Date: Jul 18, 2013 04:15 am Title: CHAPTER 10 | Say yes
Lisa not even cute she look more strong in the face than Michael. Her manly ass face. And that's what Harper gets for developing feeling and not expressing it to Michael. How u gunna pass up beautiful sexy talented man? But Harper can still get Michael I think....
Author's Response:
LMAO! Harper likes Michael but I think it's too early to call it feelings, love feelings! But it may have evolved this way, who knows?
Date: Jul 18, 2013 02:50 am Title: CHAPTER 10 | Say yes
Awww Nooo .. i want Harper to be with Michael :(
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2013 12:25 am Title: CHAPTER 9 | Foreplay
you should write both sex scenes and put it one chapter to make everybody 1382374% more uncomfortable lmfao. funny to see how readers react.
Author's Response:
LMAO! The last thing I want is making them uncomfortable lol
[Report This]Date: Jul 15, 2013 09:48 pm Title: CHAPTER 9 | Foreplay
Seriously I could do without a sex from either of them. I don't like Lisa Marie in fiction or real life so I don't want that image in my head. Til this very day I gag when I see that clip of Michael with his tongue down her throat at the MTV awards, it makes me sick. And although "You are not alone" is a beautiful song I can't watch the video because she's half naked in it. Even listening to the song brings the image to my mind, ugh. I will never understand what he saw in her, smh.
Sorry to disappoint Annie but I'm for team Michael & Harper. But sense it's only one month into their agreement I know I'll be waiting for a while before they realize what they feel for each.
Author's Response:
Don't apologize pretty Vicki! The last thing I want is making you uncomfortable. Truth to be told, I think I would be uncomfortable writing it lol! Well, if you want that Harper/Michael sex scene, get ready to wait haha :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 15, 2013 08:08 pm Title: CHAPTER 1 | Beautiful Stranger
To answer your question my love: I'm a hopeless romantic Smoochy baby. When it happens I want it all vanilla. I'm not comfortable with a sex scene with Harper/Ethan or Lisa/Michael...i want the ideal, the delusional sexy witty classy romantic Harper/Michael sex scene...in the story
Author's Response:
And I can't blame you! But for that precious, Harper/Michael sex scene, you would have to wait, wait and wait again ;)
[Report This]Date: Jul 15, 2013 08:03 pm Title: CHAPTER 9 | Foreplay
OPTION C love: I would be more comfortable with 'Harper and Michael'
Author's Response:
And they need to fall in love before? Oh well, you will have to wait to chapter 50 lol or 69...
Date: Jul 15, 2013 05:47 pm Title: CHAPTER 9 | Foreplay
I rather have a damn Harper/Ethan sex scene than Lisa. With Lisa that like going through the seven gate's of hell. Keep going. I hope Lisa go down just like the population of the grinch who stole christmas.
Author's Response:
"With Lisa that like going through the seven gate's of hell."
"I hope Lisa go down just like the population of the grinch who stole christmas." BYE!
Date: Jul 15, 2013 05:21 pm Title: CHAPTER 9 | Foreplay
I definitely don't wanna read a sex scene with Michael and Elvis face, I am sorry. I wouldn't mind reading one about Harper and Ethan though. But I don't want the visual of Elvis face and Michael doing it. Eww. I hope he visualizes Harper while its happening too! And I hope Michael lets Lisa believe he and Harper were having sex when she walked past his door. Good, that's what her ass gets. Harper needs to get some though, that girl is having wet dreams like she's a dude. Ethan just needs to give her some sex already. Like someone else said, I just don't trust Elvis in a wig. She's gonna hurt Michael. I just feel it. She is trifling and she views this shit as a game! Why does she keep saying she's "won"? You ugly bitch, no one is competing! Furthermore if she were, Harper wins by a mile! Harper is a gorgeous woman and doesn't look like the alleged father of rock n roll.. And yes I said alleged because Elvis was a thief and extremely overrated. Anyway, I think too that Michael is gonna fall in love with Harper first too. I can tell that Michael is tryna convince himself that Lisa is the one for him. That's not good. And Lisa's sour, flat chested ass is just saying whatever she can to try to put herself "ahead". This is a game to her so of course she will lie to him about having his children. Complete LIE. I wish Michael would wake the hell up. This is so tragic. Smh
Author's Response:
You are not alone! LOL, no one wants a Michael/Lisa sex scene. And don't be sorry. I had to ask you how you feel about it! HAHA! Someone needs to let Harper have it already before she gets purple ovaries lol! Lisa is trying to won the game and not Michael! Let's see in the next chapter if Lisa "wins" or not lol! Thank you for the review!
