[Report This]Date: Apr 18, 2013 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 10: Phenomenal
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA :D
Ashley is a little pussie whenever Michael is about to attack her punk ass!
She ain't so bad now with her funky ass eff outta here!
She think she could get away with that shit? She messing with the wrong Nigga Mike don't play so she betta step back.
As fo Jennifer. I feel sorry for that girl lol lawed knows she didn't deserve that. Oh well she got raped by a really attractive guy though... does that count?
Only if she saw his face then she'd change her mind. I prolly would too! After seeing his beaitful face i'd prolly let that NIgga do me as much as he wants.
Like yea man come on here fo seconds I'm right here babe you want some nookie so bad then come and get me ;P He is one crazed Nigga I like that though in some messed up way.
I guess that makes me cray? I'm a little cray anyway so i ain't scared of that man. Mikey boy bye!
Continue soon hun!
Author's Response: I love the fact that we have the same name first off hah. Exactly Ashley thought she ran things but nope Michael does. He had to put her in her place and fear was his way of doing that. Poor Jennifer, I can't imagine how she feels. Hahahahhaha you're tooooo much! I'm sure you're not crazy hahah thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!,
[Report This]Date: Apr 18, 2013 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 10: Phenomenal
*whew*
That was intense.
He scared the shit out of Ashley... GOOD!
I know that's wrong, but that's fucked up what she did. And she has the nerve to taunt him too? Nah... fuck that. You wanna be all big, bad and bold Ashley... you gotta deal with the consequences.
I swear, Mike is so scary in this story... I LOVE IT!! What a thrill! Haha!!
I know it's only a matter of time before he gets her ass!!
Great update!
Sunni*
Author's Response: Hah Michael felt it was necessary to instill some fear in her since hes pissed off. Exactly Ashley is trying to run a train over Michael and cant hah. Thanks for much for reading and reviewing! Happy you're enjoying this!
Date: Apr 18, 2013 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 10: Phenomenal
Lol I love this story, even ifyou are a tease haha
Author's Response: Haha I'm happy you're enjoying it & haha I know I'm sorry! ! Thanks for reading and revewing!!
[Report This]Date: Apr 18, 2013 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 10: Phenomenal
Woa!...Michael was down right mean...geezus he is scary
Author's Response: Yeah hes a bit of an asshole in this one. Well he was pissed off so even im surprised he didn't do more damage. Luckily Mr. Smith interfered. Thanks for reading and reviewing<333
Date: Apr 18, 2013 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 10: Phenomenal
I knew karma would all be up in Ashley's ass. She thought she could run over Michael, the tables have turned hasn't it Ashley? I feel bad for Jennifer. She'll never know who the guy is (for now). If Ashley wasn't afraid of Michael then, she is now! XD she better watch her back.
Author's Response: I know Ashley thought she was slick but no Michaels got things in the bag haha & I know she has no idea who Michael is :/ thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Date: Apr 13, 2013 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 9: Release
I am in complete love with this story.. My goodness. Maybe I'm a lil crazy too. Haha. Anywho, I can't wait to see what he does to Ashley. Rape would be too good for that slut, he just needs to beat or kill her altogether. Can't wait to see what's next. I hope she doesn't get promoted over him!
Author's Response: Aww I'm happy you love it! Thank you! Hahah I'm sure you're not crazy hah. You'll have to wait and see what happens with Ashley. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!
[Report This]Date: Apr 13, 2013 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 9: Release
OMG...why Michael...why? Jennifer deserves better than that...
Author's Response: I know poor girl, It's going to take some time for her to heal. Thanks so much for reading my story and leaving such sweet reviews! You're the best!
[Report This]Date: Apr 13, 2013 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 8: Motives
Michael is trying to find some semblance of normalcy! Scary how he is balancing it! Geez its like he has split personalities ...great work!
Author's Response: He's good, hes fooling everyone around him. Thanks so much for your support! You're soo sweet:)
[Report This]Date: Apr 13, 2013 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 7: Acting Out
Michael has the right to be mad.
Author's Response: I don't know one person who wouldn't be mad after that. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing<333
[Report This]Date: Apr 13, 2013 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 6: Sabotage
That B...poor Michael
Author's Response: She totally screwed him over, she did it right under his nose too :/
[Report This]Date: Apr 13, 2013 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 5: Conflict
Ashley is right about working harder...its a mans world out there...but a good head doesn't need open legs to get you that far...self respect!
Author's Response: Exactly, thats what Ashley was lacking. She should've worked harder. Thanks for reading and reviewing<333
[Report This]Date: Apr 13, 2013 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 4: Michelle
Michelle...geez...wat a bitch...and Sam is great...ways with Michael....huh.
Author's Response: Haha yeah Michelle isn't the best of people. Poor sammy she doesn't even really know the man shes with. Thanks for reading and reviewing<33
[Report This]Date: Apr 13, 2013 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 2: Lost Cause
This story takes me to my reality of working in an office setting...I worked fair and hard to climb the corpo ladder but there are people who thinks otherwise and becoz im a female it made me vulnerable to insufferable assumptions...damned luv this story!
Author's Response: Aww that really sucks, in ashley case she actually did sleep around to move up the ladder. Shes the one who makes everyone else look bad. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing<3
[Report This]Date: Apr 13, 2013 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to his world
Woah! First time to read this now im glued....damn!
Author's Response: Hahah I'm happy I already got you hooked haha ;) thanks for reading and reviewing<3
Date: Apr 13, 2013 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 9: Release
I loved it...:)
Author's Response: Haha Thanks again:)