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I love this! Omg, this is awesome for a first story. Specially, you REALLY don't seem like somebody who doesn't have English as their first language. Well, I don't either, I'm a Pakistani, but people say I don't seem like one.
Anyway, you need to write more, I'm loving this. Jane 👌👌 I love how she isn't those 'omg, MJ just talked to ME' kinda people.
Continue!!'
Shiniee xx
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! =D and i am a pakistani too =p well yeah, that's how Jane is, that is how i wanted her to be like =)





Date: Mar 20, 2013 06:49 am Title: Chapter 1
Yhew Started This Story Off Different,From Other Stories. I Like That.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! i'm not very good with fluffiness, but it will come eventually =)