[Report This]Date: Apr 23, 2015 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 35
awww! I'm surprised Gloria didn't push for diamond encrusted heels or a huge flowing veil lol.
Now, what happened when they came in from the balcony. I mean, Michael had been treating her like a porcelain doll, so I'm left wondering if they knitted, had sex, made out, or talked about the wedding...
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2015 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 34
What Jade said is true. She needs to start getting active again. In order to recuperate properly she needs to exercise her muscles and get back into her routines. I know Michael thinks he's helping her by saving her the trouble of doing exactly what she needs to. But I can see also where he is coming from, Jade needs to realize too much solitude and indifference are not the ideal conditions for healing. They need to talk things out cause her hostility and Michael's inability to be perceiving will lead to nastier confrontations.
Thank you and update.
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2015 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 34
I get Michael's fear, Jade played down her symptoms/kept quiet about them before, so he doesn't fully trust her now. At the same time, he's suffocating her. She's expressing herself very well and fighting hard not to throw a tantrum, and he's just going back to his fears. Very PTSD-ish.
Ugh, walking away? When it's from someone he's trying to keep from walking around? That's like two swords to the chest.
So (not) juicy.
[Report This]Date: Apr 17, 2015 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 32
The storm has passed. I'm feeling that sunshine and good vibes.
[Report This]Date: Apr 17, 2015 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 33
Finally in the comforts of her own home. I'm so relieved for her cause she would've become unbearably cranky and chewed everyone's head off for checking up on her. As we can see the crankiness is starting to target Michael, but it's all for the Love, man.
Thank you annnnnnnnnd!....... *whispers* update.
Author's Response:
Haha, thank you!
Id be so pissed off in her situation.
An update is on the way, promise :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 17, 2015 07:07 am Title: Chapter 33
Hey! I just wanted to let you know that I found this story about a week ago and I've spend so much time reading it, and I totally love it! :)
I have to admit that I am a silent reader, but I just wanted to let you know that I'm here and reading every single time, and I can't wait for new updates!! :)
Your writing style is so good, and you describe the characters so well! Keep up them good work, can't wait for the next part :)
Author's Response:
Thanks Nalwenda, I love it when the silent readers come and drop a comment. :) I appreciate everyones input so much!
<3
[Report This]Date: Apr 16, 2015 06:27 am Title: Chapter 33
I wonder how long he can keep this up before the recording industry gets on his back?
The interview was too cute!
Author's Response:
bit cheesy in hindsight! Cute none the less.
[Report This]Date: Apr 16, 2015 06:18 am Title: Chapter 32
I'm so glad the surgery is over. I know the recovery isn't exactly easy, but now at least they can start to move forward. I love the dialogue in this chapter <3
[Report This]Date: Apr 15, 2015 12:16 am Title: Chapter 31
This chapter just left me feeling depressed. If Jade doesn't make it, though I hope she does, Mike would just Break. Hoo! all this gloomines. Bleakness, I can't take it, the storm needs to be over soon. Cause everyone's needs a ray of that sunshine.
Other than that I'm at a loss for words.
thank you and update.
Author's Response:
Thanks coco. Youll find out soon enough :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 13, 2015 09:33 am Title: Chapter 31
jfdksal;fjas This is like torture. I want to wave a magic wand over Jade :(
Author's Response:
yeaaaaah well, ya cant!
[Report This]Date: Mar 31, 2015 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 30
Nice.Ten stars.
[Report This]Date: Mar 31, 2015 08:18 am Title: Chapter 30
I love the heart to heart moment with Joseph. It gave his character more depth and it didn't feel falsely supportive.
I hope nothing happens while Michael is asleep. Jade's symptoms created a sense of foreboding.
[Report This]Date: Mar 26, 2015 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 29
Jade must be terrified, I can't even bear the image of Open Heart Surgery. The chances of things not working out even if they are slim. That must the scariest thing ever. And will they gain back whatever normalcy they had prior. Ugh! Why, why now?! Things were just fine *sigh* hopefully they are gonna make it through this, they just have to.
Thank you and update.
[Report This]Date: Mar 26, 2015 11:06 am Title: Chapter 27
It really was considerate of MJ to ask her Dad before he did pull a perfectly planned and executed "stunt" like that. And lol She almost barfed on his shoes, wouldn't the press just eat that up.
At least she's getting along with everyone (except Joseph) so far, great job thank you.
[Report This]Date: Mar 26, 2015 10:57 am Title: Chapter 26
That's right tell him Fucking "OFF" Jade. Joe thinks he can be Mad and Insensitive as hell but Jade will always have the one up.
Thank you.