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Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2013 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 80

DRAMA!! With a giant capital D. And not the kind of D that is usually a part of this story. I just knew that Michael didn't know. I knew it! I don't see why Kalli didn't mention anything to him about Jackie after the hospital visit though. She assumed that he knew but she should have talked to him about it directly instead of sneaking around to see Abigail and figure it out herself. DM and Kalli seriously need to work on their communication. Even if he isn't ready to say "I love you" they need to have a long talk once he cools down from this incident. Michael has his guard up emotionally and he needs to let Kalli in fully if he wants their relationship to progress. I hope that once he calms down he will really talk to her about how he feels. 

Under normal circumstances she should have read his narrow ass for abandoning her like that the first time she met his family, but given how much fuckery is going on it really isn't the time to be bringing it up. I can see why she let it go.

Poor Michael. He has every right to be mad I don't blame him at all. True he said some harsh things but it was coming from a place of hurt. And lets be honest, Abi and Jackie deserve everything he said. In the long run Michael will be angrier with Jackie though. You just don't cross the sibling boundary EVER. Especially if you want to fuck your brother's ex-wife immediately after their divorce. Abi isn't just some random chick he was dating for a while, she was his wife and they were together for a number of years. The whole thing is so wrong. And Abigail needs to step the fuck back. She has no right to slap him after hoing around with his brother and if I were Kalli I would want to slap her back since he can't. I'm not saying that's what Kalli should do, she needs to stay out of it and get Michael out of there. But she shouldn't be debating the urge in her mind no matter how much she likes Abi personally.

I also couldn't get over how ratchet it is to announce the whole thing in front of the entire family like that. They have no respect for Michael's feelings at all. They should have told him IN PRIVATE as soon as Abigail found out she was pregnant. Wait, scratch that, they should have told him when they first started seeing each other.

I wonder, did Abigail have a history of cheating on Michael when they were married? It would explain why he seemed to have checked out of the marriage. And why he said "who knows with her." It also explains why he turns into Daddy Michael whenever another man gets anywhere near Kalli. If she was banging Jackie while they were married she needs to change her name from Lesbogail to Slutbogail.

Kalli better not go back to Seattle now, she needs to be there for Michael until he comes to terms with this latest development. 



Author's Response:

YYYAAASSSSS!! Indeed, you knew it :D! And yes, Kalli thought he knew too so, she didn't feel the need to talk about it again. She didn't want him to be hurt again! But at the end they will have to talk about it. The sooner, the better! And they  also needs to discute why he left her alone. I hope DM won't be too happy to know that his brothers couldn't keep their eyes off Mama Kalli!

Now about what Michael said. Yes, he was angry nd Jackie must have planned this and this slap was so inaproprite. But I don't think Kalli should slap Abigail back. First of all, Abigail is pregnant. Then, Kalli likes Abigail. And finally, Kalli likes to hurt with words not fists. And a girl fight? LMAO! Indeed, Kalli needs to leave until Michael decides to unleash his anger on someone he can beat. Like Jackie!

AZDHGGDAUZI, I am so glad you noticed the "who knows with her."

HHAH, I guess we all agree that Kalli needs to stick around a little bit more LMAO! Next chapter soon

Reviewer: VickiJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2013 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 80

 Kalli and mind her mind are hot mess, lmao. She was ready for the drama that went down at the Jackson estate. I know she was happy that for once she wasn't the cause of the drama. Michael got his feelings hurt bad tonight the shit that came came out if his mouth came from that angry, hurt place. I thnk that Jackie should have left Michael alone and tried talk to him another time then all of thus could have been avoided. Michael had it coming to him when he insulted Abigail like that. Lucky for her she's a woman and he would never hurt one.


Favorite lines:


"I take another sip of my beer and observe them. This is a real drama, worthy of a telenovela. And Abigail is Brazilian, this is a sign. Well, tonight will be unforgettable. But I shouldn’t be too happy about it."


"Now, I can take a seat, grab my popcorn and wait patiently for Jackie to break the news to Katherine and Michael and Michael to break his nose."


 



Author's Response:

LMAO! The more she talks with herself, she crazier she sounds and the more mistakes she makes! Indeed, for once she was the golden girl haha. But she felt a little bad that it is Abigail now. And Michael...

Too angry to be nice with them...

