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Reviewer: SunniVan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 25, 2013 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 2: Lost Cause

Uh-oh... I sense Michael is going to do something crazy any moment now... LOL



Author's Response: Hey sunni:) haha yeah michaels on the verge of doing something crazy:) thanks for reading & reviewing! You're the best<3

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2013 11:11 am Title: Chapter 4: Michelle

i think is b/c when somebody who you love doesn't fulfil ypur need how you like it



Author's Response: Hey sweetie:) uh I don't know because indirectly if Michael is dissatisfied with his wife he could always cheat on her. I think he has different reasoning for doing what he plans to do. Thanks again for reading & reviewing!!

Reviewer: vinaya595 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 23, 2013 06:22 am Title: Chapter 4: Michelle

geez that was HAWT!!!! Yeah the last two lines really do make sense. great chapter... AGAIN!  :) <3 <3 <3



Author's Response: hahaha thanks! i thought I kind of rushed it but next time I'll slow things down and make them last a little longer lol hah you're so sweet:] thanks for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: Rate Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2013 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 4: Michelle

He's such a good husband but inside he's so horrible to his wife cause he's about to rape this poor women. Damn it!

Continue darling

GO GO GO!

Author's Response: haha I know hes a special kind of guy haha thanks for reading and reviewing! im happy youre enjoying this!

Reviewer: Annie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2013 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 4: Michelle

Sam is the perfect housewife! I can't for her to realize she married a psycho LMAO

Michael is simply too good like thumb up


Sam thought something was wrong with him and now SHE thinks it's her fault if Michael is acting weird. Good, you're good Michael!
I swear, at some point she is going to think it's her fault if Michael rape women...

Hey! I did not know Ashley Tran had a daughter called Michelle :o LMAO. They are disgrace for women...

C'mon Sam! "I ran this bath for you Michael, not me and you." <-- That killed me
JOIN HIM IN THE BATH DAMNIT

I'm so confused; how can he be so soft and gentle with Sam? How can he claim loving her? While planning to rape a girl. I hope we will understand how it started and above all WHY does he feel the ned to do it.
Oh my, and he is planning how he is going to hurt the girl he is watching while laying next to her. I swear, psycho way of life

For once, I really don't know what you are going to do with Michelle and I'm eager to know! Can't wait for the next chapter ;)



Author's Response: Hey annie!<3 hah sams a really good person and though she might pick up on Michael acting sort of strange he always finds a way to brush it off. hahah love the gif! easy A is my movie:] hes smart, I can tell you can sense shes insecure and such and Michael takes advantage of that. hes the ultimate manipulator. haha no Michelle isn't Ashleys daughter. they aren't related. Michelle just happens to be one of the interns at bigger business and ashley, scott and Michael are the ones who mentor them. hahah Sam was trying to think of anything to say. bless her heart. I don't want to say he in a sense has split personalities but its kind of like he does, if that makes sense. don't get me wrong he truly does love sam but its like his thirst for power and dominance are too strong and he feels taking advantage of that girl is the only way he'll truly get the feeling/high he wants. As the story progresses you guys will learn more background history on him and how he started to lose himself. haha Michelle will be interesting:] thanks so much for the reading and reviewing<33 I know I told you countless times but youre the best!

Reviewer: Alyaka Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2013 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 4: Michelle

Oh god this is getting better and better!  I love how he's planning out his first attack on his victim and I can't wait to see when he does it.  I love this story! Please update again soon! I can't hardly wait to see what he does.  :) 



Author's Response: omg you're so freaking sweet! <33 honestly! haha he still has the business trip so a few more chapters to go but im on spring break now so I will be updating more frequently I promise! thank you especially for your constant love and support!<33

Reviewer: damonikalovesmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2013 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 4: Michelle

I'm wondering the same thing. Why is he doing this? Lol. Loved it!



Author's Response: hahah well I can't necessarily justify or completely explain his motives but you guys will find out:] Im happy youre enjoying this story!! thanks for reading and reviewing<333

Reviewer: Alyaka Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2013 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 3: Supplies

Please post again I'm dieing to see what happens on that business trip! Pwetty pwease with sugar and whipped cream on top? I'l even be generous and throw in a cherry! *smirk* 



Author's Response: Hahaha I swear I'll update today but a little later because I have to take a final at 11:30 but i should be able to update by 1-1:30 haha sorry for the delay!

Reviewer: vinaya595 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2013 07:24 am Title: Chapter 3: Supplies

You know its scary! I srsly cnt thionk of what you have in mind. Keep posting



Author's Response: Haaha I like to keep my readers guessing:) thanks for reviewing and reading hun!

Reviewer: Rate Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2013 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 3: Supplies

I had to read this chapter all over again and I can't believe Michael's gonna do that to this poor girl knowing his is married. Has he lost his mind?? O..o

Author's Response: Aww you're so sweet! Yeah Michaels not all there, or else he would be thinking more clearly. Thank you for reading and reviewing<33 you're a doll!

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2013 04:54 am Title: Chapter 3: Supplies

omg Michael is crazy but i love this story



Author's Response: Hahah yeah Michael is a cracked egg lol thanks so much for reading and reviewing<33

Reviewer: Rate Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2013 12:09 am Title: Chapter 3: Supplies

Continue!

GO GO GO!

Author's Response: Haha I'm happy youre enjoying this:) thank you for reading and reviewing!:))

Reviewer: Jabberwock Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2013 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 3: Supplies

Oohh, it's getting good!  I can't wait to see what happens next! Thanks for updating so quickly.



Author's Response: Haha no problem at all :) thank you so much for reading and reviewing<3 youre so sweet!

Reviewer: Dreamer102 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2013 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 3: Supplies

Omg! Michael's been watching a bit too much CSI xD Wow I wonder how long he's been on the edge... Mr. Smith sure is a booty but I can understand that intimidating and demanding part lol It shows that there are still cracks in Michael's facade and I hope he realizes that and not just brushes it off as BS his stupid boss said. 



Author's Response: Hahahahahaha good one! Hes been there for quite some time but his pursit for CEO and all the work hes been doing kind of pushed his over. Hah yeah Mr. Smith is an asshole but hes honest. You're right Michael better check himself!

Reviewer: Annie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2013 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 3: Supplies

Oh my, how many times Michael already did this? Like he already knows all the thing to do not to get caught. This is getting so flipping crazy that nobody ever suspects him. He looks so normal and poor Sam if she knew she  was married to a serial rapist! She is too innocent to even think about Michael doing something wrong. Wel, I hope she will catch up soon and leave his ass.

Damn Michel has some serious deadly thoughts! Fortunately he is able to control himself but I don't think it will be able to around Trashy Tran!

Michael "King of stalking" Jackson! Damn, she should be more careful about what she does.

Don't mean to sounds twisted but when is he going to make a move on her LMAO?

PS: I know you luv mah gifs but I couldn't find one to describe my feelings :) Cna't wait for the next chaptaa



Author's Response: Hey Annie:)! She will actually be his first victim, hes just done a lot of reasearch and hes highly intelligent so he knows. He has studied the flaws of others and knows the mistakes not to make. Yeah lets hope Sam catchs on and can do something, absolutely anything to help. Thank the lord he is, if he acted on every thought he had he would seriously that would be crazy. Haha yeah king of stalking hahah thats funny! Uhh some ish will go on on the business trip so he'll be fueled from that so you can anticipate it being soon after that. Haha its all good:) im just happy you choose to read my stories and always give such sweet reviews<3 I adore you!

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