Reviews For Lean On Me
Reviewer: MissA1485 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2011 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 5: The Kiss.
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Date: Jan 28, 2011 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 5: The Kiss.
AWWWW!!!! This was so romantic!
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:)
Reviewer: baderagirl16 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2011 11:10 am Title: Chapter 3
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Date: Jan 23, 2011 11:10 am Title: Chapter 3
cute story...love where this is going..continue!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Reviewer: mikeslady1074 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2011 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: Jan 22, 2011 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
great idea for a plot but work on sticking to the correct point of view with your pronouns. it can be confusing and readers are not sure who is talking
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Thank you. Yes, I am working on that. But I just thought that the reader would read more into the context and would be able to distinguish who is talking. :)
Reviewer: CleoLovesMichael Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2011 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
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Date: Jan 21, 2011 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nice start :) Update soon xx
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Thank you! xoxo