Date: Mar 25, 2014 02:31 am Title: Chapter 22
Wow continue please
Author's Response:
Most definitely will! Thanks for reading!
Date: Mar 24, 2014 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 22
AWW! I loved it completely! I missed this story I hope you update soon
Author's Response:
Aww, sorry for not updating as much as I should. I will more frquently though! Thanks for reading! ^_^
[Report This]Date: Mar 24, 2014 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 22
Aww this was a cute chapter. Mike and Victoria are such hornballs lol. Who can blame Victoria though when the fine piece of man is just sitting there waiting to be touch. Let me not. But that was kinda sad with Michael trying to hide his insecurities from her. He should know that she only means well. Poor thing.
Author's Response:
lol I loved writing it (for the most part) :) and girl... those two are always bumping ad grinding. dey luv each other :3 plus their a bunch of horny cats in heat looooool. Yeah, poor baby. He should realize that she loves him for him, vitiligo included. Thanks for reading! <3
Date: Feb 02, 2014 04:20 am Title: Chapter 21
Awww that was cute, continue please
Author's Response:
Thanks and I will! Thanks for reading! ^_^
[Report This]Date: Feb 01, 2014 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 21
Awww...it was good to see Victoria interacting with people other than Michael and her brother. She and her cousins seem to have a pretty close relationship. Every girl needs a woman or other women to talk to for girl time so its good to know that Victoria actually has her clit to rely on. She was so cute when she was speaking about Michael lol. And it didn't make it any better that they were teasing her. Typical cousins smh lol.
As far as Mike talking about marriage...hmmm. Victoria was right, they shouldn't rush it but knowing MJ you never know how things are going to fall into play. Can't wait to see how that goes.
Author's Response:
Yeah she's a bit of an introvert lmao. Granted, she has a plenty of people to talk to but she shut herself off from that for the most part. And they do! Her family is closer than anyone realizes lmao. And having all those female cousins comes in handy when you're seemingly surrounded by men lmao. Mike always be bringing up stuff that ain't nobody prepared for yet lmao. We'll definitely tap more into that though. Thanks for reading! ^_^
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2014 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 21
Awww this was really cute and sweet! Can't wait for the weekend, though...wink, wink!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Even I can't wait and I wrote it LMAO. Thanks for reading! ^_^
Date: Jan 31, 2014 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 21
Haha what a cute chapter. How sweet, Michael wants to marry her. They definitely should head towards that step but not just yet. Any woman would be crazy to not marry that man. I hope they spend as much time together as possible before he has to go on tour. And she better be visiting him when he leaves too! But the good news is they'll be reuniting soon at her place. So cute.
Author's Response:
He's definitely thinking about it a lot but yeah he needs to chiiiiill and wait a while lmao. And ikr? But we gotta see how they stay with this relationship before we even think about marriage ;) And yeah she'll definitely want to spend more time with him and I'm sure she'll miss him a lot! Plus if you think about it, the touring will be sort of a long distance thing so we'll have to see how that goes too! And girl you know she's gonna come to a show or 2 lmao! Thanks for reading! ^_^
Date: Jan 25, 2014 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 20
omg continue
Author's Response:
Most definitely will! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Jan 15, 2014 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 20
Aww Michael finally got Victoria back even though he cheated. He ain't right smh. And Mike shoving food off of the table to get it in?! lol That's how you know its real. Done at him talking about they christened the table. I cannot lol. Anyway this was cute :)
Author's Response:
looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool the gettin it in comment though..... He turned into someone else in that moment! And you he stays cheating lmao. LOL they did christian it tho ;__; in a ways lmao. Thanks for reading!
Date: Jan 14, 2014 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 20
So damn cute!!!! Michael is a damn good boyfriend, Victoria better be thankful she got a good man like that. Just beautiful. And she's a good sport for playing with Mac too. Most women would feel like that's childish or something, even though in my opinion it isn't. I love the little spontaneous romantic moments and of course the hot sex on the table. Lol. They're a great couple.
Author's Response:
lmao he is and she does :) Yeah she tries to understand that that's his life so she respects it and is down with the cause lmao. And yaaaas girl they always get it in lmao. Thanks for reading! :D
Date: Dec 31, 2013 02:58 am Title: Chapter 19
I fucking love this PLEASE PLEASE continue
Author's Response:
I definitely will! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Dec 29, 2013 11:59 am Title: Chapter 19
Awww Michael's reaction was better than I thought it would be. I seriously thought that it was about to be Armageddon lol. No but for real I'm glad that he didn't blow hard steam on Victoria even though I would have been pressed too if she held out on me like that. She better think about that next time because she knows that if she was Michael's shoes things would have been a lot worse.
Yaaaasss at Jeremiah lol. He's a mess.
Not Julian trying it again with both Michael AND Victoria though. smh But anyway, its good that everything is settled between Michael and Victoria. They're so cute.
P.S. Your chapters are great so hush. :p
Date: Dec 27, 2013 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 19
I'm glad they made up cuz I was bout ready to slap Victoria. At least now she knows not to do no stupid shit like that ever again. She might as well take her butt on to Neverland. Lol. I think at some point, she's gonna end up moving in with him. They always go back n forth to each other's homes anyway, plus neverland is huge. I wonder what Mike is planning for them.
[Report This]Date: Dec 18, 2013 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 18
Lawd I just knew that something was going to happen at this party lol. I hope Mike hears Victoria out before he makes any assumptions because if he doesn't that'll be so messed up. Anyway, Julian was fake for doing that. How you gon' be friends and having Mike as your so called "brother" when you going after his girl like that? FAAAAAAKKEEE. Victoria should have slapped his ass lol. And why he had to be fine though? I though he was some rat-faced homie but you chose freaking Rick Fox. Damn you lol.
[Report This]Date: Dec 18, 2013 01:57 am Title: Chapter 18
Aw hell naw...Julian foul for that smh. Hopefully Mike isn't too upset after Victoria explains what happened.