[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2013 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 53 Not now..
Ugh Lisa Marie was very wrong for that! Man I wanted Atianna beat the fuck out of her but Mike had to get in the middle of it!
Author's Response:
Lol you crack me up
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2013 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 52 a long time waited
Great chapter and I DO mean it!
Author's Response:
awwww thank you love!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2013 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 51 thank you
atianna and michael back together? i hope they are.
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2013 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 54 Don't start..
I likey this story but-**Ahem**
I agree with Iam_music when she wrote."Maybe he needs to see how the shoe feels on the other foot."
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I know Atianna and Mike have an agreement and all but damn something's gotta give. He can go tippin when ever he wants and the first person he go's to is that crazy heifer LMP... Oh hell no!
Got this woman locked up in a condo with nothing to do but read, hump, watch tv and shop. Chile please.
I'm sorry but Atianna needs to grow a pair and tell Mike this one sided agreement needs to be revised because some freedom needs to be had here.
I know she's doing a hell of a lot better than she was alone but come on now. Is being locked up until her FRIEND decides he's done with her really all it's cracked up to be?
I'm just sayin...
Author's Response:
Well, I appreciate the review! Welcome to the family..I will take this under consideration and see where the story leads me! I do agree with you on Atianna is basically on lock down but he also shows her love and affection she never had before and gives her life structure...but she is hurting so we will see.. I am always open to suggestions so feel free ladydee
Date: Jun 22, 2013 11:32 am Title: Chapter 54 Don't start..
She ain't gotta have a man to have sex with one. Lol
Author's Response:
that's a thought....
Date: Jun 22, 2013 11:13 am Title: Chapter 54 Don't start..
Well if that's the case then, Ati can fuck whoever else she wants to then, right? I mean Michael ain't her man and vice versa. Smh. That's some shit though. But yeah, maybe he needs to see how the shoe feels on the other foot.
Author's Response:
I wish I could let her have a man... but she promised Mike
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2013 06:33 am Title: Chapter 1 who is she?
Okay, I'm gonna take a break for now, but just know...
This story is AWESOME!! You are a very talented writer! Keep it up! To hell with giving you a ten star rating... Here are three gold bars, baby!! BAM! TAKE THOSE! LOL!!
You've made Atianna lovable even though she has problems, AND THAT'S NOT EASY!! I genuinely care about what happens to her.
Also, I love the concept of Michael being drawn into a woman that's different than what he's used to. It's easy to proclaim that you "Love the World" so long as everyone you come in contact with is in your comfort zone. But how we deal with and befriend people that are different from us, that we may not have things in common with shows hows much love we have in our hearts. So I applaud Mike for that. He's a true humanitarian in this. I love it!
I shall return!!!
Author's Response:
That was awesome!! I look forward to some more reviews from you
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2013 06:20 am Title: Chapter 29 Playing the game
OOOH, THAT WAS...
LMAO!!!
Author's Response:
*blushing
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2013 06:14 am Title: Chapter 26 adjust
Aawww!!! That was soooo adorable with Ati & Paris!!
Author's Response:
LOL I love this game of tag we got going on!
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2013 06:10 am Title: Chapter 21 Who Cares
ATIANNA DID HWHAT?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2013 06:07 am Title: Chapter 20 Now what I thought
Uh oh... *sigh*
She pissed... clearly. And I get why.
BUT...
I also get where Mike is coming from.
GOOD LORD!!!
These two...
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2013 06:02 am Title: Chapter 17 Compromising
Atianna got some good lickie!! Aawww shucks now, GET FUNKY!!! lmaoo!
Author's Response:
oh a dancing cat....oh I GET IT!! LOL
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2013 06:00 am Title: Chapter 15
This story makes me think of the song 'Pretty Baby' by Eric Benet. If you haven't heard that song before, u should check it out, cuz it fits so perfectly!
Author's Response:
I will get on that
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2013 05:49 am Title: Chapter 14 Why do you care?
Wow... okay. A few things.
1.) Atianna is on a path of destruction, and it's a shame bacause she really does have so much going for her. I do understand her pain though, so I can't judge her harshly. She should get it together though, before she gets herself killed.
2.) Michael is friggin' GANGSTA!! lmao!! I cracked up when he kicked dude's behind. I know he was SHOCKED! Like, "I know the King of Pop didn't just beat my ass!"
3.) I can't believe my girl just started gettin' high in the limo!! OMG! LOL! Mike needs to help her... if she'll let him.
Okay, that's all.
I'm loving this story by the way!
Author's Response:
You have me laughing so hard I woke up my hubby lol
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2013 05:44 am Title: Chapter 12 the mask is gone
Mike's about to pop up on her at the club?! 
Author's Response:
Well I was going to go to bed but I am staying up to see what the hell up you come up with!!