Date: Apr 30, 2013 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 13
Continue please
Author's Response:
I will
Date: Apr 30, 2013 04:34 am Title: Chapter 13
gosh i think michael should say sorry to her maybe talk to her make her love him i don't want her to go away to ryn away from them
Author's Response:
I can't promise that, Enya is a captive. But it may change if she falls for Michael... Not saying anything else about it ;)





Date: Apr 29, 2013 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 13
Omfgggggg finally xD Bria's awake. The kissing scene and Bria; that was HILARIOUS! Annie, your one of my favourite writers. Don't you ever fucking stop writing, or I'm honna go thriller on you c: I was wondering if you hand kik or twitter?
Oh, btw, I'm sooooo sorry for being such a silent reader. I'll hopefully review more for you. :33
Much LOVE,
Shiniee xx
Author's Response:
Yup, Michael's baby is awake! Thank you so much! I'm not planning on stopping killing you with my cliffhanger either :)
I have no idea what Kik is... Either I'm so two thousand and late or it's an iPhoen stuff LOL! You did ask me about Twitter last night so I made one:
https://twitter.com/BaddieAnnie
Thank you for the review :)





Date: Apr 29, 2013 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 12
Thuggy Bear, lol. Michael is a hot mess! Smh, but ah I can tell he about to make this Cyrus guy pay for fuck with his daughters life. I just hope he realize that he needs a safe environment for her and Enya. I'm looking forward to reading all the juicy details about what giving Enya nightmares.
Author's Response:
Hello Vicki :D
I was actually checking the review when I saw yours. Destinyyyyyy! Don't ask, I don't even know where I found this "Thuggy Bear" nickname LOL! WHoever Cyrus is, I hope he is praying because his life is about to end... soon! Well, those details are coming soon too... But not that soon actually LOL! Keep your eyes close to clues ;)
Thank you for the review and the rate Vicki :D
Date: Apr 28, 2013 07:47 am Title: Chapter 12
i want moooooooooore :D
Author's Response:
moooooooooore soon :)
Date: Apr 28, 2013 05:17 am Title: Chapter 12
hehehe i hope she will fall for him soon they are something elses
Author's Response:
Indeed :D! Thanks for readind and leaving a review ;)
Date: Apr 28, 2013 05:00 am Title: Chapter 12
Continue please
Author's Response:
I will, next chapter soon :)
Date: Apr 25, 2013 03:27 am Title: Chapter 11
Continue please
Author's Response:
I will! Next chapter online ;)





Date: Apr 24, 2013 08:21 am Title: Chapter 11
Jeez....talk about being torn!
I think Michael could do better by leaving Enya alone for a while, give her space, stop the threats, take back all his torturous comments, and then try coming at her in a different way. Michael is really fucked up for making his child believe that Enya was "coming around to stay." if any man did something like this to Michael's daughter, Michael would KILL HIM.
Fuckin hypocritical crazy ass motherfucker. Come at ME bro!!! YOu think you a badass cuz you force women into shit and you got a gun and people scared of your bum ass?? YOU THINK YOU BAD??
....I just realized the irony of using this gif to talk about Michael....BUT MY POINT STILL STANDS! lol
Author's Response:
Hey Lovely RC :)) You don't know how excited I always get when I receive a review from you :)
I think Michael want too far to let Enya go just like this. Poor girl needs to put up with his shit... Or run away! One way or another, it's too late to step back :S. Indeed, I did not even think about Michael's reaction if it was Bria at Enya's place. MAN, he would go banana and shot everything and everybody!!!
WHO THE FUCK TOUCHED MY BABY MOTHERFUCKERS?!!! *Michael's voice*
HAHAHA! I just love how passionate you are about it :D! Michael is too dep in his craziness to even think about the consequences of his acts. Who gon knock some sense into him?!
LMAO! You point still stands!
HAHA Love ya girl. Lot of love and ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥



Date: Apr 23, 2013 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 11
The attraction between Enya and Michael is hot! It's gonna be fire when they finally make love.
But I'm curious as to who is Enya running away from before she met Bria and Michael? What happen to Bria's mother? Who shot Bria? Was she the intended victim? And what will Michael do about all this?
There are many clues in this story and not everything seems as cut dry as it is, which I like in a story!
Author's Response:
Indeed! Your comments on their attraction reminds me of the sng "Fire We Make" by Alicia Keys and Maxwell ;) !
Indeed, a lot of mysteries that will be resolved on folowwing chapters. But don't forget to make your imagine works and keep your eyes open. I'm curious to hear about your theory about it :). Tell me!! :)
Thank you Love :) New chapter online ;)
Date: Apr 23, 2013 04:22 am Title: Chapter 11
aww b/c You can't not love Michael right ;P
Author's Response: haha! So true :) Thank you for the review ;))




Date: Apr 22, 2013 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 11
I love this story at certain scene's so you deserve some stars.
Author's Response: Which scenes?





Date: Apr 22, 2013 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 11
I love badass Micheal and i been reading this for awhile. Sorry for being silent but i just had to tell you how much i love this!
Michael is such a turn on when he's like this! I'm just a sucker and weak for bad ass Michael. Lol I really need to start brancing out and reading other Michael portrays im trying but my fetish is bad :/ lol and the way you writes this make me want more! You have to continue please make more chapters! Thank you!
Author's Response:
Oh, it's ok honey :)) A slong as you like it! Well get ready, because it's about to get even juicier (just waiting for my exams to end and I will be back with massive DRAMMMAAA)
I agree, a cocky badass Michael is just so ADNQODCSZOQGEJZ..... Lawd, I can't even explain my feelings!
Girl, just let me slay those exams and I will be back with at least a chapter every 3 days LOL! Stay tuned :)





Date: Apr 22, 2013 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 11
Enya feeling Michael now? I don't know with all these cliffhangers LOL
& I really do hope Bria makes it through, update soon dearly<3
Author's Response:
Hahah! I will let you decide if she is or not ;) Next chapter soon, I know I am killing you with it. Thank you for the review :)
Date: Apr 21, 2013 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 10
:O can't wait for next chapter!
Author's Response:
I will be online soon :)