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Reviewer: MJ4EVER1980 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 25, 2015 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 29

This is a beautiful Story 10 stars

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 25, 2015 07:17 am Title: Chapter 29

Okay, I'm caught up and need more. Hopefully she'll feel less homesick when her parents arrive. I wonder how Michael's family will take him leaving the tour?

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 25, 2015 07:04 am Title: Chapter 28

I'm remembering more and more of this story. It's so sweet! LOL at AUS being a place she'd dreamed about visiting.

Question: Is this story completed or incomplete? If it's incomplete, I may need to start pestering you, now.

 



Author's Response:

LOL you know I had to stick myself in there someway. But honestly, why WOULDNT you want to come to AUS? Fucking brilliant place, it is. 

Its incomplete, but I have 89 chapters so.... still a fairly long way. It is very close to being finished just like Butterflies. 

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 25, 2015 06:47 am Title: Chapter 27

quote of this chapter: I liked petite girls, that was no secret. When I thought of Brooke, I always had to laugh -- it was almost like I'd wedged a crayon up my nose, blocking vital oxygen, because that girl totally wasn't my style at all.

Dying. So, 8 months in and he's planning on proposing? I wonder how he'll end up doing it...and when....

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2015 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 26

We talked about sex a lot. Unfortunately there was always a lot of talking, not a lot of doing. <--- damnit!

I wish I could be a fly on the wall during the time period you skimmed over.

Then again, I think you made up for it with Jade's convo with Janet. Oh, and the snarky but on-point "Randy had a bloody tambourine ... they were really kind of stretching the limits of talent"

Wait. Hold up. I'd totally forgotten that she got hauled on stage. Holy corny overload. I'm torn between swooning and being embarrassed. IDK which to choose. I think swoon, b/c Jade earned that after telling off Joseph.

Reviewer: CoconutDevon14 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2015 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 25

Honestly is almost always the best policy.

Thank you and update.



Author's Response:

LOL "Thank you and update" 

I will :) 

Reviewer: CoconutDevon14 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2015 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 24

WHY KENDRA?! WHY?! Man this is what rumor and gossip does.



Author's Response:

I think Kendra is a dope. 

Reviewer: CoconutDevon14 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2015 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 23

This was a very good chapter. I Honestly can relate to Jade's insecurities. From the first chapter I was like is this girl writing a fictional tale or a close resemblance to my life story?I am definitely stubborn like her but not as fiesty, bitchy or sarcastic like her since I TRY to make an effort to be as NICE as possible. But IF I kept it raw and non sugar coated,  just like Jade I'd probably only have one loyal friend who puts up with my crap.



Author's Response:

Haha, Jade was originally written based on MY personality, but if others can relate than fantastic. Shes an attitude little bitch, but thats totally me lol. Ive grown up a lot in the ten yrs its been since I've written this, but Jade is still essentially me. Same as me, I also only have a few loyal friends :)

Reviewer: Gabby7 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2015 08:03 am Title: Chapter 1

I have not forgotten about this story. Just letting you know. Will be back soon to catch up. 

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2015 06:11 am Title: Chapter 22

If anyone got sick of hearing it, I'd send them to a doctor.



Author's Response:

if anyone got sick of hearing it, itd be because they command a punch in the dick hole.

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2015 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 21

Mr. Magoo. The toilet story. I cri.

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2015 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 19

SO corny, yet I love it.

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2015 07:11 am Title: Chapter 16

Damn - I'm a little frightened to think of what gave you the idea to have her dad walk in on him....



Author's Response:

Hahaha. Just how that would tarnish anyone's first time meeting your boyfriend. 

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2015 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 13

I love how natural your scenes are. They just flow.

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2015 08:07 am Title: Chapter 12

I adore this chapter.

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