Date: Apr 27, 2013 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 11: Denial
Ooh are they gonna do it love this story
Author's Response: Happy you are enjoying this:] thanks for the review!
Date: Apr 27, 2013 07:07 am Title: Chapter 11: Denial
I am waitinggggggggggg to see how Michael gets his way with Ashley.... That better be good. Although I really dont understand the way he behaved with Sam shes such a darling....
Anyways keep updating... Lovin It! ;)
Author's Response: haha he'll get his way. I'll be sure of it. ;] I know sams a sweetheart. poor girl. thanks for the reading and reviewing!
Date: Apr 26, 2013 08:55 am Title: Chapter 11: Denial
*death sounds* Well at least Ashley is on the same page as Mike. I was hoping he'd apologize or something but nope. Poor Sam and Michael. He needs her to stay sane but she kinda deserves a bit better. Idk maybe Michael just needs to try harder. Also I don't think that feeling he had before he raped Jennifer is going to stay away. I don't think it'll be that easy.
Author's Response: hahah the last thing michael would do is apologize. he doesn't feel remorse. Lets hope he can get some type of help. thanks for reading and reviewing<333
Date: Apr 25, 2013 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 11: Denial
omg ithought michael was about to do somethng with sam....im loving it... haha
Author's Response: haha he ain't that crazy. his wife is on a different level, he wouldn't voluntarily hurt her. thanks for reading and revewing! happy youre enjoying this
Date: Apr 25, 2013 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 11: Denial
Is this weird me wanting Ashley to fall in love with michael and want him..poor sam
Author's Response: haha I don't think its weird but that would be a crazy plot twist hah thanks for reading and reviewing<33
Date: Apr 25, 2013 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 11: Denial
Wow Michael.. Real smart calling your wife by the name of the chick you brutally raped. Smh terrible. Sam seems like such a sweetheart. If she left Michael, he would really go off the deep end. Or if she had an affair, I know for a fact Michael would commit murder on whomever she cheated with. Man this is crazy, but I love how he got that lying trifling slut Ashley wrapped around his fingers. I can't wait to see how he will continue to fuck her world up for lying and stealing from him!
Author's Response: I know on michaels part. talk about a derp moment. yeah that wouldn't fly with Michael. hes a possessive guy. what he wants, he gets. lets see how ashley acts in the coming chapters hah. thanks for reading and reviewing<33
[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2013 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 11: Denial
Dang, this was intense for me. LMAO when he said: "What happen to your cheek Ashley?" "I accidentally hit myself with my blow dryer." "Sorry to hear that.". I cracked up ! Lol I dunno why but it was soooo funny to me. And when he called Sam Jennifer ommmmmg sjdgbhsabagsidbhbdjsjndjshb I was like noooo Michael . But then Sam was so Naive. Hopefully she does a little investigating.
Author's Response: haha I have to admit i laughed a bit writing that line. I know that was a big slip up hes lucky she didn't make the connection. thanks for the review:]
[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2013 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 11: Denial
Michael needs to stay away from Ashley! He almost raped her and I bet he would have enjoyed it! I think he hates Ashley and it makes him want her even more.
And the worst is that Ashley is a slut so even if she says Michael raped her, nobody would believe her! Well, what goes around comes back around...
And her wife is so oblivious to what he does!!! But she I think she is starting to having doubts... I mean, why would she asked about where he was anyways? Maybe she thinks he is cheating on her. And he is! Yes he raped her but he did cheat on Sam too!
When he called her Jennifer
That was bound to happen! Next tme he will be calling her Ashley while having sex lol.
"I hate when we fight, Im sorry for overreacting." 
NOOOOOOOOOOO! Don't stop now! I hope Sam was just joking and that she will follow her ass or hire a detective. Shit, don't give up now Sam!!
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: ahaaha you and your gifs annie:] you're soo funny. Something about Ashley tickles his funny bone and he doesn't know why haha. Its kind of inbetween with Sam she doesn't really suspect anything but at the same time she has her doubts. Michaels a rich attractive man, of course woman want him. hahaa about the calling sam ashley now that would be funny! lets hope Sma keeps her eyes open for anything weird. thanks for reading and reviewing<3
Date: Apr 25, 2013 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 11: Denial
Yes he is. XD But the bitch deserve everything that's coming to her after she stole his presentation. She has no morals.
