Date: Jul 29, 2013 11:23 pm Title: CHAPTER 14 | Trading Places
ugh, i just want to get rid of lisa right now :s
Author's Response:
LMAO! Not now ;)
Date: Jul 29, 2013 06:54 pm Title: CHAPTER 14 | Trading Places
Yasssssss Harper has a man!!! And he's cute! Will Smith in the 90s was a cutie pie! I love it. Yasssss I'm ready to see The Thirst from Michael. I can't wait to see his reaction when he finds that Harper has a man now. I think her and Will are cute. He gets her and they have that same element of goofy childlike humor. Very cute. Harper and Will are gonna be all cute and lovey dovey at the awards while Elvis face and Michael will be miserable. She's gonna be a sour puss since she doesn't know where Michael is or where he's been. This shall be good! I really like the fact that Harper let him know she does have feelings for him but she's not gonna wait around for him and she's not asking him to leave Elvis face. Harper is gorgeous as hell and she's doing HER! And Will too. Lol. I can't wait. The fuckery is on now! Michael will seethe with jealousy and Elvis face will seethe will all of that and then some. I'm happy Harper and Janet are still cool too.
Author's Response:
YYYAAASSS
Haha! In this story no thristy Michael, but another kind of Michael. I'm still wondering what name to give him LOL!
YES! Harper and Will are going to have a lot of fun while Michael and Lisa will be like
Lisa : "I will kick your ass"
Michael : "Smile for the camera!"





Date: Jul 29, 2013 09:45 am Title: CHAPTER 13 | Hot & Cold
Harper had better not sleep with him while he's married to Elvis face. He was dumb enough to marry that ho so he needs to suffer the consequences. He's already tiring of the bitch, I'm sure that soon she will start banging her ex-husband if she isnt already and hopefully when Michael finds out he'll express ship her back to Graceland. Harper needs to let him finish the kiss, then stop him and let him know that she won't be a side piece to his hag wife. Tell him that she has feelings for him and regrets not acting on them sooner but can only be his friend until he divorces Lisa, which she knows he inevitably will. But also make clear to him that she won't be waiting on him to do it. That the more time he wastes with Lisa the more likely she is to find someone else. Then send him right back to his wife. That kiss will be just enough to torture him. Especially if Harper stays close friends with Michael and dates other men in the interim and makes sure Michael knows about it. Time to take a lesson from Kalli and induce The Thirst. It may require some patience on Harper's part but eventually Michael will be beating down her door. For his sake, hopefully it won't be too late.
Author's Response:
I didn't know what to write for the next chapter and you saved me LOL!





Date: Jul 29, 2013 08:40 am Title: CHAPTER 13 | Hot & Cold
Kikkkkkk I was right!!! Can I get a high five? ( looks at my invisible twin like heck naw) oh an that's a wrap. Brought me out of a bad place today.. Ever had a friend that says they pick you up but when I comes to that certain they just forget you even existed? ...that how I feel. I bet she feels the force and he wanna tap that he do.
AND THE KID IS NOT MY SON!!!!!! Woo! Glad mike and Lisa never had a kids or else that kid would look creepy as heck I mean it like Elvis spit Lisa out and (I'm shaking) well on to da next one!!!!!!!!!!! Mike get yo thrilla butt in her room and do drop that thun thun thun!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Aye oh my bad....
Author's Response:
Yes you can lol
Date: Jul 29, 2013 06:21 am Title: CHAPTER 13 | Hot & Cold
my goodness!!!
interesting, would love to read more for sure!!
Author's Response:
Next chapter up :)
Date: Jul 29, 2013 03:13 am Title: CHAPTER 13 | Hot & Cold
Oh, mu God! Great update!! This is a goooood night to begin...
Author's Response:
THANK YOUUUUUU
Date: Jul 29, 2013 01:15 am Title: CHAPTER 13 | Hot & Cold
It's about to go down
Author's Response:
Date: Jul 28, 2013 11:17 pm Title: CHAPTER 13 | Hot & Cold
IAwwwww she kissseddd him ! How sweeet.... I really shouldnt be tripping because it was just a peck. But stilll awwwww. I bet Michael was dying in the inside. XD hes like "she lovesssssss me yessss !" Lol to Michael that probably brought meaning to his life. XD a plain ole kisss.n
Author's Response:
hahaha! Michael must have been so excited! Kind of like this
LOL
Date: Jul 28, 2013 09:15 pm Title: CHAPTER 13 | Hot & Cold
Oh lawd. They are both moving into some dangerous territory now. Michael shouldn't have married Lisa Marie. Period. Now he sees she ain't shit and what's even more messed up is the fact that he's using Harper as his escape route. Negro NO. Just no. That in itself is wrong. Before when he thought he was gonna be eternally happy with that Elvis faced hag, he could care less about Harper and what was goin on with her. Now when things get shitty with her, all of a sudden Harper is his BFF again and he wants to be all in her face? Really? Fuck off Michael. You will NOT use this girl because you made a fuckin mistake in marrying that worthless slut. And Harper needs to have a seat too. I'm sick of her mouth and complaints about him marrying Elvis head and how it coulda been her at Neverland and blah blah blah. Bitch we've been saying that from jump! Now all of a sudden you see what you missed out on and let him marry this ho, you realize you want to be with him. And that kiss is wrong on both ends. Harper knows he's married and she's too beautiful to make herself the side chick to Lisa's fugly ass. And Michael does NOT deserve to have his cake and eat it too. And Michael is wrong for wanting more than a kiss because he's fuckin drunk and he's still married to that hag. Cuz when it's all said and done he's gonna go right BACK to her! Ugh I can't!!!! I'm sick of BOTH of them at this point. I seriously am. I'm done with him and Harper. This is gonna be a damn mess.
Author's Response:
Hey Kat! I'm sorry you hate everybody in this story lol! You're abcolutely right; he is Harper's friend only when it's convenient. And Harper is confused. She wants Michael but she knows she can't have him! She is acting like Lisa did... Not cool. Next chapter up, I hope you will love Harper again... Or Janet maybe lol. Thank you for the review girl ;)