Next chapter soon :D

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2013 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 80

I'm sorry but I died at this chapter!!! Girl! This is drama overload right now and I cannot deal. First off, Kalli should've ripped Michael ass a new one for leaving her alone all damn night. She's Kee kee'in it up with his brothers while he's being a mama's boy in the damn kitchen. Furthermore, that is not how Kalli's first meeting with Katherine should've gone! Amidst all this damn fuckery and drama! I hope they get a chance to really connect cuz this is a hot ass mess. Lastly, I knew Michael would lose his cool but he really let his anger speak for him. He should've just left like he said. Now Abigail done slapped him and I'm not sure that was the right move. Yes he was wrong but he was speaking from a place of anger. I hope Kalli can intervene somehow someway. Lawd.. Maybe it's not the best time for her to leave Michael alone now. Seattle will have to wait.

I wonder if Kalli is gonna say somethin to Abi for slapping her man. Lawd it's just too much. I think I've had my fill of drama now. Lol I can't take anymore. Kalli gworl.. Get that narcotic between your thighs ready honey. Michael is gon need a hit of that when they leave. Lmao. I hope they can talk and she can calm him down. But hey, on the bright side Kalli is the golden girl of the family now!!! Shit especially behind this Alejandra ass mess. 



Author's Response:

Hey girl! HAHA, you asked for the drama and now you have enough for a lifetime lol! Kalli was mad at Michael leaving her alone with the rest of his family but when she knew that Jackie was on the point of telling the truth, she knew she had to forget about it. For now! Nothing but huting words came out of Michael's mouth and someone needed to stop him. Unfortunately it was Abigail's hand... And that was wrong. Next chapter soon :D

Reviewer: BestOfJoy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2013 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 80

Hey annie I hope that was Janet or his Momma who slap him girl I heard that slap like I was in the house. This is only the start of it whoo.

You got me scared amd shit

let face it we aint having a daddy and kalli moment

we can wait.

please update cause you got me uhhh acting crazy like the fuck just happen here.



Author's Response:

What? no, no, no Abigail slapped Michael lol. Lmao, I don't it Kalli wants to have sex with Michael at this moment lol. So yes, it have t wait lmao

Reviewer: VickiJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2013 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 79

Michael should have told Kalli that it would be a family dinner so she would be more prepared for meeting everyone. Kalli shouldn't feel ackward because its Michael's brother who sot with his ex-wife not the other way around if anything Abigail and Jackie should feel out of place. Speaking of Michael where the hell did he disappear to leaving Kalli to deal with us family? He should have been there to introduce her to everyone. He just lost cool points in my opinion for ditching his girl like that.



Author's Response:

Indeed, Michael should have told her but maybe he didn't know either... The good point is that whatever Kalli does, it won't be worst than Abigail and Jackie sleeping together! Thank you for the review. Next chapter online :D

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2013 11:55 am Title: Chapter 79

Michael is going to have a rage fit. I'm just not sure yet at who. At Jackie for sleeping with his ex or at the rest of his brothers for fawning over Kalli. Probably both. And then when they get back to Neverland Daddy Michael will be back. Or maybe he won't be able to wait and he'll just drag her into his old room at Hayvenhurst. 

I had to lmao when Janet said that Michael didn't have the Jackson hunger. She has obviously never met The Thirst. 

Can't wait for the drama. 

Also, wtf are Michael and Katherine doing in that kitchen, cooking an entire meal? Seems like they are taking forever to appear. 



Author's Response:

LMAO! I know my Daddy Michael pervs are waiting for this moment haha! Aw, you know Michael keeps the thirst for Kali! haha

"And then when they get back to Neverland Daddy Michael will be back. Or maybe he won't be able to wait and he'll just drag her into his old room at Hayvenhurst" LMAO, I knew this part was coming ahahhahahaha

Katherine and Michael are back on the next chapter ;)

 

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2013 09:20 am Title: Chapter 79

Again I say yaassssssss to the fuckery at the Jackson house! Lmao I knew Abi would come with her baby daddy. Hopefully Michael will keeps his cool. Just look at that sexy woman you have with you Mike. Keep it together. I'm so glad she clapped back at Janet's ass though. Bitch was being childish. And Kalli was never the side chick or ho. Mike was divorced before they did anything so girl you betta pump your brakes! Kalli would wear that donkey ass out. Anyway, hopefully they're cool now. I wanna know her reaction to her beloved Abigail fucking yet another one of her big bros and pregnant for him. Now who's the ho? Mm hmm. The brothers seem to like Kalli though. She's beautiful and she's funny. Hopefully Katherine will like her too. Especially when she sees how happy she makes Michael. Let's see how much more Randy and the other brothers will fawn over Kalli til Daddy Michael makes his appearance and turns into a jealous possessive beast. Lmao. 



