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Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2013 08:38 pm Title: CHAPTER 16 | Showtime!

Harper and Will are so damn cute, I love it!!! They are like friends and lovers at the same time. Very sweet. And seems like they were a hit for the show too! And ahhhhh at Lenny Kravitz kissin Harper. Lucky heaux! Lmao. Man this was eventful. And boooo at Michael. Now he wants to apologize? Harper needs to tell him to kick rocks. I hope she serves his pure poker face if she meets his ass at his dressing room. I hope she acts just as foul with him as he did with her. And lmao at Elvis in drag being pissed. Purely hilarious. Won't she be in his dressing room afterwards too? Smh I can't. I really hope Harper won't be all accommodating to him and overly coddling. To hell with that. She needs to be firm and rigid and make his ass work for her forgiveness. He can take that half assed apology and shove it up his narrow (sexy) ass. 



Author's Response:

IKR! Harper had a blask and she even kissed Lenny Kravitz! If that was me...

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I don't think Michael apologize will enough for Harper this time. That's what? The 3rd time he apologizes for ignoring her. Not today dude!

LMAO, if I was Lisa, I think I would have even more pissed lol!

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2013 06:34 pm Title: CHAPTER 16 | Showtime!

Awwww I knew Michael was gunna apologize 



Author's Response:

Weak ass apology I have to say!

Reviewer: rahelicious Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 02, 2013 06:56 am Title: CHAPTER 1 | Beautiful Stranger

please keep writinng:))

Author's Response:

I will :)

Reviewer: SunniVan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 02, 2013 01:38 am Title: CHAPTER 2 | Approach

MOVING IN?!?!?!?!?!

lmao!!!

Oh WOW!!! hahahahaha!!! 

I know she wasn't expecting him to say THAT!

 



Author's Response:

I almost forgot I wrote that lol! Thank you for the review :)

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2013 09:32 am Title: CHAPTER 15 | She's a wildflower

Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!! she must talk to him after the show, please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I'll see what I can do lol ;)

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2013 09:24 am Title: CHAPTER 15 | She's a wildflower

Also, that GIF at the end had me sweating. I want to do indescribable things to that man in that outfit, with that hair. 



Author's Response:

I knooooow. Sex on legs

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Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2013 09:19 am Title: CHAPTER 15 | She's a wildflower

Michael is just like a kid, throwing a tantrum when he doesn't get his way. Baby Michael. Well, it isn't Harper's job to change his poopy diapers (especially when they're made of that shiny black latexy material). Nope, the person who is responsible for those is his WIFE. He seems to have forgotten all about her. Can't say as I blame him, but he can't expect Harper to wait around for his married ass. 

I hope Janet can talk some sense into him.

He'll get over his little snit and come crawling back when he misses Harper too much not to. I hope she doesn't make it too easy for him. And he'd better get on his knees and apologize for being such a douche.

That whole phone conversation at the beginning of this chapter showed how in love they both are with each other. Talking about love flowers. So obvious to an outside observer yet they are oblivious. 



Author's Response:

Michael really thought Harper would save herself until he finally decides to get a divorce. Poor dat. Just like iam_music said, Janet needs to read Michael lol! But she doesn't know everythin about their situation but it's obvious that Michael still loves her very much. I will love to see Michael begging for Harper's forgiveness lol. And he will, because at this point she shouldn't care about Michael's feelings. She has a man, she is happy, she doesn't need Michael's dramatic ass.

"So obvious to an outside observer yet they are oblivious. "

Exactly

Reviewer: VickiJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2013 12:04 am Title: CHAPTER 15 | She's a wildflower

Harper is right she is young, beautiful and deserving of a good man. Will seems to be a good fit for her and she looks to be happy. I'm not surprised at Michael's behavior towards her at the award show he's hurt and angry but really doesn't have a right to be. His marriage is not working, he still has feelings for Harper, and he still has to get up on stage act like none of it is affecting him. These are only a few things that are about to take place in his life that will lead to chaos, smh. 

P.S. I have say Michael looks super rapeable at AMAs that year. The outfit, the walk, and sheer confidence he showed was so damn sexy. 



Author's Response:

 Michael is a baby lol. His way or no way! But I understand why he is upset, like you said, his marriage is not working, he has feelings for Harper and get on stage and look as if everything was ok. It feels like it's never the right time for Harper and Michael.

