[Report This]Date: Jun 01, 2013 07:23 am Title: Chapter 10
Oh jeez that goodbye was sad :( and then Andrew suggesting to watch MJ to make her feel better....boyyy he doesn't have a clue *sigh* I liked the background info on Aurora..it's better to understand her now.
[Report This]Date: Jun 01, 2013 06:57 am Title: Chapter 9
Wow...the story about her dad...that's heartbreaking. I can't believe that happened...wow. Now I understand completely why she separated herself from her family. And never mind about my review last chapter haha Andrew isn't a threat at all. After all, he said he cared about her like a sister....I think it's good michael and Aurora didn't go all the way. She was thinking that the reason why Brad did what he did was because she wouldn't give herself to him and she figured if she gave herself to MJ then he wouldn't follow in Brad's footsteps. It's good she stopped. And Michael was right...their first time being on a hotel cough? Ehhh lol
[Report This]Date: Jun 01, 2013 05:40 am Title: Chapter 8
Andrew seems nice! I like how much he cares for Aurora...hopefully his feelings just stay in the friend zone though lol ya never know with guy friends. And Michael is leaving :'( Those two definitely gotta figure out how they're gonna continue their little romance here.
[Report This]Date: May 31, 2013 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 7
Ooh Grace acting like the mommy in the beginning there. I understand her concern though...but it's Michael's decision who he wants to have around. He doesn't need her permission. Hopefully she won't be a problem later on hmm lol. And danggg Aurora and MJ get it on good lol too bad his kids keep interrupting ;) lol nah im kidding.
[Report This]Date: May 31, 2013 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 6
"Not strange, just cruelly judged" - i LOVE that. Glad Michael heard Aurora defend him too. And they're in love!! I was fangirling haha so sweet. The ending of this chapter...oh boy lol Passionate and loving :) It's great!
[Report This]Date: May 31, 2013 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 5
Your writing is so unbelievably amazing. I can picture everything so clearly and feel their emotions! Prince and Paris are the sweetest kids aww haha And it's so great that they took a liking to Aurora. The kiss she and Michael shared was so sweet. Not too aggressive and not too subtle....it was absolutely perfect. And I love how careful Michael was about advancing so he wouldn't make her uncomfortable...it's so sweet :)
[Report This]Date: May 31, 2013 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 4
Michael and Aurora are so cute together! At first i thought he was going to completely chicken out and not tell her then, but i'm SO glad he went after her. Aurora really took it well. I mean, if i was in her position I dont even know how i would react haha. And I was laughing as Michael's impure thoughts about wanting to join her in the shower haha Oh, boy. Yay she's coming back! :) Love this!
[Report This]Date: May 31, 2013 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 3
Michael's finally gonna see Aurora!! Oh my gosh i'm so excited! Love this!!
[Report This]Date: May 31, 2013 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
Woooow I can't believe Kendall did that. And that was a smart move that Aurora did by getting away from him. I wonder what the story is with Brad...hmmm, interesting. I love the concern MJ felt towards her. That was sweet and im glad she has him to talk to. Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: May 31, 2013 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
this is awesome! i love it already :)
[Report This]Date: May 31, 2013 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 4
Well, that went rather well and not too embarrassing :)
[Report This]Date: May 31, 2013 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 2
Bummer! Poor Aurors Every time I hear such stories I thank God I'm 5 ft.8 in. and skilled in martial arts!
[Report This]Date: May 31, 2013 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow what a cool idea! You know, I suspect he actually did stuff like that! Great storyline!
[Report This]Date: May 31, 2013 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Glad to see u here as well.
All I need now is for a completed "Butterflies" to be posted and I'll be your friend for life. Been waiting on the rest of this story for three years. **Smile**
Author's Response:
Hi LadyDee :)
I'll see what I can do :) Its never been finished actually. Gosh, I think I started Butterflies even before I was 18! An angry 16 yr old story! I think it was very close to the end as it was. We'll see.
[Report This]Date: May 31, 2013 11:56 am Title: Chapter 1
YESSSSSS!!!YOU'RE HERE!!
Please...this story needs a REAL GOOD BANNER!
I'm so glad you're posting this story here!
You made my day!Thank you!
Author's Response:
lol, hey Dri! I'll make a banner or something when I have a day off. I woke up at 3am (its now almost 6am) and couldn't get back to sleep, that's how long it took me to load the 51 chapters on to this site!