Date: Jul 26, 2013 09:32 am Title: CHAPTER 12 | Close
Harper seems lonely because she isn't getting what she needs from Ethan. If she wants a relationship and he won't give her one she needs to ditch him and find someone who will.
Please don't write any more scenes involving Lisa Marie and the removal of her panties. I don't like the taste of vomit.
I can't wait until Michael wakes up and sees what a bitch Lisa really is. And I can't wait to see her reaction when she finds out about the contract and that she actually didn't "win" anything. Stupid ho.
Every chapter I read about Michael's "relationship" with Lisa is just painful. I can't wait until it's over.
Author's Response:
Hey you :DD. I swear this is the last time I write a scene like this lol. I bet everybody cringed while reading this! It will be very interesting to see how Lisa reaction once she knows about the contract! I can wait to write this scene :)
Date: Jul 26, 2013 12:51 am Title: CHAPTER 12 | Close
Excellent one!!! Hope for the next one soon!!
Maybe this sleepover is gonna be more than " make up" friendchips....
Author's Response:
Y'all want this sleepover to turn into a hot angry makeup sex sleepover LOL! Maybe yes, maybe not ...
Date: Jul 25, 2013 09:00 pm Title: CHAPTER 12 | Close
But as long as he is with her, Harper thinks it’s enough. She won’t fall for him...
Once I hit that last sentence I shook my head and said.........
THAT'S A DAMN LIE
Author's Response:
LOL! I think it is too ;)





Date: Jul 25, 2013 06:41 pm Title: CHAPTER 12 | Close
Harper, Harper, Harper girl what are you doing? I don't think she had any right to be mad at Ethan when she are the rules for the relationship. Ethan on the other hand should have been real with Harper once he realized she wanted more. I think she wanted to hear Michael's voice and just used the excuse of getting Ethan fired just to talk to him. Lisa is such a bitch, Harper try's to be civil with her the least she can do is give the same respect even though she don't like her. And why is she questioning the reason for Harper's phone? I know she don't that to every female that calls for Michael. She's not going to like when she finds out he's sleeping over at Harper's place. I hope Michael keeps the friendship with Harper going this time and not disappoint her again. Poor Harper is falling for Michael and he doesn't even realize it. Funny how the heart wants what's already gone and belongs to someone else.
"You are not Alone. This song is definitely her favorite of the album but now that she saw the video, she is disgusted. Whenever she hears the song, she imagines Lisa and Michael’s half naked body flirting with the other. It made Harper highly uncomfortable."
Oh Harper I feel your pain cause that's exactly what go through everytime I hear "You Are Not Alone" too.
Author's Response:
Hey Vicki :D Harper and Ethan are both wrong and since they aren't feelings the same way about the other, it's time for them to part. I'm glad you caught that; Harper missed Michael so much that she would have invented any excuses to hear his voice. If my man received a call from another girl I would be upset but I think I'll be mad if it was a call from his ex girlfriend. Lisa still doesn't know about the contract!
HAHA! I feel you lol. This video music is so painful to see lol
Date: Jul 25, 2013 04:32 pm Title: CHAPTER 12 | Close
"Maybe this person behind the door is the right man for her.Harper walks to the door and opens it. She hopes it is good news. “Love!” Michael exclaims “I missed you so much!” he adds walking in her house “I brought junk food, movies, pepsi and my apologies”
Yes he is the right man for her!!! All she need to do is get rid of this Elvis look alike and we all good to go lol
Author's Response:
LOOOL! I think it will take more time for Harper to figure out if Michael is the man of he life or not ^^
Date: Jul 25, 2013 02:43 pm Title: CHAPTER 12 | Close
Sooooo harper lied just so she can be with ethan. Gosh I dobt wanna day this but harperrf is justtt to thirsty for ethan though. It seemz like Michael and harper are getting real close though. Thats nicee. they went from sorta "I cant stand yo ass.! " fromm getting real closee. What ann improvement! Cant wait for next chapther annie!
Author's Response:
LMAO! Harper wanted Ethan to be the man of his life so bad that she forgot that it was suppose to be a non strings attached relationship :S