I knooow, Michael is just so

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Reviewer: KekeJackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2013 09:51 pm Title: CHAPTER 15 | She's a wildflower

Well dang (even though he look sexy af in that jacket) at least now he knows how she felt when he revealed the wedding. Mikes fault. But he looks hot when he mad an stuff making me wanna drool



Author's Response:

Yup, payback! Michael looked extra good that night!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2013 08:44 pm Title: CHAPTER 15 | She's a wildflower

Chile boo!!!! I say Michael deserves a reading of epic proportions! He's got a lot of damn nerve to be mad and act like a sore loser sour puss because Harper has a man now. It's not her fault his desperate ass decided to settle for Elvis in drag, cuz that's EXACTLY what he did. Settle! Now that the grass ain't so green on the other side, he runs to Harper with the woe is me shit. And Harper admitted her feelings to him which is good, but she also made it clear she wasn't gonna wait for his ass, and she shouldn't have! She didn't ask him to divorce the ho he's with, so she didn't need to be waiting for him or saving herself for him. Fuck that! When he was all seemingly happy with Lisa, he tossed Harper aside like dirty drawers. Now the tables are turned and she has someone, he can't deal with it?! Well too fucking bad!!!! Nobody gives a fuck Michael. That's what you get for marrying that worthless trash. I hope Harper or Janet reads his ass. Matter of fact, I hope Janet does it. He needs to be told about himself. He didn't have to totally ignore her like that. But it's ok. I hope Harper ignores his ass and has fun with her boo Will ALL night, right in Michael's face. And if he so much tries to speak to her, I hope she ignores the living shit outta him. If it was me, I'd read his ass so good, he'd probably start crying. I really hope Will and Harper are extra cute and lovey dovey throughout hosting the show. Rub it in his face. 



Author's Response:

Janet knows what she has to do

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I bet Michael is regretting everything! You don't know what you got til it's gone. When he was happy with LMP, he didn't care about Harper but when stuff got rough, he wanted her friendship back. Payback!

Oh don't worry, I have the feeling Janet will make him cry with her read lol!

Reviewer: msemjaybaby Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2013 08:32 pm Title: CHAPTER 15 | She's a wildflower

Michael is sooo sexy in that clip, I spent 5 minutes just looking at it replay over and over before reading the rest and the proceeded to spend another minute analyzing the sexiness of it.



Author's Response:

YYAAASS

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Reviewer: BestOfJoy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2013 08:19 pm Title: CHAPTER 15 | She's a wildflower

Damn it Michael.

Harper you need to talk to Michael they both need to talk and maybe janet can help them but Michael should learn to accept that Harper is in a relationship. I mean Michael salty for that shit and I understand that he angry but did Harper get mad because he move in a relationship so fast yes but no. But the least he can do is be happy for her because Harper didn't ignore him just like that but when he was kissing Lisa ass that's when Harper was like fuck it. I mean that's some cold salty down low ass shit .

Michael grow up.

Annie did you fangirl when you saw that gif cause I did like a mother fucker he looked so sexy in these four color's black,red,white and gold and those Ray band's lord im dead.



Author's Response:

Yes, Michael needs to grow up. I think he needed to realize that Harper isn't disposable and she won't wait for his ass to leave Lisa. If Michael cares for Harper, he will apologize and be happy they are still friends!

Are you kidding me?! I was more than fangirling I was....

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Reviewer: BestOfJoy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2013 08:02 pm Title: CHAPTER 1 | Beautiful Stranger

Will Smith is here.

:0 :)

All I know is that man is FIONE is like he never age.

Man im gonna be like "Lord please forgive me for I sin".



Author's Response:

YYYEEESSS, THE FRESH PRINCE IS HERE!

Reviewer: SunniVan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2013 04:54 pm Title: CHAPTER 1 | Beautiful Stranger

******************NEW READER ALERT!!!*******************

Hi AnnieBoo!!

I started this story today because I've been wanting to get around to it for a minute, and I'm so glad I did!

I'm totally intrigued!

I love the idea of Harper having a negative image of Michael.  Proving himself to her will be quite the journey...

She had her little stank attitude at first

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I can't wait to read further to find out what happens!

 



Author's Response:

HEY SUNNI!

I'm glad you're reading this story and you like the idea!!! I guess I'll see you on the next chapter ;)

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Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2013 08:37 am Title: CHAPTER 14 | Trading Places

Yay for Harper! Glad she's found someone to make her happy. She's too good of a catch to wait around for any man whether it be Ethan or Michael. It sounds like Will is more than willing to put in the work necessary to get her. Michael should take notes.  

I hope Janet voices some of her thoughts about Harper to Michael. That would be the icing on the cake: watch Harper with another man, spend the evening arguing with his witch of a wife, and then have his sister ask "why did you let that girl go?" 

The only possible way for Michael to answer that question: "Because I'm an idiot."

I can't wait to see Michael seethe. To further drive the point home, Harper should now call him relentlessly to talk about her relationship with Will. Karma is a cruel mistress. 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for inspiring me for this chapter! I actually didn't know what to write after! Now I know exactly how it's going to be for the rest of the story :D

I hope Janet voices some of her thoughts about Harper to Michael. That would be the icing on the cake: watch Harper with another man, spend the evening arguing with his witch of a wife, and then have his sister ask "why did you let that girl go?" I Michae will be screaming internally

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HAHAHA! I would love to see Harper flaunting her relationship with Will and talk about how happy she is to Michael lol

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