Author's Response: hahah I don't know about ashley, we got to pray for that girl hah
Date: Apr 20, 2013 05:26 am Title: Chapter 10: Phenomenal
oh i hate ashley so much... i hope jennifer gets to see michael somewhere else... i love the story... im really involved in it. :)
Author's Response: Haha you aren't the only one:) lets hope not hah I'm happy you really like it:)!
[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2013 09:15 am Title: Chapter 10: Phenomenal
I don't think Michel will ever stop. He is saying that being the CEO will help him to be sane but I don't think it will. I believe he will be ok for a couple of months, if he became the CEO, and he will feel the urge to rape another woman. He will always want more than he has. And the fact that because of Ashley, he won't be CEO, will make him even more psycho than he already is.
And Michelle is a bitch. I said it! She thinks being like Ashley is how she will reach the top and this is pathetic. And just because Michael refused to slept with her? YOU NASTY GIRL, you nasty, you trashy you classless girl! Gir where is your P R I D E?! smdh
And I just don't understand why Ashley is always trying to rub it in Michael's face. SHE CHEATED! Everyone saw it, so why is she trying to get Michael even madder. I mean, why?
And Michael needs to stay away from her. Why does he want? Rape her a teach her a lesson? Everything can't be solve by a rape Mr! Even though she is a slut, she doesn't deserve to be raped!
I know Michael is turned on by seeing women helpless but I'm starting to believe that he is attracted to Ashley period! I think it's because there is a way she can be on him that turn him on. He feels the needs to bring her down.
And for Jennifer... My god, I don't know what to say. I just hope for her that Michael will let her go. Or find someon else... But at this point iI think the next victim will me Ashley LOL
Great chapters! So sorry I didn't rreview the other chapters, this week had been hectic!!
Author's Response: Hey annie:) Lets hope something is able to help him :/ I know! Michelles something else, you guys will be seeing more of her in the coming chapters. The thing with Ashley is that she has the upper hand, Mr. Smith believes Michael was lying so things are playing in her favor. He doesn't intend to rape her for pleasure but more for her pain and suffering. That would scare her away, I couldn't imagine working along side someone who took advantage of me you know? Hes definitely attracted to Ashley, its just her personality that he hates. A part of him does want to destroy her because she is his only opponent. Poor jennifer, lets hope she copes well. Its all good hun:) thanks for reviewing on this chapter! You're the best!
Date: Apr 18, 2013 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 10: Phenomenal
Great update girl. I loved it sorry it took me so long to respond here. It is so ironic how the work situation with Michael is so similiar to my own right now the recent events in my life it's just uncanny. Thanks for the update and please update again soon! I want to know who is next victim will be. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much:) I'm happy you're enjoying this! I still find it crazy that its so relatable to your real life situation, what are the chances you know? Thanks again:)!
Date: Apr 18, 2013 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 10: Phenomenal
I cannot WAIT to see Ashley's ass get slaughtered!!!! She's such a trifling bitch, I'm gonna enjoy seeing her suffer. She has to pay for stealing that man's hard work. I really hope he gets CEO over her. But the good thing is he's scared her ass now. I bet she will think twice of trying to pull some more bs like she did. I'm glad he slapped the shit outta her! Yassss Michael. Make that slut pay!
Author's Response: Hahahahah I sense a lot of anger in this review haha I see you are team Michael all the way haha. Trust me when I say he'll get his revenge. Hahah;) thanks for reading and reviewing, you're the best:)
[Report This]Date: Apr 18, 2013 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 10: Phenomenal
I didn't get to review on last chapter. But I wanted to tell you I love it. I just love the whole plot and what not. Good job. And now this chapter, owee. Ashley makes my skin fuckin crawl lol. But atleast he put fear in that bitch. I can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Thanks for that! Happy you enjoyed it:) Michael had to show her what was up so she could know her place and from what I've seen I think it worked. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing<333
Date: Apr 18, 2013 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 10: Phenomenal
ok so for the first 10 mins of me reading this I was ranting the whole time (it took me 10 mins cause I was ranting lol ) I was like Smack that hoe bro just omg. And then things got serious and I was like ok you dont have to do this but like...go and Home Alone her house bro like just set traps all over it and fudge up her life but no. Not happy about how it was done but Im hoping that she wont be talking ish from now on ya know? And if she still is then she needs to go to the Wizard to get a brain. Feeling really sorry for Jeniffer shes in a horrible situation smh GREAT UPDATE!
Author's Response: Hahahah you never really know with Michael one minute hes calm the next minute hes ready to explode and Ashley wasn't ready for that as you can see. Poor Jennifer, hopefully things get better for her. Thanks for reading and reviewing!,