Author's Response:

LMAO! You love the drama, girl! Michael does not need to be mad. When you a girl like Kalli, you don't sweat over what your ex is doing. And like you said Michael was divorced when he started dating Kalli, and Abigail too! SO no need to be mad. But the fact that she is sleeping with Jackie may be a problem. LMAO, Janet will be schocked to hear that news. It didn't take much for the brothers to like Kalli! She is cute and they love flirting with her! If only they knew that Daddy Michael is close lol. LMAO, I am waiting for his return!

Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2013 06:50 am Title: Chapter 79

Ohhhh.....brother (pun intended!). This will be all kinds of awkward....



Author's Response:

Soooo awkward! Now let's see how Michael react to the fact that Jackie is here and with his pregnant ex!!!

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2013 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

Why can't Michael say "I love you" it isn't that hard? His actions show it. When he isn't a jealous rage monster he's very sweet to her. He's introducing her to his mother and talking about more babies in the future but those three words still elude him. I hope he doesn't hold back much longer because he's going to push her away. She deserves to hear it back.

How awkward is this dinner going to be? And ugh, Janet's there. Who else is going to be there, Abi and Jackie? I hope that Janet stops being so judgemental and maybe even grows to like Kalli. Surely if she sees that Kalli makes her brother happy she will stop being such a massive B. 

Can't wait to see what happens next! 



Author's Response:

Yup, Michael loves her but it's harder to say it. Kalli shouldn't put pressure on him and let him say it when he feels ready... Which should be soon because as you said, if she doesn't feel loved, he will push her away! LMAO, this dinner is going to be pure fuckery!

"she will stop being such a massive B." I don't why this insult makes me laugh so hard LMAO! Next chapter soon :D Annie is back babyyy

Reviewer: BestOfJoy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2013 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 78

kalli is right it is going to be one Hell of night for sure girl.

Annie my girl you been workin it and I love it gurl.

I love you Annie

And I think it is going to be one hell of a ride from Janet maybe Joesph and who know Abby can come in the picture like a lost soul. Same for Jackie.

I honestly think Mj is in love with Kalli BUT his ass is probably still trying to get over Abby I mean they were together for some time so he just can't blurt out "I love you Kalli". But I think Kalli should you know wait a few months.

Umm also Jade is a cutie pie THANK YOU for the Jade and Kalli moments.

Now all we NEED is Daddy and Kalli moment.



Author's Response:

OMG, I love you toooo

lmaooooooooooooooooooooo!! If Joseph, Abi and Jackie show up it will be H.E.L.L.!! Yes, he loves her but I guess saying it is harder. And it's kidn of annoying. I want to in the story and strangle Michael until he says it. Let's see if Kalli could wait a coupe of months!

" Daddy and Kalli moment." Awww my little Daddy Michael perv haha

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2013 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 78

Lawd idk where to begin. Lemme say first that Kalli is a badddddd bish! She is werking that dress honey! She looks gorgeous, sexy, the whole nine. I know some of Michael's brothers will be staring at her and tryna flirt with her. I secretly hope they will. Michael will turn into a jealous beast! Furthermore, I can't believe Kalli said she loves him!!!! Big step and I'm proud of her for being so open but I'm disappointed in Michael. They're basically living like a little family, Kalli is meeting his family, and plannin to have a future and children with him but the fool can't say he loves her?! What the fuck Michael!! Get it together!!!! He dropped the ball with that. Something is gonna have to happen for him to say it to her. She doesn't need to say it again until he does. But I am glad that Kalli is wanting to be a mommy in the future. I'm glad. I see the growth in her. Now Michael needs to catch up. I can't wait to see what happens at the Jackson house. Will the Force show its power when Michael flies into a jealous rage at his brothers gawking at Kalli's fine ass? Lmao I can only imagine. Yassss for the fuckery at the Jackson home. 

 

And Jade is so adorable OMG! Kalli makes beautiful babies. 



