




Date: Mar 25, 2014 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 6
Hold up... say what now?? She has to go live with him and his siblings AND she don't like kids? Ohhh boy quite a situation we got here! How does she come from having all control to not having control but then still having a little control with this contract? Idk if that makes sense. LMAO I mean, it seems like he's allowing her to call all the shots but with that type of setting (his home) who knows how this experiment of hers will pan out. And I wonder how the sisters will react to her living with them? Plus, where is she going to sleep? It's a full house and his sisters might be suspicious if Michael slept downstairs. Hmm... sharing a bed with Big Red... ohh the things I would do.. lmao
Btw, I really hope his lil brother will be ok after this whole ordeal.. poor thing. He's my favorite no matter how odd he was. :(
Oh and Jessica is a freak! Man, whatever floats her boat I guess.
This story has definitely taken an interesting turn! Good job guys. I just hope the next chapter won't take long ;D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! We will be updating soon.





Date: Feb 08, 2014 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 5
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA SHE REALIZES THIS AFTER THE DAMN CALL?!?!
Lmfaoooo this is amazing!!! You're an amazing author, publish again soon!!
Author's Response: Thank you! And we will
Date: Jan 05, 2014 12:36 am Title: Chapter 1 (characters)
Oh my god this story is awesome!! Please update soon! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks hun and we will eventually
Date: Aug 01, 2013 08:04 am Title: Chapter 5
Are you gonna continue this story? It's so good!
Date: Mar 18, 2013 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 5
That was an awesome chapter! I want Michael to take the offer cause it would really help and I hope he sees that in the end. I also hope that Malaysia will truly understand that Michael doesnt want to do what hes doing if he could do something else and still support his family
Date: Mar 18, 2013 04:29 am Title: Chapter 5
hahahhahahahaha love this fantasy please next part please





Date: Mar 18, 2013 12:45 am Title: Chapter 5
I really think yall should try updating this more often when you get a chance cause i like this one a lot to it's differen't. & i knw everyone requests 4 Heist so much that yall can't never update but please try with this one whenever yall can i like this one a lot & want more soon. LOL





Date: Mar 17, 2013 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 5
I see not even an uptight chick like Malaysia can resist Big Red. Ohhh this is gonna be good!
And lmao @ Mrs. Porter! I'm surprised Michael managed to stay awake while Mrs. Porter slow ass was trying to get hers. He really aims to please hm? ;)
Please update soon! I can't wait to see what's about to go down once they meet up.





Date: Mar 17, 2013 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 5
YAY!! An update to this story!!!!!! I love this, omg! THANK YOU!! :-D I'm so happy about the new chapter, cuz this is awesome. LOL! More soon, PLEASE!!! haha! Much love! <3<3
Author's Response:
I didn't know you liked this story...this makes us really happy. Thanks for reviewing hun. More will come soon.
Date: Mar 17, 2013 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 5
loving this plz continue.! awh shieet whats finna happen at the "Date"?!
Author's Response:
I don't know what will happen on the date.....we really don't, we are totally clueless cause we haven't wrote anything yet lol. Thanks for the review hun.





Date: Mar 17, 2013 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 5
LOOL michael was so bored at the way she was riding him. I was laughing so much he might as well should of falling asleep in the long run poor mikey hope he get a better girl that he actually likes nextime. Can't wait 4 more!
Author's Response:
Lol maybe. Thanks for reading girly
Date: Mar 17, 2013 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 5
Lol! Loved it
Author's Response:
Thanks hun





Date: Mar 03, 2013 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 4
Let me start of by saying that I most definitely enjoyed reading this and I am craving for more!
That Jessica chick is cuuuhhhraaazyyy! WTF?! Who in the world goes and knocks a dude out cold and then brings him out of unconciousness by torturously (the worst kind) riding that dick and then planning on sticking a dildo up his ass?? This crazy bitch... Bwahahaha the boys at the shop were loving this one. LMAOO oh and both of you guys had to pick the best of the best in terms of the male characters! Michael Ealy??? Slash?? *swoons*
As for Michael... sighhh lord trust me when I say that when a man is able to take care of siblings as if they're his own... supporting them and raising them right... ooohh that is a big turn on! So responsible.. so caring... so sexyyy. Oh lord lemme stop.
As for Malaysia, well I can't wait for things to unfold in future chapters. *wink wink* Meaning... update soon please. Lmao! Great work you guys!
Author's Response:
It will be updated today, thanks for the review hun. We really appreciate it.





Date: Feb 23, 2013 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 4
Love this, please continue!





Date: Feb 23, 2013 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oooooohhhhh!!!!mmmmmyyyy!!!goooooossshhhh!!!!! Update like super soon. I love this story. Yall are doin great!!!!
Author's Response:
lol thanks and we will