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Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2013 02:23 pm Title: CHAPTER 12 | Close

I just can't. Elvis in drag knows Harper's name. Harlow, really? Weak ass shade from an even weaker bitch. And Michael is so damn dense it's ridiculous. I just can't. Harper needs to keep her cool though. Like I said before, she's part of the damn problem. Had she had some sense the first time, this shit wouldn't even be happening. Now Michael wants to be her friend again. How long before he drops her again to appease his ugly punk ass wife? Harper is not gonna be second fiddle. I'm annoyed now. Ugh. 

 




Author's Response:

Hey Kat ;) That's too bad Harper's feelings for Michael didn't grow as rapidly as Michael's one for her :S And now she is regretting it!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2013 02:20 pm Title: CHAPTER 12 | Close

Oh, and Ethan just needs to go away then. If he's not on the same page with her as far as what she wants and his freedom is more important, then they need to cut ties. It's obvious her feelings are involved and they aren't reciprocated. She needs to date someone who wants exactly what she wants. She deserves to be in a happy relationship too. 



Author's Response:

Too bad Ethan wasn't the one for her, and indeed he needs to leave. But maybe he will come back later in the story ... ^^

Reviewer: KekeJackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2013 01:29 pm Title: CHAPTER 12 | Close

Well she is screwed wind and junk food hope he didn't bring the hard stuff....( please let it be son hardcore wine I'm waiting for their little pop to come out the popcorn gosh I'm just gonna calm down) WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY?! Did he marry Lisa nod hats what you get for denying th power of the force. Oh I'm done. Girl we know how yo ask feels right now it's no joke you start denying and teasing like mike ain't ISP he lnlijoijnsdojnfowjhbfo. Then we distract our self. Mmm Johnny depp he fine too. But they got some stuff in common like dang. Then we fall ass deep and then when he finds somebody else KABOOOM!!! We just went forget you mike and then just wait till the relationship goes to dynomite disaster then... I'll be theeeerrreee ill bee theeeerrreee you can come on over to my house and ship ill be there just let me changed baby!! :D 

 

i am such a dang trip... 



Author's Response:

LMAOOOO! Sorry, but this is regular wine lol! But I can't promise they won't get too crazy... ;)

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2013 12:11 pm Title: CHAPTER 11 | Help

Michael has become that friend that makes you cringe every time they call. Everyone has one. A friend who constantly seeks your advice but then constantly ignores it or does crazy shit that makes no sense. After a certain point you just want to slap them. His relationship with Lisa is like watching a train derail in slow motion. You know that the crash is going to be spectacular and that people are going to get hurt but there's nothing you can do to stop it. I have friends in relationships like this and they even realize it's bad or they are with the wrong person but they are so afraid to be alone or have such low self-esteem that they just go along with it. Then when it inevitably blows up in their face they tell you "I should have listened to your advice" or even better "why didn't you say anything?" There is only so much that can be said and done for such friends before you just give up in frustration. Smh. Michael is going to learn the hard way and when he looks back at his relationship with Lisa he is going to think he was on crack the whole time. I feel sorry for him but I don't. This is what you get when you settle for the first person who comes along. Lisa's thirsty ass basically threw herself at him and he didn't need to put in any effort. She in turn will tire of him now that the challenge is gone. 


I had to laugh at Michael showing up at Harper's door like that. I sense the beginnings of Daddy Michael level thirst. 



Author's Response:

I agree. Michael wanted a relationship and if Harper would have shown interested in him earlier, she would have been with him: Michael wanted a family so bad that he chose to be with the first person that agreed. And that was Lisa... And I can't wait for Michael to tell Harper "why didn't you say anything?" so that she could smack him lol. I think he deffo needs a slap in the face.

HAHAHA! Michael loves to show up unexpectly at Harper's place. And I agree, he is thristy! But this time for friendship! :)

Thank you for the review love :)

Reviewer: BestOfJoy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2013 10:07 pm Title: CHAPTER 11 | Help

Harper I love you so much. Michael is gonna go through the seven gate's of hell and will face so much pain that can last a lifetime. I just hope he learn im done I can't no more.

Team # Harper



Author's Response:

Hahah! I am team Harper all the way too :)

Reviewer: BestOfJoy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2013 09:57 pm Title: CHAPTER 10 | Say yes

At time's like this Michael need lord I just want to snatch his ass so bad and punch the piss out of him.

Michael your ass gonna get played by Lisa.

Also Michael did I tell you I see Lisa at the strip club hanging on a pole with her chicken beast out shaking them like they going somewhere she only got to damn cherrie's that aint gonna grow.

LMAO im too damn much.



Author's Response:

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Yes, he needs help

"Also Michael did I tell you I see Lisa at the strip club hanging on a pole with her chicken beast out shaking them like they going somewhere she only got to damn cherrie's that aint gonna grow." DEAD

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Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2013 07:50 pm Title: CHAPTER 11 | Help

Yep. I said it before. Harper needs to take a step back and give Michael some breathing room. He is totally rushing his relationship with that Elvis head and it's gonna blow up in his face big time. They were no where NEAR ready for marriage! And now he's married her? Smh. He's so damn desperate that he's blind. I almost feel sorry for him but I don't. Despite his childlike ways and sometimes naïveté, Michael is a grown ass man. He's gonna learn the error of his ways the hard way. Lisa is not the woman for him. The petty fights they were having before was only the beginning. Harper needs to focus on herself and possibly develop a relationship of her own with Ethan. Let Michael's ass suffer with Elvis in drag. I can't wait til he sees her for what she really is. And I can't wait til he sees that she doesn't want to have children with him. Any woman who will fuck around with a man while she's still married to one is NOT to be trusted. She will do the same thing to Michael once she's tired of him and the thrill of being with the King of Pop is over. She likes the attention. She's trash! Truthfully speaking, Lisa is not woman enough for Michael. She can't accept him for who and what he is, so she will try to change him. And that's when the problems will really get bad. Harper shall get the last laugh! But I partially blame her because if her ass had showed interest from the beginning, she could be his girl right now. Sigh. Michael is so desperate. 



