Date: Oct 21, 2019 10:13 am Title: Chapter 7: Acting Out
Even though Michael isn't any better than Ashley , I believe this will all came back and bite ashley. I don't think she will last long anyway working there especially sex and stealing is all she can do to bring something to the table.
Date: Oct 21, 2019 10:13 am Title: Chapter 7: Acting Out
Even though Michael isn't any better than Ashley , I believe this will all came back and bite ashley. I don't think she will last long anyway working there especially sex and stealing is all she can do to bring something to the table.
Author's Response: Yuppp, karmas a bitch!!
Date: Jul 20, 2019 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 11: Denial
Wow Michael is a pathological liar, he completely gas lighted Tran. He’s out of his mind and it is somehow very compelling to read!
Author's Response: Michael is a nut haha. Thank you for reading!!
Date: Jul 16, 2019 02:30 am Title: Chapter 6: Sabotage
This was funny, as soon as she changed Michael’s clock I was like, *gasp* what a bitch!
Author's Response: Right?! Who does that!!
Date: Jul 15, 2019 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 3: Supplies
Omg this story is so different and I’m not going to lie Michael’s sneaking around is giving me anxiety, can’t wait to read more x
Author's Response: Thank you boo!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2018 07:12 am Title: Introduction
Just finished reading everything. This story was SO. FREAKING. GOOD. It kinda reminded me a bit of American Psycho.
Michael was outta his mind! The abuse, the pressures of life, everything got to him BAD (no pun intended). But I also feel like something was missing inside of him. Like something had to have been off with him mentally like an undiagnosed disorder (or maybe that's just the psych major in me talking lol). People go through shit everyday, but they don't go on raping/murdering rampages.
I feel so bad for Jennifer & Vanessa. Two innocent women caught in the crossfire. Sam, Scott, Victoria hell even Mr. Smith, they all knew Michael for so long, but in the end didn't really know him at all.
Then Ashley, oh my God! Pretty upsetting to learn she was a victim of sexual abuse. The whole "office slut" thing was all a misunderstanding. But honestly, at the end of the day Michael already had misogynistic tendencies. So with Ashley, it was just confirmation bias.
I was completely taken it. Like my mouth was literally open reading this story from beginning to end. Good work, girl!
Author's Response: Thank you so much boo! I’m happy you enjoyed the story!!!
[Report This]Date: Apr 27, 2018 02:06 pm Title: Introduction
This story is amazing. I can’t stop reading it especially the ending
Author's Response: Thank you my love!!
Date: Jul 03, 2015 05:56 am Title: Chapter 50: Michael
Deep story I started reading it, and then I was pulled in. Just wow. :)
Author's Response: Aww yay I'm so happy I was able to draw you in and keep you entertained. Thank you!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 29, 2015 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 50: Michael
Wow... Very neat, as well as very brilliant and well-written, too. I like it, especially this part:
Michael was like a stealthy lion.
He watched and observed to make sure it was safe, then he attacked.
They never saw it coming.
(I can imagine Michael as a vampire hero doing something along those lines to the criminals, especially the female criminals (who I refer to as "Deadly Women", after the Investigation Discovery show of that very name)... ;)
Keep up your super-neat, very phenomenal and creatively beautiful writing! :)
Author's Response: Thank you love!! Very happy you enjoyed my story!!!
Date: Jun 23, 2015 12:59 pm Title: Introduction
This was literally the best story EVER!!!! I really miss this story though , you should make a similar fanfic 🙌🏾 :))
Author's Response: Haha I'm so happy you enjoyed it. Thank you!!! I have considered writing other stories but I am so cluttered with work and school, its hard to find time to really put my ideas down. I love crazy mj so hopefully this isnt the only story from me.
Date: Mar 19, 2015 07:13 am Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to his world
I'm so happy I found this story. I read it when you first wrote it and it was so good now I'm reading it again.
Author's Response: Thank you so much doll! Im so happy you enjoyed my story so much you had to read it a second time! Thank you!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2014 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 50: Michael
This is the best story ever! I read this story the first tim maybe 3 or 4 months ago and after I finished it I was blown away. It was either Friday or Saturday when I was like "I'm gonna read this story again!", and now that I finished it again it still blew me away. You really have a talent because of the way you describe Michael's actions and his demenor is really astonishing! I honestly can't tell you how many times I have thought to myself that this should really be a movie. Like seriously gir, keep up the fantastic work. YOUR FLAWLESS!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Im so happy you enjoyed my story to a point were u had to come back and reread it. You have no idea how much that means to me. Your kind words make my heart swell. Michael is my inspiration but you lovelies are my motivation thank you soo much!
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2014 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 50: Michael
OMG I Caught up with this story a while back and I can't believe I forgot to review!!!
I loved this from start to finish, this has been one of the most entertaining and creative stories ever, not once have you disappointed throughout XD Its actually one of the very few MJ fics I've ever completely finished as a whole story! Whoo
You're a sensational writer and I sure hope I see you in the 'most recent' soon with another kickass story XD
Well done, 10/10 all around, excellent job! :D
Author's Response: Aww your words are so sweet, thank you so much! I had my doubts with this story because of the graphic content but I see you guys seem to enjoy it haha. Thanks so much again, I intend to start writing again soon! I just need to develop a sound plot for my story:)!
Date: May 25, 2014 07:19 am Title: Introduction
that was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo goooooood please make anohter story like this but this time michael is going to be obessed with a girl or kidnap her or something pleeeeaaasssseee:)
Author's Response: Hah thanks so much, I'm really happy you enjoyed my story! I intend on writing again soon, I just need to develop the story a bit more:)
Date: Apr 08, 2014 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 50: Michael
Wow. Such an amazing story!!! That's crazy that him and Ashley were friends at one point. He should've really heard her out, that coulda saved a lot of bs from happening. Smh wow. Just misunderstood all around. I really loved this story. Great job!
Author's Response: I know it would've prevented sooo much. Thank you soo much, I'm really happy you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for supporting me since day one!