Date: Jun 07, 2013 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 17: Weakness
Uh oh. Sam will definitely leave that ass if she found out. Michael shoulda thought about that. He's gonna have to kill Ashley if he wants her to keep her mouth shut cuz at this point she is NOT to be trusted. Michael can't survive without his precious Sam.
Author's Response: Yeah Ashleys not someone you can trust. Michael has to figure something out. lets hope he does soon thanks so much for the read and review!
Date: Jun 07, 2013 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 17: Weakness
No way. She can't get the upper hand on him. Michael has to turn this around and make sure Ashely does nothing to hurt him. He deserves to keep his wife and make CEO. Damn Ashley. She reminds me of my boss. Great chapter girl. Please post more!
Author's Response: haha Yeah ashley thought this one through, lets hope Michael does something that can shut her up. thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: May 31, 2013 11:24 am Title: Chapter 16: Confrontation
Whoa Michael taught her a lesson; she was acting like a bitch so she got treated like one. XD Michael might have took it too far, but she shouldnt have tested him in the first place.
DON'T TEST HIM.
See hehe.
I gotta say I'm LOVING this. I started reading this today and I was so hooked that I read the chapters one after the other, non stop (well aside from grabbing a snack XD) It TOTALLY captured me, and I love how you're portraying MJ... His character is complex like an unsub from Criminal Minds lol :3
I've added this to my favourites. Keep it up Honey :)) , Much LOVE , <33
Author's Response: hahaha that gif is HILARIOUS! Awww youre soo sweet! I'm happy you like this story. haha gotta say I love me some criminal minds haha. thanks so much sweetie! you really put a smile on my face
[Report This]Date: May 31, 2013 12:02 am Title: Chapter 16: Confrontation
W.O.W just.......*fans self* omg am I sick for liking this chapter?? Like she brought it on herself for all the things she did and said *shrugs* I also laughed throughout too lol....
0_o I loved it its my favorite chapter now lol....Anyways this story is da bomb bro! i love your writing. Keep it up :)
Author's Response: hahahah youre not crazy! just an involved reader haha. Thanks so much for the support love bug<3333
[Report This]Date: May 30, 2013 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 16: Confrontation
Michael really is crazy! Hope Ashley learned her lesson not to mess with him anymore. Michael deserves the CEO post. Perhaps if she doesn't mess with him they will at least come to terms with each other and in spite of the fact that Michael treated her like a slut in this chapter as a reader I still pine for them to be romantically involve with each other. Is that weird or not? lmao! I really love this story. Thanks for updating can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: ahahah maybe just maybe they can try to work something out but Idk itll be hard for them since all the history they have. ahahah Its not that youre weird more that you want an extreme plot twist hahaha thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Date: May 30, 2013 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 16: Confrontation
Whoa. Ashley wants to act like a slut, well now she gets treated like one. XD Thay's what she gets.
Author's Response: Hahahah you guys reviews are sooo funny, I'm happy you enjoyed this!
Date: May 30, 2013 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 16: Confrontation
Girl I think that was my favorite chapter aside from the one where he was with Jennifer lol God he really got Ashley good and she deserved it! Now he just needs to finish the job and give her what she deserves and ruin her completely. Both professionally and personally. Great chapter hun! Thanks for updating. I love this! I love it when Michael is crazy! :)
Author's Response: haha Thanks soo much girl! your reviews mean so much to me! haha michael can only get worst haha thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: May 30, 2013 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 16: Confrontation
Now she knows not to fuck with Michael!!!!!!! She better stay out of his way if she knows what's good for her. He is ruining her. At this point, I wouldn't be surprised if she quit. I almost felt sorry for her, but I don't. Conniving sluts will never prosper. And Michael is making sure of it.
Author's Response: Haha lets hope Ashley recognizes that haha I love how you said you almost felt sorry haha aww. thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: May 24, 2013 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to his world
I loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm happy youre enjoying this!
Date: May 24, 2013 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 13: Desperation
Well that turned out... ok? Omg Michelle I get so annoyed when people are like that you don know me! I dot need to know you to evaluate your actions at this time. *sigh* but whateves. Poor Sam she just needs to talk :( GREAT UPDATE!
Author's Response: haha hey dreamer! havent heard from you in a while :] happy to hear from you. hahaha I know too many people who are constantly like you don't know me! hah but they act a certain way and Im just like uhh okay. thanks for reading and reviewing lovebug:]
[Report This]Date: May 24, 2013 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 15: Payback
i'm cheering for Michael here. Ashley kind a deserves that. Way to go Mike. Sam is really sweet. Can't wait what Ashley would do to get back at Michael...i super love this story.
Author's Response: haha yeah i think everyone at this point is teammichael haha thanks for reading and reviewing:]
Date: May 24, 2013 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 15: Payback
Ha!!!! Yassssss Michael! Stay 10 feet ahead of that bitch at all times. So glad she got a small piece of what is comin to her. I can't wait to see her ass crumble. I surely hope Michael gets the CEO position because I'm really sad for Sam. She deserves to have children and happiness. Michael is being really self centered and he keeps saying he won't someone take Sam away, well with the rate he's going, that's what's going to end up happening.
Author's Response: Haha Michael takes one step back then five steps forward he always wants to get ahead haha. I know poor Sam she doesn't deserve all of this but shes tangled up with michael and doesnt even know the unspeakable evil hes committed. thanks for reading and reviewing lovebug:]
Date: May 24, 2013 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 15: Payback
Ha! That's what she get! XD I feel nothing for Ashley at all.
Author's Response: hahaha the next chapter gets even worst :] stay tuned
Date: May 20, 2013 01:37 am Title: Introduction
I love this story so much. Its so different and puts you on edge....I LOVE DRAMA and stuff so this story blew me the hell away! GREAT JOB! i want more please :)
BTW NEW READER ;)
-Bree
Author's Response: Thank you so much I truly do appreciate your kind words:}
[Report This]Date: May 16, 2013 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 14: Fearless
Jennifer was really traumatized by the events that happened to her. What if she found out it was Michael? that would be interesting to read. And Ashley was really afraid of him. I think she is developing feelings for him a bit. Great chapter...can't wait to read michael's eventful days ahead...continue soon.
Author's Response: I know poor thing! Hahah I can't say Ashley's developing feelings for Michael because if she is they are just feelings of hate. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!