[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2013 10:48 am Title: A New Guest
Lisa -_- that little snake lol. She should have just gone ahead with the divorce in the first place. Anyway, I can say that I had a few favorite parts in part two from the chapter where Michael and Michelle had gotten back together after the awards show to the chapter where Katherine mention "the thing" lol. I also enjoyed when baby Laya was born. Michael was just too cute and the shade that he constantly threw at Maurice was hilarious. Even though I enjoyed all of the chapters, my least favorite would have to be when Michelle got angry at Mike for trying to talk her out of leaving Maurice after he did what he did to her. She made me a little upset but then again it is hard for women in those types of situations to leave men who act that way. *sigh*
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2013 10:32 am Title: A Hospital Visit
Lisa knew that she was wrong for sparking up that drama while the man was in his hospital bed smh. Michael and Michelle are two of a kind. Those two just can't stay away from each other.
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2013 01:14 am Title: A Proposition
Michelle finally left him. Thank goodness. And she left with a bang Tina Turner style lol. Michael and Lisa are going downhill *sigh* He needs to go ahead and leave Lisa and go back to Michelle.
Date: Jun 10, 2013 08:55 pm Title: "Wait For Me"
Damn.. I can't say I'm mad at Michael. He made a damn good point. Michelle wants somebody to wait around with her and play games n shit, chile please. You only have one life to live. She doesn't even make sense honestly. You spent 8 years in and out of relationships for nothing because we all know she and Michael belong together. Here is a man that loves you, we know this for sure. You love him, that is for sure. What the hell is there to wait for? Michelle is tripping, I'm sorry. And ugh at the return of that fuckin Elvis in a wig. If he had good sense, he'd send that bitch back right from where she came from. And if I remember from the other story.. Martino comes after she leaves him again right? Smh at this hot mess chile. Lol. Michelle and Michael are both a mess. She really has no right to be mad. Now she's gonna watch him get married and have kids with Debbie's big matronly ass.
[Report This]Date: Jun 06, 2013 09:25 am Title: Stay
These two and their game playing! lol They staying fighting each other off but they know that they can't stay apart. They're like ying and yang.
[Report This]Date: Jun 06, 2013 09:00 am Title: A Confrontation
Lisa and her immature ways again. She just stayed sparking up trouble lol but Michelle wasn't having it. Michelle was right about Lisa not giving Mike enough credit though. As for the proposal at the end with Mike leaving Lisa...tsk tsk.
[Report This]Date: Jun 06, 2013 08:44 am Title: Just A Dream
Oh gosh. That kiss at the hospital opened Mike's eyes even more. Not only are his feelings for Michelle growing stronger but he's starting to dream about her too! He needs to get it together.
[Report This]Date: Jun 06, 2013 07:48 am Title: Maurice
Oh goodness. This dinner with Maurice was even worse from Mike's POV lol! Lisa just had to go and be a troll by trying to call Michelle out and Maurice made it even worse by doing the same to Michael smh. So sad that chaos brought apart Mike and Mel's friendship.
[Report This]Date: Jun 03, 2013 04:59 pm Title: Stay
And there goes Michelle, she gave into the fire. lol
[Report This]Date: Jun 03, 2013 04:53 pm Title: Domestic Disturbance
I feel bad for Michelle. Michelle doesn't wanna give into reality (that Michael is her life, her world, her everything) She is trying so hard to move on from Michael. Trying to find her own happiness and her daughters but its simply not working. But she doesnt want anyone to know, specially not Michael.
With Michael she can't win, if she pushes him away he get mad and becomes cold toward her. But if she has him close the love and feeling start to surface. .
But as to let a man hit you and just take it is a no no. I get at time some woman sit there and take it because the woman in love, (still not a reason to let a man lay a hand on you) but she doesn't even love this guy... IMO she is trying to look strong and not give up, all this fronting is for Michael. She doesn't want to look defeated lost and alone infront of him.
They (Mike and Michelle) to me have a competition who can be happier (or at least front too be) and who can last longer. Not really healthy for all 5 ppl involved.
Author's Response: "They (Mike and Michelle) to me have a competition who can be happier (or at least front too be) and who can last longer. BINGO! That's the whole premise of PART TWO. ha!
Date: Jun 02, 2013 11:55 am Title: Stay
I love this chapter, it really shows his love for her. I hope Lisa finds out what they did and she confronts Michelle. I'd think that be funny. They would have a big argument.
Also, I just wanted to let you know that I really look forward to this story, I wake up every moring then I check my Instagram, Twiiter, Facebook then here and I love to see that theirs another chapter. I never really make reviews, but I just wanted you to know that your stories are not being ingored.
Author's Response: Thanks. I really appericate you saying that. I put a lot of time in my chapters and am happy to hear that you enjoy what I put out. And i'll keep your consideration in mind. What they did may definitely come out later....
Date: Jun 02, 2013 10:49 am Title: Stay
Clearly Michael is NOT in love with Elvis in a wig. His actions have made that painfully obvious and it's a shame her dumb ass doesn't see that. Michael and Michelle are soul mates and they are wearing me out with this playing they're doing. Michael knows damn well he can't be Laya's dad because she's still married and because unfortunately Maurice is her father. This is just a mess.
[Report This]Date: Jun 01, 2013 01:55 am Title: Prologue
I came across the other one you wrote but did not have time to read it so i will definitely read this
Date: May 31, 2013 11:03 pm Title: Domestic Disturbance
Michelle is a broken ass mess. She knows damn well she still loves Michael which is why she said that bullshit. Ho sit down. You're not fooling anybody. Any woman who stays with a cheating and beating ass man, deserves the shit. Period. She has a daughter. Is that what she wants her child to grow up seeing? Stop being a stupid stubborn bitch Michelle. Meanwhile Michael needs to leave Lisa's haggard ass too.
Author's Response: "Ho sit down!" HA! lOVE IT! I agree with everything stated. But you know they're stubborn as hell. Michael's always waiting on Michelle to make the first move and vice versa.
[Report This]Date: May 29, 2013 11:23 pm Title: A Confrontation
Never thought I would do this but... I agree with Lisa, she is right. At the end of the day Lisa is his wife and Michelle is his ex best friend of not. They are is most likely they are going to rub of shoulders. Duh Mike. Specially if he is keeping her around the way he is and showing the affection he is. Yea Michelle is his best friend but Lisa is his WIFE, meaning priority. Cuz I am sure If it was the other way around, Lisa his best friend and Michelle his wife. If Michelle told him either her or Lisa and he didn't have feeling for Lisa, he would have given Lisa her space. So Lisa has all the right to be mad and annoyed.
“So are you saying you choose her?” she challenged.
“Maybe.” I said. Thats soo f'ed up. Damn cold.
As for Michelle, I'm sure she can see that Michael Michael still has feeling for her. Its wrong for her not to stop Michael, or to tell him to stop. They might still love each other but they are married to other people.
Author's Response: You're right. Michael married Lisa so he needs to start treating her better. He claims that Michelle is his best friend, but it's clear he easily gets the roles mixed up. It's hard for him to see her as anything but his ex and the woman he once loved. And as for Michelle, she loves the attention. lol