flowers."  :')

"This man who is witnessing Harper and Ethan acting like two love birds." :'(

i feel you mike. well dont lose hope!



Author's Response:

Yes, keep the faith Michael!

Reviewer: MissK123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2013 05:45 am Title: CHAPTER 5 | Between Me and You and You

This is good! Omg I can't imagine what Michael must have thought! <33

 



Author's Response:

Thank  you for the review and the rate! I hope you will continue to read it :)

Reviewer: makingmichaelmagic Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2013 05:05 am Title: CHAPTER 5 | Between Me and You and You

Michael,

Aylwin

Inspired by: Annie



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Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2013 04:45 am Title: CHAPTER 5 | Between Me and You and You

I ADORE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please, keep going!! Pooor Michael!!!

Please, she has to know him better, she's her man NOT ETHAN....! ( even if he' s stunning!!!). Im' dying to read moooooooooooooore!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I will continue :) Next chapter up :D

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2013 04:41 am Title: CHAPTER 5 | Between Me and You and You

Awwww shit! The look on Michael's face...I gotta find out



Author's Response:

It's getting juicy! :)

Reviewer: makingmichaelmagic Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2013 04:18 pm Title: CHAPITRE 4 | Hell of a Night

Michael- The Prince Charming...

 

 



Author's Response:

And Harper wants the dangerous and mysterious knight, unfortunately :S

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2013 02:54 pm Title: CHAPITRE 4 | Hell of a Night

Awwww I seen the shout out! I love you too girl! Your stories give me life honey yassssssss!!!! You are Gone with the wind fabulous like Kenya hunty.

 



Author's Response:

Watch me twirl, and twirl and twirl!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2013 02:53 pm Title: CHAPITRE 4 | Hell of a Night

Ooh.. He IS cute! Hmm. Might be a lil competition there. Lawd knows I love a jealous Michael!! Lol I hope we'll get to see some. I know daddy Michael is only reserved for Kalli though is YLIK, lol but maybe we can have a different variation of him in this story. 



Author's Response:

Yes, Ethan is fine! Oh, Daddy Michael is only for Michael but as you said maybe we could witness a new form of Daddy Michael in this story lol! And we know that whatever Michael wants, Michael gets. He is like Kenya y'know?

Reviewer: cabagepatch1023 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2013 02:03 pm Title: CHAPTER 1 | Beautiful Stranger

Ommgg ethan isss finneee.. o.o... but i pefer Michael.  I think Michael should be worrying a bit tho. Because ethan could just snatch harper as fast as your caan blink your eyes. But whoooooo knows.  Wonder when lisa comes in the pictureeeee..... 



Author's Response:

I agree Ethan is FOINE. Let's see if he can make Harper forget about Mike :D

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2013 01:11 pm Title: CHAPITRE 4 | Hell of a Night

i prefer Michael ;P



Author's Response:

And I understand hehe :)

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2013 01:06 pm Title: CHAPITRE 4 | Hell of a Night

Great update!!!!

No,no, no competition with Michael!!!! Pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaase, continue!!!



Author's Response:

Next chapter soon :D

Reviewer: cabagepatch1023 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2013 07:02 am Title: CHAPTER 1 | Beautiful Stranger

They both indenial! They both know they like each other and want each other as bad as the silly rabbit off trix commercial wants its trix cereal. LOL. Good chapter girl!



Author's Response:

It's obvious that Michael wants Harper and she is not feeling him... yet! ;)

"want each other as bad as the silly rabbit off trix commercial wants its trix cereal."

Reviewer: makingmichaelmagic Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2013 05:24 am Title: CHAPTER 3 | Goodnight

AS IN!!!!!



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Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2013 05:19 am Title: CHAPTER 3 | Goodnight

hehe you can see that they are both want each other sooo much



Author's Response:

I can feel it !

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