Author's Response:

I CANT WAIT FOR MICHAEL TO SEE THE MISTAKE IS HE MAKING TOO! And especially while Harper will be happy with someone else lol!

"But I partially blame her because if her ass had showed interest from the beginning, she could be his girl right now" I think Harper didn't like Michael at a when they first met and the more she got to know him, the more she liked him. But I think it woud have taken months for her to develop love for him. And the fatc that Lisa "win" definitely made those feeligs appears sooner! I think that's a good thing that Michael is with Lisa because Harper is finally realizing that she wants Michael too. And not only for a friendship

Reviewer: VickiJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2013 06:52 pm Title: CHAPTER 11 | Help

I don't blame Harper for getting frustrated with Michael. I would have hung up on him too because I would not want to hear him go on about Lisa. We all know that the marriage is going to end in disaster. 



Author's Response:

Yes, that is sad right? It's going to be a disaster but for who? That's fanfiction

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Reviewer: makingmichaelmagic Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2013 06:12 pm Title: CHAPTER 11 | Help

is Harper a friend. going to a lover of Michael or a foe....smh



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Reviewer: glitterpix Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2013 05:57 pm Title: CHAPTER 1 | Beautiful Stranger

well hot dam and a skipidy flip :/



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LOL, indeed

Reviewer: VickiJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2013 07:53 am Title: CHAPTER 10 | Say yes

I'm so sad now 😢but the heart wants what it wants and you have to follow it, sigh 😒.  I hope Michael and Harper really do stay friends. 



Author's Response:

Indeed. Michael loves Lisa but it isn't that deep. He might be forcing it and believes that he will fall in love with her later. Let's see if they stay friends ;)

Reviewer: BestOfJoy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2013 06:19 pm Title: CHAPTER 1 | Beautiful Stranger

Michael make me want to slap the piss out of him Annie.

Why does he do this to us?



Author's Response:

Because he is a fool to settle with Lisa and not trying harder with Harper!

Reviewer: makingmichaelmagic Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2013 10:35 am Title: CHAPTER 10 | Say yes

Love that we cannot have is the one that lasts the longest, hurts the deepest and feels the strongest...it is when you shed a tear and still want him, it's when he ignores you and you still love him, it's when he loves another girl but you still smile and say I'm happy for you, when all you really do is cry... Have you ever been in love? Horrible isn't it? It makes you so vulnerable. It opens your chest and it opens up your heart and it means that someone can get inside you and mess you up. You build up all these defenses, you build up a whole suit of armor, so that nothing can hurt you, then one stupid person, no different from any other stupid person, wanders into your stupid life...You give them a piece of you. They didn't ask for it. They did something dumb one day, like kiss you or smile at you, and then your life isn't your own anymore. Love takes hostages. It gets inside you. It eats you out and leaves you crying in the darkness, so simple a phrase like 'maybe we should be just friends' turns into a glass splinter working its way into your heart. It hurts. Not just in the imagination. Not just in the mind. It's a soul-hurt, a real gets-inside-you-and-rips-you-apart pain. I hate love.




Author's Response:

That's a beautiful review you wrote but I think it's too early to think about love. Harper began to like Michael, maybe more than as a friend, but she isn't falling for him... Yet

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2013 08:44 am Title: CHAPTER 10 | Say yes

Seriously????????? 



Author's Response:

YES *crying*

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Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2013 08:39 am Title: CHAPTER 10 | Say yes

Wow.. One weekend with Elvis' incarnate and he wants to end the contract? I guess. I just can't wait til this blows up in his face. Lisa is evil and I think Harper should keep her distance from him for awhile. Michael needs to see that ho for what she really is. He's blinded right now because he thinks that's what he wants. He's obviously desperate for a wife, and thinks that Elvis face fits the bill. Nope. But he will soon see. I can't wait til he starts becoming miserable with her and starts missing Harper. I think Harper was starting to like Michael. Maybe not as much as he likes her, but in the beginning stages at least. At least Ethan finally gave her some! Lol. And I like they she's not getting attached to him either. She's just having fun, nothing too serious. But who knows? they may start dating. Lisa thinks she's "won" but in reality she still lost because Harper is still more gorgeous (duh) but more so because Michael is SETTLING. And Harper connects with Michael in a way she can't. Michael is childlike and likes to have fun; and Harper has fun with him. She doesn't judge him for it either. Lisa is gonna put him down, call him childish, etc. I can see it now. I hope he thinks of Harper every time he's with that hag! Harper could be the homie, lover, friend all in one that Michael needs and Lisa can never be. 



Author's Response:

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EXACTLY!

Harper bette not direct her feelings to Ethan and ruin what they have! Let's see how Michael/Lisa and Harper/Ethan relationship evolve

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