[Report This]Date: May 18, 2013 09:25 pm Title: Bliss
Oops, from reading this chapter I'm guessing that Michael would be mad at my last review. =&
He wanted to marry her the next day? Awww the guy is in-love.
Lol love that last part! smh Michael.
Date: May 18, 2013 08:47 pm Title: I Miss You
Michael is so fuckin selfish. I hope Michelle falls in love with the man she's with, maybe even marry him. He thinks he can be with Elvis in a wig and Michelle's gorgeous ass is gonna stay single? Chile please! Furthermore why Elvis in a wig is hating, I hope she knows Michelle looks better than her. Which is why she's mad. She knows she ain't shit, bitch got with Mike while she was still married. And shes not his type. i hope Michael is absolutely miserable with her while Michelle is happy on her relationship with her new man. Michael's childishness and selfishness is annoying and it's pissing me off. Team Michelle!
Author's Response: I love how everyone always refers to Lisa,as Elvis in a wig! LOL. I'm glad you're enjoying the story, but i'm curious- did you read the Original version that this is based on? Michael: Magic, Madness, The Untold Story
[Report This]Date: May 18, 2013 12:11 am Title: A Meeting At Neverland
She smiled seductively. “What would you have done?”
“You want me to tell you?”
She stood. “No show me.”
I stood and challenged her.
“You want me to bend you over right here?”
O____O Yeaaaa, Get it Mikester.
Oh snap he really got it. Mitchell got him hooked huh? Awww I love this chapter its funny, sexy and sweet.
Author's Response: Ha! Glad you enjoyed it. I had to kick the flirting into overdrive haha. i'm pretty sure if she would have let him, he would have bent her over on that table!
[Report This]Date: May 17, 2013 02:36 pm Title: The Distance
I love part two so far :D!!! They can be friends with benefits now xD. You're not discontinuing this story are you :(??
Author's Response:
No. This is the only one i'm continuing because i've wrote a lot for it already and I just started it. I'll be posting more for PART TWO tonight.
[Report This]Date: May 16, 2013 07:46 am Title: The Others
It's crazy how Mike was slowly coming back to his senses and lightening up his mood and then bam! That one little mistake/realization just messed everything up. Smh.
Author's Response: This whole time period was a bunch of craziness. Too much fighting and too much miscommunication.
[Report This]Date: May 14, 2013 10:17 pm Title: The Grammy's
The '88 Grammys was something sad to see Mike going through after he had worked so hard for that album :/ but it's good that he realized that he was being unreasonable and needed Michelle. It's even better that she was there to show him that he didn't need an award to prove his greatness.
Author's Response: Yeah I remember watching it live and not believing he hadn't won anything! It was so unfair; especially after seeing that performance.
[Report This]Date: May 13, 2013 09:35 pm Title: The Rough Patches
Michelle was wrong for choosing Ralph over her husband but Mike went all out for kicking her out of the room instead of trying to attempt to make a compromise. Typical man lol
Author's Response: she was teaching him a lesson! He tries to control her too much! lol
[Report This]Date: May 10, 2013 11:59 pm Title: Robert
A jealous Michael is just too cute. He was determined to show Michelle that he's the one for her. Apparently she didn't like Robert too much anyway being that she kicked him to the curb without any hesitation lol
Author's Response: Michael Jackson just has that effect. lol
[Report This]Date: May 10, 2013 11:29 pm Title: Friends
Aww they are just too cute. I'm really enjoying Mike's point of view. I can easily imagine what he's feeling.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story. :) And I saw your reply to my one of my reviews on your stories. Your so sweet! I'm a fan of yours!
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2013 05:56 pm Title: The Proposition
GiGi you have to continue with this story :)! Your read count is over 1,000. Everyone loves your story. You only updated like what twice??? People are just too lazy to review for all the chapters xD!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for that. I didn't think anyone really liked it. :( But, i did continue on with PART TWO for you guys that did. It will be posted later tonight!
[Report This]Date: Apr 13, 2013 01:18 am Title: Falling in Love
"I’ll be honest [...] I loved Michelle’s mind, her heart, our compatibility [...]
But I could have waited. I believe I honestly could have went years without touching her.
You see, she satisfied my heart and my mind. I didn’t need her to satisfy my body."
That was WOW, that was DEEP. I wonder how many men can say that and truly mean every single word.
"A pink, ten carat diamond that was so rare, you would think it was fake. It looked like pure costume jewelry and nothing like an engagement ring." Woah woah woah, I thought this story was about Michael and Michelle. Not about Bennifer aka Ben and J.Lo hahaha Totally squealed when I read the engagement ring was, a pink diamond since thats what I would like mines to be too.. humm but idk about the whole ten carat. A 6.1-carat pink diamond Harry Winston engagement ring would do.
[Report This]Date: Apr 13, 2013 12:45 am Title: Friends
This was one of my favorite/most fave part in the main story. I love hearing (reading) it from Michael's pov. To see how he reacted and thought about certain things. Gives this part of the story for me another feel and meaning to it, which I love.
This is a great idea to write the whole story with Mike's POV.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoy it. It was something that I had fiddled with a longtime ago and that was just sitting on my computer. i figured, 'why not?' lol. Thanks for giving it a chance.
[Report This]Date: Apr 11, 2013 04:54 pm Title: The Proposition
Yes I want you to continue :)!!!!! I absolutely love this story. I enjoyed part 1 so much :). Can't wait for the next part
Author's Response: I'm really glad you enjoyed PART ONE. I've tried to top it with Part Two. I've added so many new scenes and extended already present ones. Plus, added more jealously, fights, sex and romance! Coming soon tonight!
Date: Apr 11, 2013 02:44 pm Title: The Proposition
Thank you for the shoutout!! Please do a part 2... & 3... & 4.. Lol. But post more tonight pls! I like the idea of postin like 12 chapters at once. It gives me alot to read.
Author's Response: Yes. I don't know if i'll post them all in one day again, but i'm going to be getting them up pretty quick. Part two is one chapter away from being done, so i'm posting some of it tonight!
[Report This]Date: Apr 10, 2013 10:40 pm Title: Janet's New Dancer
So Michael was creeping lol. I wonder if Janet really thought that he was there for the rehearsals or to watch her female dancers, particularly Michelle. Either way, he was doing a good job at hiding the fact that he was watching Michelle.
Author's Response: LOL. Everyone says that 'about the creeping!' He wanted her bad. Haha.