Author's Response:

I KNOOOOW, Kalli is F.I.E.R.C.E

"Michael's brothers will be staring at her and tryna flirt with her. I secretly hope they will" Oh girl, you are so baddddddddddddd. Love it haha!

Yes, Kalliope said the words and Michael couldn't do it. That is so annoying. Can you feel the secondhand embarrassment too?! SMH, Michael needs Nathan to make a comeback, I swear!

"Will the Force show its power when Michael flies into a jealous rage at his brothers gawking at Kalli's fine ass?" GOOOORRRRL

You know Michael will go Hulk on whoever lay eyes on Kalli. I swear,  if Joseph is here he better not try with Daddy Michael. Hide your eyes lmao!

Woot woot for the fuckery at Katherine's home LMAO

Reviewer: RhythmChild Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2013 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 77

Oh, Kalli....trying not to see or hear no evil....so cute.

I see where Jackie is fucked up for messing with his brother's ex-wife. I got issues with Mike, but I wouldn't so much as LOOK at the ex of a sibling of mine. Whether or not it's over, there are feelings that linger, and it's not worth it.

THat being said, I think maybe this is the new formula that was meant to happen. Clearly jackie adn Abi are compatible. HOPEFULLY you can convince me that Kalli and MIchael are compatible. BUt in the end, the most imporant thing is that the children are not in emotional danger and that veryone is happy.

BTW, on an attraction-based tip, if I met a young Jackie Jackson in the 70's at a party, I just might have been a sure thing. ;)



Author's Response:

LMAO! As she always says; she needs to see the bright side of everything! You still don't believe Kalli and Michael are a perfect match in heaven? I have to fix it :D

JACKIE JACKSON, FTW

I bet you wouldn't mind if he offered to f-tuck you in. LMAO! Ok, I'm out...

Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 13, 2013 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 77

Bwaaaahahahahaahh! "You killed the Force!" No, the Force is beyond any powers of destruction....or taming. Because it's got A LOT of power....



Author's Response:

I SWEAR

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 13, 2013 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

LMAO I second the request for more Daddy Michael and Kalli sex. I'm sure you're shocked.



Author's Response:

I WAS SHOCKED THAT YOU DIDN'T ASK LMAO! Maybe yes, maybe no. You know I can make my little Daddy Michael perv wait a little bit more. Hehe

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 13, 2013 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 77

It's not too early! They've been messing around for a min now. C'mon Kalli, get over it. Be happy you have a good man and his mother wants to meet you. She's gonna have to meet her sooner or later so why not now? It's inevitable. Her and Michael are gonna be together so she needs to stop tripping. Furthermore, Michael is cute. Lol I knew he'd mention something about her getting pregnant. That man loves babies, he was made to be a daddy. Kalli needs to reassure him that they will have babies, just not right now. She did mention a good thing though about him getting tested. I'm sure his lil swimmers are moonwalking just fine though. I knew Michael would be sad that baby isn't his but he needs to get over it now. He has a good woman, she's young, fertile, gorgeous and just as crazy as he is. They make a perfect match. They'll be able to have babies whenever they are ready. The only thing Michael should be miffed at is the fact that his ex and his brother are fucking. That's it. The baby thing, he needs to let that go. He has a woman he'll be able to have them with. I wonder how his relationship with Jackie will be now.. Anyway, I'm looking forward to this meeting with Mama Katherine! And if Janet has her ass there, and even tries to get slick with Kalli, I hope Kalli will read her ass for filth! I mean complete chromosomes honey. Her buddy Abigail is fuckin another one of her brothers so her being pressed over Kalli needs to end NOW! Anyway, I think we're all due for some Daddy Mike and Kalli sex, so let him get this test over with so they can get back to having sex. Lol 



Author's Response:

Kalli likes to stress over all and nothing! I bet she will make up something to make this dinner awkward.

Michael and his love for babies

I bet when Kalli will get pregnant, he will forget that Abigail and I ever were married lol.

Indeed, Jackie having sex with Abigail AND getting her pregnant is so twisted. And I bet it will be bad if Jackie shows up at this dinner *wink wink* and worst if Janet is here too *wink wink wink wink*

"Anyway, I think we're all due for some Daddy Mike and Kalli sex, so let him get this test over with so they can get back to having sex. Lol " Awww my little Daddy Michael perv!! Lova ya!

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