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Date: Feb 18, 2011 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 10

I like that Jaden made the first move by calling Michael. The phone conversation was really sweet. They would make a great couple

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Date: Feb 18, 2011 10:17 am Title: Chapter 9

Jaden has developed a close connection towards Michael already. I sense he will play an important role in her life.

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Date: Feb 18, 2011 10:16 am Title: Chapter 8

I am happy for Jaden,Her dream is coming true and its partly due to Michaels help.He is such a sweet man.

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Date: Feb 18, 2011 10:11 am Title: Chapter 7

Thats good news for Jaden.I just hope Devin knows what he is doing because this means alot to his new client.

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Date: Feb 18, 2011 10:06 am Title: Chapter 6

Love the chapter. Michael and Jaden definitely have lots in common and I feel that they will form a very strong bond.

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Date: Feb 18, 2011 08:45 am Title: Chapter 5

Jaden sure made an impression on Michael.He shouldn't let his shyness prevent him from talking to her.its obvious he likes her.

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Date: Feb 18, 2011 06:47 am Title: Chapter 4

I sense some instant attraction between Michael and Jaden since they have similar thoughts. Aww I knew she would be nervous meeting MJ for the first time.

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Date: Feb 18, 2011 06:43 am Title: Chapter 3

Short chapter but I likeit.Jaden's draem is becoming reality and I hope she doesn't get too nervous. 

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Date: Feb 18, 2011 06:41 am Title: Chapter 2

Wow Jaden sure got lucky meeting Devin like that. Cant wait to see what happens next.

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Date: Feb 18, 2011 06:38 am Title: Chapter 1

I bet Jaden is going to get her big break soon.

Reviewer: MissA1485 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 01, 2011 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 13

New reader. i'm loving the story! Can't wait to read more. I love the Invincible era.



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Thanks!! I appreciate the feedback! Be on the lookout for update soon!

Reviewer: BrittneyD Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2011 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 11

I hate Devin love this story so far can't wait to read more!!

Reviewer: BrittneyD Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2011 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 7

I don't trust him at all I think I would be talking to Michael about it first he knows better

Reviewer: MJLover101 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2011 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 6

i love this story soooooo much you are truely talented



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Thank you!!!! I appreciate your feedback!

Reviewer: BrittneyD Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2011 09:09 am Title: Epilogue

love the way you started this I can tell that this is going to be a great story



Author's Response:

Thanks! I appreciate you reading and giving feedback

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