[Report This]Date: May 13, 2013 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 17
Now that's was foul...Michael should punch the faces of both Kaleb and Cyrus...poor Enya! i love the chapter...can't wait for her to successfully change her identity and read how she does it.
Author's Response:
The only thing Michael knows is that Cyrus is the one who hired that guy to shot Enya. Michael doesn't know that Enya was the real target and he doesn't know what they are planning. I can't for him to got wind of it :D. Next chapter soon ;D
Date: May 13, 2013 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 17
This 1 of them stories that u dnt know who to believe or who side to be on! Update soon!
Author's Response:
Exactly what I like in a story haha! I will ;-)
[Report This]Date: May 13, 2013 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 17
You've left me on the edge of my seat girl! I think that Michael's crazy ass controlling behavior has an explanation in the way Kenya died. Perhaps he is paranoid it will happen again? I think this is what Bria was trying to tell her, to get her to understand him better. Unfortunately Michael's actions are now making Enya play right into Cyrus' hands. Hopefully she sees the truth.
Author's Response:
Hello Camilleian :) ! I'm glad I did haha! Indeed, it may have, more informations in the following chapters ;-). Enya needs to RUN! haha! Thank you for the review Love :D
Date: May 07, 2013 11:01 am Title: Prologue
Oh you are more than welcome! I love stories that are mysterious and unpredictable and trust me your writing skillz are BOMB! Because you got me on the edge of my seat with this one. I be like a drug addict waiting for the next fix of this story, lol.
Oh and as far as Drake goes. I love that he reps baby girl, because ain't nobody else giving her love and it brings her a whole new audience. Kind of like how this site brought me to want to learn more about MJ. Anyway I was down with the Aaliyah album, until I found out that Timbo and Missy weren't in the mix. Like really Tim, Missy, Liyah, My husband Ginuwine, and Magoo was the Shit back in the 90's. That was the crew and they were like a second family to Aaliyah. I think they deserved to be on the project too. And I feel because Drake wanted to do it alone, he got a lot of backlash and decided to not go thru with it. I didn't like his song ft Aaliyah no way. But I still support my man Drake because he is talented and anyone reppin my sista Liyah gets my vote.
Author's Response:
Hahah, this is exactly how I would describe my story "mysterious and unpredictable" and get ready because there will be MORE soon :). Don't worry you'll have your fix soon
I love Drake too and it's real that nobody was checking for Aaliyah until he released that song. And as you said if Timbaland and Missy doesn't work on it, I don't want to hear it. I love Aaliyah and even though I'm pissed that she isn't coming back, I do believe that isn't necessary to do a posthume album. What Aaliyah left us is enough for a lifetime. More than a woman or Try Again are timeless and I want to keep it that way ;)
Thank you for the review ;)
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2013 02:45 am Title: Chapter 16
Oh no and now Michael is in love with her right after he took her virginity and everything. He seem to grow on her to. This may not sit right with Enya leaving i bet she won't be able to get away ;) I'm sure Michael has his ways... i hope. Lol
I loved this wonderful chapter darling GO GO GO!
Author's Response:
Hey Rate! Glad to see you reviewing my story :D!!
I bet she is second-guessing it now. But let's not forget all the crazy stuff he did to her too!
Thank youuuuuuu! Next chater soon :)
Date: May 06, 2013 11:31 pm Title: Prologue
So Enya is really the beautiful Aaliyah.... Awww sookie sookie now! Shit just got real!!!!! LOL And she let him give the D... well... At least he was gentle and considerate of her body. And why do I feel like Mike only gave her the D because he knows that if she gets dickmatized she wont wanna leave. Trust me I have seen some women that will be with a no good dude and stay forever because he put it on em too damn good. But anyway can't wait to find out why Enya has nightmares and why she changed her name and also if she was ever the famous singer or not. Keep updating because I can't get enough of this story, its so good and you are a talented writer. Plus I loved Aaliyah, got her name tatted... Love my boo Mikey too. These two together are just ooozing sexiness!!!!!
Author's Response:
Hey new reader :DD
Indeed, that was steamy!
