[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2013 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 32
Thank you for bringing some humor back into the story. I really enjoyed the boob and penis jokes they made me laugh hard. I like it when Michael and Jelly are carefree and having a good time with each other both are so smart and their sarcasm is hilarious. Plus I think these chapters of humor are a nice little brake from the drama in their lives and balance out the story. I hope Michael isn't too mean to Kenny in the next chapter. A little jealousy is cute but he shouldn't go over board with it he still needs to make a good impression on Jelly's dad.
Author's Response:
hehehe...boob and penis joke...im so glad i made laugh!
[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2013 09:37 am Title: Chapter 32
Keep going! Lol you have me dying in laughter over here!
Author's Response:
glad to make you laugh once again!...thanks for the read and review!
Date: Jun 10, 2013 09:02 am Title: Chapter 32
Gurl u had me tripping wit dat lil joke at da beginning! XD.
Author's Response:
hehehe....that's the idea...had you tripping...lmao!...thanks for the review and read!
[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2013 07:38 am Title: Chapter 32
c: Update Le Story xD It's Soooo Amazing!
Author's Response:
i will soon...promise!
[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2013 06:45 am Title: Chapter 32
the jokes were hilarious. i was cracking up!!!
Author's Response:
thanks...me too! cracking up!
[Report This]Date: Jun 09, 2013 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 31
I'm happy that Michael and Jelly are back together but it's too bad it had to be under bad circumstances. I like that Jelly was able to joke with Michael despite what happen to her. I think you should bring the humor back into the story because it was lost there for a while with all the drama going on. I'm guessing this Prince Al has something far more horibble planned for these two than Prince did. I can only pray that both of them come out sane after whatever happens to them.
Author's Response:
bring back the humor...that is what i'm trying to do with the story...lmao!...too many drama not good for the health...hehehe...thanks VickiJ for being with me up to this chapter!...harsh!
[Report This]Date: Jun 09, 2013 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 31
Okay he is stupid... WHY AGREE!
Author's Response:
hehehe...he is indeed stupid... but with Richard's case it was all because of greed.
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2013 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 30
So Jelly is the one who had to take Prince down, huh? If only Michael had kept security around none of this would have happened, smh. I hope Michael does all he can for now on to protect those he loves. I don't want to see Jelly suffer anymore because of him and his crazy family members. It was done in self defense so she shouldn't have to spend too much time in court. As a matter of fact she shouldn't be arrested at all unless prince presses charges. Michael should be able to keep her from jail for right now.
Author's Response:
Sadly Jelly was the one to take Prince down. That's pisses me off. Big mistake of Michael for taking out Jelly's security. SMH! ..getting now the self defense part..thanks for the help...okay she shouldnt be arrested...thanks for the help! and the read and the review.
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2013 10:53 am Title: Chapter 30
Okay...if it is self defense she does not tho to jail because she was not trying to kill prince. Now! If you wrote it was premeditated then she goes to prison but it was on instinct to pull the trigger when he lunged at her. So no in the real world she is concluded innocent and is set free. :) there ya go and thanks for add my story title it made me smile :3
Author's Response:
Thanks...getting it now...self defense then...lol!
Date: Jun 07, 2013 09:51 am Title: Chapter 30
Lol, I love this update soon!
Author's Response:
thanks...i will soon
Thank you for still reading my story!
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2013 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 29
wow!This story is getting better and better!It's on the list of my fav stories here...
Thank you!
ps:Sorry for the short comment but I'm not in a good mood because of what happened to our Princess Paris...
Let's pray for her...
Author's Response:
Thanks for the read and review.
I saw one of the post here...I pray for Paris and for her family.
Date: Jun 04, 2013 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 29
BTW I am happy writing a chapter just for you as we speak :). Ugghhh let the akwardness begin -_-
Author's Response:
lmao! I am happy too (akwardness - lol!) cant wait to read the chapter!
[Report This]Date: Jun 04, 2013 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 29
Is this the same Stephanie from high school? The same one who turnd her back on Ani? It's turning out to be a pretty small world in New York. I'm assuming that Jelly had no ideal how she treated Ani and made high school horrible for her with the video that ruined her life. Instead of beating around the bush Michael should have just told her what went on in the past. And speaking of him, why did hell he stop having Jelly followed? We all know that Prince wasn't going to stop going just because of he shot him. Prince knows that even though they're not together Michael still loves her so there for he can still hurt him through her. I know both of them are heart broken over losing their child be they should have still thought about Jelly's safety. For Jelly's sake I hope someone saves her from Prince before he hurts her any further because god knows she doesn't need to suffer the trauma of abuse and rape. She already lost her child because of this man, he needs to be stopped.
Author's Response:
She is the same Stephanie the last gf of Michael before Ani died. She was really friendly with Ani before. But not the one that made the video that ruined Anis life (It's Bridget and Madz). Agree Michael should not beat around the bush and be all outright with Jelly. He should not have stopped Jelly's security though they are no longer together. I hope as well that Jelly will be alright. Prince is really a crazy loony.
Thanks for the read and review.
[Report This]Date: Jun 04, 2013 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 28
My heart aches for Jelly and Michael's loss and I am sad that she had leave him for right now. A brake was needed for the two because everything seem to happen to fast to soon and this will give them a chance to deal with personal problems and figure out how they can make a future work for them.
I like tha way Michael delt with Prince for right now. He's on to him and when that proof come in he had better watch out. I'm looking forward to seeing him suffer and possibly die slowly.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the read and review...they really needed a break...i wrote everything a bit fast for them...time to slow it down a bit. Hopefully when Michael gets his proof it won't be a double edge sword!
[Report This]Date: Jun 04, 2013 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 29
O.o NOOO! Cliff hanger -_-
Author's Response:
lmao!...it is!!!...thanks girl!