Date: Dec 19, 2013 11:22 am Title: Chapter 41: Interrogation
Damn Michael was just too cocky! Lol! Shame on him!
Author's Response: true that, Michael thinks hes the hottest thing since sliced bread lol thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: Dec 07, 2013 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 40: Mirandize
Awwwww shit I wonder what his wife will say ! 😱
Author's Response: Haha I don't think Sam will be too happy. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: Dec 07, 2013 09:12 am Title: Chapter 40: Mirandize
Damn what a turn of events!
But from your end notes I think it's clear to gather Ashley won't succeed. Shame but she did act without using her brain; she shouldnt have crossed him. Its entertaining though lmao XD
Haha I like how Michael was caught out then. Would NOT wanna be ashley receiving that death stare
If he gets out and kills her, I have no idea how he'll cover that shit up lol maybe he'll drive her to kill herself or do the handiwork himself and make it look like suicide. 0_0 Look at me getting ahead of myself lol
Good luck with the exams btw. :)))
Author's Response: Haha Yeah I'm interested to see what Michael intends to do haha. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: Dec 06, 2013 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 40: Mirandize
Oh wow! Lol! Didn't see that coming.
Author's Response: Hahah happen I surprised you!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: Dec 06, 2013 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 40: Mirandize
Aw man!!! Ashley's ass is good as dead now. She really tried to pull it this time. This is about to be crazy. They're gonna hopefully just question him and let him go. Michael is much smarter than her though. She even if he personally doesn't kill her, somebody will on his behalf. This bitch has been a pain in the ass since the beginning of this story. I'll be glad to finally see her demise.
Author's Response: Haha yeah Ashley one upped Michael. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: Nov 28, 2013 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 39: Lair
Aw man!!! Shit is about to get real! Michael shoulda killed that slut when he had the chance! I am so intrigued. I know this is about to be crazy. Sam is good woman to stand behind Michael. Unfortunately that whore wasn't lying. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: haha things are about to get crazy haha thanks so much for reading and reviewing! you're reviews are always hilarious haha
[Report This]Date: Nov 28, 2013 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 39: Lair
Wow great chapter can't wait to see how this plays out update soon please. :)
Author's Response: thanks love bug:] im happy you're enjoying this!
Date: Nov 28, 2013 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 39: Lair
Oooh wee. I'm still reeling from the last chapter! Ashley's pressing charges huh? Saw that coming.
Author's Response: haha ashley isn't letting michael off that easy haha thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: Nov 28, 2013 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 39: Lair
Damn, I should have known Ashley wouldnt let Michael walk. Good on her I guess but is she gonna give the dirty details of sabotaging Michael to the cops? Hmmmm
Something tells me she won't drop this till she gets him behind bars. Or maybe till he kills her... Or she kills him? 0_0 lol
Sam is blinded by her love for Michael so she's gonna be sticking by him no doubt, I can't blame the poor woman, tbh I'd do the same if I was her. I can't believe Ashley even half expected Sam to believe her lol :P
Can't wait for the next chapter Lovey. :))
, <33
Author's Response: haha she kind of has to because it won't make sense if she was just a target of Michaels without reason. Yeah ash was acting irrational, Sam is the last person to go against michael. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!
Date: Nov 27, 2013 10:42 am Title: Chapter 38: Fired
Guys its just a story. It's not real and its a figment of Princess's imagination. She made this up. Again it is NOT real. She is an amazing writer to create something so detailed and so vivid that her work can cause such controversy! I have to say this is one of the most well written stories I've ever read and I will be a loyal reader to the end. Thank you Princess for writing such a wonderful story!
Author's Response: thanks love bug <33
[Report This]Date: Nov 24, 2013 08:38 am Title: Chapter 38: Fired
OK So you remember I said I was shipping Ashley and Michael?
... Yeah, basically. XD Well it would never have worked anyway lmao
But omfg Michael is just... Damn, I mean Ashley was being a complete prat and it was inevitable this would happen but that was intense and disturbing. 0_0 The way you described the mindset and feelings of both characters and all; bravo!
I don't know why but I really loved how you put the tender actions of Michael after the rape. e.g.
" He ran his nose softly along her cheek then kissed her one last time on the lips. "
Omfg. Idk it might be just me who found how you did that sexy. Maybe in a twisted way it was my shipper heart lmao I need help.
Intense chapter, brillantly written. :D
Author's Response: haha I remember! yeah im sure we both see that now. Yeah I was trying to perfect everything, mindsets, dialogue, actions, everythinggggg. haha I liked the tender stuff too I don't know I just consider Michael to be such a tender loving person so even if he has a black heart in this story his tender side emerges every once in a while. thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: Nov 21, 2013 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 38: Fired
Smh just wow!!!!!!! Ashley should've gotten it a lot worse than she did! That trifling bitch could've cost Michael his job! I actually hope he doesn't lose his CEO position. It really wasn't his fault. I'm glad he fired that trifling slut. She should be glad he didn't kill her. Just wow. I have a feeling Michael isn't quite done with Mr. Smith though, and Ashley's trifling ass better disappear from the face of the earth.
Author's Response: haha nothings over till Michael says it is ;] lets just keep it at that. thanks for the reading and reviewing.
Date: Nov 21, 2013 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 38: Fired
Wow. I said karma would come back on her ass, but I didn't think it get back at her like THAT! Most shocking chapter yet.
Author's Response: Haha thats what I was aiming for, thanks for the review love bug!
[Report This]Date: Nov 17, 2013 06:00 am Title: Chapter 37: Nice
Ashley SMDH, you're an idiot.
Seriously do you want Michael to kill you!? ... Because by doing what your doing, you're getting a one way ticket Love.
Michaels gonna be fuming, thats all I can say.. Phew.
Hope the next chapter is longer lol. XD
, <33
Author's Response: Hahah I love your gifs especially that Michael one, gahh he looks so hot! XD thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: Nov 16, 2013 10:06 am Title: Chapter 37: Nice
If Ashley thinks making Michael missing meetings will get her CEO, she's mistaken. It just shows she's a manipulative brat who can't have her way. Sad.
Author's Response: Ashley had good intentions for herself but she doesn't go about it the right way. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!