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Reviewer: HeleneJacksonxx Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2015 06:26 am Title: Robots Don't Have Emotion

haha this is hilarious!

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2015 05:53 pm Title: Memories

Well where would he sleep lol..awww ww so he has images of memories from the real michael Jackson? That's pretty kool!! 

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2015 05:38 pm Title: Broken Robot

Lmaooo ugh of course alil brother has to be annoying. Michael is too cute for me! Awwwwww and he's sensitive too. His curiosity is like a babies 

Reviewer: paris-jane Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2015 05:28 pm Title: Memories

Great!

Reviewer: cazMJluver12 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2015 04:23 pm Title: Memories

OMG I've just found this and I frickin love it haha plzzzzzz continue!

Reviewer: HoneyToTheBee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2015 10:33 pm Title: Broken Robot

Awww robot Michael is soooo cute. All clueless and confused... When he was all 'please like me I hurt so bad when you don't like me." I almost teared up! lol 



Author's Response:

I love when I can elicit this type of response from my viewers! I hope to really make you cry.

Reviewer: flowerpower Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2015 06:29 pm Title: Broken Robot

Haha oh man that was hilarious. Poor Robot Mikey couldn't handle looking at real breasts. Thanx for the update girl, please keep 'em coming.



Author's Response:

I was hoping it would make you all laugh. What can I say? Some men/robots can't handle all that WOMAN. Haha. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Kunda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2015 05:43 pm Title: Broken Robot

I'm crying from my nose ROTF...

Best I tell ya lol.



Author's Response:

Lol. Michael and his naiveties. 😂

Reviewer: flowerpower Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2015 10:01 am Title: Little Blue Wire

Well it's good to have you back girl. Funny you mentioned it because another author and I agreed that this website is becoming less exciting and more boring these days. Like you said the plots are bad and there are constant role playings. We both discussed how the authors on here seem apathetic when it comes to writing. They'll throw in explicit sexual content and get abundant of reviews. Seems that is what they come here for---the sex. Which is sad. The author even told me how the stories with the excellent plots and character development get ignored and hardly any reviews because there is no sex in the story. I wrote a story on here WITHOUT any sex and the readers still enjoyed it. However I had to delete it because someone plagiarized my work. Now I'm only a memeber for this story and another story that is really good.

Anyway, that is basically what I wanted to vent out on. Can't wait for more chapter updates girl. Btw, are Myra and robotic Michael going to, you know....kiss? LOL if I had my BAD Era Michael Jackson robot oh I would kiss him like there was no tomorrow!



Author's Response:

That is part of the reason I left. MJfiction's decline was a long time coming. I hope to bring back a little bit of the magic, all the while carrying on my angel's legacy and all that he stood for. Sex is not everything. Sex does not make a good plot. Honestly, the immense amount of it in a single story annoys me to no end. A true writer can engross their reader beyond the sex, I believe. There are many good authors who deserved far more reviews, but their lack of 'erotic material' was their downfall. Those authors have long since buried their stories in the what I like to call the 'fanfiction graveyard'. I'm happy you enjoy my writing. I like to think that a girl like me has improved in the two years since she last published.

And as for your last inquiry, a writer never writes and tells. Lol. ;)

Reviewer: fantasiesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2015 08:53 am Title: Robots Don't Have Emotion

When i read this, i was like Michael as a robot? But then i read these chapter and already im in love with your story. Cant wait to read more



Author's Response:

Yes, indeed. Our beloved Michael as a robot! Thank you for the review. Much appreciated.

Reviewer: flowerpower Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 16, 2015 08:30 pm Title: Little Blue Wire

Oh man, how I have missed this story. I was beginning to think you discontinued it. If you don't mind my asking: but what made you get back into updating after nearly two years?

Please continue. That is...you WILL continue updating right? Because this is really good.



Author's Response:

Aye. It has been almost two long years. I am glad you have remained faithful to a story that ended before it began. I chose to return simply because I feel that MJfiction has fallen off in the years I've been on here. I see nothing but bad plots, and role play. I feel like my beloved website needs an influx of creativity....an ode to the way the site used to be when it was bristling with activity. Thank you for the review. And yes, this chick is here to stay!

Reviewer: Kunda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2015 09:28 pm Title: Little Blue Wire

This is too good right now. I'm kinda mad there's only two chapters.



Author's Response:

Soon, there will be more chapters! Keep an eye out.

Reviewer: Kunda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2015 09:21 pm Title: Robots Don't Have Emotion

I'm loving this story. You've got me hooked. And by the sounds of the way you described the anime stuff I'm guessing you are or were a major fan at one point? Keep this up!



Author's Response:

I must admit, I can take no credit for the creation of the robot. The only thing that belongs to me is Myra. I accepted a challenge. However, I'm glad to have you hooked. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: HoneyToTheBee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2015 08:13 pm Title: Robots Don't Have Emotion

I'd like to place an order for the Dangerous model, please! Make sure he's programmed to come out of that box in Sexy mode.

LOVE this its so original. Keep going!



Author's Response:

Ha! If I take your order, I'll have to take thousands of other orders! Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2015 07:13 pm Title: Little Blue Wire

Awwwwwwww. And I think u made a lil error, some parts repeat themselves



Author's Response:

Fixed it! Thank you for that. It was a copy and paste error. Thank you for the review.

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