And yup, he put it on he real good but I don't think she will forgibe him for everything he did just because he is good in bed. But who knows how dickmatized she is haha! And, I don't mean to give too many clues but no Aaliyah wasn't the famous singer before, I choose he real name because I was too lazy to make up another one. It took me 2 hours to come out with "Enya Varner" and that's just a mix of two singers' names LOL! And for her nightmares, it's coming! If you read it carefuly, there some clues you must have see :D ;) You may want to re-read it again if you want to discover it... Or read the next chapters haha! I promise it's coming really soon! But there so many things to discover too like the way Kenya died? If it's really Michael's fault? If revenge if only what Cyrus wants? What role will have Kaleb? Oouh! I have a lot of work to do!
I love me some Aaliyah too. She is ( I hate writtin/saying was) artist I love how her styled evolved from Age ain't nothing but a number to Aaliyah! And More than a Woman is a fucking classic, I can listen to it in 10 years and it will be still DOPE! This is real music and some singers ut here needs to take notes (side eye to Rihanna., Cassie...). I love Aaliyah and I don't know what you think about Drake's obsession but I am so glad he gave up on his project of an posthume album with him. That was so not cool. But I like Enough said (the version without drake)
THANK YOU for the lovely review and I will see you for the next chapter :D
Date: May 06, 2013 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 16
Wow continue please
Author's Response:
next chapter soon :D
[Report This]Date: May 06, 2013 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 16
I'm glad that she finally let him hit it! That was probably the hottest sex scene I've ever read. Michael was so sweet and gentle with her that my opinion of him has changed somewhat. I can understand why she still wants to run, I would too if I were in her position, but now I kind of hope that she stays! I'm just as torn as Enya's hymen.
Author's Response:
"I'm just as torn as Enya's hymen."
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: May 06, 2013 06:32 am Title: Chapter 16
ugh, the conflict within me...
You write amazing sexual scenes. Really amazing. And I would be using this review to gush over it had there been different cirumstances, like the fact that Enya would have never been her by choice and there is a false sense of choice given to her by this interaction. In the morning, he's still holding her against her will on pain of death. He doesn't love her. I hope she knows it. And I can't wait for her to run.
I know she loves Bria, and look, I love Bria too, but Bria is not my daughter, and Bria seems to be the only person Michael actually treats right, and I'm not about to go through hell just to give Bria a false sense that she has a mother.
I know that sounds harsh, but honestly Bria deserves a mother figure that is there by CHOICE. Bria needs to be in an environment that empowers women to make their choices, not built off lies and blackmail.
Run ENYA RUN!
Author's Response:
Hey my love 😛💕
Waw, thank you! I'm sorry for the typos, I didn't feel like re-read it again, writing it was such an ordeal lol! As usual, all everything you're saying is the truth. So imma need christina aguilera to respond for this one
If it wasn't for Bria, Enya would be long gone. But it's just a matter of time until she finds a way to get the hell outta here! And no, you don't sound harsh at all. If Bria is smart enough she will realize that Enya isn't here because she chose it!
Thank you very much for this amazing and so true review! I'll see you on the next chapter... Or on your next story 😍
LOVE YAAAAAA
Date: May 06, 2013 05:32 am Title: Chapter 16
i still hope she won't leave him :(
Author's Response:
Next chapter soon :D
Date: May 06, 2013 04:24 am Title: Chapter 16
Update soon, I love it
Author's Response:
I will :D
[Report This]Date: May 06, 2013 03:36 am Title: Chapter 16
This chapter was amazing. It's breaking my heart that she plans to leave him. He said he loves her and that is the truth. They make great love together. I hope she wont leave him or if she does she will still go back to him. 10 stars for this chapter Ms. Annie.
Author's Response:
Thank you :D
Well, we shouldn't forget that Michael forced the poor girl :S! I'm so honored for those 10 stars :D!!!! Next chapter soon ;)
Date: May 06, 2013 02:04 am Title: Chapter 16
michael is so sweet <3
i just want them to be together, loving each other :') please please enya give him a chance!
keep it up! :D <3
Author's Response:
Aww, me too! That would be SWEET! Let's see what happen on the next chapter :D
Date: May 06, 2013 12:41 am Title: Chapter 16
Aww don't leave him Enya .. he loves you but then again he forced his way with enya . continue this is so interesting :D
Author's Response:
You're right! Michael's love is not enough to forget about everything he did to her! Next chapter soon :D
Date: May 05, 2013 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 15
Continue please
Author's Response:
Next chapter online :) !