I feel you on Elvis Presley. Totally!
Date: Jul 15, 2013 04:36 pm Title: CHAPTER 9 | Foreplay
Ahahahaha that was a Good chapter. Lol michael was so turned on lol. It seems like they both are delveloping little feelIngs for one another... i mean harper was kkinda disastfied that lisa was even at neverland (because she might be jealous but not know it yet and wont fess up to it) no just kidding. But lol it seems like Michael was struggling seeing harper do what she was doing LoL. Like "i want to pounce on her , but it woould be wrong." LOL.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you noticed that Harper was a little bit upset at Lisa around Neverland!
[Report This]Date: Jul 15, 2013 04:04 pm Title: CHAPTER 9 | Foreplay
I could really do without the Michael-Lisa sex scene, yuck. At least make sure Harper and Ethan have one if Michael and Lisa do so I can get the image of Lisa naked out of my mind.
I have a bad feeling about Lisa in this story she's such a delusional hoe. She's going to hurt Michael. She doesn't care about him. I don't get why he'd even be interested in her if he has to get another woman to grab her attention. Also, who wants a woman who was willing to step out on her marriage? She's all about playing games and she's going to play him. I hope you don't make him marry her in this story. Yes, it happened in real life but there was no Harper in real life.
Author's Response:
Hey girl!! LMAO, I am going to follow your advice. It is true that Harper didn't exist! Actually I am still debating whether they should get married or not in this story ;)
Date: Jul 15, 2013 04:02 pm Title: CHAPTER 1 | Beautiful Stranger
i would like a harper and michael sex scene :P
Author's Response:
LMAO, just like everybody else ;) But are you completely uncomfortable with Harper/Ethan or Michael/Lisa?
Date: Jul 15, 2013 03:48 pm Title: CHAPTER 9 | Foreplay
Harper and Michael are beautiful! But they are both soo clueless. Why would u fall for Elvis twin and Harper, Michael is everything! Ethan is good lookin but Michael...is all that and a bag of chips lol u know what I mean Annie girl!
Author's Response:
HAHAHA! I know y'all want Harper and Mike together but hey, their heart is somewhere else
Date: Jul 15, 2013 03:39 pm Title: CHAPTER 9 | Foreplay
Michael and harper, please!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
So, should I take it that you are uncomfortable if I write a sex scene between harper/ethan or Michael/Lisa ?
Date: Jul 14, 2013 12:19 am Title: CHAPTER 8 | All by Myself
Oh so now this hoe wanna I move in!!!! Lisa is just real dehydrated for real!!! Like I said who is she besides Elvis twin? Lmao
Author's Response:
HAHAH @ dehydrated! Lisa's thrist is real!
Date: Jul 13, 2013 11:12 pm Title: CHAPTER 8 | All by Myself
Lisa is being a thirsty bitch. Michael better not let that ho move in Neverland! Neverland is a place of beauty, magic, and wonderment. Everything that is the complete opposite of that hag. Why don't she take her ass and move into Graceland, cut her hair and do impersonation's of her father for the tourists that visit? Smh. Sick of this Elvis faced ho already. Ugh! She doesn't need to move in Neverland, she has no business doing so. Michael needs to stop being so damn soft. She just wants to take over and he's gonna let her? Grow a pair Michael. Damn. Anyway, them singing and playin around is cute! It's moments like that where love begins.. When you can let your hair down and just be with that perpsn. Just being goofy, uninhibited and free like that.. Those moments are important. I think Michael is gonna fall in love with her. He may not know it yet, but he will. They seem to have a really god friendship and that's the foundation right there. I think Katherine and them see it too. I bet they all like Harper now seeing how easily she makes Michael laugh and smile. They have the potential to be such an amazing couple. Sigh. And why is Ethan being messy anyway? Smh. Look at him, starting stuff. And I don't think he likes Harper as much as she likes him. Idk.. Hmm.
Author's Response:
Hey Kat! Lisa has no respect lol? She already thinks she owns the place and Michael.
"Why don't she take her ass and move into Graceland, cut her hair and do impersonation's of her father for the tourists that visit?"
Harper and Michael are cute together. Too bad they had to meet only for a publicity stunt. It's harder and harder for Michael to fight is feeling! I think he will be the first who will fall in love
"And I don't think he likes Harper as much as she likes him. Idk.. Hmm."
