[Report This]Date: Mar 08, 2015 10:26 pm Title: Dearest Monster
Yas! You updated again :) Any hopes of 2000 Watts getting update as well (yeah, my ass is greedy)?
Random round of applause: Your spelling and grammar are ON.
West needs to catch a hint. He's going at her hard.I think he can catch a hint, but he's one of those fools who thinks that if he tries hard enough and keeps pushing, she'll suddenly like him. That rarely works on a meaningful level.
jkdsal;fdj Why can he not connect the hallucination of his mother with the simultaneous beating by the alpha? He's not actively delusional or psychotic, so I don't get why he can't make that connection and become more defiant. Especially since he is now fed. C'mon dude!
Your description of when he became animal and went hunting? Vivid, rich, and alive. Bravo
Author's Response:
It really makes me feel great that you enjoy 2000 Watts (and don't worry, I don't mind you being greedy) but as of right now, I just don't see myself updating it any time soon. I know key points and how that story ends, it's just getting there that's putting me off. I don't feel the motivation there, though I would like it finished.
Thank you for the applause! I try hard to achieve at least decent grammar while I'm writing, and I'm glad you think so, lool. :)
West is trying WAY too hard. If he's going for the subtle approach, I don't see how he hasn't noticed that it's coming off completely opposite, haha. There are some things about Michael's hallucinations that I will delve into later in the story...;)
Thank you for your lovely compliments. I can't begin to tell you what they mean to me.
Thanks for the review! :D <3
Date: Mar 06, 2015 06:25 am Title: No Rebelling
I'm really liking the story, but I'm also confused by the last two chapters. It feels like they are so so violent, and I'm not sure why it was necessary at this point. The degree to which that man just hurt him in that dungeon of sorts....the rage by Arianna towards Madeline.... Madeline's alienation and excessive fronting.... I'm assuming that I'll find that out in the future? Right now, I feel like I'm being teased....there is just constant pain on both sides and no sense of promise...11 chapters in. I hope it comes soon :/
Author's Response:
Arianna is angry toward Madison because of how brazen she is toward her and her family. She also feels jealous of her. The man torturing Michael...well, he's remaining a mystery for a reason. He will be explained in further detail -- along with some other things -- later on in the story. I can only hope you stick around to find out. I hope you enjoy the update. Thanks for the review! :D <3
Date: Mar 05, 2015 10:24 pm Title: Not Without Consequence
My stomach is in knots at this torture :(
Author's Response:
It is upsetting and quite excessive. Michael's rebellious nature doesn't sit well with "him", which results in more pain. Thanks for the review! :D <3
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2015 10:10 pm Title: Discomfort
The suspense! You have me totally impatiently waiting for a solid scene of Michael and the lead girl (sorry, her name hasn't been in the last 4 or 5 chapters). I want Ari out of his arms. Also, what is up with her saying that they are in love?! I take it that she is the one in love, because it sounds like she's just convenient for him.... I think Michael needs to grow up and notice that he's pretty damn narcissistic himself. I mean, his needs/wants are his priority, he doesn't care enough about his brother to change his behavior, and just judges everyone else. I hope some of that happens soon!
Author's Response:
I enjoy suspense. I like dragging things out so that when it finally happens, it's almost blissful, a breath of relief. It does seem like Ari has stronger feelings for Michael than he seems to possess for her. Which would explain her jealousy and animosity toward his consumption with Madison. Thanks for the review! :D <3
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2015 09:34 pm Title: Partnerships
Okay, I've (rudely) read all of this today, and wasn't going to comment b/c fantasy isn't my thing....only, I love it. I'm so curious about Michael's parents. I'm curious as to who will bend first...
The only character I'm really not feeling is Arianna. She's essentially a sex toy....
Still, I'm in and eager for your next update!
Author's Response:
I'm so so happy that you are enjoying it. Trust me, you aren't the only one/the first one who dislikes Ari, haha! It seems everyone is against her. I hope you continue to enjoy what I have to offer and I appreciate your feedback so much. Thanks for the reveiw! :D <3
[Report This]Date: Feb 13, 2015 09:08 pm Title: No Rebelling
Yes finally an update I missed my babies. Dude is a real jerk and needs an ass whooping or some serious help I can't wait till this so called punishment is over thanks for updating can't wait for the next one. 💋
Author's Response:
Haha, thank you lovebug! Can't express how much your support truly means to me and the smile it brings to my face. I hope you enjoy the update! Thanks for the review! :D <3
[Report This]Date: Feb 13, 2015 07:52 am Title: No Rebelling
I so do not like this man I was wondering if you would ever post a picture of what he looks like but there's really no need the guy is the devil. I notice how you really don't give him an actual name and describe him as this big Scary guy so I'm guessing you want to keep him a mistery which he very much is. I'm so curious to know who this man is, where did he come from, and if he played a part in the death of Michael's parents. I definitely noticed the differences and similarities in Madison and Michael's life that's why I can't wait until they finally stop hating each other and get together. That part where Madison described the way he would look at her with so much hate and disgust I felt so bad for her but I guess they need to go through this phase first before they come to realize that they need each other. They would be so cute together I'm already picturing their baby Lol.
Author's Response:
I promise, I will post a picture of him -- but in time. I am keeping him a mystery, along with some other things I'm waiting to go into full detail about. I'm glad you notice the similarities and differences! I was worried they wouldn't be too clear. Hahaha, I know, I can't wait for them to get closer either. LOL, they'd make a cute baby, I'm sure! Haha, thanks for the review! :D <3
Date: Feb 12, 2015 09:51 pm Title: No Rebelling
Yaay! Hope you post again soon, can't wait!! 💞
Author's Response:
Thanks sweetheart, hope you enjoy the update! Thanks for the review! :D <3
[Report This]Date: Feb 12, 2015 05:58 pm Title: No Rebelling
Yass another update and I got to say I'M surprise Mike held out for that long I would have been out my mind like seriously what is wrong with that guy? You can't just treat people like that then turn around and talk about their deceased mother and expect them not to retaliate. Great chapter can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response:
Yes, this guy is a complete sadist. He doesn't seem to feel any regret in "punishing" Michael and it's so sad what Michael is having to endure. Especially talking about his mother! Thanks for the review! :D <3
Date: Feb 01, 2015 04:47 pm Title: Changes
This seems promising. Also very well written. Great start....off to read more!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I hope you enjoy it. Thanks for the review! :D <3
[Report This]Date: Feb 01, 2015 01:55 am Title: Not Without Consequence
Omg I love this story please continue I hope Michael will be okay in the next chapter that wasn't his fault Clayton ran off what a jerk.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, sweetheart! I know, Michael shouldn't be punished for what the others being careless. I hope you enjoy the update! Thanks for the review! :D <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 30, 2015 10:07 pm Title: Changes
Ok so first of all, AHHHHHHHHHHHH! This is getting so good! The plot is thickening and i gotta say i love where its going. I am a HUGE fan of Chy and Clay (CC <--- It's meant to be!) he seems like such a gentleman and it looks like he and chyna have hit it off. Melanie is a lesbian??? I definitely didn't see that coming! And why'd you have to go and break my heart during that last scene? Poor mike, he shouldn't have to carry the burden of taking care of 3 young and moody teenagers when he is just a teen himself! Who is this creepy booming voice and why is everyone so afriad of him? I can't wait to find out! You've got me hooked so you better UPDATE SOON (No pressure)! Till next time :)
Author's Response:
Hahaha, I'm SO glad that you're loving it! As for Chyna and Clay: yep, I wonder where that's headed. They both seem to have such playful characters, so they could feed off of each other very well. And yes, Melanie is a lesbian, haha! And Michael, I couldn't agree more with you. He has way too much of a burden on his shoulders for his age. Hey, for anybody! Don't worry, Mr. Booming Voice will be introduced relatively soon, haha. ;) Update is here, and I hope you enjoy it! Let me know! Thanks for the review! :D <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2015 03:33 pm Title: Not Without Consequence
Hi I'm new here and let me first start off by saying that you are a great writer I absolutely love this story my friend Fatima told me about it. I also plan on reading 2000 Watts as well but this is going to be my first favorite one please continue I can't wait to see where you take this much love. 💛
Author's Response:
Awww, thank you so much! Yes, Fatima is a sweetheart. Thank you for also checking out 2000 Watts! I hope you enjoy that, as well as the update for Starlight! Thanks for the review! :D <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2015 03:17 pm Title: Not Without Consequence
Damn this was really deep their dad seems like a horrible person. Michael is a real jerk but I agree with MzMichaelJackson92 he didn't deserve that he acts like he has something against Michael because he treats the others some what better then he do him. He takes all his frustrations out on Michael it seems, like seriously chaining someone up to a damn wall just to hurt them physically and emotionally? What a creep. And did Clayton really just stalk Madison and her friends just to put the Mac down on Chyna? Lol they cute though. Great chapter hun can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response:
Yes, even though Michael has attitude, he definitely does not deserve what is happening to him. He's only a teenager. As for Clayton and the girls -- haha! I guess what Clayton wants, Clayton gets. ;) Can't wait to see where that takes them! I hope you enjoy the current update. Thanks for the review! :D <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2015 08:18 am Title: Not Without Consequence
Wow this was a really sensitive chapter to read you really got me in my feelings with this one it was really good in the beginning but then heartbreaking towards the end like I seriously wanted to cry he didn't deserve that. I think this chapter explains his reason for being the way he is. I dispise this "guy" more then I do Ari now he acts like the damn devil himyself what the hell does he do take them to the basement and torture them? My poor baby but Michael is strong I just hope he and Madison try to get along soon I have a feeling she might just be his angel.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it, lovebug! Yes, Michael getting the brunt of the anger is so sad. And him getting taken down to the basement? Heartbreaking! We'll see how it all pans out, though, and I hope youe enjoy the update! Thanks for the review! :D <3